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Postby Razorclaw316 » Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:36 pm

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Postby Skyswipe » Mon Aug 27, 2007 4:11 pm

Motto: ""I have no need for friends, even less for enemies.""
Weapon: Energo-Sword
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Posts: 30
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Location: Grand Prairie, TX, USA
Alt Mode: Triceratops
Strength: 9
Intelligence: 4
Speed: 3
Endurance: 9
Rank: 4
Courage: 7
Firepower: 7
Skill: 4

Re: Hot Spot

Postby Devastron » Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:45 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Razorclaw316 wrote:Hot Spot

Allegiance: Autobot
Subgroup: Protectobots
Function: Protectobot Leader
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Rescue hovercraft, (Earth) Mitsubishi Fuso Fire Truck
Weapons: Fireball Cannon, lasers, Water Canon
Height: 33ft / 10.05m
Quote: "The hotter it is, the better I like it."


Strength: 09
Intelligence: 07
Dexterity: 07
Speed: 04
Endurance: 09
Courage: 09
Firepower: 07
Accuracy: 06
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 08
Charisma: 08
Rank: 07


Profile: Hotspot likes to be where the action is. Whether he's trying to put out a fire or win a war, as long as he's surrounded by a swirl of movement he's happy. He fights with a fluid instinctiveness that seemingly overrides any carefully measured analysis within his logic circuitry. His leadership is charismatic and inspiring; the other Protectobots can't help but perform beyond their abilities when in his company. However sometimes they have difficulty keeping up with his non-stop pace. His philosophy is to be maximally operational every moment of his life. Or, as he likes to phrase it, "There are always junkyards for those who rust!"

Abilities: In his fire truck mode, Hotspot can travel at 90 mph and has a range of 600 miles. His hose line can shoot streams of high-pressure water (and other non-corrosive fluids, such as oil and alchohol) an effective distance of 1200 feet. In robot mode, he possesses incredible strength: he can press 60,000 pounds. He uses a fireball cannon, which can shoot bursts of 2000 degrees Fahrenheit blue flame a distance of 1.5 miles. A special vanadium-steel alloy shields him from temperatures of up to 5000 degrees Fahrenheit. He combines with his fellow Protectobots to form the giant robot known as Defensor.

Weaknesses: Hotspot's ladder sometimes jams, locking into position when extended. His fireball cannon often backfires, releasing large amounts of the flammable liquid that powers it. Hotspot himself is invulnerable to the liquid's effects, but the liquid can cause considerable fire-damage to anything around him.

Roleplay Example -

Decepitcon fighting had caused fires to spread through Nova Cronum, reaching the outer perimeter defenses. Wild fires recklessly spread through the outer perimeter, damaging well-fortified structures. Through the thickness of the fire emerged a blue fire truck with its lights flashing violently. “Alright Protectobots! Let’s get this fire put out.” Hot Spot exclaimed, unleashing his water cannon from his roof. Hot Spot fired high-pressure water into the thickness of the flames, splashing water that would soon cause the flames to lose potency. The outer perimeter structure had been heavily damaged, making a cave in, a very distinct possibility. Hot Spot continued driving through the flames having near immunity to the fire while firing water into the deadly flames when the ground started to shake violently. “First Aid! Look out!” Hot Spot exclaimed while part of the outer perimeter came down on First Aid. Hot Spot quickly transformed to his robot his vanadium-steel alloy shielding him from the threat of the dangerous heat levels. “Hang on First Aid!” Hot Spot exclaimed while he grabbed the wall on both sides, lifting the enormous wall straight up over his head almost effortlessly and tossing it to the ground with a violent slam. Hot Spot then picked the battered First Aid from the ground and put him over his shoulder. “Your alright First Aid, we’ll get you fixed up in no time.” Hot Spot exclaimed while he loaded First Aid into Blades.


I don't think you are quite ready to take a higher ranking character yet. Keep playing well with the characters you have and we can take another look at this sometime in the future.
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Postby Rebel Raven » Tue Aug 28, 2007 4:00 am

These are my character applications. If there's any problems please let me know and hopefully they can be rectified.
If there are any suggestions, I'm open to them.
I look forward to joining a transformers role play.
I can't help but be a lil' nervous. Hehe I've had the first application's concept bouncing around in my head for a while.

Name: RoadFlower
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Warrior
Appearance: She looks akin to Energon Arcee and even shares a similar transformation sequence, but her colors and weapons are different.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... bossom.jpg
The picture includes her "Holomatter" Earth self as created by the false driver function of the shield.
Alt. mode: A Black/red/white '99 Hayabusa Motorcycle (or cybertronian equivalent.)
Weapons: Dual function energon swords/blasters mounted in recharge racks on arms, or hand held. 1X plasma firing Vulcan gun, and 1x "Fire and Forget" missile launcher which both can be hand held, arm mounted, or leg mounted or combined with the Vulcan gun into a single weapon for mounting on the arm, or hand held. They are mounted to the sides of her motorcycle mode in Alt Mode.
In alt mode the sword/blasters are rear firing only with slight aiming capability. Her Vulcan Gun and Missile launcher are side mounted and forward firing only but can be aimed upwards, or downwards. .
Special Abilities: Advanced Holomatters in the form of 2 identical drones stored in the chest that carry regenerative shield generators and can be deployed or utilized internally.
The generated shields can be shaped, used for camouflage, produce the image of a false driver similar to a Holomatter or create a disguise for herself, but have a very limited ability to soak damage.
She is also equipped with a magnetic coating on her joints and most moving parts which increases her dexterity, speed, and agility by reducing friction.
Height:12 ft / 3.6 m
Quote: 'The sooner this war is over, the sooner I can enjoy the roads again.'

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: ??


Profile:
Born with a spirit inherent to many bikers of Earth. She longs to feel the rush of wind on her frame, and see the roadside world. To feel the freedom of it all.
On earth she would make use of her Shields as a Holomatter, and to absorb solar energy among other types of energy she might come across. Due to her adventurous spirit she would also makes use of her Shield Drones ability to be deployed with a disguise shield to interact with Humanity and see the world through their point of view (At least from their height) and indulge her fascination with other life forms, but on Cybertron this ability is usually used more for militant purposes.
Further she is a practitioner of Metallikato and Crystalocution which allows her to fight foes larger and stronger than herself through focused melee strikes, and masterful sword strikes, as well as allowing better use of her size, speed, and agility as an advantage.
She is a bit selfish, and bears a low self esteem problem which hurts her leadership abilities. She prefers to follow, advise, and give tactics from her assorted bits of knowledge. She's eager to not be directly responsible for others.
Her desire for combat is fairly low, though when combat arises she does what she feels she must.
Truly, she'd rather be on the road seeing the world, and exploring but knows that there's no room for that when the war rages on. Someone will interrupt and make her trip difficult.
Someday she hopes to be able to take to the skies flying under her own power, and travel in space to see how other species travel, and maybe to have a greater ground speed.
Even if she gained the ability to fly, the feel of the road so close by will never cease to please.
Yes, she's pretty into roads, and travel.
She fights the fight for peace so that she, and others like her can travel without harassment. Even if they are Decepticon.

Abilities: Top speed: 500 mph in motorcycle form with an acceleration of 0-60 in 4.1 seconds.
RoadFlower's martial arts training coupled with a keen mind gives her considerable fighting prowess with her entire body and weapons allowing her to tear down her target with well placed strikes to shatter or fracture a target, or cause external or internal damage in general.
The dual purpose energon swords are created from latticed energy projected in the form of blades, and filled with heated energy giving it the ability to cut and penetrate metals easily, further, they double as blaster pistols of average power with a 1,000 yard effective range.
Her Vulcan gun sprays a hail of plasma projectiles 500 yards in a cone shape using the multiple barrels to slow down overheat, and cover a larger area faster being able to pepper the entire side facing her with bullets when it comes to targets roughly her size.
The missile launcher self reloads and can fire single missiles at ranges of 50 miles, but due to her field of vision the maximum range is only really exercised when the missiles are tracking and following a fast moving target. She can lock on to anything she can see, her missiles tracking the image, heat signature, and if all else fails the approximate location of the target. Further she can fire her missiles without lock treating them as straight firing rockets with timed or impact fuses.
The shield drones can be deployed as extensions of herself, and if destroyed can be regenerated with time and energy. They share a link to RoadFlower giving them the ability to relay information to her and from her, or back up the memories, spark, and personality of RoadFlower in times of emergency.
The Drone's mode of transportation is either slow flight (50 mph), or use of the shield's malleability to create a body of sorts around it suspending it inside the shell and using the shell to move. It has a range of 50 miles without absorbing energy for it's fuel cell.
Her shields are regenerative and can absorb a fraction of all energy it touches converting it into energon while attempting to defeat the projectile, and can also be used to make a solid holographic shell in a 15x15 ft square area.
The holographic nature of her shields allow her to disguise herself, or camouflage herself to a good degree by colorizing the shield to match the background or shaping and coloring it to match an appearance.

Weaknesses: Her regenerative shield acts more like Kevlar than a true solid shield as it simultaneously partially absorbs the energy of oncoming projectiles, catches, deflects, spreads the impact, and attempts to defeat most small and medium arms rounds, rather than simply trying to stop the projectile like a solid object might. As it does this the shield is being worn down but gradually recharged.
Sustained damage to the shield (I.E. A steady bombardment of projectiles) can beat through the shield in varying amounts of time depending on the severity of the bombardment but the shield rarely holds up more than a few minutes with a single average weapon firing on it, and highly kinetic damage (I.E. A powerful/concentrated beam, a high velocity shell) can penetrate the shield almost instantly with minimal absorption and deflection.
A melee attack from a transformer of average strength will ignore the shield as it provides a different kind of inertia than a projectile.
Further while her shield can cover her entire body and more, it looses effectiveness at taking damage like a balloon being inflated becoming easier to break the larger it gets.
Fast movement (25% of top speed and up) greatly hinders her camouflaged patterns as the program in charge cannot keep up with the rapidly changing backgrounds, and their details. High speed can even nullify the effectiveness of the camouflage due to the colors not changing fast enough.
The shell, while able to even be disguised as another transformer, isn't substantial enough to perform melee when exceeding a 7ft x 7ft area and cannot create functional projectile weapons.
The energy provided through the shield's absorption is for RoadFlower's exclusive use, and cannot be passed on to another in any beneficial manner with any ability she currently has, and is geared more for keeping her fuel up than anything.
The shield's absorption only energizes drones when they are deployed. She only receives the benefits of the energy when the drones are docked on her person.
The Drones, themselves, are fragile towards attacks due to their small size but can utilize the shield generator to hide their location and offer some armor.
When engaged in melee she tends to be less attentive of the battlefield outside her immediate opponent(s).
The blade emitters on her swords are extremely durable but it is possible to apply enough force to the blade requiring a reactivation.

Sample Post: Amidst the chaos of a battlefield, a formation of Decepticon grunts is blown apart from a missile that sped into their ranks and exploded mid air. The sudden chaos causes them to loose their cohesiveness a moment as they wonder what hit them.
Then they see the source of the attack. A motorcycle barreling at them with 2 cylindrical weapons at the bottom of each side. One is a missile launcher, the other a Vulcan gun that has just warmed up, and begins a steady, loud drone as plasma tears into those that are still standing. The sudden assault took them by surprise, indeed. Their reaction time is hampered by confusion and panic.
The motorcycle transforms, and with the side mounted weapons now on each arm, the small feminine figure charges in with energon blades ignited then starts with precision strikes downing a few before they could react. The rest fall like the fodder they are after a few well placed strikes while they get off some small arms fire to little effect. A dozen or so grunts lay gravely injured or dead around her in the end.
It's not over, though.
She felt eyes on her all the while during the brief battle.
She looks around and sees a Decepticon twice her size barreling at her with a large double edged sword in 2 hands. He roars at her and swings his blade at her neck and shoulders, but she lunges in retaliation dashing under the blade and thrusting her blades at the inner thighs of the foe gashing them deep. A pained cry from her foe fills her audio sensors and his sword comes down at her from over his head. She dives to the side avoiding a sword thrust at the ground.
Before she can get on her feet she sees his next attack akin to a golf swing putting a large gash into the metal ground. Her blades raise in defense just in time to block, but his strength, and the weight of his blade are enough to roughly throw her yards back, and land still off her feet.
A roll dodges the next downward slash and a kip up has her ready to stab her energon blade into the ground almost immediately to block the ground level swipe. The blade emitter nearly shorts out from the monstrous wrath of her foe, but she leaps at her foe, bringing a swift high kick to what would be the biceps on a human. There's a crashing noise as the armor covering the area of her foe is shattered via striking a fracture point perfectly, forcing him to back off a moment before he charged at her thrusting his blade. She sidesteps it gracefully, and whirls on her high heels along the length of his blade, her own swords shielding herself from the reprisal even though he's unlikely to react as fast as needed.
In a flash she reaches his sword hand, and grabs it with her own hand, then his elbow with the other hand. A sudden pull starts the last sensations he'll feel as he goes off balance. Her hand on his sword hand lets go, and she brutally uses a hay-maker type swing against her foe putting him down for the count as he topples over nearly decapitated. A mixture of his own weight and her swing making the sword blade more effective.
But the sinking feeling she had before was still there.
She feels those eyes on her, still.
A loud energy discharge from the distance! She turns to look only in time to see a crimson figure firing the beam from the air, then her shield flares as the beam collides. The shield paused the beam for only a quarter moment spreading the front of the beam like it were a hollow point bullet on a soft target. But after that fraction of a moment of collision, her shield buckles and the rest of the beam punches through.
Her left side catches the rest of the blast. It tears at her arm, and shoulder armor, ripping and melting it off. She feels her chest, and midsection being blasted apart as the beam continues it's path from an upward angle.
The long beam is hardly done whittling at her durability as it destroys her waist as well on it's way to the ground.
As if time slowed down she could feel liquids from her ruptured lines entering her mouth, and she could see the droplets escape into the air as her optic sensors begin to fill with static. Her half blasted form stands, even after the beam has ran its course, but she's in no condition to make the best of it. Her form wobbles, then crumples to the ground.
She feels her systems locking up, her mouth agape, the mentioned fluids trickling from a corner of her painted lips. Her form is heaped on her side as she goes into stasis lock. Primus must have been looking out for her this time. The beam didn't eat through enough material to get to her spark.
But it doesn't matter now. All is quiet now. Maybe a medic will come to repair her? Maybe her days as a warrior are done?

