Jeep! wrote:Why do I imagine Dead Metal sounding exactly like Arnie?
Intah-wib-buls?
Blurrz wrote:10/10
Leave it to Dead Metal to have the word 'Pronz' in his signature.
i_amtrunks wrote:Front Paged and Credited.
Some great work in there, the line art is fantastic, and the colours are suburb Josh, page 16 is some of your best work I have ever seen.
Jeep! wrote:Why do I imagine Dead Metal sounding exactly like Arnie?
Intah-wib-buls?
Blurrz wrote:10/10
Leave it to Dead Metal to have the word 'Pronz' in his signature.
Leonardo wrote: there are some panels where I wonder what impression Milne was trying to give and I can't always see how the panel composition is telling the story. Megatron's first murder of an Autobot, for example, should have had more resonance in the drawing. Overall, though, I feel murky colouring doesn't mesh well with cramped, detailed pencilling. It seems to me to be a case of two considered ideas that would work well independently, yet when applied in tandem don't support one another very well.
There are, as well, some issues with the writing that really should've been tightened.
i_amtrunks wrote:Leonardo wrote: there are some panels where I wonder what impression Milne was trying to give and I can't always see how the panel composition is telling the story. Megatron's first murder of an Autobot, for example, should have had more resonance in the drawing. Overall, though, I feel murky colouring doesn't mesh well with cramped, detailed pencilling. It seems to me to be a case of two considered ideas that would work well independently, yet when applied in tandem don't support one another very well.
There are, as well, some issues with the writing that really should've been tightened.
I have to agree here, the colours suit the story well, but the art could have been better.
The story and concept were sound, the writing somewhat disappointing.
dragons wrote:i agree great colors great work on this issue on page 16 looks like a gundam turned into decepticon i watch alot of anime that could be why.
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