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The Chaos Bringer wrote:Thanks for all the feedback. I'm taking you advice and starting over. Hope this one works better (Hope the name's not taken too!)

Name: Ruination
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Menial tasks back at base, destruction of small Autobot encampments
Alt. mode: Tank
Weapons: Giant wristblades (like Wreckage) Shoulder cannons, fists.
Height: 32 feet (9.76 M)
Quote: You are scrap, Autobot and to scrap you shall return.

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 1
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 1
CHARISMA: 1
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: His name is Ruination. He couldn't tell you is that was always his name or if it was given to him by the Decepticon medics that rebuilt him. He lives in constant torment. He wonders how many promises he has not kept, due to not remembering them. He does not know how many dear friends he once had but has since forgotten. He does not know what he looked like, or what he was like. All he remembers is that the Autobots did this to him. He remembers a fateful battle that nearly cost him his life. He remembers shooting at Autobots from a low flying aircraft. He does not know who was on board with him. He remembers being shot down by an Autobot. This is his only memory. And he doesn't even know how much was left of him. From what he can guess, not much. A visor and a speaker are all that are left of his original head. A metal grate serves as a mouth. Everything else has recieved new armor. Nothing of his body remains. Everything has been replaced with new parts. He is told that none of it is his fault and that the Autobots attacked first that day. Ruination hates all Autobots and does not descriminate between those that might have been in the battle that nearly killed him, and those built afterwards. In his mind, anyone who supports the Autobot cause is quilty and therefore must be brought to justice. For him though, justice usually means death by impaling.
Abilities: Ruination is a nearly perfect fighter. He can run up to you, slice you in half with his wristblades, and run on to the next victim before anyone can sound an alarm. He is incredibly strong and can pick up an Autobot and throw it with ease. His new armor is very strong and can take quite a beating.
Weaknesses: Ruination's aim is so bad that the Decepticons are very hesitant about bringing him to a battle, as he is very likely to hit one of them. The fact that he will fire wildly untill his ammo is depleted when in the presence of even a single Autobot doesn't help. His hatred of Autobots is so strong that he would completely abandon any mission for the chance to kill even a single one. Because his hatred blinds him so much, no one gives him anything important to do. If the Decepticons need someone to storm an Autobot outpost and kill or capture everyone in it though, there is no one more willing to do the job. And he never needs reinforcements.

This one doesn't work better I'm afraid. I suggest checking out the rules again, especially rule 5 that says you only get 1 stat of 9. Also, the staff doesn't appreciate the min/maxing you are doing with the stats with three stats of 1 and all of those stats of 9 to make some sort of 'ultimate' warrior. With a tech skill of 1 he would be incapable of refueling himself, using any weapon above a club or opening doors. A charisma of 1 indicates that his fellow Decepticons would rather punch him than even look at him. An accuracy of 1 would mean he typically shoots himself in battle and never, ever hits his target. Also, dexterity of 4 is abysmally low for someone who is supposed to be skilled in melee fighting. Keep all of this in mind in the future.

I see what you mean. I've made some serious revisions that hopefully will make this work. Sorry for the trouble.

Name: Ruination
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Standard soldier
Alt. mode: Tank
Weapons: Giant wristblades (like Wreckage) Shoulder cannons, fists.
Height: 32 feet (9.76 M)
Quote: You are scrap, Autobot and to scrap you shall return.

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 3
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: His name is Ruination. He couldn't tell you if that was always his name or if it was given to him by the Decepticon medics that rebuilt him. He lives in constant torment. He wonders how many promises he has not kept, due to not remembering them. He does not know how many dear friends he once had but has since forgotten. He does not know what he looked like, or what he was like. All he remembers is that an Autobot did this to him. He remembers a fateful battle that nearly cost him his life. He remembers shooting at Autobots from a low flying aircraft. He does not know who was on board with him. He remembers being shot down by an Autobot. This is his only memory of his former self. Everything afterwards is from his reconstruction onward. He is told that none of it is his fault and that the Autobots attacked first that day. Ruination wants revenge on the Autobot that shot him down. The trouble is, he does not remember what the Autobot looked like. He spends a lot of time re-viewing his memory of the battle to try to see just who it was that dealt the nearly fatal blow. He still has no idea. Although, he did find a small message somewhere in his data tracts that appears to be a from before the battle. He doesn't know what the symbols mean, but has a strange feeling that someone out there does.
Abilities: Ruination is definitely a fighter. He can run quite fast in robot mode and is quite skilled with his wristblades. His shoulder cannons are quite powerful if fully charged.
Weaknesses: Ruination's aim rather poor. Also his cannons have the potential to do decent damage but he fires so rapidly when he sees an Autobot that his cannons rarely have time to fully charge. Also he is quite slow in tank mode.