And during the quiet maybe she dreams as she waits for her destiny to be decided.
Indeed, quite a dream. An earthen asphalt road under her tires. Grass to the left of her, a high shoreline overlooking the ocean to the right. A city on the horizon.
A false driver's image created by the drone's shield shakes the local's suspicions of her true nature, and giving a an exotic feel as the drone sends visual and tactile sensations. The wind in her hair, the sights around her. She can almost smell the fresh air. The drone nearly reincarnates her in human form.
The sense of freedom thrills her as she travels in her dream without the harassment of the war, even if it is on an alien world.

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Name: Shrike
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. Mode: A flying artillery piece.
Appearance: The coloration is mostly crimson with some blue, yellow, and white adding some details.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... t_form.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... e_Mode.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... t_Mode.jpg
Weapons: 1x energy rifle hand held or arm mounted in robot mode and side mounted in alt mode, 2x head mounted fire linked mini energy needle guns only useable in robot mode, 1x heated combat blade on each wrist, and foot, forward mounted in alt mode, 1 x energy sword hand held in use, 1 x shield with a heated thrusting blade hand held or arm mounted in robot mode, and side mounted in alt mode. 1X 580 mm energy cannon only available in alt mode's attack mode.
Special Abilities: Triple changer (Robot Form, Cruising form, assault form.)
Height: 24 ft/7.3 m
Quote: 'My sweet embrace will take you out of this war.'
STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 4
RANK: ??

Profile: Her personality is hard to pin down in words (For me at the moment. Personality comes during role play usually), though she is sane, though, as far as she's concerned.
Her trust is hard to get beyond a faith that her comrades will do their job while she does hers.
Shrike fights in the war with little regard for who's right and who's wrong, and the fact the war may or may not end does not bother her. She battles out of loyalty and duty. It's hardly personal.
It's possible that if she were designated an Autobot she would fight just as hard and effectively for them, though not necessarily up to their standards.
Her nature towards combat is simply how it is. Get the job done by any means necessary, and a utilize sudden brutality to disorient and demoralize the enemy leaving them open to further assaults.
Despite her hard working militant nature she despises being used, or being treated as a disposable pawn.
Her tactical mind will attempt to plan out a method of assault in missions as opposed to blindly charging in, and a tactical retreat is not out of the question if things look beyond her ability.
Her mind has measures and countermeasures planned out moment by moment, especially in melee combat. This isn't necessarily fool proof, but it's helped her survive this long.
She gains great enjoyment out of getting her missions done, and defeating her opponents.

If time ever came for her to lay down her weapons she probably wouldn't know what to do with herself, though the idea of painting has crossed her mind, and maybe improving herself in general, But due to the way things are her only hobbies at present are the arts of war, and becoming a more effective warrior.

Abilities: Her top speed is mach 1.5, but unlike most Decepticons her flight is governed by an articulated booster/thruster system making up the sides of her skirt armor allowing for an assortment of aerial maneuvers in either robot or alt mode including movement in nearly any direction and allows hovering. This also means her top speed is attainable in Robot or Alt mode.
Her alternate form has 2 modes of operation. One is an aerodynamic cruising mode where her major offensive weapons are the side mounted energy rifle, and the forward mounted blades, and the other is an assault mode where the front end opens into 4 blade tipped limbs and exposes the beam cannon.
The front end in assault mode can use the limbs now to grab a target holding them against the beam canon as it fires at point blank, or use the blades to lash out at nearby targets.
The beam canon is extremely deadly firing a single, wide beam that can be swept over an area taking out multiple targets or concentrated in one area to punch holes in some of the thickest armor or cause serious damage to anyone unlucky enough to get caught in it's path. It has an effective range of 2 miles.
Shrike's agile form allows her to strike with metal cleaving blades with blinding speed to whittle down an opponent's durability until the killing blow is administered. The combat style is her own in origin pieced together from experience.
Her needler guns don't do much damage due to their small projectile size, but they can seriously harm delicate areas of the opponent like the optic sensors, and cause pain when fired elsewhere.
Her long range energy rifle can strike targets 5 miles away if she can get a bead on them, and delivers high damage shot per shot, but has a 3 second gap in between each shot.

Weaknesses: Shrike's unusual flying method (At least for a Decepticon) of 2 articulated booster/thruster systems comprising her side skirt armor leaves her vulnerable to being grounded if it takes to much damage and her thinner, high agility frame also leaves her more likely to take crippling damage forcing her to dodge and use her shield as much as she can.
The Beam cannon of her alt form is vulnerable to damage and becoming disabled when in assault mode, and can only be fired 3-4 times before energon begins running low forcing Shrike to rely on other means to get the job done or a retreat if she doesn't feel she has the means to keep going until she can recharge.
Her personality will probably be disliked by most everyone but her superiors giving orders. Maybe even her superiors would end up disliking the hard working soldier girl.


Sample Post: She spies her target's demise from her hovering position above the battlefield. She was the crimson form that was the last living thing her target saw. Under her breath she reprimands herself for taking such a lousy angle and firing from her maximum effective distance. But the small target was destroyed by her beam. Or at least taken out of combat.
She enjoyed watching her fellow Decepticon and the Autobot battle up close and personal. She even thought about attacking the Autobot motorcycle likewise, but it wasn't her mission, just icing on her cake to destroy what may have become a thorn in the side of her comrades.
She turns her attentions towards her destination. A communications tower on the Autobot side, and fairly well guarded by a turret system. She breaks hover swiveling her thrusters to propel her towards the target at a good clip of Half of mach 1.
The turret system greets her firing from the ground in a line just as she gets into her firing range.
A quick barrel roll as an evasive maneuver ending in a hover, and she fires her 580 mm beam cannon at the turrets sweeping it along the turret line, exploding them one by one as anti aircraft fire whips by her.
Her thrusters swivel again, sending her barreling for her objective.
She rolls away from a rocket fired at her as she spots Autobot grunts pouring out of the tower and assaulting her. She fires a beam at them while pressing forward destroying three of them and leaving a crater filled with slag, but it's too dangerous to stay in the air now. The Autobot forces behind her, luckily, are occupied leaving her nothing to worry about but what's ahead.
Landing behind cover with haste, she transforms, taking refuge from the hail of gunfire whittling at her cover. She deploys her shield from her left booster turned skirt armor onto her left arm, and attaches her beam rifle from the opposite side of her booster turned skirt armor to her right forearm. She crouches behind the cover, waiting seemingly for the right moment but with the unrelenting fire it seemed it would never come.
She leaps sideways from her cover hearing the energy blasts clash on her shield, and zipping past her head.
Her boosters raise and thrust behind her, launching her forward having her skim across the ground while weaving, and shielding herself downing targets with her rifle, and needles them with sprays from her Needler guns while she prepares the long blade on each foot, at each wrist and her shield. They get white hot, and as she barrels into them, she delivers a kick to one as she passes, letting the blade pass through with the inertia of her charge. He lets out a low groan as he falls over with a large gash in his torso.
The Autobots begin to turn around, but are greeted by the sounds of her thrusters flaring up. One turns around and finds a searing hot blade mounted on her shield stabbed into his face. Simultaneously she swivels her rifle out of the way as another turns and finds that as he does a blade from her wrist is opening him up like a can opener on the neck. His head falls off cleanly.
The crimson blur that is Shrike doesn't stop for a moment, her next strike is always in mind as she brings her shield about, dragging the agonized Autobot along with it, hurling him into the rest of their number, toppling one, leaving one more standing with a look of fear on his face. He's stunned and can only watch as his foe kicks a foot blade into the knocked down Autobot's torso, then the sounds of transformation immediately after. He's leaking oil on his self by now at the speed of the brutal bladed whirlwind that dropped a handful of his comrades. He looks up and begins to raise his rifle, but it's too late. He feels 4 limbs slip around his form pushing his rifle down, and pinning his arms.
He squirms as he's lifted off the ground by the quasi-squid like creature while feeling 4 searing pains in his back as the blades dig in. He looks over his shoulder seeing the tower he failed to defend.
A saccharine laced voice coos out to him. "Enjoy the favor. You don't have to fight anymore." then a brilliant white light blinds him as he lets out a confused sound as his life is snuffed.
Shrike fired through the poor defender's body point blank making his torso nearly vanish. The beam tears into the tower, and a sweep of the beam causes enough damage to have it begin the inevitable toppling as she released the Autobot's corpse.
Done in 2-3 minutes at most from the turrets to the tower toppling.
"Mission accomplished." She said to her self in a bemused tone as the tentacle like limbs come together hiding the beam canon, then she rockets off in a wide arc to get out of there just as reinforcements came, firing pot shots at her, but it was to late.
They run as debris from the tower collapses.
Shrike heads back to base feeling a bit run down as the beam blasts from her cannon wore down her fuel cell.
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Postby The J Writer » Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:12 am

Crashinibon wrote:Name: Joebot
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: General Infantry Joebot
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Land-Vehicle
Weapons: Basic Issue Laser Pistol(BILP), Close Quarters Combat Saw, Shoulder Mounted Rocket Launcher, and Cutting/Welding Torch
Special Abilities: -
Height: 24 ft = 7,3 m
Quote: "This could have gone better I'm sure."

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 5
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: -

Profile:

Joebot is.. nothing special really, he honestly doesn't even have any place in the battlefield or even being given the weapons he has. He's a fluke, a mistake, a mishap. A attempt to level the field against the Decepticons and their seekers as a easily produced field unit, Joebot wasn't even finished when he was activated, his designers were baffled but unable to take him off-line due to their own morals. Thus Joebot was thrust into service, traded off from section to section until finally one instructor figured he knew all that he was going to and placed him in active duty.

Abilities:

There is nothing much to say about Joebot's abilities, he just scraped by in all his basic training events, even the most inspirational of instructors were unable to propel him in any one direction. There is one area where this is not true however, Joebot's technical ability. Thanks to his general training, Joebot in actuality is a technical wiz! This is easily missed due to his unimaginative nature but many has been the time when a skilled technician has wandered away from a project or repair job in frustration only to return and find their task done by a mysterious benefactor, these are the deeds of the ever wandering Joebot.

Weaknesses:

Joebot shares his design with Red Alert, Sideswipe, and any other number of Autobots. This can lead allies and enemies alike into thinking him to be someone more capable then he actually is! Often assigned duties more suited to those he resembles or considered a more serious threat by enemies.

Sample Post:

Late into the cycle's end two technician's worked away at the as of yet lifeless chasis of Joebot, the Olive Drab mech unknowing of the conflict as these two tiring units worked away at giving him life, one coming to a halt as a thought idly struck him.

"H'hey.. do you think we're doing the right thing?"

The other halted his work, turning his optics upwerds and eyeing his partner curiously,

"Whaddya mean by that, Sparkstart?" asked the second, the lights on his faceplate flashing as he spoke.

"This, I mean, should we really be doing this, making Cybertronians just for war, what are they going to do after it's all over. This would make us almost as bad as the Decepticons." claimed Sparkstart, a hand thumping down on Joebot's chest, unknowingly Fonzing a few systems to life.

The second stepped away from the table, giving this a moment's thought, a hand absent;y rubbing over the light bars that made up the lower portion of his features, "I guess you're right.. let's get this guy broken back down." he agreed, looking up only to find his partner gazing down at their creation, Sparkstart's expression one of dumbfounded surprise.

Following the other's gaze, the second found himself looking into a pair of gleaming optics, Joebot's.

Not knowing who he was or where he was.. or even why he was, Joebot looked up to his creators, seeking in their features the answers to the gaping void that was his very being only to find surprise and fear written on the faceplate's before him.

The silence between the three grew heavy, oppressive. Joebot felt the weight of it force from him his very first words, "Hello..."

"Oh slag." answered the creators in unison.


I like this app, but the name "Joebot" just doesn't sound...Cybertronian. Too Earthy. I'd prefer something that sounds more like a Transformer's name. Well, make that an American-series Transformer's name. ;) Anyway, other than that this looks fine...cook up a good moniker for him and I'll approve it.
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Postby The J Writer » Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:15 am

Nassuman wrote:Panzer
Allegiance: Autobot
Function:Warrior
Alt. mode: Armored Assault Vehicle (think cybertron defense Hotshot with ALOT more guns)
Weapons: 2 All-pupose heavy duty energon blasters, 2 Energy Assault pistols, back-mounted missile launchers and energon battle-axe.
Height: 32 ft = 9,76 m
Quote: "What doesn't kill you makes me feel unacomplished!"

STRENGTH:9
INTELLIGENCE:6
DEXTERITY:8
SPEED:4
ENDURANCE:9
COURAGE:8
FIREPOWER:9
ACCURACY:6
MELEE:6
TECH SKILL:3
CHARISMA:7
RANK:

Profile: Panzer loves to battle, a little bit too much. This makes his comrades question his sanity, or his allegiance. But he is a strong supporter of the Autobot cause, to a certain degree. Where most Autobots would rather use diplomacy to solve problems, he would rather cleave them into a slagheap to solve a dispute. Some would call that method reckless, he would call it "DIY Diplomacy with a battle-axe". He puts the shoot-first asks questions later approach to spark as if it were programmed into his personality drive.

