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First I’d like to thank Dark Zarak for giving me the idea.

Here are the New Characters

Autobots:
Silverbolt- F-18 Hornet
Sunstreaker- Lamborghini
Cliffjumper- Camaro
Brawn- jeep
Sideswipe- Corvette
Powerglide- A-10
Prowl- Nissan GTR police car
Grapple- crane
Hoist- tow truck
Hound- gunless humvee
Wheeljack- Pontiac firebird
Grimlock- T-Rex

Decepticons:
(Loyal to Galvatron)

Galvatron- Cybertronian tank
Cyclonus- Apache
Dead End- M113
Scourge- SU-47
Onslaught- MRLS
Soundwave- SR71- Blackbird
Dirge/Ramjet- F-35C
Barricade

Decepticons:
(separatist)
Starscream
Shockwave- Patriot Battery
Blitzwing- F-16/ Leopard tank
Swindle- Bradley Assault Vehicle
Thundercracker/Skywarp- F-22
Triggerhappy- F-4 Phantom
Thrust- F-35C

Without further ado here is my TF2 Movie plot.



It starts with Optimus watching over Ratchet repair the wounded Jazz. He walks out of the warehouse and we see that they are in Chicago. He transforms and leaves.

Bumblebee who is stationed in Los Angeles with Sam and Mikela. Bumblebee who is still learning how to talk gets a message from secretary Keller saying that they spotted 11 comets similar to those of the protoforms heading towards Earth. He radios to Prime who is in Washington D.C.

Prime tells Ironhide in New York to head to Denver, the landing location of the comets. Optimus leave Washington D.C. along with Keller and the president to head to Hoover Dam. Arriving at Hoover Dam the president has al Sector 7 equipment shipped to the Pentagon. Optimus grabbing the fragment from the Allspark takes it and heads back towards Chicago.

Prime gives Ratchet the fragment and leaves to head to Denver. Just as Ratchet is about to revive Jazz Barricade comes and attacks Ratchet and defeats him. Barricade takes the fragment leaving Ratchet to be wounded. Barricade flees to the Decepticon HQ in the Rocky’s.

Epps and Lennox who now live in Washington D.C. leave to go to Florida to visit an old friend.

In Denver Ironhide, Optimus, and Bumblebee meet up and evacuate the city for the landing. Inside are Autobots. They get them new forms and head to Chicago.

Back in Chicago they find Ratchet severely wounded and the fragment gone. Wheeljack repairs Ratchet. The Autobots then tell Secretary Keller to set a defensive perimeter around where they dumped the bodies.

In the Rocky’s we see that Starscream went to the edge of the solar system and grabbed the Nemesis along with some Decepticons.

Maggie and Glen who work for the NSA are taken to the White House and are told to track more of Decepticon trouble.

Optimus sends Bumblebee to spy on the Decepticons. Sam and Mikela sneak on to Bumblebee disobeying Optimus’s orders. Bumblebee is spotted by Dead End. They engage in a duel and Bumblebee is defeated and captured.

Barricade return’s with the fragment but gives it to Soundwave. Starscream and his men then attack the other Decepticons and flee to the Himalayas.

Epps and Lennox in Florida head to a cemetery where we find Fig’s gravestone. After that they head to Fig’s mom’s house for some fried gator and crickets. They then return to Washington.

Back in Chicago the Autobots roll out to San Diego where the get on a naval carrier taking them to Laurenith Abyss. Prime is worried about Bumblebee. So he sends Silverbolt to the Rocky’s. But they are to late. The defense perimeter was destroyed. Prime sends Hound to the Ocean floor and we see that Megatron is gone.

Starscream has Shockwave builds a device that will contain Megatron. But there are meant by the Autobots and the other Decepticons. The machine is destroyed and Swindle and Barricade are killed.

Maggie and Glen are stationed at am intelligence station in Hawaii. They discover a Cybertronian source under a volcano. Prime sends Powerglide and Wheeljack.

