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Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:24 am

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
Not sure where else to post it but I've been thinking about where to send in a pitch for a script for the Transformers One prequel animated movie that takes place on Cybertron to Hasbro.

Yeah yeah fanfics and all but this is a story that I've been thinking hard about about for a very long time (years since I was a kid back around 2008) and more as an actual movie or script for one then a fan fulfillment it's a story but sorta original about the war specifically the events that led up to Bumblebee losing his voice, The Allspark launching to space, and how the 2007 Autobots first found out about Earth so sorta similar to somethings in IDW and other extended material but not exactly the same I got some original ideas and twists.

There are not hundreds of characters or blatant geek service and past characters from the movies that might not have gotten enough development or screentime such as Jazz and Mirage get a bit more time to shine and characters interact in situations they could not in the films that take place in the future such as Ironhide and Hound talking about weapons and why it's more logical to either have just two good cannons or multiple standard guns.

Don't want to clutter the thread with my ideas and all just wanted to know since nothing is going to happen if I don't ask or make progress towards my goals and heck if people like James Roberts or many other Transformers fans can get involved with the franchise in a way no reason why I shouldn't try.
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Re: Transformers: The Last Knight Discussion Thread

Postby william-james88 » Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:59 am

Deadput wrote:Not sure where else to post it but I've been thinking about where to send in a pitch for a script for the Transformers One prequel animated movie that takes place on Cybertron to Hasbro.

You can post that here: fan-fiction-f9.php

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Re: Transformers: The Last Knight Discussion Thread

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:09 am

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
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william-james88 wrote:
Deadput wrote:Not sure where else to post it but I've been thinking about where to send in a pitch for a script for the Transformers One prequel animated movie that takes place on Cybertron to Hasbro.

You can post that here: fan-fiction-f9.php

Hasbro doesnt accept any unsolicited submission. The best way to get anyone's attention is to write it out and post it somewhere like on our forums to get feedback. If you can get someone who draws to help you out and make it like a comic that would help. You can also contact these guys and register here: https://blcklst.com/


Thanks Will going to copy this post down somewhere that I can remember.

But how did people like Roberts get involved again just wondering?
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Re: Transformers: The Last Knight Discussion Thread

Postby william-james88 » Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:23 am

Deadput wrote:
william-james88 wrote:
Deadput wrote:Not sure where else to post it but I've been thinking about where to send in a pitch for a script for the Transformers One prequel animated movie that takes place on Cybertron to Hasbro.

You can post that here: fan-fiction-f9.php

Hasbro doesnt accept any unsolicited submission. The best way to get anyone's attention is to write it out and post it on a blog of your own to get feedback. If you can get someone who draws to help you out and make it like a comic that would help. You can also contact these guys and register here: https://blcklst.com/


Thanks Will going to copy this post down somewhere that I can remember.

But how did people like Roberts get involved again just wondering?

James Roberts? The comic guy? This really isnt the right thread for this. You can ask about him in the comics forum (unless he was involved in the film, which I was unaware of). Just read his wiki page to see his background. In any case, the only advice to a career in writing is to just write. Write every day, put it up for feedback and accept the criticism, honing your craft.
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Re: Transformers: The Last Knight Discussion Thread

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:55 am

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
william-james88 wrote:James Roberts? The comic guy? This really isnt the right thread for this. You can ask about him in the comics forum (unless he was involved in the film, which I was unaware of). Just read his wiki page to see his background. In any case, the only advice to a career in writing is to just write. Write every day, put it up for feedback and accept the criticism, honing your craft.


Thank you Will it's good to get some knowledge on this kind of thing.

Just to clarify I did mean how did Roberts get involved with the Transformers franchise.
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Seibertron » Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:34 am

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I broke this off into a separate topic. Feel free o change the title of the topic to something more appropriate if I didn't get it right.
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Sabrblade » Tue Mar 28, 2017 8:38 am

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Deadput wrote:it's a story but sorta original about the war specifically the events that led up to Bumblebee losing his voice, The Allspark launching to space, and how the 2007 Autobots first found out about Earth so sorta similar to somethings in IDW and other extended material but not exactly the same I got some original ideas and twists.
Some suspect the Bumblebee movie might be about this.
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 4:27 pm

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
Seibertron wrote:I broke this off into a separate topic. Feel free o change the title of the topic to something more appropriate if I didn't get it right.