A new addition to the Autobot ranks, he is eager to serve and is glad to help other, less battle prepared Autobots. His loud disposition hides an creative and versatile individual. He makes it a habit to pair up with smaller Transformers (he believes it makes him look bigger in comparison). Never the kind to run away from a fight he serves as cannon fodder among his team. His origins are hazy at best, with many of his comrades questioning his loyalty to them. It was assumed by many that he was one of Cybertronian Gladiators that did not choose to become a Decepticon.

Abilities: Panzer is the perfect warrior,versatile, heavily armed and almost indestructible. He may be slow, but that's okay, he'd rather die fighting than run away like a coward!He has developed his own style of combat, using his large body and multiple weapon variations he can tackle any combat situation with ease and flare. One of his weapon variations is known as his "full-fire mode" in which he sacrifices his movement to be able to fire off all of his weapons at once.

Weaknesses: The problem with being as powerful and heavily armored as Panzer is, you'd guess he's pretty slow. Only able to reach high speeds of about 99 mph because of his massive weight. Subtlety is not his forte', he's loud and dispises stealth. He also has a strange allergic reaction when copper is inserted into his system.

Sample Post:

The Barren wasteland once known as Polyhex

Panzer sat in the middle of the battlefield that had once seemed like paradise to the warrior. But now the dust had settled and he was agan faced with the reprocussions of the battle. Surviving the battle was one thing, seeing those who didn't make it was another...

Alright tough guy, pick yourself up and get outta here, it won't be long before the Cons arrive for clean-up duty...

The large mech sighed as he walked away slowly in the direction of the Autobot base when suddenly something caught his attention. He slowly pulled out one of his pistols and surveyed his surroundings.

It's not moving fast, and it's definetly not friendly...

He was right, but he had wished he wasn't. He found an opponent, he'd just didn't want this kind of opponent. It was a Decepticon with his lower-half ripped off.

"H-help me..." wheezed out the injured mech. "P-please I beg of you..."

He said nothing, this wasn't his place. He wasn't the kind to make decisions like this. He had two choices and both of them would leave him buried in guilt. He looked at the pathetic creature before him and sighed.

"I know I'm gonna die here, and I'd probably wouldn't make it even if you took me with you... but please, just stay with me until I go, I'd rather die in the pressence of the enemy rather than alone.."

He kneeled down at looked down at the mech. Slowly he watched his enemy shut down completely.

You did the right thing...just keep telling yourself that...you did the right thing...


This looks very good but for one thing - his Tech Skill. I know you're not trying to make him a techie, but anything lower than a 4 really means your character is dangerously inept with any sort of technology. I suggest taking one point from either Strength, Endurance or Firepower and adding it to Tech Skill. Otherwise, this looks really nice.
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Postby The J Writer » Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:19 am

Unipuma wrote:These are my character applications. If there's any problems please let me know and hopefully they can be rectified.
If there are any suggestions, I'm open to them.
I look forward to joining a transformers role play.
I can't help but be a lil' nervous. Hehe I've had the first application's concept bouncing around in my head for a while.

Name: RoadFlower
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Warrior
Appearance: She looks akin to Energon Arcee and even shares a similar transformation sequence, but her colors and weapons are different.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... bossom.jpg
The picture includes her "Holomatter" Earth self as created by the false driver function of the shield.
Alt. mode: A Black/red/white '99 Hayabusa Motorcycle (or cybertronian equivalent.)
Weapons: Dual function energon swords/blasters mounted in recharge racks on arms, or hand held. 1X plasma firing Vulcan gun, and 1x "Fire and Forget" missile launcher which both can be hand held, arm mounted, or leg mounted or combined with the Vulcan gun into a single weapon for mounting on the arm, or hand held. They are mounted to the sides of her motorcycle mode in Alt Mode.
In alt mode the sword/blasters are rear firing only with slight aiming capability. Her Vulcan Gun and Missile launcher are side mounted and forward firing only but can be aimed upwards, or downwards. .
Special Abilities: Advanced Holomatters in the form of 2 identical drones stored in the chest that carry regenerative shield generators and can be deployed or utilized internally.
The generated shields can be shaped, used for camouflage, produce the image of a false driver similar to a Holomatter or create a disguise for herself, but have a very limited ability to soak damage.
She is also equipped with a magnetic coating on her joints and most moving parts which increases her dexterity, speed, and agility by reducing friction.
Height:12 ft / 3.6 m
Quote: 'The sooner this war is over, the sooner I can enjoy the roads again.'

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: ??


Profile:
Born with a spirit inherent to many bikers of Earth. She longs to feel the rush of wind on her frame, and see the roadside world. To feel the freedom of it all.
On earth she would make use of her Shields as a Holomatter, and to absorb solar energy among other types of energy she might come across. Due to her adventurous spirit she would also makes use of her Shield Drones ability to be deployed with a disguise shield to interact with Humanity and see the world through their point of view (At least from their height) and indulge her fascination with other life forms, but on Cybertron this ability is usually used more for militant purposes.
Further she is a practitioner of Metallikato and Crystalocution which allows her to fight foes larger and stronger than herself through focused melee strikes, and masterful sword strikes, as well as allowing better use of her size, speed, and agility as an advantage.
She is a bit selfish, and bears a low self esteem problem which hurts her leadership abilities. She prefers to follow, advise, and give tactics from her assorted bits of knowledge. She's eager to not be directly responsible for others.
Her desire for combat is fairly low, though when combat arises she does what she feels she must.
Truly, she'd rather be on the road seeing the world, and exploring but knows that there's no room for that when the war rages on. Someone will interrupt and make her trip difficult.
Someday she hopes to be able to take to the skies flying under her own power, and travel in space to see how other species travel, and maybe to have a greater ground speed.
Even if she gained the ability to fly, the feel of the road so close by will never cease to please.
Yes, she's pretty into roads, and travel.
She fights the fight for peace so that she, and others like her can travel without harassment. Even if they are Decepticon.

Abilities: Top speed: 500 mph in motorcycle form with an acceleration of 0-60 in 4.1 seconds.
RoadFlower's martial arts training coupled with a keen mind gives her considerable fighting prowess with her entire body and weapons allowing her to tear down her target with well placed strikes to shatter or fracture a target, or cause external or internal damage in general.
The dual purpose energon swords are created from latticed energy projected in the form of blades, and filled with heated energy giving it the ability to cut and penetrate metals easily, further, they double as blaster pistols of average power with a 1,000 yard effective range.
Her Vulcan gun sprays a hail of plasma projectiles 500 yards in a cone shape using the multiple barrels to slow down overheat, and cover a larger area faster being able to pepper the entire side facing her with bullets when it comes to targets roughly her size.
The missile launcher self reloads and can fire single missiles at ranges of 50 miles, but due to her field of vision the maximum range is only really exercised when the missiles are tracking and following a fast moving target. She can lock on to anything she can see, her missiles tracking the image, heat signature, and if all else fails the approximate location of the target. Further she can fire her missiles without lock treating them as straight firing rockets with timed or impact fuses.
The shield drones can be deployed as extensions of herself, and if destroyed can be regenerated with time and energy. They share a link to RoadFlower giving them the ability to relay information to her and from her, or back up the memories, spark, and personality of RoadFlower in times of emergency.
The Drone's mode of transportation is either slow flight (50 mph), or use of the shield's malleability to create a body of sorts around it suspending it inside the shell and using the shell to move. It has a range of 50 miles without absorbing energy for it's fuel cell.
Her shields are regenerative and can absorb a fraction of all energy it touches converting it into energon while attempting to defeat the projectile, and can also be used to make a solid holographic shell in a 15x15 ft square area.
The holographic nature of her shields allow her to disguise herself, or camouflage herself to a good degree by colorizing the shield to match the background or shaping and coloring it to match an appearance.

Weaknesses: Her regenerative shield acts more like Kevlar than a true solid shield as it simultaneously partially absorbs the energy of oncoming projectiles, catches, deflects, spreads the impact, and attempts to defeat most small and medium arms rounds, rather than simply trying to stop the projectile like a solid object might. As it does this the shield is being worn down but gradually recharged.
Sustained damage to the shield (I.E. A steady bombardment of projectiles) can beat through the shield in varying amounts of time depending on the severity of the bombardment but the shield rarely holds up more than a few minutes with a single average weapon firing on it, and highly kinetic damage (I.E. A powerful/concentrated beam, a high velocity shell) can penetrate the shield almost instantly with minimal absorption and deflection.
A melee attack from a transformer of average strength will ignore the shield as it provides a different kind of inertia than a projectile.
Further while her shield can cover her entire body and more, it looses effectiveness at taking damage like a balloon being inflated becoming easier to break the larger it gets.
Fast movement (25% of top speed and up) greatly hinders her camouflaged patterns as the program in charge cannot keep up with the rapidly changing backgrounds, and their details. High speed can even nullify the effectiveness of the camouflage due to the colors not changing fast enough.
The shell, while able to even be disguised as another transformer, isn't substantial enough to perform melee when exceeding a 7ft x 7ft area and cannot create functional projectile weapons.
The energy provided through the shield's absorption is for RoadFlower's exclusive use, and cannot be passed on to another in any beneficial manner with any ability she currently has, and is geared more for keeping her fuel up than anything.
The shield's absorption only energizes drones when they are deployed. She only receives the benefits of the energy when the drones are docked on her person.
The Drones, themselves, are fragile towards attacks due to their small size but can utilize the shield generator to hide their location and offer some armor.
When engaged in melee she tends to be less attentive of the battlefield outside her immediate opponent(s).
The blade emitters on her swords are extremely durable but it is possible to apply enough force to the blade requiring a reactivation.

Sample Post: Amidst the chaos of a battlefield, a formation of Decepticon grunts is blown apart from a missile that sped into their ranks and exploded mid air. The sudden chaos causes them to loose their cohesiveness a moment as they wonder what hit them.
Then they see the source of the attack. A motorcycle barreling at them with 2 cylindrical weapons at the bottom of each side. One is a missile launcher, the other a Vulcan gun that has just warmed up, and begins a steady, loud drone as plasma tears into those that are still standing. The sudden assault took them by surprise, indeed. Their reaction time is hampered by confusion and panic.
The motorcycle transforms, and with the side mounted weapons now on each arm, the small feminine figure charges in with energon blades ignited then starts with precision strikes downing a few before they could react. The rest fall like the fodder they are after a few well placed strikes while they get off some small arms fire to little effect. A dozen or so grunts lay gravely injured or dead around her in the end.
It's not over, though.
She felt eyes on her all the while during the brief battle.
She looks around and sees a Decepticon twice her size barreling at her with a large double edged sword in 2 hands. He roars at her and swings his blade at her neck and shoulders, but she lunges in retaliation dashing under the blade and thrusting her blades at the inner thighs of the foe gashing them deep. A pained cry from her foe fills her audio sensors and his sword comes down at her from over his head. She dives to the side avoiding a sword thrust at the ground.
Before she can get on her feet she sees his next attack akin to a golf swing putting a large gash into the metal ground. Her blades raise in defense just in time to block, but his strength, and the weight of his blade are enough to roughly throw her yards back, and land still off her feet.
A roll dodges the next downward slash and a kip up has her ready to stab her energon blade into the ground almost immediately to block the ground level swipe. The blade emitter nearly shorts out from the monstrous wrath of her foe, but she leaps at her foe, bringing a swift high kick to what would be the biceps on a human. There's a crashing noise as the armor covering the area of her foe is shattered via striking a fracture point perfectly, forcing him to back off a moment before he charged at her thrusting his blade. She sidesteps it gracefully, and whirls on her high heels along the length of his blade, her own swords shielding herself from the reprisal even though he's unlikely to react as fast as needed.
In a flash she reaches his sword hand, and grabs it with her own hand, then his elbow with the other hand. A sudden pull starts the last sensations he'll feel as he goes off balance. Her hand on his sword hand lets go, and she brutally uses a hay-maker type swing against her foe putting him down for the count as he topples over nearly decapitated. A mixture of his own weight and her swing making the sword blade more effective.
But the sinking feeling she had before was still there.
She feels those eyes on her, still.
A loud energy discharge from the distance! She turns to look only in time to see a crimson figure firing the beam from the air, then her shield flares as the beam collides. The shield paused the beam for only a quarter moment spreading the front of the beam like it were a hollow point bullet on a soft target. But after that fraction of a moment of collision, her shield buckles and the rest of the beam punches through.
Her left side catches the rest of the blast. It tears at her arm, and shoulder armor, ripping and melting it off. She feels her chest, and midsection being blasted apart as the beam continues it's path from an upward angle.
The long beam is hardly done whittling at her durability as it destroys her waist as well on it's way to the ground.
As if time slowed down she could feel liquids from her ruptured lines entering her mouth, and she could see the droplets escape into the air as her optic sensors begin to fill with static. Her half blasted form stands, even after the beam has ran its course, but she's in no condition to make the best of it. Her form wobbles, then crumples to the ground.
She feels her systems locking up, her mouth agape, the mentioned fluids trickling from a corner of her painted lips. Her form is heaped on her side as she goes into stasis lock. Primus must have been looking out for her this time. The beam didn't eat through enough material to get to her spark.
But it doesn't matter now. All is quiet now. Maybe a medic will come to repair her? Maybe her days as a warrior are done?

And during the quiet maybe she dreams as she waits for her destiny to be decided.
Indeed, quite a dream. An earthen asphalt road under her tires. Grass to the left of her, a high shoreline overlooking the ocean to the right. A city on the horizon.
A false driver's image created by the drone's shield shakes the local's suspicions of her true nature, and giving a an exotic feel as the drone sends visual and tactile sensations. The wind in her hair, the sights around her. She can almost smell the fresh air. The drone nearly reincarnates her in human form.
The sense of freedom thrills her as she travels in her dream without the harassment of the war, even if it is on an alien world.