Name: Durge (not Dirge)
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Scout
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet and Cybertronian Tank
Weapons: A rather large cannon mounted on his right arm. Rather a lot like Megatron's. (but not so powerful)
Special Abilities: TripleChanger
Hight: about 29 ft I'm not so sure how much in other terms)
Quote: "To learn is to Improve, to improve is to become stronger!"

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: I don't know yet

Profile: A young, rather timid Autobot. He likes to try out new and exciting technology. This is why he volenteered to become a Triplechanger. He may be unsure at times, but when his fellow teammates nead him, he really pulls through for them. His knowledge of the ever expanding universe helps his friends in discovering the Decepticon's plans.

Abilities: His arm-mounted cannon creates a large ball of energy which zips through the air to collide with it's opposition. (anything that get's in it's way really) He would rather . He relies on his speed to get him out of sticky situations because he does not have the courage to stand up to his enemies. He prefers others to lead but sometimes wishes that he could make the BIG descisions.

Weaknesses: His low courage usually meens he is too timid to charge into battle. His low endurance makes him lesser than his enemies.

Sample Post:
I wrote one, but something dodgy happened and my sample post was deleted!

The Chaos Bringer wrote:I see what you mean. I've made some serious revisions that hopefully will make this work. Sorry for the trouble.

Name: Ruination
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Standard soldier
Alt. mode: Tank
Weapons: Giant wristblades (like Wreckage) Shoulder cannons, fists.
Height: 32 feet (9.76 M)
Quote: You are scrap, Autobot and to scrap you shall return.

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 3
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: His name is Ruination. He couldn't tell you if that was always his name or if it was given to him by the Decepticon medics that rebuilt him. He lives in constant torment. He wonders how many promises he has not kept, due to not remembering them. He does not know how many dear friends he once had but has since forgotten. He does not know what he looked like, or what he was like. All he remembers is that an Autobot did this to him. He remembers a fateful battle that nearly cost him his life. He remembers shooting at Autobots from a low flying aircraft. He does not know who was on board with him. He remembers being shot down by an Autobot. This is his only memory of his former self. Everything afterwards is from his reconstruction onward. He is told that none of it is his fault and that the Autobots attacked first that day. Ruination wants revenge on the Autobot that shot him down. The trouble is, he does not remember what the Autobot looked like. He spends a lot of time re-viewing his memory of the battle to try to see just who it was that dealt the nearly fatal blow. He still has no idea. Although, he did find a small message somewhere in his data tracts that appears to be a from before the battle. He doesn't know what the symbols mean, but has a strange feeling that someone out there does.
Abilities: Ruination is definitely a fighter. He can run quite fast in robot mode and is quite skilled with his wristblades. His shoulder cannons are quite powerful if fully charged.
Weaknesses: Ruination's aim rather poor. Also his cannons have the potential to do decent damage but he fires so rapidly when he sees an Autobot that his cannons rarely have time to fully charge. Also he is quite slow in tank mode.

Needs a sample post.

Durge344 wrote:Name: Durge (not Dirge)
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Scout
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet and Cybertronian Tank
Weapons: A rather large cannon mounted on his right arm. Rather a lot like Megatron's. (but not so powerful)
Special Abilities: TripleChanger
Hight: about 29 ft I'm not so sure how much in other terms)
Quote: "To learn is to Improve, to improve is to become stronger!"

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: I don't know yet

Profile: A young, rather timid Autobot. He likes to try out new and exciting technology. This is why he volenteered to become a Triplechanger. He may be unsure at times, but when his fellow teammates nead him, he really pulls through for them. His knowledge of the ever expanding universe helps his friends in discovering the Decepticon's plans.

Abilities: His arm-mounted cannon creates a large ball of energy which zips through the air to collide with it's opposition. (anything that get's in it's way really) He would rather . He relies on his speed to get him out of sticky situations because he does not have the courage to stand up to his enemies. He prefers others to lead but sometimes wishes that he could make the BIG descisions.

Weaknesses: His low courage usually meens he is too timid to charge into battle. His low endurance makes him lesser than his enemies.

Sample Post:
I wrote one, but something dodgy happened and my sample post was deleted!

Go ahead and post your sample and I'll have a look.

-Blast, missed again!.
Ruination was quickly becoming frustrated. Being in a ship gave him a huge advantage over the Autobots. But it also kept him too far away from the Autobots for him to aim properly.
-Pilot! Lower the ship so I can get some better shots at them!
The ship slowly lowered as it slowly crept closer to the ground.
-Steady. I want a clear shot.
Runation ruination Aimed his weapon at an autobot. But that one got shot by someone else. So he aimed to the left and just managed to get a glance of another Autobot as it fired a rocket launcher at him.