Thanks Seib that helps a lot!

Sabrblade wrote:
Deadput wrote:it's a story but sorta original about the war specifically the events that led up to Bumblebee losing his voice, The Allspark launching to space, and how the 2007 Autobots first found out about Earth so sorta similar to somethings in IDW and other extended material but not exactly the same I got some original ideas and twists.
Some suspect the Bumblebee movie might be about this.


Possibly yes that's what I thought but as far as we know that movie is live action and is a completely separate film.


Transformers one apparently is not a film coming soon at least after Tf 7 (6?) in 2019 but of course if further information says that's what the Bumblebee film is about or at least a good chunk of it then there is definitely no chance any script being "accepted".
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:04 pm

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
Just clarify it's not completely finished or anything in fact I might have to make some tweaking which I'm going to wait for Last Knight since apparently it tells on how Megatron and Prime started the war which is kinda something I should know while making a pitch of a Cybertron war story.

A main point of the story that I will mention is the "Tyger Pax Guardians" (prototype name) a long line of protectors created by or assigned by the Allspark to protect it on Cybertron through out the ages.

These are pretty much the movie equivalent of the Animated Bee body type http://tfwiki.net/wiki/65356-9292-346 although they don't all look exactly alike or anything like that some do but most don't.

Most of the characters in Bumblebee's squad is compromised by a few of them all of them have predetermined roles and fates.

Prowl: He is a main character based on the Rotf "Streetwise" Protectobot character is technically the real leader of the squad although let Bumblebee call the shots since he is there as an "adviser" to evaluate Bumblebee he is the one who I won't talk about his fate since he might or might not be a future character in later movies.

Cliffjumper: His is a main character based on one of the original Bumblebee 2007 concept arts but colored Clffjumper and has horns I did art on him for context. Cliffjumper is a tough guy and while he loves to fight Decepticons Cliff does know when to keep his cool and rally others which helps when Bee is not around or distracted his fate is the only one left ambiguous in the "film" and is left up to viewer interpretation. https://c1.staticflickr.com/1/764/23597071355_056f8c3831_o.jpg

Hot Rod: Until Last Knight was a thing Hot Rod was going to be more of a minor character but now that I know that not only he is in the film but is "brothers in arms" with Bee his role went up to major Hot Rod is brash and reckless but has a bit of charisma that the others look up too but Hot Rod keeps making decisions for Bee without his permission when he should not which is a part of how their mission almost fails Hot Rod lives for obvious reasons but depending on how his role in Last Knight is he is traumatized by the mission and leaves on his own.

Hotshot: A side character he is based on a mish-mash of Prime Hotshot and Aoe Hotshot but without the trench coat Hotshot tries to be an anchor for Hot Rod but this can fail when he loses his short temper and is phone to lash out on both cons with his flame throwers and his comrades with his words Hot shot is also in the mind set that Bumblebee is not the right leader and makes it known often although he still cares about him and his squad as people he is just very judgmental Hotshot is the last one killed near the end of the movie when he attempts to save the others when they have been captured and being interrogated in an obviously unlikely attempt to jump Megatron and is blasted down for his trouble.

Breakaway: A side character Breakaway is based on the ROTF plane he is Bee's "second" in the mission due to being a calm and collected individual he is a moral compass for many of the team due to being a good talker who can tell when others are troubled Breakaway is also a rare case when a "Guardian" is born/created as a flyer Breakaway is killed halfway in a dogfight with either Starscream or Soundwave to show when things are starting to go wrong as well as to kill off the comedy relief which Breakaway is part of.

Dino: Is a side character based on who else? He is both a stealth sniper and an Autobot infiltrator who is responsible for most of the recon that is done on the ground he can hit hard but he isn't the most durable and his personality does not help him out since he is a loner who often refuses help from others and is one that believes in more logical decisions and not any "we can do it!" plans his fate is that he is injured near the end and is separated from the others but instead of going to help them Dino uses his cloaking to retreat to the launch site for the xanthium.