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Name: Shrike
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. Mode: A flying artillery piece.
Appearance: The coloration is mostly crimson with some blue, yellow, and white adding some details.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... t_form.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... e_Mode.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/ ... t_Mode.jpg
Weapons: 1x energy rifle hand held or arm mounted in robot mode and side mounted in alt mode, 2x head mounted fire linked mini energy needle guns only useable in robot mode, 1x heated combat blade on each wrist, and foot, forward mounted in alt mode, 1 x energy sword hand held in use, 1 x shield with a heated thrusting blade hand held or arm mounted in robot mode, and side mounted in alt mode. 1X 580 mm energy cannon only available in alt mode's attack mode.
Special Abilities: Triple changer (Robot Form, Cruising form, assault form.)
Height: 24 ft/7.3 m
Quote: 'My sweet embrace will take you out of this war.'
STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 4
RANK: ??

Profile: Her personality is hard to pin down in words (For me at the moment. Personality comes during role play usually), though she is sane, though, as far as she's concerned.
Her trust is hard to get beyond a faith that her comrades will do their job while she does hers.
Shrike fights in the war with little regard for who's right and who's wrong, and the fact the war may or may not end does not bother her. She battles out of loyalty and duty. It's hardly personal.
It's possible that if she were designated an Autobot she would fight just as hard and effectively for them, though not necessarily up to their standards.
Her nature towards combat is simply how it is. Get the job done by any means necessary, and a utilize sudden brutality to disorient and demoralize the enemy leaving them open to further assaults.
Despite her hard working militant nature she despises being used, or being treated as a disposable pawn.
Her tactical mind will attempt to plan out a method of assault in missions as opposed to blindly charging in, and a tactical retreat is not out of the question if things look beyond her ability.
Her mind has measures and countermeasures planned out moment by moment, especially in melee combat. This isn't necessarily fool proof, but it's helped her survive this long.
She gains great enjoyment out of getting her missions done, and defeating her opponents.

If time ever came for her to lay down her weapons she probably wouldn't know what to do with herself, though the idea of painting has crossed her mind, and maybe improving herself in general, But due to the way things are her only hobbies at present are the arts of war, and becoming a more effective warrior.

Abilities: Her top speed is mach 1.5, but unlike most Decepticons her flight is governed by an articulated booster/thruster system making up the sides of her skirt armor allowing for an assortment of aerial maneuvers in either robot or alt mode including movement in nearly any direction and allows hovering. This also means her top speed is attainable in Robot or Alt mode.
Her alternate form has 2 modes of operation. One is an aerodynamic cruising mode where her major offensive weapons are the side mounted energy rifle, and the forward mounted blades, and the other is an assault mode where the front end opens into 4 blade tipped limbs and exposes the beam cannon.
The front end in assault mode can use the limbs now to grab a target holding them against the beam canon as it fires at point blank, or use the blades to lash out at nearby targets.
The beam canon is extremely deadly firing a single, wide beam that can be swept over an area taking out multiple targets or concentrated in one area to punch holes in some of the thickest armor or cause serious damage to anyone unlucky enough to get caught in it's path. It has an effective range of 2 miles.
Shrike's agile form allows her to strike with metal cleaving blades with blinding speed to whittle down an opponent's durability until the killing blow is administered. The combat style is her own in origin pieced together from experience.
Her needler guns don't do much damage due to their small projectile size, but they can seriously harm delicate areas of the opponent like the optic sensors, and cause pain when fired elsewhere.
Her long range energy rifle can strike targets 5 miles away if she can get a bead on them, and delivers high damage shot per shot, but has a 3 second gap in between each shot.

Weaknesses: Shrike's unusual flying method (At least for a Decepticon) of 2 articulated booster/thruster systems comprising her side skirt armor leaves her vulnerable to being grounded if it takes to much damage and her thinner, high agility frame also leaves her more likely to take crippling damage forcing her to dodge and use her shield as much as she can.
The Beam cannon of her alt form is vulnerable to damage and becoming disabled when in assault mode, and can only be fired 3-4 times before energon begins running low forcing Shrike to rely on other means to get the job done or a retreat if she doesn't feel she has the means to keep going until she can recharge.
Her personality will probably be disliked by most everyone but her superiors giving orders. Maybe even her superiors would end up disliking the hard working soldier girl.


Sample Post: She spies her target's demise from her hovering position above the battlefield. She was the crimson form that was the last living thing her target saw. Under her breath she reprimands herself for taking such a lousy angle and firing from her maximum effective distance. But the small target was destroyed by her beam. Or at least taken out of combat.
She enjoyed watching her fellow Decepticon and the Autobot battle up close and personal. She even thought about attacking the Autobot motorcycle likewise, but it wasn't her mission, just icing on her cake to destroy what may have become a thorn in the side of her comrades.
She turns her attentions towards her destination. A communications tower on the Autobot side, and fairly well guarded by a turret system. She breaks hover swiveling her thrusters to propel her towards the target at a good clip of Half of mach 1.
The turret system greets her firing from the ground in a line just as she gets into her firing range.
A quick barrel roll as an evasive maneuver ending in a hover, and she fires her 580 mm beam cannon at the turrets sweeping it along the turret line, exploding them one by one as anti aircraft fire whips by her.
Her thrusters swivel again, sending her barreling for her objective.
She rolls away from a rocket fired at her as she spots Autobot grunts pouring out of the tower and assaulting her. She fires a beam at them while pressing forward destroying three of them and leaving a crater filled with slag, but it's too dangerous to stay in the air now. The Autobot forces behind her, luckily, are occupied leaving her nothing to worry about but what's ahead.
Landing behind cover with haste, she transforms, taking refuge from the hail of gunfire whittling at her cover. She deploys her shield from her left booster turned skirt armor onto her left arm, and attaches her beam rifle from the opposite side of her booster turned skirt armor to her right forearm. She crouches behind the cover, waiting seemingly for the right moment but with the unrelenting fire it seemed it would never come.
She leaps sideways from her cover hearing the energy blasts clash on her shield, and zipping past her head.
Her boosters raise and thrust behind her, launching her forward having her skim across the ground while weaving, and shielding herself downing targets with her rifle, and needles them with sprays from her Needler guns while she prepares the long blade on each foot, at each wrist and her shield. They get white hot, and as she barrels into them, she delivers a kick to one as she passes, letting the blade pass through with the inertia of her charge. He lets out a low groan as he falls over with a large gash in his torso.
The Autobots begin to turn around, but are greeted by the sounds of her thrusters flaring up. One turns around and finds a searing hot blade mounted on her shield stabbed into his face. Simultaneously she swivels her rifle out of the way as another turns and finds that as he does a blade from her wrist is opening him up like a can opener on the neck. His head falls off cleanly.
The crimson blur that is Shrike doesn't stop for a moment, her next strike is always in mind as she brings her shield about, dragging the agonized Autobot along with it, hurling him into the rest of their number, toppling one, leaving one more standing with a look of fear on his face. He's stunned and can only watch as his foe kicks a foot blade into the knocked down Autobot's torso, then the sounds of transformation immediately after. He's leaking oil on his self by now at the speed of the brutal bladed whirlwind that dropped a handful of his comrades. He looks up and begins to raise his rifle, but it's too late. He feels 4 limbs slip around his form pushing his rifle down, and pinning his arms.
He squirms as he's lifted off the ground by the quasi-squid like creature while feeling 4 searing pains in his back as the blades dig in. He looks over his shoulder seeing the tower he failed to defend.
A saccharine laced voice coos out to him. "Enjoy the favor. You don't have to fight anymore." then a brilliant white light blinds him as he lets out a confused sound as his life is snuffed.
Shrike fired through the poor defender's body point blank making his torso nearly vanish. The beam tears into the tower, and a sweep of the beam causes enough damage to have it begin the inevitable toppling as she released the Autobot's corpse.
Done in 2-3 minutes at most from the turrets to the tower toppling.
"Mission accomplished." She said to her self in a bemused tone as the tentacle like limbs come together hiding the beam canon, then she rockets off in a wide arc to get out of there just as reinforcements came, firing pot shots at her, but it was to late.
They run as debris from the tower collapses.
Shrike heads back to base feeling a bit run down as the beam blasts from her cannon wore down her fuel cell.


Shrike looks good to me. I like how she's got really unconventional alt modes. Approved, Rank 5. Start her in Tyrest with Thunderwing.

Roadflower needs some tweaking. Her holomatter projectors are worth a -15 stat point penalty, I would say...they can do quite a lot, including synthesizing energon for her, which is a pretty major ability. You could either reduce some of what they can do, or reduce her other stats. The sample roleplay and so on looks fine to me, though.
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Postby Kid_Kapatilsm » Wed Aug 29, 2007 5:32 pm

Here is a the not-so-drastic update of Panzer to appease the Mods.

Panzer
Allegiance: Autobot
Function:Warrior
Alt. mode: Armored Assault Vehicle (think cybertron defense Hotshot with ALOT more guns)
Weapons: 2 All-pupose heavy duty energon blasters, 2 Energy Assault pistols, back-mounted missile launchers and energon battle-axe.
Height: 32 ft = 9,76 m
Quote: "What doesn't kill you makes me feel unacomplished!"

STRENGTH:9
INTELLIGENCE:6
DEXTERITY:8
SPEED:4
ENDURANCE:9
COURAGE:8
FIREPOWER:8
ACCURACY:6
MELEE:6
TECH SKILL:4
CHARISMA:7
RANK:

Profile: Panzer loves to battle, a little bit too much. This makes his comrades question his sanity, or his allegiance. But he is a strong supporter of the Autobot cause, to a certain degree. Where most Autobots would rather use diplomacy to solve problems, he would rather cleave them into a slagheap to solve a dispute. Some would call that method reckless, he would call it "DIY Diplomacy with a battle-axe". He puts the shoot-first asks questions later approach to spark as if it were programmed into his personality drive.

A new addition to the Autobot ranks, he is eager to serve and is glad to help other, less battle prepared Autobots. His loud disposition hides an creative and versatile individual. He makes it a habit to pair up with smaller Transformers (he believes it makes him look bigger in comparison). Never the kind to run away from a fight he serves as cannon fodder among his team. His origins are hazy at best, with many of his comrades questioning his loyalty to them. It was assumed by many that he was one of Cybertronian Gladiators that did not choose to become a Decepticon.

Abilities: Panzer is the perfect warrior,versatile, heavily armed and almost indestructible. He may be slow, but that's okay, he'd rather die fighting than run away like a coward!He has developed his own style of combat, using his large body and multiple weapon variations he can tackle any combat situation with ease and flare. One of his weapon variations is known as his "full-fire mode" in which he sacrifices his movement to be able to fire off all of his weapons at once.

Weaknesses: The problem with being as powerful and heavily armored as Panzer is, you'd guess he's pretty slow. Only able to reach high speeds of about 99 mph because of his massive weight. Subtlety is not his forte', he's loud and dispises stealth. He also has a strange allergic reaction when copper is inserted into his system.

Sample Post:

The Barren wasteland once known as Polyhex

Panzer sat in the middle of the battlefield that had once seemed like paradise to the warrior. But now the dust had settled and he was agan faced with the reprocussions of the battle. Surviving the battle was one thing, seeing those who didn't make it was another...

Alright tough guy, pick yourself up and get outta here, it won't be long before the Cons arrive for clean-up duty...

The large mech sighed as he walked away slowly in the direction of the Autobot base when suddenly something caught his attention. He slowly pulled out one of his pistols and surveyed his surroundings.

It's not moving fast, and it's definetly not friendly...

He was right, but he had wished he wasn't. He found an opponent, he'd just didn't want this kind of opponent. It was a Decepticon with his lower-half ripped off.

"H-help me..." wheezed out the injured mech. "P-please I beg of you..."

He said nothing, this wasn't his place. He wasn't the kind to make decisions like this. He had two choices and both of them would leave him buried in guilt. He looked at the pathetic creature before him and sighed.

"I know I'm gonna die here, and I'd probably wouldn't make it even if you took me with you... but please, just stay with me until I go, I'd rather die in the pressence of the enemy rather than alone.."

He kneeled down at looked down at the mech. Slowly he watched his enemy shut down completely.

You did the right thing...just keep telling yourself that...you did the right thing...
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Postby Crashinibon » Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:01 pm

Name: Stick Shift
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: General Infantry Joebot
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Land-Vehicle
Weapons: Basic Issue Laser Pistol(BILP), Close Quarters Combat Saw, Shoulder Mounted Rocket Launcher, and Cutting/Welding Torch
Special Abilities: -
Height: 24 ft = 7,3 m
Quote: "This could have gone better I'm sure."

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 5
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: -

Profile:

Joebot is.. nothing special really, he honestly doesn't even have any place in the battlefield or even being given the weapons he has. He's a fluke, a mistake, a mishap. A attempt to level the field against the Decepticons and their seekers as a easily produced field unit, Joebot wasn't even finished when he was activated, his designers were baffled but unable to take him off-line due to their own morals. Thus Joebot was thrust into service, traded off from section to section until finally one instructor figured he knew all that he was going to and placed him in active duty.

Abilities:

There is nothing much to say about Joebot's abilities, he just scraped by in all his basic training events, even the most inspirational of instructors were unable to propel him in any one direction. There is one area where this is not true however, Joebot's technical ability. Thanks to his general training, Joebot in actuality is a technical wiz! This is easily missed due to his unimaginative nature but many has been the time when a skilled technician has wandered away from a project or repair job in frustration only to return and find their task done by a mysterious benefactor, these are the deeds of the ever wandering Joebot.

