The Energon Pub

by **8 bit** » Thu Oct 25, 2007 9:42 pm

Alright! Here's pg.1 of a little crossover idea I've been working on slowly but surely. Enjoy!

News Credits: 75 · by **Devastator** » Thu Oct 25, 2007 9:56 pm

It looks like a neat idea. The page seems like it has two or three panels worth of comic action jammed into one panel though. It's difficult to tell what's going on just by looking at the picture. KITT seems to be floating there, though I imagine he's jumping out of the way. If that's the case, I'd imagine he'd be looking towards at least one of the Stunticons.

by **8 bit** » Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:36 pm

Devastator wrote:It looks like a neat idea. The page seems like it has two or three panels worth of comic action jammed into one panel though. It's difficult to tell what's going on just by looking at the picture. KITT seems to be floating there, though I imagine he's jumping out of the way. If that's the case, I'd imagine he'd be looking towards at least one of the Stunticons.

I see what you mean. It is a little congested. Future pages should be more dispersed, I just didn't do a whole lot of planning. It started as just a drawing, then it kinda became a comic.

News Credits: 972 · by **i_amtrunks** » Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:58 pm

I likey.

Except for the "Big M" comment, but thats just me.

by **Boris** » Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:26 am

You've used the wrong "course".

News Credits: 38 · by **Methusalen** » Fri Oct 26, 2007 11:05 am

Panel looks great, but (as others have said), it's a bit cluttered, filled to the brim, packed with inoformation! Oh, and the minor spelling error...

The art looks great! I can't wait to see what you come up with later on... If you decide to continue the comic, of course!