****
-Ow.
Ruination looked around and remembered that he was in a battle. Then he realised that his head hurt... a lot.
-Blast, I did it again. Why do my thoughts always return to that memory... at the worst possible times.
Ruination turned around and saw an Autobot staring a him, hundreds of feet away. It turned around and ran. Ruination watched it closely as it ran. There was something familiar about it. could it be the one?
-RAAAAAHHHH! Come back here puny Autobot!
Ruination ran after it, Ignoring several Autobots that would have made much better targets, not knowing that his commander was watching in disaproval. Oh yes. Ruination would be facing guard duty again, as punishment for yet again being distracted by a single foe in the face of so many.
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You wouldn't believe what it took to get this posted. My computer had problems.

The Chaos Bringer wrote:-Blast, missed again!.
Ruination was quickly becoming frustrated. Being in a ship gave him a huge advantage over the Autobots. But it also kept him too far away from the Autobots for him to aim properly.
-Pilot! Lower the ship so I can get some better shots at them!
The ship slowly lowered as it slowly crept closer to the ground.
-Steady. I want a clear shot.
Runation ruination Aimed his weapon at an autobot. But that one got shot by someone else. So he aimed to the left and just managed to get a glance of another Autobot as it fired a rocket launcher at him.

****
-Ow.
Ruination looked around and remembered that he was in a battle. Then he realised that his head hurt... a lot.
-Blast, I did it again. Why do my thoughts always return to that memory... at the worst possible times.
Ruination turned around and saw an Autobot staring a him, hundreds of feet away. It turned around and ran. Ruination watched it closely as it ran. There was something familiar about it. could it be the one?
-RAAAAAHHHH! Come back here puny Autobot!
Ruination ran after it, Ignoring several Autobots that would have made much better targets, not knowing that his commander was watching in disaproval. Oh yes. Ruination would be facing guard duty again, as punishment for yet again being distracted by a single foe in the face of so many.
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You wouldn't believe what it took to get this posted. My computer had problems.

The abilities section needs more details and it would also help if you skipped lines between paragraphs in the application and sample post. In the sample post you need to use quotation marks to indicate when a character is talking.

The J Writer wrote:

Durge344 wrote:Name: Durge (not Dirge)
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Scout
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet and Cybertronian Tank
Weapons: A rather large cannon mounted on his right arm. Rather a lot like Megatron's. (but not so powerful)
Special Abilities: TripleChanger
Hight: about 29 ft I'm not so sure how much in other terms)
Quote: "To learn is to Improve, to improve is to become stronger!"

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: I don't know yet

Profile: A young, rather timid Autobot. He likes to try out new and exciting technology. This is why he volenteered to become a Triplechanger. He may be unsure at times, but when his fellow teammates nead him, he really pulls through for them. His knowledge of the ever expanding universe helps his friends in discovering the Decepticon's plans.

Abilities: His arm-mounted cannon creates a large ball of energy which zips through the air to collide with it's opposition. (anything that get's in it's way really) He would rather . He relies on his speed to get him out of sticky situations because he does not have the courage to stand up to his enemies. He prefers others to lead but sometimes wishes that he could make the BIG descisions.

Weaknesses: His low courage usually meens he is too timid to charge into battle. His low endurance makes him lesser than his enemies.

Sample Post:
I wrote one, but something dodgy happened and my sample post was deleted!

Go ahead and post your sample and I'll have a look.

It took me EONS to do it! So I'll try again!

Sample Post: In a small room at the Autobot base, Durge was registering onto an online RPG! He was just writing in a sample post, when all the lights turned off. He got up and looked around. He could see nothing. He wandered over to where the door was supposed to be.

"OWW!" He had hit his head of of the door. He tryed to open the door. it did not move. He banged against it. Still no movement. So he SLAMMED his shoulder against the door and it fell down with a huge BANG!
Just then his Fist-Fone started beeping. He flipped up the screen.

<<"Durge, what are you doing?!">>

"Sorry Ultra Magnus. My door got stuck again."

<<"No, I meen what's with the lights?"

"Just bacause I'm clumbsy you blame me for every small aaccident?"

<<"Sorry! Anyway, get up to the bridge now and help me fix the problem!">>

"I'm on my way!" Durge transformed into his jet mode and flew down to the bridge...

Name: Wreck
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Missile launcher
Weapons: Rocket launcher and a large laser blaster
Special Abilities: Robot mode flight
Height: 32ft
Quote: "To wreck and destroy! All Deceptcons must have these abilities!"