Weaknesses:

Joebot shares his design with Red Alert, Sideswipe, and any other number of Autobots. This can lead allies and enemies alike into thinking him to be someone more capable then he actually is! Often assigned duties more suited to those he resembles or considered a more serious threat by enemies.

Sample Post:

Late into the cycle's end two technician's worked away at the as of yet lifeless chasis of Joebot, the Olive Drab mech unknowing of the conflict as these two tiring units worked away at giving him life, one coming to a halt as a thought idly struck him.

"H'hey.. do you think we're doing the right thing?"

The other halted his work, turning his optics upwerds and eyeing his partner curiously,

"Whaddya mean by that, Sparkstart?" asked the second, the lights on his faceplate flashing as he spoke.

"This, I mean, should we really be doing this, making Cybertronians just for war, what are they going to do after it's all over. This would make us almost as bad as the Decepticons." claimed Sparkstart, a hand thumping down on Joebot's chest, unknowingly Fonzing a few systems to life.

The second stepped away from the table, giving this a moment's thought, a hand absent;y rubbing over the light bars that made up the lower portion of his features, "I guess you're right.. let's get this guy broken back down." he agreed, looking up only to find his partner gazing down at their creation, Sparkstart's expression one of dumbfounded surprise.

Following the other's gaze, the second found himself looking into a pair of gleaming optics, Joebot's.

Not knowing who he was or where he was.. or even why he was, Joebot looked up to his creators, seeking in their features the answers to the gaping void that was his very being only to find surprise and fear written on the faceplate's before him.

The silence between the three grew heavy, oppressive. Joebot felt the weight of it force from him his very first words, "Hello..."

"Oh slag." answered the creators in unison.
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For a bit of a joke app I'm actually looking forward to playing him.
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Postby Bartmanhomer » Fri Aug 31, 2007 12:39 pm

This is my fan-fiction characther

Name: Mauler
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Warrior
Alt. Mode: Saleen S281E Car
Weapons: (Robot mode): Missile launcher on the shoulders, two energo sword, two energy guns, (Car mode): Laser cannon and missile cannons on the hood and the side of the vehicle.
Special Abilities: Beresker
Height: 35 ft
Quote: "Destroy Everything!"

Str: 7
Int: 3
Dex:7
Spd: 7
End: 7
Cou: 7
Fpw: 7
Acc: 7
Mel: 7
Tec: 3
Cha: 2
Rnk: ??

Profile: Mauler is a powerful autobot warrior from cybertron. He likes to destroy his enemies in battle! Now he send in earth to destroyed the decepticon. Mauler is very abrasive and violent he could face any challenge and think about fighting for victory rather than saving other races. Mauler believe that violence wil bring good to the universe. Not peace. He have a very miltartistical code of violence and destruction in the autobots. Not only he despies the decepticons he very prejudices about all the race, including the other sub-group of the faction If one of his own teammates disrespect him. That team mates is his own enemy. He very aggressive and very dumbfounded also he very violent and destructive. What makes Mauler tick being allies with humans, other beings. Sometimes he's very strict and moody when he socialized with other humans and a few autobots.

Abilities: He possessed two energo swords, two energys guns and missile launcher on the back of his should on robot mode. He could drive about by 250 miles per an hour. He possessed tremdous strength, endurance and firepower. In venchine mode, Mauler possess laser cannon and missile launcher on the hood of the vechine and both side of the door

Weakness: He very dumb, lack of judgment and very over-aggressive. Most likely Mauler could overly attack everyone even his own teammates, humans and etc. He also doesn't follow orders very well during the fight! He could cause total rampage during the fights.
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Postby Insidious » Fri Aug 31, 2007 2:59 pm

Motto: "Clarity of thought before rashness of action."
Weapon: Oxidating Laser
Razorclaw

Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-Group: Predacons
Function: Predacon Commander
Alt. Mode: Drill Tank
Weapons: Twin Concussion Blasters, Sonic Sword
Special Abilities: Enhanced Sensors
Height: 33 feet/10.07 meters
Quote: "All good things succumb to those who wait."

Strength: 08
Intelligence: 09
Dexterity: 09
Speed: 04
Endurance: 09
Courage: 10
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 08
Melee: 09
Tech Skill: 04
Charisma: 07
Rank: 07

Profile: Razorclaw is all business - cruel, brutal business. He despises waste in any form. He does not spend a second of his time or burn a drop of his fuel unless he's certain of tangible results. In his case, that typically takes the form of the smoking wreckage of an enemy Autobot. Those who are not familiar with him often mistake his long stretches of inactivity for laziness or disinterest. That can be a fatal mistake. For upon closer inspection, one would see that his eyes never close, that they are constantly shifting their gleaming steely stare, monitoring all they see. And when Razorclaw observes that the moment is just right, he explodes in furious, ferocious action. These belligerent bursts of energy usually only last a few seconds, but that's usually all it takes for Razorclaw to demolish an opponent. Afterwards, he returns his resting state - keeping his own counsel, watching all around him... and waiting for the next right moment to strike!

Abilities: Razorclaw has enormous strength. In vehicle mode, Razorclaw's diamond-studded drill can pierce armor as much as a foot thick, leaving most any structure on Cybertron vulnerable to his assault. His serrated treads can move through any terrain at a constant speed of 80 to 90 mph, leaving a flattened trail in his wake.

Whether in robot or vehicle (or lion) mode, he has twin concussion blasters that shoot capsules that explode on contact and release a volatile gas. In robot mode he wields a sonic sword. It emits powerful vibrations that shatter the crystalline molecular structures of metals on contact, enhancing the sword's cutting power tenfold. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form the giant robot Predaking.

Weaknesses: Razorclaw is sometimes partially immobilized by his joints locking in place following his often long periods of inactivity.

Sample Post:

“Are you just gonna sit there all cycle?” Rampage asks, calmly approaching his fellow territorial warlord.

“If that’s how long it takes for our quarry to show himself, then yes,” Razorclaw responds, before transforming out of his Cybertronian tank mode and in to a more recognizable mechanoid form. “You know me well enough by now.”

“Yeah, yeah,” Rampage growls, turning his attention towards the rows and rows of seemingly endless metallic debris that stretched as far as the optic could scan. “So who d’ya think’s been crossin’ our borders?”

Razorclaw remains silent for a few moments. Rampage meant well, but subtlety had never been his forte. That was why Razorclaw had always kept his territorial dealings with him to a minimum. No need to upset the delicate balance that he had put a great deal of effort in to establishing. With the situation on Cybertron having been in such a great state of upheaval in recent times, he did not want anyone with whom he worked frequently disrupting his work.

“Numerous potentials, I suspect. Many have grown ignorant of the territories that are not specifically drawn on an Autobot map. I intend to remind them.”

“Yeah! Want me to get in touch with the others?”

“In due time. I don’t need backup for an enemy that I have not yet identified.”

“Gotcha.”

Wildrider

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Terrorist
Alt. mode: Black Cybertronian Hovercar
Weapons: Scattershot Gun
Special Abilities: Like all Stunticons, Wildrider possesses energyfield that makes him extremely resistant to physical damage and allow the reckless driving Stunticons are famous of.
Height: 26ft / 7.93m
Quote: "Either you're out of my way or you're out of luck."


Strength: 07
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 08
Endurance: 07
Courage: 09
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 06
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 03
Rank: 05


Profile: Anyone who has seen Wildrider on the roadway and managed to survive later harbors no doubt about how the Decepticon earned his name. With endless malicious energy, Wildrider destroys property and lives with the same grating cackle and careless, erratic manner. His insane antics have been so effective at spreading fear and terror that Wildrider's superiors have taken notice, congratulating him on his technique. These accolades are lost on Wildrider, who responds only with a quizzical look and terrifying laugh - he knows he's not following any plan, he really just is that crazy. Wildrider can't stand quiet, so his actions are all geared toward making the loudest ruckus possible. To torment him, Motormaster sometimes orders the other Stunticons to be utterly quiet; the devilish leader then laughs about Wildrider's frantic reaction.

Abilities: Subject possesses above-average strength and intelligence. He is very maneuverable in vehicle mode and reach top speed of over 300 mph. He can also deploy a trunk-mounter double-barreled plasma cannon in this mode. As a robot, he wields a scattershot gun that fires an erratic flurry of powerful laser beams at a range of 1/4 mile. The beams' firing pattern fills 50 square feet and can destroy a building in a fraction of a breem.

Weaknesses: Subject's driving makes him prone to damage such as blow-outs, which require maintenance. His irrational fear of quiet can make him nervous and ineffective as a warrior. Subject's need to create noise makes it impossible for him to follow through on plans requiring secrecy.
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Postby Cryhavok » Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:05 pm

Motto: ""It is all about pain.""
Weapon: Fusion-Powered Anti-Gravity Gun
Insidious wrote:Razorclaw

Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-Group: Predacons
Function: Predacon Commander
Alt. Mode: Drill Tank
Weapons: Twin Concussion Blasters, Sonic Sword
Special Abilities: Enhanced Sensors
Height: 33 feet/10.07 meters
Quote: "All good things succumb to those who wait."

Strength: 08
Intelligence: 09
Dexterity: 09
Speed: 04
Endurance: 09
Courage: 10
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 08
Melee: 09
Tech Skill: 04
Charisma: 07
Rank: 07

Profile: Razorclaw is all business - cruel, brutal business. He despises waste in any form. He does not spend a second of his time or burn a drop of his fuel unless he's certain of tangible results. In his case, that typically takes the form of the smoking wreckage of an enemy Autobot. Those who are not familiar with him often mistake his long stretches of inactivity for laziness or disinterest. That can be a fatal mistake. For upon closer inspection, one would see that his eyes never close, that they are constantly shifting their gleaming steely stare, monitoring all they see. And when Razorclaw observes that the moment is just right, he explodes in furious, ferocious action. These belligerent bursts of energy usually only last a few seconds, but that's usually all it takes for Razorclaw to demolish an opponent. Afterwards, he returns his resting state - keeping his own counsel, watching all around him... and waiting for the next right moment to strike!

Abilities: Razorclaw has enormous strength. In vehicle mode, Razorclaw's diamond-studded drill can pierce armor as much as a foot thick, leaving most any structure on Cybertron vulnerable to his assault. His serrated treads can move through any terrain at a constant speed of 80 to 90 mph, leaving a flattened trail in his wake.

Whether in robot or vehicle (or lion) mode, he has twin concussion blasters that shoot capsules that explode on contact and release a volatile gas. In robot mode he wields a sonic sword. It emits powerful vibrations that shatter the crystalline molecular structures of metals on contact, enhancing the sword's cutting power tenfold. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form the giant robot Predaking.

Weaknesses: Razorclaw is sometimes partially immobilized by his joints locking in place following his often long periods of inactivity.

Sample Post:

“Are you just gonna sit there all cycle?” Rampage asks, calmly approaching his fellow territorial warlord.

“If that’s how long it takes for our quarry to show himself, then yes,” Razorclaw responds, before transforming out of his Cybertronian tank mode and in to a more recognizable mechanoid form. “You know me well enough by now.”

“Yeah, yeah,” Rampage growls, turning his attention towards the rows and rows of seemingly endless metallic debris that stretched as far as the optic could scan. “So who d’ya think’s been crossin’ our borders?”

Razorclaw remains silent for a few moments. Rampage meant well, but subtlety had never been his forte. That was why Razorclaw had always kept his territorial dealings with him to a minimum. No need to upset the delicate balance that he had put a great deal of effort in to establishing. With the situation on Cybertron having been in such a great state of upheaval in recent times, he did not want anyone with whom he worked frequently disrupting his work.

“Numerous potentials, I suspect. Many have grown ignorant of the territories that are not specifically drawn on an Autobot map. I intend to remind them.”

“Yeah! Want me to get in touch with the others?”

“In due time. I don’t need backup for an enemy that I have not yet identified.”

“Gotcha.”

Wildrider

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Terrorist
Alt. mode: Black Cybertronian Hovercar
Weapons: Scattershot Gun
Special Abilities: Like all Stunticons, Wildrider possesses energyfield that makes him extremely resistant to physical damage and allow the reckless driving Stunticons are famous of.
Height: 26ft / 7.93m
Quote: "Either you're out of my way or you're out of luck."


Strength: 07
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 08
Endurance: 07
Courage: 09
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 06
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 03
Rank: 05


Profile: Anyone who has seen Wildrider on the roadway and managed to survive later harbors no doubt about how the Decepticon earned his name. With endless malicious energy, Wildrider destroys property and lives with the same grating cackle and careless, erratic manner. His insane antics have been so effective at spreading fear and terror that Wildrider's superiors have taken notice, congratulating him on his technique. These accolades are lost on Wildrider, who responds only with a quizzical look and terrifying laugh - he knows he's not following any plan, he really just is that crazy. Wildrider can't stand quiet, so his actions are all geared toward making the loudest ruckus possible. To torment him, Motormaster sometimes orders the other Stunticons to be utterly quiet; the devilish leader then laughs about Wildrider's frantic reaction.

Abilities: Subject possesses above-average strength and intelligence. He is very maneuverable in vehicle mode and reach top speed of over 300 mph. He can also deploy a trunk-mounter double-barreled plasma cannon in this mode. As a robot, he wields a scattershot gun that fires an erratic flurry of powerful laser beams at a range of 1/4 mile. The beams' firing pattern fills 50 square feet and can destroy a building in a fraction of a breem.

Weaknesses: Subject's driving makes him prone to damage such as blow-outs, which require maintenance. His irrational fear of quiet can make him nervous and ineffective as a warrior. Subject's need to create noise makes it impossible for him to follow through on plans requiring secrecy.