Prime organizes a strike force to rescue Bumblebee. They are joined by Simmons, Lennox, Epps, and their team. Bumblebee is rescued and Megatron is revived as Galvatron. Galvatron and Optimus duel. Optimus is severely wounded and flees.

In Hawaii Wheeljack rebuilds the Cybertonian into Grimlock.

Prime and Galvatron mobilize their forces to New York City. Optimus sends Sam to the Empire State Building to call for reinforcements. Outnumbered the Decepticons are almost beaten until Starscream joins Galvatron. Powerglide and Wheeljack rejoin the Autobots w/ Grimlock. Grimlock who helps turn the tide of battle for the Autobots and gets Starscream off Primes back.

Sam who leaves the Empire State Building almost gets killed. Galvatron fires at Sam but Optimus jumps in front of the shot, heavily wounded. Galvatron then defeats Prime and throws him in the ocean. Galvatron has the Decepticons fall back. The Autobots retreat to Washington D.C. We see Optimus sink to the Ocean floor eyes dark.






The after credit sequence we see Optimus’s dark eyes light up.




I hope you liked it. Please comment. Don’t insult.
The TF3 movie plot will be coming soon.

That's preety good. A couple of points:

Just how long is this movie supposed to be?

And who taught you grammar?

Otherwise, it was freaking sweet.

It's good. I especially like the way you got the soldiers and other humans back into the mix. that's something we don't have... Optimus dying (I know, he comes back) hurts my soul... it makes God want to kill puppies... But yea, great ideas. I look forward to more!

E.H.U.D. wrote:It's good. I especially like the way you got the soldiers and other humans back into the mix. that's something we don't have... Optimus dying (I know, he comes back) hurts my soul... it makes God want to kill puppies... But yea, great ideas. I look forward to more!

I'm glad you liked it. If you want me to right TF3. Just say so. Tell people about this.

I will write TF3. It will be posted tommorowo at the latest.[/code]

not bad, i like the idea of chicago being their base But too many characters.

Here is the first part of mt TF3 movie plot.

New character: Kup, Jetfire, and Rumble.


Galvatron confronts Starscream in the Rocky's. He finds out that Starscream betrayed him. Starscream flees. Galvatron tells the Decpticons that it is time to destroy humanity,once and for all.

Back in D.C. the Autobots who are leaderless gather in New York City. Hound is sent to find Prime. He returns w/ the matrix of leadership. They are then meet by Kup who has been on Earth as long as Bumblebee. Kup says that the matrix will go to the only one who is worthy.

Maggie and Glen find out that the Decepticons plan to attack D.C., from their they can destroy the rest of humanity. They send word to Keller. Keller is angry that they Autobots are nowhere to be found. We then meet Governor Berger who tells Keller that the Autobots have abbondend us and that they are working w/ the Decepticons.

Back in NYC the Autobots argue about who the matrix should go to. Ironhide puts an end to it all andtakes the matrix and throws it back in the ocean.

As the Decepticons mobolize for attack, Starscream heads to a military base and creates his own small army of Destucticons. He takes these to Galvatron to prove that he is not a traitor. Galvatron takes the warriors and rewelcomes Starscream.

The Autobots reassemble in D.C. only to find that Berger has taken up an army and has the Autobots surrender. Lennox tells berger that to do this he needs authorization from Keller. Berger say that Keller was the one who had him do this. The Autobots are taken to Nevada where they will be imprisoned.
The Decepticons who are nearing D.C. are stopped by a small squadron of F-22s. They are dealt w/ by the Destructicons.


The rest of it I will write tommorow.

Ironhide7 wrote:First I’d like to thank Dark Zarak for giving me the idea.

