Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. I cannot fathom how to get away. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any peace of mind I gain is lost within their image. No escape, I can’t escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate mechanical hands and their diamond encrusted fingers.......
I've gotten the luck to have a literature Professor to review it, and this version is modified based on his critiques.
A random drabble I've written
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A random drabble I've written
by Universal Prime » Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:13 am
- Motto: ""So long as I'm still standing I am fit for duty.""
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Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. No escape, no escape. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any serenity I gain is lost by their image. No escape, no escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate hands and their diamond fingers.......
Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. No escape, no escape. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any serenity I gain is lost by their image. No escape, no escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate hands and their diamond fingers.......
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Re: A random drabble I've written
by Counterpunch » Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:27 pm
- Motto: "Everything I do is divinely sanctioned."
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Context?
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Re: A random drabble I've written
by Universal Prime » Mon Nov 08, 2010 3:31 pm
- Motto: ""So long as I'm still standing I am fit for duty.""
- Weapon: Lightning Rifle
Someone going mad. This was written on impulse.Counterpunch wrote:Context?
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Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. No escape, no escape. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any serenity I gain is lost by their image. No escape, no escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate hands and their diamond fingers.......
Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. No escape, no escape. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any serenity I gain is lost by their image. No escape, no escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate hands and their diamond fingers.......
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Re: A random drabble I've written
by JetOptimus23 » Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:23 pm
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Universal Prime wrote:Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. I cannot fathom how to get away. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any peace of mind I gain is lost within their image. No escape, I can’t escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate mechanical hands and their diamond encrusted fingers.......
I've gotten the luck to have a literature Professor to review it, and this version is modified based on his critiques.
This is awesome, but also slightly creepy. Is this from personal experience?
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Re: A random drabble I've written
by Universal Prime » Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:27 pm
- Motto: ""So long as I'm still standing I am fit for duty.""
- Weapon: Lightning Rifle
Thank God no.JetOptimus23 wrote:Universal Prime wrote:Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. I cannot fathom how to get away. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any peace of mind I gain is lost within their image. No escape, I can’t escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate mechanical hands and their diamond encrusted fingers.......
I've gotten the luck to have a literature Professor to review it, and this version is modified based on his critiques.
This is awesome, but also slightly creepy. Is this from personal experience?
http://heroicc300.livejournal.com/
Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. No escape, no escape. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any serenity I gain is lost by their image. No escape, no escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate hands and their diamond fingers.......
Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. No escape, no escape. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any serenity I gain is lost by their image. No escape, no escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate hands and their diamond fingers.......
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