Interfering with normal protocol of mine I cannot pass the opportunity to welcome you back to the game old friend. Both characters approved.

While I am not sure of Razorclaw's whereabout, Polyhex would be as good guess as any. At least Rampage is there. Wildrider is attacking Tagan Heights with other Stunticons excluding Dead End.
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Postby Rebel Raven » Sat Sep 01, 2007 4:07 am

Discord

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Sweeps
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Hovercraft
Weapons: Heat laser, disintegrator cannons
Special Abilities: Robot Flight Mode, enhanced sensors, ability to escape earth’s gravity
Height: 31ft / 9.46m
Quote: “I like the finer things in life, like crushing the life out of an Autobot.”

Strength: 05
Intelligence: 08
Dexterity: 07
Speed: 09
Endurance: 05
Courage: 08
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 05
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 08
Rank: 05

Profile: Discord, at first, appears to be the most civilized and sociable of the Sweeps. She can be quite charming and is capable of holding an intelligent conversation on a number of topics, especially on the finer things in life. What her enemies realize, usually too late, is that this is all a façade. Her physical and intellectual charms are used to draw her enemies, and even her friends, into a false sense of security. Inside she is a brutal and savage warrior, preferring to rip her enemies apart with her bare hands.

Abilities: Discord’s primary assets are her intelligence and her social skills. She often serves as spokeswoman for the Sweeps when dealing with other groups. She can often use her wits and charms to get whatever she wants. When that fails she can be a fierce fighter, particularly in hand to hand combat. She is a fast and light fighter. In robot mode, she is armed with a heat laser that can turn most armor into slag. She also possesses the advanced sensors and space flight capabilities common to all of the Sweeps.

Weaknesses: Discord is not very powerful physically, possessing only average strength and endurance.

Sample Post: She sits across a table from a neutral leader of a town in a cozy little room. Basic, and poorly decorated showing the status of the local economy.
"I'm glad you decided to meet with me, and set aside the reputation most Decepticons come with." She puts on a soft smile, her eyes resting upon the leader as she relaxes a bit, and sits back. She crosses a leg casually.
The leader settles in. "Well, the ones that were here before you didn't leave much of a choice in the matter. I told them I'd be willing to listen to what you have to offer if they would send a negotiator."
"Yes and I am here. What can we do for you?" She spoke in a diplomatic, but relaxed tone.
"Frankly, I don't think the Autobots have a chance to win this war, but I don't want to be destroyed by the Decepticons either. If we can reach a common ground it'd work out well for both of us."
She nods softly, listening calmly. "I see. You are smart enough to realize outright defiance usually ends badly. I'll do my best to negotiate something between us." She smacks her lips softly. "Now you want to survive the war, and help us win. We want your resources. This is a list of what we'll need to make this work." She slides a data pad down the table after speaking with a slight undertone of finality.
He looks at it, and can't stop himself from balking. "We can't do this. We'd practically be destroyed! We'd starve and end up with mass stasis lock!"
She raises an eyebrow. "We weren't asking." Suddenly she's standing on the chair before he knew it, then moving across the table. Her hand grabs the leader by his face. Her fingertips gouging into his optic sensors breaking the fragile things. "Will you reconsider, or will we be taking it?" She 'negotiated' further.
The leader crying out in pain calls for the guards. 2 guards burst into the doorway and point their weapons firing at her, but she grips the leader's head like a bowling ball, and uses his body as a shield in a deft movement. She plants a foot into the midsection of the dead leader, and kicks him into the guards causing the guards topple like bowling pins.
Discord hops onto the table then leaps off using her heat laser to melt one of their heads. She lands crushing the half melted head under her heel, then looks down at the other guard from her crouched position. "Hello there. Bye." She steps on his throat, and drives her heel into his neck, damaging it greatly.
She radios in >>The local leader was less than agreeable. I'm fighting my way out. I trust you know what to do?<< She says 'I'm fighting my way out' in almost a gleeful tone, then receives confirmation from her allies who were waiting outside the town out of view.
She steps off the crippled guard's neck then looks around in the hallway of the building then takes cover in the doorway dodging a guard's shot. She dashes out, ducking another shot charging the guard covering ground quickly, then leaps over another shot aimed low kicking the guard's chest with a flying kick. She lands on the guard's chest letting her heel dig in roughly. She grabs then squeezes his head, then delivers a clawed choke hold to the neck which squeezes the life out of him.
A shot skims her shoulder. "How rude.." She primes her laser and fires back dropping the guard with a smoking crater in his chest before continuing her progress towards the exit.
She rounds the corner, and heads out to see her allies overrunning the town, and taking the resources. "Negotiations are complete." She chuckles lightly, and joins in on the pillaging.
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Colossus

Postby decepticonrules » Sat Sep 01, 2007 3:59 pm

EDITED(2nd Time)

Name: Colossus
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Dual Laser Beam rifle and a rocket launcher on his back(Blastwave must bend down to use this)
Special Abilities: None
Height: 25 Feet 7.62 metres
Quote: If we cannot win peacefully, WIN BY FORCE!
STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: Colossus is a loyal soldier. No matter how much he hates a transformer, if they are in charge, Colossus will follow orders. He can fight autobots close-up, with fire-power, or stalk them in the air. he is fearless, and will look in the face of death and spit on it. His main goal is to make sure the Decepticons win. He was unfit to take part in the battle at polyhex, so unknown to Megatron, Starscream had sent him to spy and on other bases and battles. In melee battles, Colossus can punch hard and also can jump up high and crush them under his weight.

Abilities: Colossus can fly at a speed of up to Mach 3,0 and can travel 3000 miles before running out of energy. When he is flying in his jet mode, he uses heat seeking missiles to attack his enemies, in robot mode, Colossus carries dual laser beam rifles that can blast through armour and metal machinery. For his Rocket Launcher, must bend down to get a better angle to fire. His rocket launcher is heat-seeking, so it is safer that he is closer to his target incase another object distracts the missile. In battle, only the strongest of autobots(or other enemies) can withstand nonstop fire from the two rifles(and possible his rocket launcher)at the same time without their armour shattering or breaking.

Weaknesses: As most of his spark powers up his combat and firepower, his armour is relativly weak, and if hit at the moment in the right place. Colossus armour may shatter and needs to be fixed

Sample Post: The forgotten Asteroid (just a asteroid on its own)

Colossus landed on the asteroid, a moon was a pouple kilometres from here, it wouldn't take long to get there. Hopefully there were Autobots on it so Colossus could have fun with them.

As calculated, the moon was in sight. Colossus scanned the place and--"Yes, some autobot drones, i wonder what their doing this far away from Cybertron, aw well!" The drones already scanned a decepticon in the area and open fired on Colossus. He quickly converted to robot mode, there were 10 drones on the moon. Colossus pulled out his dual laser rifles and shot down 2 of them.

Their continuous fire was scarring his chest plate. the drones were huddled together, so a rocket will destroy them all. Bending right down, Colossus fired a rocket and it hit and destroyed the remaining drones. Colossus got bored, converted to jet mode and flew off.
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Postby Devastron » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:08 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Nassuman wrote:Here is a the not-so-drastic update of Panzer to appease the Mods.

Panzer
Allegiance: Autobot
Function:Warrior
Alt. mode: Armored Assault Vehicle (think cybertron defense Hotshot with ALOT more guns)
Weapons: 2 All-pupose heavy duty energon blasters, 2 Energy Assault pistols, back-mounted missile launchers and energon battle-axe.
Height: 32 ft = 9,76 m
Quote: "What doesn't kill you makes me feel unacomplished!"

STRENGTH:9
INTELLIGENCE:6
DEXTERITY:8
SPEED:4
ENDURANCE:9
COURAGE:8
FIREPOWER:8
ACCURACY:6
MELEE:6
TECH SKILL:4
CHARISMA:7
RANK:

Profile: Panzer loves to battle, a little bit too much. This makes his comrades question his sanity, or his allegiance. But he is a strong supporter of the Autobot cause, to a certain degree. Where most Autobots would rather use diplomacy to solve problems, he would rather cleave them into a slagheap to solve a dispute. Some would call that method reckless, he would call it "DIY Diplomacy with a battle-axe". He puts the shoot-first asks questions later approach to spark as if it were programmed into his personality drive.

A new addition to the Autobot ranks, he is eager to serve and is glad to help other, less battle prepared Autobots. His loud disposition hides an creative and versatile individual. He makes it a habit to pair up with smaller Transformers (he believes it makes him look bigger in comparison). Never the kind to run away from a fight he serves as cannon fodder among his team. His origins are hazy at best, with many of his comrades questioning his loyalty to them. It was assumed by many that he was one of Cybertronian Gladiators that did not choose to become a Decepticon.

Abilities: Panzer is the perfect warrior,versatile, heavily armed and almost indestructible. He may be slow, but that's okay, he'd rather die fighting than run away like a coward!He has developed his own style of combat, using his large body and multiple weapon variations he can tackle any combat situation with ease and flare. One of his weapon variations is known as his "full-fire mode" in which he sacrifices his movement to be able to fire off all of his weapons at once.

Weaknesses: The problem with being as powerful and heavily armored as Panzer is, you'd guess he's pretty slow. Only able to reach high speeds of about 99 mph because of his massive weight. Subtlety is not his forte', he's loud and dispises stealth. He also has a strange allergic reaction when copper is inserted into his system.

Sample Post:

The Barren wasteland once known as Polyhex

Panzer sat in the middle of the battlefield that had once seemed like paradise to the warrior. But now the dust had settled and he was agan faced with the reprocussions of the battle. Surviving the battle was one thing, seeing those who didn't make it was another...

Alright tough guy, pick yourself up and get outta here, it won't be long before the Cons arrive for clean-up duty...

The large mech sighed as he walked away slowly in the direction of the Autobot base when suddenly something caught his attention. He slowly pulled out one of his pistols and surveyed his surroundings.

It's not moving fast, and it's definetly not friendly...

He was right, but he had wished he wasn't. He found an opponent, he'd just didn't want this kind of opponent. It was a Decepticon with his lower-half ripped off.

"H-help me..." wheezed out the injured mech. "P-please I beg of you..."

He said nothing, this wasn't his place. He wasn't the kind to make decisions like this. He had two choices and both of them would leave him buried in guilt. He looked at the pathetic creature before him and sighed.

"I know I'm gonna die here, and I'd probably wouldn't make it even if you took me with you... but please, just stay with me until I go, I'd rather die in the pressence of the enemy rather than alone.."

He kneeled down at looked down at the mech. Slowly he watched his enemy shut down completely.

You did the right thing...just keep telling yourself that...you did the right thing...


Approved, rank 5. Start him in the Tagan Heights.
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Postby Devastron » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:10 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Crashinibon wrote:Name: Stick Shift
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: General Infantry Joebot
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Land-Vehicle
Weapons: Basic Issue Laser Pistol(BILP), Close Quarters Combat Saw, Shoulder Mounted Rocket Launcher, and Cutting/Welding Torch
Special Abilities: -
Height: 24 ft = 7,3 m
Quote: "This could have gone better I'm sure."

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 5
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: -

Profile:

Joebot is.. nothing special really, he honestly doesn't even have any place in the battlefield or even being given the weapons he has. He's a fluke, a mistake, a mishap. A attempt to level the field against the Decepticons and their seekers as a easily produced field unit, Joebot wasn't even finished when he was activated, his designers were baffled but unable to take him off-line due to their own morals. Thus Joebot was thrust into service, traded off from section to section until finally one instructor figured he knew all that he was going to and placed him in active duty.

Abilities:

There is nothing much to say about Joebot's abilities, he just scraped by in all his basic training events, even the most inspirational of instructors were unable to propel him in any one direction. There is one area where this is not true however, Joebot's technical ability. Thanks to his general training, Joebot in actuality is a technical wiz! This is easily missed due to his unimaginative nature but many has been the time when a skilled technician has wandered away from a project or repair job in frustration only to return and find their task done by a mysterious benefactor, these are the deeds of the ever wandering Joebot.

Weaknesses:

Joebot shares his design with Red Alert, Sideswipe, and any other number of Autobots. This can lead allies and enemies alike into thinking him to be someone more capable then he actually is! Often assigned duties more suited to those he resembles or considered a more serious threat by enemies.

Sample Post:

Late into the cycle's end two technician's worked away at the as of yet lifeless chasis of Joebot, the Olive Drab mech unknowing of the conflict as these two tiring units worked away at giving him life, one coming to a halt as a thought idly struck him.

"H'hey.. do you think we're doing the right thing?"

The other halted his work, turning his optics upwerds and eyeing his partner curiously,

"Whaddya mean by that, Sparkstart?" asked the second, the lights on his faceplate flashing as he spoke.

"This, I mean, should we really be doing this, making Cybertronians just for war, what are they going to do after it's all over. This would make us almost as bad as the Decepticons." claimed Sparkstart, a hand thumping down on Joebot's chest, unknowingly Fonzing a few systems to life.

The second stepped away from the table, giving this a moment's thought, a hand absent;y rubbing over the light bars that made up the lower portion of his features, "I guess you're right.. let's get this guy broken back down." he agreed, looking up only to find his partner gazing down at their creation, Sparkstart's expression one of dumbfounded surprise.

Following the other's gaze, the second found himself looking into a pair of gleaming optics, Joebot's.

Not knowing who he was or where he was.. or even why he was, Joebot looked up to his creators, seeking in their features the answers to the gaping void that was his very being only to find surprise and fear written on the faceplate's before him.

The silence between the three grew heavy, oppressive. Joebot felt the weight of it force from him his very first words, "Hello..."

"Oh slag." answered the creators in unison.
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For a bit of a joke app I'm actually looking forward to playing him.