Here are the New Characters

Autobots:
Silverbolt- F-18 Hornet
Sunstreaker- Lamborghini
Cliffjumper- Camaro
Brawn- jeep
Sideswipe- Corvette
Powerglide- A-10
Prowl- Nissan GTR police car
Grapple- crane
Hoist- tow truck
Hound- gunless humvee
Wheeljack- Pontiac firebird
Grimlock- T-Rex

Decepticons:
(Loyal to Galvatron)

Galvatron- Cybertronian tank
Cyclonus- Apache
Dead End- M113
Scourge- SU-47
Onslaught- MRLS
Soundwave- SR71- Blackbird
Dirge/Ramjet- F-35C
Barricade

Decepticons:
(separatist)
Starscream
Shockwave- Patriot Battery
Blitzwing- F-16/ Leopard tank
Swindle- Bradley Assault Vehicle
Thundercracker/Skywarp- F-22
Triggerhappy- F-4 Phantom
Thrust- F-35C

Without further ado here is my TF2 Movie plot.



It starts with Optimus watching over Ratchet repair the wounded Jazz. He walks out of the warehouse and we see that they are in Chicago. He transforms and leaves.

Bumblebee who is stationed in Los Angeles with Sam and Mikela. Bumblebee who is still learning how to talk gets a message from secretary Keller saying that they spotted 11 comets similar to those of the protoforms heading towards Earth. He radios to Prime who is in Washington D.C.

Prime tells Ironhide in New York to head to Denver, the landing location of the comets. Optimus leave Washington D.C. along with Keller and the president to head to Hoover Dam. Arriving at Hoover Dam the president has al Sector 7 equipment shipped to the Pentagon. Optimus grabbing the fragment from the Allspark takes it and heads back towards Chicago.

Prime gives Ratchet the fragment and leaves to head to Denver. Just as Ratchet is about to revive Jazz Barricade comes and attacks Ratchet and defeats him. Barricade takes the fragment leaving Ratchet to be wounded. Barricade flees to the Decepticon HQ in the Rocky’s.

Epps and Lennox who now live in Washington D.C. leave to go to Florida to visit an old friend.

In Denver Ironhide, Optimus, and Bumblebee meet up and evacuate the city for the landing. Inside are Autobots. They get them new forms and head to Chicago.

Back in Chicago they find Ratchet severely wounded and the fragment gone. Wheeljack repairs Ratchet. The Autobots then tell Secretary Keller to set a defensive perimeter around where they dumped the bodies.

In the Rocky’s we see that Starscream went to the edge of the solar system and grabbed the Nemesis along with some Decepticons.

Maggie and Glen who work for the NSA are taken to the White House and are told to track more of Decepticon trouble.

Optimus sends Bumblebee to spy on the Decepticons. Sam and Mikela sneak on to Bumblebee disobeying Optimus’s orders. Bumblebee is spotted by Dead End. They engage in a duel and Bumblebee is defeated and captured.

Barricade return’s with the fragment but gives it to Soundwave. Starscream and his men then attack the other Decepticons and flee to the Himalayas.

Epps and Lennox in Florida head to a cemetery where we find Fig’s gravestone. After that they head to Fig’s mom’s house for some fried gator and crickets. They then return to Washington.

Back in Chicago the Autobots roll out to San Diego where the get on a naval carrier taking them to Laurenith Abyss. Prime is worried about Bumblebee. So he sends Silverbolt to the Rocky’s. But they are to late. The defense perimeter was destroyed. Prime sends Hound to the Ocean floor and we see that Megatron is gone.

Starscream has Shockwave builds a device that will contain Megatron. But there are meant by the Autobots and the other Decepticons. The machine is destroyed and Swindle and Barricade are killed.

Maggie and Glen are stationed at am intelligence station in Hawaii. They discover a Cybertronian source under a volcano. Prime sends Powerglide and Wheeljack.

Prime organizes a strike force to rescue Bumblebee. They are joined by Simmons, Lennox, Epps, and their team. Bumblebee is rescued and Megatron is revived as Galvatron. Galvatron and Optimus duel. Optimus is severely wounded and flees.