Tailgate: He is a side character who is based on an edited standard Protoform with white armor so a bit like this but without the arm blades and in a Cybertronian mode https://c1.staticflickr.com/3/2924/33552972302_73008af6ae_o.png his personality is generic and is a parody on how most Bayverse characters seem to suffer from dull personalities and just being there which is kinda his role too besides just being another guy with a gun although he has a partnership with Arcee he is the second last death at the end being interrogated and killed for information that only Bumblebee has.

Big Daddy: He is a minor character akin to all the background rebels in Rogue One's final battle just used to fill out he squad although he has a heavy weapon despite being a "smaller" bot and is often seen with Inferno another background character his death happens near the end when Inferno's leg is blown up and Big Daddy refuses to leave him behind and the two are killed when either by overwhelming force or when the ceiling collapses on them due to Bumblebee's plan to bring it down on them to buy their group time.
His design is a modified Aoe Bumblebee concept design which I edited a little to look more like Big Daddy I'm very proud of the edits I made also his name is not mentioned in the movie for uh reasons since I'm not sure his name will fly with the general audience.
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Next post is about non Guardian (Bumblebee body type) squad members.
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:35 pm

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
The remaining members of Bumblebee's squad are

Arcee: She is a major character based on the 2007 design she works along with Cliffjumper and Tailgate along with the rest of the "second" squad (When most of the characters split up half way in the "movie" her role is a Battlefield sniper who fights on the battlefield unlike Mirage who is more of a "hidden sniper" she is an experienced solider who Bumblebee trusts a lot to lead in either his or Prowl's absence she lives but is almost killed by Megatron when he blasts her after Bumblebee refuses to give up the Allspark's location Ratchet is able to save her but at the cost of being separated into three much smaller bodies which also makes here a little less like a living person and more of a three man drone which upsets both Bee and Ratchet greatly. (It's an excuse for her uh role in ROTF)

Wheeljack: He is another major character and a long time friend of Bumblebee and much older eccentric but kind and caring gentlemen his inventions are wild and don't always works, he is also a non combatant although he carries a single grenade for his own use, his design is based on Que but with Wheeljack's G1 colors and head his fate is that everyone else still alive gets captured it offers Wheeljack the distraction to get to the Allspark's location and launch it into space he however was followed by Barricade who was too late to stop him although Cade shoots Wheeljack in the head and leaves him for dead but Wheeljack survives and is repaired by Ratchet into his "Einstein" head later on at Earth between ROTF and DOTM he takes up the name Que on earth due to being a fan of Bond films while the blue color is from the car he scans.

Smokescreen: He is a side character and part of the Second squad based on the Rotf toy and movie Idw character he is a jokester with a knack for distractions and tools for either disguising his comrades or blinding the enemy his death happens when Airraid is shot down and the two are destroyed in a B
bombing run by Starscream while Smokescreen was trying to get Airraid away from battle.

Air raid: He is another side character part of the Second squad an Aerialbot based on his portrayal in the Dotm game he has the ability to turn his colors into a green camo which helps with his job as air recon his personality is the dare devil type although he has a flaw which makes him unable to resist the temptations to insult and antagonist enemy fighters which leads to his death of insulting Starscrean one too many times which leads the much more superior Decepticon to aggressively pursue him and shoot him down before coming back to bombard him while Smokescreen is dragging him away killing them both.

Camshaft: He is a side character based on the 2007 character and the final part of the Second squad he is a senior analyst, communications officer and the main source of comedy relief of the movie and as such is the the first to get killed after Breakaway when he and Cliffjumper are cornered by Blackout, the two attempt to double team him but not only does Blackout deal with them with ease but Camshaft is sliced in half by Blackout from the upper torso.