The function isn't really acceptable as it is. Perhaps something like soldier would be more appropriate. Also, you need to correct his name throughout the entire app.
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Postby Devastron » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:14 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Bartmanhomer wrote:This is my fan-fiction characther

Name: Mauler
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Warrior
Alt. Mode: Saleen S281E Car
Weapons: (Robot mode): Missile launcher on the shoulders, two energo sword, two energy guns, (Car mode): Laser cannon and missile cannons on the hood and the side of the vehicle.
Special Abilities: Beresker
Height: 35 ft
Quote: "Destroy Everything!"

Str: 7
Int: 3
Dex:7
Spd: 7
End: 7
Cou: 7
Fpw: 7
Acc: 7
Mel: 7
Tec: 3
Cha: 2
Rnk: ??

Profile: Mauler is a powerful autobot warrior from cybertron. He likes to destroy his enemies in battle! Now he send in earth to destroyed the decepticon. Mauler is very abrasive and violent he could face any challenge and think about fighting for victory rather than saving other races. Mauler believe that violence wil bring good to the universe. Not peace. He have a very miltartistical code of violence and destruction in the autobots. Not only he despies the decepticons he very prejudices about all the race, including the other sub-group of the faction If one of his own teammates disrespect him. That team mates is his own enemy. He very aggressive and very dumbfounded also he very violent and destructive. What makes Mauler tick being allies with humans, other beings. Sometimes he's very strict and moody when he socialized with other humans and a few autobots.

Abilities: He possessed two energo swords, two energys guns and missile launcher on the back of his should on robot mode. He could drive about by 250 miles per an hour. He possessed tremdous strength, endurance and firepower. In venchine mode, Mauler possess laser cannon and missile launcher on the hood of the vechine and both side of the door

Weakness: He very dumb, lack of judgment and very over-aggressive. Most likely Mauler could overly attack everyone even his own teammates, humans and etc. He also doesn't follow orders very well during the fight! He could cause total rampage during the fights.


This application needs some work. First very few Transformers have been to Earth, so you will need to give him a Cybertronian alternate mode and remove references to Earth. The application needs a sample post. The character really seems too violent and mean to really work as an Autobot. The whole thing also needs to be run through a spelling and grammar checker.
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Postby Devastron » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:16 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Unipuma wrote:Discord

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Sweeps
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Hovercraft
Weapons: Heat laser, disintegrator cannons
Special Abilities: Robot Flight Mode, enhanced sensors, ability to escape earth’s gravity
Height: 31ft / 9.46m
Quote: “I like the finer things in life, like crushing the life out of an Autobot.”

Strength: 05
Intelligence: 08
Dexterity: 07
Speed: 09
Endurance: 05
Courage: 08
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 05
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 08
Rank: 05

Profile: Discord, at first, appears to be the most civilized and sociable of the Sweeps. She can be quite charming and is capable of holding an intelligent conversation on a number of topics, especially on the finer things in life. What her enemies realize, usually too late, is that this is all a façade. Her physical and intellectual charms are used to draw her enemies, and even her friends, into a false sense of security. Inside she is a brutal and savage warrior, preferring to rip her enemies apart with her bare hands.

Abilities: Discord’s primary assets are her intelligence and her social skills. She often serves as spokeswoman for the Sweeps when dealing with other groups. She can often use her wits and charms to get whatever she wants. When that fails she can be a fierce fighter, particularly in hand to hand combat. She is a fast and light fighter. In robot mode, she is armed with a heat laser that can turn most armor into slag. She also possesses the advanced sensors and space flight capabilities common to all of the Sweeps.

Weaknesses: Discord is not very powerful physically, possessing only average strength and endurance.

Sample Post: She sits across a table from a neutral leader of a town in a cozy little room. Basic, and poorly decorated showing the status of the local economy.
"I'm glad you decided to meet with me, and set aside the reputation most Decepticons come with." She puts on a soft smile, her eyes resting upon the leader as she relaxes a bit, and sits back. She crosses a leg casually.
The leader settles in. "Well, the ones that were here before you didn't leave much of a choice in the matter. I told them I'd be willing to listen to what you have to offer if they would send a negotiator."
"Yes and I am here. What can we do for you?" She spoke in a diplomatic, but relaxed tone.
"Frankly, I don't think the Autobots have a chance to win this war, but I don't want to be destroyed by the Decepticons either. If we can reach a common ground it'd work out well for both of us."
She nods softly, listening calmly. "I see. You are smart enough to realize outright defiance usually ends badly. I'll do my best to negotiate something between us." She smacks her lips softly. "Now you want to survive the war, and help us win. We want your resources. This is a list of what we'll need to make this work." She slides a data pad down the table after speaking with a slight undertone of finality.
He looks at it, and can't stop himself from balking. "We can't do this. We'd practically be destroyed! We'd starve and end up with mass stasis lock!"
She raises an eyebrow. "We weren't asking." Suddenly she's standing on the chair before he knew it, then moving across the table. Her hand grabs the leader by his face. Her fingertips gouging into his optic sensors breaking the fragile things. "Will you reconsider, or will we be taking it?" She 'negotiated' further.
The leader crying out in pain calls for the guards. 2 guards burst into the doorway and point their weapons firing at her, but she grips the leader's head like a bowling ball, and uses his body as a shield in a deft movement. She plants a foot into the midsection of the dead leader, and kicks him into the guards causing the guards topple like bowling pins.
Discord hops onto the table then leaps off using her heat laser to melt one of their heads. She lands crushing the half melted head under her heel, then looks down at the other guard from her crouched position. "Hello there. Bye." She steps on his throat, and drives her heel into his neck, damaging it greatly.
She radios in >>The local leader was less than agreeable. I'm fighting my way out. I trust you know what to do?<< She says 'I'm fighting my way out' in almost a gleeful tone, then receives confirmation from her allies who were waiting outside the town out of view.
She steps off the crippled guard's neck then looks around in the hallway of the building then takes cover in the doorway dodging a guard's shot. She dashes out, ducking another shot charging the guard covering ground quickly, then leaps over another shot aimed low kicking the guard's chest with a flying kick. She lands on the guard's chest letting her heel dig in roughly. She grabs then squeezes his head, then delivers a clawed choke hold to the neck which squeezes the life out of him.
A shot skims her shoulder. "How rude.." She primes her laser and fires back dropping the guard with a smoking crater in his chest before continuing her progress towards the exit.
She rounds the corner, and heads out to see her allies overrunning the town, and taking the resources. "Negotiations are complete." She chuckles lightly, and joins in on the pillaging.


This character is currently being played by someone else. The pregenerated Sweeps and Seekers are all listed on the canon roster list. Nearly all of the other Sweeps are still available so feel free to apply for another one. :)
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Re: Shockwave

Postby Devastron » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:19 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Decepticonrules wrote:Name: Blastwave
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: F-22 Raptor
Weapons: Dual Laser Beam rifle and a rocket launcher on his back(Shockwave must bend down to use this
Special Abilities: None
Height: 25 Feet 7.62 metres
Quote: If we cannot win peacefully, WIN BY FORCE!
STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: Blastwave is a loyal soldier. No matter how much he hates a transformer, if they are in charge, Blastwave will follow orders. He can fight autobots close-up, with fire-power, or stalk them in the air. he is fearless, and will look in the face of death and spit on it. His main goal is to make sure the Decepticons win.

Abilities: Air Raid can fly at speeds of up to Mach 3,0 and has a range of 3000 miles. He can shoot air-to-air heat-seeking missiles and, in robot mode, carries dual laser beam rifles that can break through almost any object. Only the strongest materials can withstand attacks from the two rifles at the same time

Weaknesses: As most of his spark powers up his combat and firepower, his armour is relativly weak, and if hit at the moment in the right place. Shockwave armour may shatter and needs to be fixed

Sample Post: Earth(Day Blastwave arrived)

The meteorite landed in an abandoned milatary base. inside was Blastwave, sent to earth to gather information for his leader. A F-22 Raptor was sent to check out the meteorite.

Blastwave peeped his head out of a hole in the meteorite to get a good look at the Raptor. scanning it long enough, Blastwave took on the form og the raptor. transforming to his jet mode, Blastwave used a heat seeking missile to destroy the Raptor from behind.

transfoming back to robot mode, Blastwave sent out a transmission, "Lord...(I dont know who the decepticon leader is), I have arrived on the planet and have taken on a form. I will await more orders"


Sorry if it isnt so good, i am really busy with another thing right now, if i need to edit, i'll take my time next time


Well there are some problems with it, namely the abilities section being for an entirely different character. I suggest taking another look over the rules and the RPG history and then give it another shot.
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Re: Shockwave

Postby Devastron » Sun Sep 02, 2007 2:03 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Decepticonrules wrote:EDITED

Name: Blastwave
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: F-22 Raptor
Weapons: Dual Laser Beam rifle and a rocket launcher on his back(Blastwave must bend down to use this)
Special Abilities: None
Height: 25 Feet 7.62 metres
Quote: If we cannot win peacefully, WIN BY FORCE!
STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: Blastwave is a loyal soldier. No matter how much he hates a transformer, if they are in charge, Blastwave will follow orders. He can fight autobots close-up, with fire-power, or stalk them in the air. he is fearless, and will look in the face of death and spit on it. His main goal is to make sure the Decepticons win. He was unfit to take part in the battle at polyhex, so unknown to Megatron, Starscream had sent him to earth to spy and destroy.

Abilities: Blastwave can fly at a speed of up to Mach 3,0 and can travel 3000 miles before running out of energy. When he is flying in his alt mode, he uses a heat seeking missile to attack his enemies, in robot mode, Blastwave carries a dual laser beam rifles that can destroy most things . In battle, only the strongest of autobots(or other enemies) can withstand nonstop fire from the two rifles at the same time without their armour breaking.

Weaknesses: As most of his spark powers up his combat and firepower, his armour is relativly weak, and if hit at the moment in the right place. Shockwave armour may shatter and needs to be fixed

Sample Post: Earth(Day Blastwave arrived)

The meteorite landed in an abandoned milatary base. inside was Blastwave, sent to earth to gather information for his leader. A F-22 Raptor was sent to check out the meteorite.

Blastwave peeped his head out of a hole in the meteorite to get a good look at the Raptor. scanning it long enough, Blastwave took on the form og the raptor. transforming to his jet mode, Blastwave used a heat seeking missile to destroy the Raptor from behind.

transfoming back to robot mode, Blastwave sent out a transmission, "Lord Starscream, I have arrived on the planet and have taken on a form. I will await more orders"


Sorry if it isnt so good, i am really busy with another thing right now, if i need to edit, i'll take my time next time


The firepower stat is far too low for how you describe his weapons. That needs to be made consistent. The description of the weapons needs improvement as well. 'Destroying most things' doesn't tell me much about them. You didn't describe his rocket launcher. His endurance stat indicates he has strong armor and not weak armor like the weaknesses section indicates. Also, your character is not allowed to be on Earth, so you will need to change that part and give him a Cybertronian alternate mode.
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Astrotrain

Postby Razorclaw316 » Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:15 pm

Astrotrain

Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-Group: Triplechangers
Function: Military Transport
Alt. Mode(s): Cybertronian Starship / Cybertronian Locomotive
Weapons: Ionic Displacer rifle
Height: 33ft / 10m
Quote: "In confusion, there's opportunity."


Strength: 09
Intelligence: 07
Dexterity: 06
Speed: 10
Endurance: 07
Courage: 07
Firepower: 07
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 06
Charisma: 07
Rank: 06


Profile: Creating confusion is Astrotrain's specialty. As a Decepticon Triple Changer he can switch form from robot to locomotive train to space shuttle almost instantaneously. This ability not only leaves unsuspecting enemies perplexed, but often vulnerable to his attack. His favorite ploy is to lure an Autobot to chase him as he enters a railroad tunnel in train mode and then exits in shuttle mode. The Autobot is usually ill-prepared to battle the shuttle-mode Astrotrain and rarely knows whether two Decepticons or one confront him. But it is that particular moment when his opponent realizes his mistake that epecially delights Astrotrain. He truly lives for that moment and thrives on his foe's panic and fear. "It makes it all worthwhile," Astrotrain says gleefully. "That part I enjoy even better than destroying him afterwards!"

Abilities: As a space shuttle, Astrotrain can achieve, under his own power, planetary orbit, where he can attain a maximum speed of up to 20,000 mph. He can launch weapons and satellites while in orbit, and carry other cargo as well. If he carries an extra fuel supply, he can leave his orbit and is capable of true space travel, boosting his speed up to 50,000 mph. He would be able to travel from the Earth and the moon and back, but not much more. As a train, his top speed on rail is 400 mph and he has a range of 1700 miles. In robot mode he has great strength and carries a powerful ionic displacer rifle, which destroys by disrupting molecular bonds in metal alloys with its beam.

Weaknesses: Astrotrain is prone to mechanical breakdowns as a train in his wheel assemblies. As a space shuttle his communications systems often fail him and he must be wary of burning up while re-entering the atmosphere.

Example -

Astrotrain prepares to transport Decepticons from Cybertron to Moon Alpha, transforming from his robot mode into a Cybertronian Starship. The double-coated purple and gray starship waited for his Decepticon brethren to board. “Hurry up already! This isn’t a joy ride around the planet!” Astrotrain commented. “Yeah Yeah, stick it up your booster Astrotrain were coming.” Rumble responded as the miniature robot stepped onboard. “Astrotrain fuel supply inadequate.” Soundwave exclaimed. “Just keep the weight down and we should be fine.” Astrotrain responded.