In Hawaii Wheeljack rebuilds the Cybertonian into Grimlock.

Prime and Galvatron mobilize their forces to New York City. Optimus sends Sam to the Empire State Building to call for reinforcements. Outnumbered the Decepticons are almost beaten until Starscream joins Galvatron. Powerglide and Wheeljack rejoin the Autobots w/ Grimlock. Grimlock who helps turn the tide of battle for the Autobots and gets Starscream off Primes back.

Sam who leaves the Empire State Building almost gets killed. Galvatron fires at Sam but Optimus jumps in front of the shot, heavily wounded. Galvatron then defeats Prime and throws him in the ocean. Galvatron has the Decepticons fall back. The Autobots retreat to Washington D.C. We see Optimus sink to the Ocean floor eyes dark.






The after credit sequence we see Optimus’s dark eyes light up.




I hope you liked it. Please comment. Don’t insult.
The TF3 movie plot will be coming soon.

Cool, I have done a little research on the military vehicles, most of the good ones are retired, but check out the f 117 nighthawk, it could suit soundwave perfectly

Too many new characters introduced for a single movie, and it seems like it could be split into two (both comments for TF2). Also, wouldn't Hound bring back Prime's body as well as the matrix? At least you kept Jazz dead.

Plot wise, it all sounds good.

Sorry. Nothing to say.

Ironhide7 wrote:Here is the first part of mt TF3 movie plot.

New character: Kup, Jetfire, and Rumble.


Galvatron confronts Starscream in the Rocky's. He finds out that Starscream betrayed him. Starscream flees. Galvatron tells the Decpticons that it is time to destroy humanity,once and for all.

Back in D.C. the Autobots who are leaderless gather in New York City. Hound is sent to find Prime. He returns w/ the matrix of leadership. They are then meet by Kup who has been on Earth as long as Bumblebee. Kup says that the matrix will go to the only one who is worthy.

Maggie and Glen find out that the Decepticons plan to attack D.C., from their they can destroy the rest of humanity. They send word to Keller. Keller is angry that they Autobots are nowhere to be found. We then meet Governor Berger who tells Keller that the Autobots have abbondend us and that they are working w/ the Decepticons.

Back in NYC the Autobots argue about who the matrix should go to. Ironhide puts an end to it all andtakes the matrix and throws it back in the ocean.

As the Decepticons mobolize for attack, Starscream heads to a military base and creates his own small army of Destucticons. He takes these to Galvatron to prove that he is not a traitor. Galvatron takes the warriors and rewelcomes Starscream.

The Autobots reassemble in D.C. only to find that Berger has taken up an army and has the Autobots surrender. Lennox tells berger that to do this he needs authorization from Keller. Berger say that Keller was the one who had him do this. The Autobots are taken to Nevada where they will be imprisoned.
The Decepticons who are nearing D.C. are stopped by a small squadron of F-22s. They are dealt w/ by the Destructicons.


The rest of it I will write tommorow.

The autobots are taken to Nevada where they will be kept. But thanks to Sam he frees them. They drive back to Washington D.C.

The Decepticons who have now reached D.C. are being held at bay by Berger's forces. Galvatron and Starscream evade the forces and head straight for the Pentagon. But the Autobots arrive and defeat the Decepticons. Ironhide, Prowl, and Brawn corner Galvatron and Starscream. Starscream transforms and flees. And Galvatron defeats the Autobots, killing Brawn. Altoghether Grapple, Sideswipe, Scourge, Blitzwing, and the Destructicons were killed.

Galvatron has the Decepticons fall back to the underwater base that Soundwave and Shockwave built. Here Soundwave hacks into a military network telling all U.S. forces in the D.C. that the Autobots destroyed their holding facility. They also encounter two new troops. Sky/Jetfire and Rumble.