Inferno: He is a minor character akin to all the background rebels in Rogue One's final battle just used to fill out he squad although he has a light pistol despite being a "bigger" bot and is often seen with Big Daddy another background character his death happens near the end when Inferno's leg is blown up and Big Daddy refuses to leave him behind and the two are killed when either by overwhelming force or when the ceiling collapses on them due to Bumblebee's plan to bring it down on them to buy their group time.

Inferno's design is based on the concept art of 2007 Ratchet https://c2.staticflickr.com/2/1548/2408 ... 6385_o.png

Next post is about the Cadets and other characters in the movie both Autobot and Decepticon.
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Tue Mar 28, 2017 7:36 pm

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
The cadets are characters that would most likely not be in the actual final thing and in fact I'm pretty sure most of the second squad (Smokescreen, Air Raid, Camshaft) would be cut out if this was to be a thing.

The cadets role is to be younger characters that Bumblebee feels responsible to look out for since their part of his squad which leads to the delightful feeling of awfulness once most of these characters die horribly during what I love to call the "Shockwave murder montage".

Strongarm: Her role would be major she is obviously based on the Rid character in both appearance and personality she and Bee would form a close (non romantic) bond her death would be near the end where she is shot in the back by Shockwave while everyone is retreating towards where the Allspark is as she falls to the ground Bumblebee who notices what happened turns around and they make eye contact for a moment before she passes away forcing Bumblebee to move on.
She would sort of look like this but with more differences from Inferno. https://c2.staticflickr.com/2/1604/24641155675_0a3c5ea40d_o.png

Jolt: A side character based on everyone's fave 20 second star from ROTF Jolt is a naive but thoughtful medic/engineer who is training under Ratchet himself so Bee is only borrowing Jolt for the mission based on his talents with basically being a living power generator which could benefit the Autobots in the long run if they run out of natural energon sources his fate is that he would nearly be killed by Shockwave while freeing prisoners during the third act of the movie although Jolt lives and ends up being the only victim of Shockwave's to survive the end of the movie would explain that during the time between Rotf and Dotm Shockwave would end up running into Jolt while on a scouting mission with Shockwave gladly finishing the job.

There is a running gag with the other characters forgetting that Jolt is there most of the time which is a nod to his short screen time in ROTF also if the cadets thing is cut Jolt would still be a part of the movie he would just be with Ratchet most of the time and is just a minor background character but with lines yes.

Knockout: A side character based on the ROTF character of the same name he is a rebellious but skilled youngster who doesn't like the strict rules of Prowl or the consent attention Bumblebee gives to him and the other cadets his death would happen as the first victim of the "Shockwave murder montage" being snuck up on but it's not shown what actually happens to him.

Dunerunner: A side character based on the ROTF character he doesn't speak much but when he does it's usually advice or important information his death would happen when he and Jolt are rescuing prisoners when Shockwave comes across them after killing Knock Out and makes short work of Jolt which makes Dunerunner lose it and charges him screaming about how Shockwave can't just hurt people including the prisoners which Shockwave replies that he can and will while crushing Dune's head effortlessly.

Deadguy and Cannonfodder: These two are minor background characters obviously meant to kill off with Deadguy being a flyer who is absolutely loyal to Optimus and is the first casualty of the squad killed by Brawl when he marches off ahead of everyone else to get the job done. Cannonfodder is a character who views Bee as his role model and gets a few lines but is the second casualty where he is sniper by Hardtop a rival of Bee's to make the Autobot upset

Their both based on these two characters of the same names
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Next post is the final one about characters and is just going to be how characters like Optimus and Megatron fit in the story combined with some info about the plot
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Wed Mar 29, 2017 2:32 am

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
This post I'm going to edit in things and info in tomorrow or the next day so this is just a placeholder post since I'm too tired at the time of this post also the character bio posts are a bit clumped up but that's not what any planed script would be like I'll space out and proofread the scripts when I write them down.

Most likely the main squad will be shrunk down to a decent size which I'm thinking will be Bumblebee, Prowl, Hot Rod, Arcee, Cliffjumper, Hotshot, Wheeljack, Mirage/Dino, Breakaway, Tailgate and throw away red shirts Deadguy and Cannonfodder with me perhaps adding in Smokescreen, Camshaft, Airraid and background characters Inferno and Big Daddy depending if I feel their necessary or not for the sake of an hour and a half to two hour movie.

