Transformers Mosaic: "Was I Asleep"

Forgive me, but "your crazy" should be "you're crazy". Drives me nuts when it isn't used right.

Predaprince wrote:Why is one of the Decepticon Clones talking to Punch instead of shooting him???

I think that's supposed to be twin twist I can't tell for sure if it's two characters or one talking to punch it looks like it's just one I think it's another panel or something

Jedi Kermit wrote:Forgive me, but "your crazy" should be "you're crazy". Drives me nuts when it isn't used right.

Glad I am not the only person that get's ticked when I see that moronic mistake. Anyone over the age of ten shouldn't get confused by it. You're/Your/Yore There/Their/They're To/Two/Too

If a person doesn't know the difference, fit them for a dunce hat.

Whose crazy? Your crazy!

Your crazy is my crazy.

yeaa I don't get it either, shouldn't Pounce/Wingspan be talking to Counter-punch?...
Otherwise, the art has got the emotion in it despite lack of detail and such.

*Edit: If Pounce/Wingspan said Counter-punches name, it'd make sense coz he was touching Punch from behind. heh heh heh. Unless it isn't a decepticon clone.... then it makes sense as is.

I like the mosaic. Even with it's mistakes and all it's pretty good. Maybe take a little more time editing before posting. Over all, good job!

Crosscheck wrote:Glad I am not the only person that get's ticked when I see that moronic mistake. Anyone over the age of ten shouldn't get confused by it. You're/Your/Yore There/Their/They're To/Two/Too

If a person doesn't know the difference, fit them for a dunce hat.

Who is "get", and why has he ticked you?

TinglingSensation wrote:

Crosscheck wrote:Glad I am not the only person that get's ticked when I see that moronic mistake. Anyone over the age of ten shouldn't get confused by it. You're/Your/Yore There/Their/They're To/Two/Too

If a person doesn't know the difference, fit them for a dunce hat.

Who is "get", and why has he ticked you?

It seems like I should be measured.

Seems like the Mosaic writers love to do Punch/Counter Punch alot lately.

but why is naruto talking to batman?

What's worse, a writer not getting a script (or even finished page) spell-checked, or people missing the fairly obvious point about which character(s) is(are) in a story?

both... both are bad.

Am I one of the few who actually understands this perfectly? Mind you, you'd have to understand Punch's psychology a bit. You see, as a Double Agent he created an alter ego, Counterpunch. But given his paranoid nature, that alter ego slowly develops into a unique, split personality. And it's that development Punch tries to fight, hence the dialogue between his two sides. An excerpt from the Marvel bio: "Everything that's restrained in Punch, finds savage release in Counterpunch", my favourite line in any bio.

And yes, the other bot is supposed to be Twin Twist, but strangely colored like a Decepticon Clone.

JelZe GoldRabbit wrote:Am I one of the few who actually understands this perfectly? Mind you, you'd have to understand Punch's psychology a bit. You see, as a Double Agent he created an alter ego, Counterpunch. But given his paranoid nature, that alter ego slowly develops into a unique, split personality. And it's that development Punch tries to fight, hence the dialogue between his two sides. An excerpt from the Marvel bio: "Everything that's restrained in Punch, finds savage release in Counterpunch", my favourite line in any bio.

And yes, the other bot is supposed to be Twin Twist, but strangely colored like a Decepticon Clone.

Uhh...yea..the other Transformer was the confusing part, not Punch/Counterpunch's split personality... So no, your not the only one, and i'm pretty sure most people got that part, except for who the other Transformer was.

Another Punch/CounterPunch one, awesome!
I like the whole CounterPunch developing as a personality, it's pretty cool...
I think it'd be interesting to jump around continuities with each Punch story, like one in Animated, one in the movie etc(oh wait, those are the main ones with visual differences...) but still with the same background and story of Punch.

JelZe, that's pretty much what I got. I didn't realise the Jumpstarter was coloured wrong, but realised it was one or other of them. Hadn't even thought of the Decepticon Clones, which is strange, cause of the whole "real nearby" legend. Hmm. This confused a lot of people and yet my brain was working well with it...I bet I've totally mailed my wallet somewhere and am going to try and pay for food with an envelope tomorrow or something.

Yea, the flow of dialogue boxes didn't really bother me, (good job being eratic yet allowing the eye to catch the right next box) guess i'm used to comics and the right direction of the flow. Yea I figured it was a Decepticon clone coz of the shoulders, the old G1 clones had those obvious areas on the chest where you knew they folded in (but not on wingspan).