The Energon Pub

by **MetalSamamon** » Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:34 pm

Dark_Lord_Prime wrote:Ok, I changed page two slightly: the first "crying" panel just shows tears welling in the corners or her eyes, and I redid the other one with lighter tear tracks.

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That looks much better DLP...it looks way better!

Great job!

by **TM Dark_Lord_Prime** » Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:33 pm

MetalSamamon wrote:
Dark_Lord_Prime wrote:Ok, I changed page two slightly: the first "crying" panel just shows tears welling in the corners or her eyes, and I redid the other one with lighter tear tracks.

(scroll up to see the page)

That looks much better DLP...it looks way better!

Great job!

I'm working on page 3 now, and it's gonna take me longer than the others, simply because of all the extra detail of Dinobot's hat and cloak. I just finished the first panel (except for some falling leaves I missed), and I think it looks pretty good so far.