One thing I'll write right now though is that at the end of the film (10 to 15 minutes) all Autobots from 2007 to AOE board up on the Xanthium and the Autobots get the "message from a new discovery" which leads to the 2007 cast to split up from the ship and any one from Dotm and Aoe have reasons for not showing up in Rotf which is "they were injured and had to be repaired one by one" as well as a small montage explaining the fates of those not shown in the films such as what happens to Sideswipe or Jolt.

The first draft I will post will not be a final one and future drafts will be altered to polish and updated with new information from future films such as TLK or the Bumblebee movie.
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Re: Pitch idea for pre-Transformers 2007 animated movie

Postby Deadput » Sat Apr 01, 2017 5:46 pm

Motto: "Let's kick the tires and light the fires!"
Weapon: Fusion Blaster Cannon
The idea for this movie would have 3 acts like all good movies do although the first act is the least thought out due to lack of good information besides the basics on the backstory to the war like how it started outside of IDW comics that while I am admittedly inspired by I don't want to make a copy paste story from Idw especially since Bay and the other movie makers consider the idw movie comics to be "non canon".

Which is why most of the "new characters" that are killed off are either idw ones and movie toy only characters or just newish characters inspired by other Transformers media such as Strongarm which at this point I don't think she is actually going to be in the "final" draft since she was only added to my story recently but unlike Hot Rod who already had a minor role that was boosted to main due to the new movie Strongarm was not in it all before.

The acts for the movie would be simple but hard to pull off well if this script was to be a short hour and a half movie and as such I think my idea would only work for a 2 hour movie even though a main complaint for AOE was that it was too long and I still got to fit in some "breather" scenes since the regular person usually get sick of Nonstop action in a movie that they either stop paying much attention when the action loses the wow factor or that they get tired.


The first act would be around 30 to 40 minutes and would be about some of the backstory like how the Knights are involved in Cybertron's past as well as some stuff about the Allspark but most importantly the start of the war and the tension between Optimus and Megatron with both Sentinel Prime and The Fallen involved in somehow, there would also be introductions to Bumblebee and some of the other main characters both those that become Autobot and those that chose to become Decepticon with quick scenes that show or explain their motivations.

The second act would be a time skip to the middle and beginning of the last parts of the war with several events happening including Sentinel making his deal with Megatron and him taking off in the Ark although the main part of the arc would probably focus on Optimus being a leader and some skirmishes with the Decepticons which would start off a bit optimistic but the Autobots eventually start to lose due the Decepticons superior strategy of overwhelm the enemy with a lot of basic infantry grunts before a few higher ranked warriors clean the rest up with one of these losses would show the death of an important figure in the Autobot army which for now said figure is either Ultra Magnus or Impactor of the Wreckers who were a much bigger group back on Cybertron.


The third and last act of the movie would be centered on Bumblebee and his squad focusing on their job of getting to the Allspark at Tyger Pax and launching the Allspark to space because Optimus Prime and the Autobot High Command which include characters such as Jazz and Ironhide make the difficult decision of leaving the planet because they realize that the Autobots have lost the battle on Cybertron and must leave the planet but they can't just leave the Allspark to the Decepticons which leads to Prime ordering Bee to take the mission that barely succeeds with many of the team either dying or being injured including Bee himself who loses his voice to Megatron but is spared due to what little honor Megatron still has which has him have a little respect for Bee's dedication and loyalty that Megatron himself hardly has with many of his troops that are starting to doubt him for being unable to save Cybertron.

The movie ends with the Autobots from the first 4 movies boarding the Xanthium leaving Cybertron, the Decepticons from Movie 1 launching on their own ship, Soundwave's group taking off to Earth's moon on secret orders from The Fallen and Megatron chasing the Allspark leading to him crashing on Earth.
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Deadput wrote:Actually I don't know my mother's name is Valerie so is Va'al actually my mother?

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