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Thu Aug 21, 2014 3:59 pm

I'm in the process of writing my own screenplay for 5, but I'm having trouble with how to open the story.

The 2007 film opened with the cube descending down to earth.

ROTF opened with a tribal group of humans from a long time ago discovering the Sun Harvester and The Fallen.

DOTM opened with the Apollo space mission to the moon, discovering the Ark.

Finally AOE opened with the Creators/Quintessons traveling to earth during the Cretaceous period, and using seeds to convert/terraform the planet and kill a whole lot of dinosaurs.

If you guys would be so kind, please help me out by maybe suggesting some different ideas. I'm currently at a blank Lol.

News Credits: 1350 · Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:35 pm

For starters, don't assume it's the quints. Then for a change immediately catch up with optimus on his quest however he encounters strange meetings on a vast interplanetary body heading his way. Inside a hub of monitors and cables, Primacon, smiles , his target has come home.

Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:56 pm

Have Optimus hurtle back down to Earth and a horrendously painful death; but only after realising how much of a stupid idea it was to attempt interstellar travel using just a jetpack.

News Credits: 767 · Fri Aug 22, 2014 2:49 am

With an Optimus Prime narration.
Then show Optimus Prime on an alien world wearing a suite made of faces from different Transformers and aliens.

Then cut to Walberg's daughter getting down and dirty with her boyfriend, while Bumblebee creepily watches from the window, making beep sounds and inter-cutting those with sound bites of animals mating.

Then show us Walberg carrying a huge bag of Burger King food and putting it in Hound (who's in alt-mode) alt-mode, but in such a way that it prominently shows the logo.

Fri Aug 22, 2014 8:42 am

Maybe start with The Creators getting Optimuses message discussing blah blah blah what happened to Lockdown blah and blah. Than transformers 5. To sidetrack a little the name Transformers 5 faces of darkness would be a great name IMO. But down on Earth The autobots are hiding with the Yeagers somewhere the movie starts blah blah boring human stuff. Than to start Galvatrons thing have him getting a message from something strange "Unicron" dubbing himself the Dark God.

Fri Aug 22, 2014 8:56 am

I would appreciate you adding a scene where Megan Fox, Rose Whitely and the new girl have a three way mud wrestling match just because.

Fri Aug 22, 2014 11:00 am

Blast Cannon wrote:Have Optimus hurtle back down to Earth and a horrendously painful death; but only after realising how much of a stupid idea it was to attempt interstellar travel using just a jetpack.

I want you to replace Michael Bay at once! This is hilarious idea! I would gladly go to cinema even few times only to see this epic scene as many times as possible =P~

News Credits: 7 · Fri Aug 22, 2014 9:24 pm

Optimus flying through space thinking about stuff.Hope this helps.

Sat Aug 23, 2014 9:32 pm

Optimus floating lifelessly(Maybe) through space. A large robotic claw grabs him and pulls him toward a large alien/Mechanical maw...cut to Cade on earth,building something and trying to get Brains to stop humping his welder.