The Autobots who have now lost Prime, Brawn, Grapple, and Sideswipe, flee D.C. and plan to make one last stand. Sam feels quilty, for Prime wouldn't have died if it wasn't for him. Ironhide is named temporary leader for the Autobots. He has them split up and meet at Houston, Texas.

Maggie and Glen have discovered where the Decepticons are hiding. She tells Keller to send the Autobots to the Decepticons headquarters in the Pacific Ocean. Keller tells them that the Autobots are traitors.

Starscream who is hiding in an air force base waits for the final moment of the Autobots to destroy Galvatron. But his impatience leads him to attacking Galvatron before he attacks the Autobots.

Keller sends a battle group to the Decepticons base in the Ocean. Galvatron says he will take care of them. Starscream who was flying over the carriers, transforms and attacks Galvatron. They duel on the ship decks, destroying the humans as they go until Galvatron fianlly kills Starscream. Galvatron destroys the rest of the humans and heads to the base.

The Autobots meet up in Houston and return to Chicago. Galvatron has the Decepticons head to Chicago also. All hope seems lost for the Autobots until Prime shows up. Prime and Galvatron meet one last time and Prime kills Galvatron and the Decepticons are killed. Berger showed up in the battle and was killed in an explosion when Galvatron missed.

The Autobots return to D.C. and Keller tells the Autobots he is sorry. The president allows the Autobots to build a ship where they can find a new planet to call home.

The after credit sequence shows the Autobot’s ship drifting towards Earth.

I hope you liked it. Please comment. If you have any questions that I didn't write please just ask.

Well first off, I hope you realize that my plot is not just me putting my idea for the movie out there. There is an objective to see if we the fans (or whoever on the boards cares enough to partake) can come up with something we like better than what the real movie would be.

Why did you make a new thread? Seriously, you should have just posted this in my thread and we could have worked out something together. My version is just a template. I want as many people on Seibs as will bother to come up with one really cool story, not a bunch of different personal versions.


You have some pretty cool ideas going on here, but I'm afraid I have more complaints than compliments. First and foremost, I had trouble following it. I did read it all, I promise you, but it really started to blend together.

I think it would work if it was cleaned up a bit and given some more overall structure. However, you know what works idea-wise and I like a lot of it.


My main complaints are:

They're driving all over the country way too much. One sentence they're in Chicago (for no reason I could tell) and the next they're outside Vegas at Hoover Dam, and the next they're heading back the way they came for Denver. Seems really unnecessary.

Part 3 feels just like 2. Yeah Galvatron is in, and Prime is out, but otherwise it seems to be the same. Each movie needs it's own clear objective, with only a few loose ends.

Too many characters who don't really do very much.


Stuff I liked:

You've got your alt modes picked out, which is really cool.

I like the suspense of "Oh no, he's gonna bring back Jazz," but then you don't.

I like the way Berger dies.

I like that Brawn dies, since he is dead after all.

Aircraft carrier deck battles between giant robots are always awesome.


So you're more than welcome to join my thread.

By the way, can I put ideas from your story into the one in my thread, since it is supposed to be a community effort?

If there are any particular ideas you really want tell me. I'll wait for your answer before I do anything.

First: sorry about the redundant thread Dark Zarak.
Second: they did bounce around a lot.
Third: How do you combine threads. I'm a new user.
Fourth: Yes you can use my ideas.

Ironhide7 wrote:Third: How do you combine threads. I'm a new user.

Well, I didn't mean it literally. I don't think it can be done except maybe by a mod. Certainly not by us.

What I mean is, if you have some cool ideas, and I have some cool ideas, let's go for it as a team here. I've already got E.H.U.D. and DarkQueen01 on board. But there will be compromises. I'll be willing to drop some of my ideas if we can discuss why they don't work so well.

Eh...sounds ok but theres one fatal flaw. Too many transformers. Do you realize how expensive this movie would be if they put all these characters in? Be sensible now...