As the deployed Decepticons boarded the starship, Astrotrain powered his engines, producing a massive trail of flame from both rocket engines as the starship launched down the runway, taking flight heading to break planetary orbit. “Take it easy Astrotrain! Were in here for Cybertrons sake!” Rumble replied. “Get the spy satellite ready you rodent.” Astrotrain replied while he opened the passenger door. Outside was the void called space they had broken through the atmosphere and now ascended into space. Rumble approached the open door and looked outside into the blackness of space. “Man I wouldn’t want to get lost out there.” Rumble exclaimed. Astrotrain then came hard to port in attempt to fling Rumble from the spacecraft. Rumble quickly grabbed onto the side of the door. “Why you punk, I outta!” Rumble exclaimed. Astrotrain merely kept quiet with nothing else to add. Rumble placed the spy satellite into Astrotrains launch tube. In a matter of minutes the satellite was launched into the orbit of Moon Alpha. “Hold on to your optics, coming in for a landing!” Astrotrain commented.

From the ground the spacecraft could be seen approaching the moon’s surface, coming down to the surface level Astrotrain flew low to the ground, transforming into his purple train mode to carry transport the Decepticons now on the ground. The trains wheels collided hard with the planet surface before catching correctly, soon the powered train traveled across moon alpha. “We are here! Everyone out! You guys are heavy.” Astrotrain exclaimed, needing to refill after transporting a massive amount of Decepticons.
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Postby Bartmanhomer » Tue Sep 04, 2007 8:59 am

I edited my chracther

Name: Mauler
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Warrior
Alt. Mode: Cybertroninan Car
Weapons: (Robot mode): Missile launcher on the shoulders, two energo sword, two energy guns, (Car mode): Laser cannon and missile cannons on the hood and the side of the vehicle.
Special Abilities: Beresker
Height: 35 ft
Quote: "Destroy Everything!"

Str: 7
Int: 3
Dex:7
Spd: 7
End: 7
Cou: 7
Fpw: 7
Acc: 7
Mel: 7
Tec: 3
Cha: 2
Rnk: ??

Profile: Mauler is a powerful autobot warrior from cybertron. He likes to destroy his enemies in battle! Mauler is very abrasive and violent he could face any challenge and think about fighting for victory rather than saving other races. Mauler believe that violence wil bring good to the universe. Not peace. He have a very miltartistical code of violence and destruction in the autobots. Not only he despies the decepticons he very prejudices about all the race, including the other sub-group of the faction If one of his own teammates disrespect him. That team mates is his own enemy. He very aggressive and very dumbfounded also he very violent and destructive. What makes Mauler tick being allies with other beings. Sometimes he's very strict and moody when he socialized with other aliens and a few autobots.

Abilities: He possessed two energo swords, two energys guns and missile launcher on the back of his should on robot mode. He could drive about by 250 miles per an hour. He possessed tremdous strength, endurance and firepower. In venchine mode, Mauler possess laser cannon and missile launcher on the hood of the vechine and both side of the door

Weakness: He very dumb, lack of judgment and very over-aggressive. Most likely Mauler could overly attack everyone even his own teammates, humans and etc. He also doesn't follow orders very well during the fight! He could cause total rampage during the fights.

Sample post: At planet cybertron. There was a war against the autobots and the decepticons. Mauler was fighting against one of the decepticon soldiers. "Chew on this, con!" Mauler said. Mauler stab the soldier with his energon sword. One of autobots soldiers was surrounded a gang of decepticon soldiers. Mauler transforms in his alt. mode in a cybertronian car. As he drove and shoot missile to destroy the decepticons. He also injured one of his teammates. One of his subordinates order Mauler to stop shooting. Mauler refused and shoot laser cannon by his own suboridinates. "Mauler destroy decepticon. Mauler takes order to no one." Mauler said
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Postby The J Writer » Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:02 pm

Bartmanhomer wrote:I edited my chracther

Name: Mauler
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Warrior
Alt. Mode: Cybertroninan Car
Weapons: (Robot mode): Missile launcher on the shoulders, two energo sword, two energy guns, (Car mode): Laser cannon and missile cannons on the hood and the side of the vehicle.
Special Abilities: Beresker
Height: 35 ft
Quote: "Destroy Everything!"

Str: 7
Int: 3
Dex:7
Spd: 7
End: 7
Cou: 7
Fpw: 7
Acc: 7
Mel: 7
Tec: 3
Cha: 2
Rnk: ??

Profile: Mauler is a powerful autobot warrior from cybertron. He likes to destroy his enemies in battle! Mauler is very abrasive and violent he could face any challenge and think about fighting for victory rather than saving other races. Mauler believe that violence wil bring good to the universe. Not peace. He have a very miltartistical code of violence and destruction in the autobots. Not only he despies the decepticons he very prejudices about all the race, including the other sub-group of the faction If one of his own teammates disrespect him. That team mates is his own enemy. He very aggressive and very dumbfounded also he very violent and destructive. What makes Mauler tick being allies with other beings. Sometimes he's very strict and moody when he socialized with other aliens and a few autobots.

Abilities: He possessed two energo swords, two energys guns and missile launcher on the back of his should on robot mode. He could drive about by 250 miles per an hour. He possessed tremdous strength, endurance and firepower. In venchine mode, Mauler possess laser cannon and missile launcher on the hood of the vechine and both side of the door

Weakness: He very dumb, lack of judgment and very over-aggressive. Most likely Mauler could overly attack everyone even his own teammates, humans and etc. He also doesn't follow orders very well during the fight! He could cause total rampage during the fights.

Sample post: At planet cybertron. There was a war against the autobots and the decepticons. Mauler was fighting against one of the decepticon soldiers. "Chew on this, con!" Mauler said. Mauler stab the soldier with his energon sword. One of autobots soldiers was surrounded a gang of decepticon soldiers. Mauler transforms in his alt. mode in a cybertronian car. As he drove and shoot missile to destroy the decepticons. He also injured one of his teammates. One of his subordinates order Mauler to stop shooting. Mauler refused and shoot laser cannon by his own suboridinates. "Mauler destroy decepticon. Mauler takes order to no one." Mauler said


This guy doesn't sound anything like an Autobot...not to mention he's so stupid (Int 3) that he's barely functional, let alone able to be a soldier. Using his own weapons would probably be a difficult task for him. His personality would've motivated his fellow Autobots to decactivate him long ago.

I suggest looking at some of the canon characters and fanmades that have been accepted and trying again. As well, use of a spelling/grammar checker in your word processing program would go a long way, too.
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Re: Astrotrain

Postby The J Writer » Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:10 pm

Razorclaw316 wrote:Astrotrain

Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-Group: Triplechangers
Function: Military Transport
Alt. Mode(s): Cybertronian Starship / Cybertronian Locomotive
Weapons: Ionic Displacer rifle
Height: 33ft / 10m
Quote: "In confusion, there's opportunity."


Strength: 09
Intelligence: 07
Dexterity: 06
Speed: 10
Endurance: 07
Courage: 07
Firepower: 07
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 06
Charisma: 07
Rank: 06


Profile: Creating confusion is Astrotrain's specialty. As a Decepticon Triple Changer he can switch form from robot to locomotive train to space shuttle almost instantaneously. This ability not only leaves unsuspecting enemies perplexed, but often vulnerable to his attack. His favorite ploy is to lure an Autobot to chase him as he enters a railroad tunnel in train mode and then exits in shuttle mode. The Autobot is usually ill-prepared to battle the shuttle-mode Astrotrain and rarely knows whether two Decepticons or one confront him. But it is that particular moment when his opponent realizes his mistake that epecially delights Astrotrain. He truly lives for that moment and thrives on his foe's panic and fear. "It makes it all worthwhile," Astrotrain says gleefully. "That part I enjoy even better than destroying him afterwards!"

Abilities: As a space shuttle, Astrotrain can achieve, under his own power, planetary orbit, where he can attain a maximum speed of up to 20,000 mph. He can launch weapons and satellites while in orbit, and carry other cargo as well. If he carries an extra fuel supply, he can leave his orbit and is capable of true space travel, boosting his speed up to 50,000 mph. He would be able to travel from the Earth and the moon and back, but not much more. As a train, his top speed on rail is 400 mph and he has a range of 1700 miles. In robot mode he has great strength and carries a powerful ionic displacer rifle, which destroys by disrupting molecular bonds in metal alloys with its beam.

Weaknesses: Astrotrain is prone to mechanical breakdowns as a train in his wheel assemblies. As a space shuttle his communications systems often fail him and he must be wary of burning up while re-entering the atmosphere.

Example -

Astrotrain prepares to transport Decepticons from Cybertron to Moon Alpha, transforming from his robot mode into a Cybertronian Starship. The double-coated purple and gray starship waited for his Decepticon brethren to board. “Hurry up already! This isn’t a joy ride around the planet!” Astrotrain commented. “Yeah Yeah, stick it up your booster Astrotrain were coming.” Rumble responded as the miniature robot stepped onboard. “Astrotrain fuel supply inadequate.” Soundwave exclaimed. “Just keep the weight down and we should be fine.” Astrotrain responded.

As the deployed Decepticons boarded the starship, Astrotrain powered his engines, producing a massive trail of flame from both rocket engines as the starship launched down the runway, taking flight heading to break planetary orbit. “Take it easy Astrotrain! Were in here for Cybertrons sake!” Rumble replied. “Get the spy satellite ready you rodent.” Astrotrain replied while he opened the passenger door. Outside was the void called space they had broken through the atmosphere and now ascended into space. Rumble approached the open door and looked outside into the blackness of space. “Man I wouldn’t want to get lost out there.” Rumble exclaimed. Astrotrain then came hard to port in attempt to fling Rumble from the spacecraft. Rumble quickly grabbed onto the side of the door. “Why you punk, I outta!” Rumble exclaimed. Astrotrain merely kept quiet with nothing else to add. Rumble placed the spy satellite into Astrotrains launch tube. In a matter of minutes the satellite was launched into the orbit of Moon Alpha. “Hold on to your optics, coming in for a landing!” Astrotrain commented.

From the ground the spacecraft could be seen approaching the moon’s surface, coming down to the surface level Astrotrain flew low to the ground, transforming into his purple train mode to carry transport the Decepticons now on the ground. The trains wheels collided hard with the planet surface before catching correctly, soon the powered train traveled across moon alpha. “We are here! Everyone out! You guys are heavy.” Astrotrain exclaimed, needing to refill after transporting a massive amount of Decepticons.


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Postby Optimus Frimal » Tue Sep 04, 2007 2:30 pm

Name: Triggerhappy

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Gunner
Alt. mode: Futuristic Jet
Weapons: Photon Machine Gun, two twin side mounted photon pulse guns in jet mode
Height: 30ft / 9.1m
Quote: "Have gun, have fun!"


Strength: 07
Intelligence: 07
Dexterity: 06
Speed: 07
Endurance: 07
Courage: 09
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 05
Melee: 06
Tech Skill: 06
Charisma: 05
Rank: 05


Profile: Long suspected of having one too many disconnected circuits in his logic center, Triggerhappy is a crazed, computerized creep who thinks everything is a big joke. Even in the midst of a raging battle, he's usually too busy laughing uncontrollably and drooling lubricant to look where he's shooting. Worse for him, he doesn't pay much attention to who's shooting in his direction either. He is seemingly intoxicated by the sounds of his own gunfire, staggering about blissfully as he blasts away. The occasional battlefield success he has is a result of the panic his wild shooting sprees sometimes generate among opponents. Those who've known him for a long time trace his erratic behavior back millions of years ago, to an episode in a Decepticon warrior-trainee boot camp: Triggerhappy was practicing the use of a proton machine gun while riding a hoverboard. He slipped and fell on his head, all the while firing wildly away. A half dozen of his teachers were unintentionally disintegrated. Fearing the worst, Triggerhappy was happily surprised when the camp's commander lauded him for his lethal expertise and graduated him on the spot. He has adopted that manic offensive strategy ever since, although no one is sure if he acts this way because of his initial success with it or because the bump on his head shook a few wires loose.

Abilities:Triggerhappy transforms to a turbo-thrust jet fighter, with a maximum speed of 1980 mph and range of 4,000 miles. He's equipped with two twin side-mounted, rapid-fire photon pulse guns, used mostly for attacks on other flying craft.

Weaknesses: Needless to say, given the wasteful manner in which he uses his weapons, Triggerhappy often finds himself out of ammunition during the most inopportune occasions- such as in the middle of a full-scale Autobot counterattack.

Example post:

IACON: Outskirts

Triggerhappy stared down the barrel of his photon machine gun, he had the Autobot lined up perfectly in his sights, and all he had to do was pull the trigger. Triggerhappy beamed with the thought of pulling the trigger. He loves pulling the trigger.
“No you don’t Decepticreep!”
Triggerhappy spun around, an Autobot was lunging towards him, nobody special he thought to himself as he deftly dodged the Autobot, who fell to the ground.
“Hahahahaha! I love this part!” He cried gleefully, his gun against the Autobots head. Triggerhappy pulled the trigger, once twice, thrice, killing the Autobot instantly and filling his head full of holes.
“Hehehehehehe! That was fun! Now back to the target!”
Trigerhappy turned to face where his target had been, the Autobot, however had noticed the commotion and had started to flee towards cover.
“Yay! Looks like I’ll get to do it my way then!” he cried as he leapt out from behind his cover, transformed into his Jet mode and spread after his target, filling the air with round after round of photon pulses, trying to hit the Autobot, but missing with every shot. Iacon was starting to loom closer now, but Triggerhappy didn’t notice, he was enjoying the task at hand too much. He didn’t notice, that is, until he was met with a barrage of fire from the defenders.
Transforming in mid-air, turning to face the defenders, Triggerhappy got his photon machine gun ready and pulled the trigger, but nothing happened. He looked down at his weapon, realising at that moment that he had used up all of his ammunition.
“Ah slag! Not again!” He cried as he transformed once more and flew back towards Decepticon territory, taking massive damage from the Autobot attack as he fled.

Hope its all ok :D

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