STRENGTH: 9
INTELLIGENCE: 10
DEXTERITY: 2
SPEED: 3
ENDURANCE: 9
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 8
RANK:

Profile: Nobody knows anything about this mysterious yet powerful monster. He has some relation to an ominous being. (It's Durge. But please don't tell anybody bacause it's a secret) His personalitie is a general tough-guy vibe. But what makes him different is that he is so intelligent.

Abilities: In his tank mode, his huge missile rocket launcher is mounted on his back. The rockets it contains are incredibly powerful and could knock a big jet out the air. Unfortunately, it will only fly straight but due to Wreck's acuracy, it is likely to hit. His fellow Decepticons consider him dangerous and his lust for destruction makes Decepticons uneasy.

Weaknesses: Wreck believes power is the most important thing to him. because of this, he is very slow. But he thinks this is good because if he has low points on "areas he dosen't need" he will have more points to spend on "more important areas"!

Sample Post: BANG BANG BANG!
>>WRECK, WHAT THE RETRO-RAT ARE YOU DOING?!<<
"I am attacking an Autobot station!"
>>Did I give you that order Wreck?<<
Megatron's eyes narrowed.
"I know you didn't, give that order! But I have an advantage over the Autobots in this station. I have calculated that these are non other than puny mninibots and therefore do not stand a chance against my firepower. "
>>AND HOW DID YOU CALCULATE THAT?<<
"... I thought you of all people would know how."
Megatron switched of the transmission.
Wreck continued to smash down the Autobot station door.
Then with a huge BANG! It smashed to pieces...

Abilities and weaknesses have been edited.

Name: Ruination
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Standard soldier
Alt. mode: Tank
Weapons: Giant wristblades (like Wreckage) Shoulder cannons, fists.
Height: 32 feet (9.76 M)
Quote: You are scrap, Autobot and to scrap you shall return.

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 5
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 3
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: His name is Ruination. He couldn't tell you if that was always his name or if it was given to him by the Decepticon medics that rebuilt him.

He lives in constant torment. He wonders how many promises he has not kept, due to not remembering them. He does not know how many dear friends he once had but has since forgotten. He does not know what he looked like, or what he was like. All he remembers is that an Autobot did this to him. He remembers a fateful battle that nearly cost him his life. He remembers shooting at Autobots from a low flying aircraft. He does not know who was on board with him. He remembers being shot down by an Autobot. This is his only memory of his former self. Everything afterwards is from his reconstruction onward. He is told that none of it is his fault and that the Autobots attacked first that day.

Ruination wants revenge on the Autobot that shot him down. The trouble is, he does not remember what the Autobot looked like. He spends a lot of time re-viewing his memory of the battle to try to see just who it was that dealt the nearly fatal blow. He still has no idea.

Although, he did find a small message somewhere in his data tracts that appears to be a from before the battle. He doesn't know what the symbols mean, but has a strange feeling that someone out there does.

Abilities: Ruination is definitely a fighter. He can run quite fast in robot mode and is quite skilled with his wristblades. His shoulder cannons are quite powerful if fully charged. Ruination has good vision and can make out the details of a target that is very far away. Ruination can
run for several miles before overheating.

Weaknesses: Ruination's aim rather poor. Though he can see tiny details clearly from far away, he lacks depth perception, hence his bad aim. Also his cannons have the potential to do decent damage but he fires so rapidly when he sees an Autobot that his cannons rarely have time to fully charge. Also he is quite slow in tank mode. Though he can run large distances before overheating, it often takes until then for him to end his pursuit of an Autobot. And because he does that so often, his engine often needs replacing.

Durge344 wrote:

The J Writer wrote:

Durge344 wrote:Name: Durge (not Dirge)
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Scout
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet and Cybertronian Tank
Weapons: A rather large cannon mounted on his right arm. Rather a lot like Megatron's. (but not so powerful)
Special Abilities: TripleChanger
Hight: about 29 ft I'm not so sure how much in other terms)
Quote: "To learn is to Improve, to improve is to become stronger!"

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: I don't know yet

Profile: A young, rather timid Autobot. He likes to try out new and exciting technology. This is why he volenteered to become a Triplechanger. He may be unsure at times, but when his fellow teammates nead him, he really pulls through for them. His knowledge of the ever expanding universe helps his friends in discovering the Decepticon's plans.

Abilities: His arm-mounted cannon creates a large ball of energy which zips through the air to collide with it's opposition. (anything that get's in it's way really) He would rather . He relies on his speed to get him out of sticky situations because he does not have the courage to stand up to his enemies. He prefers others to lead but sometimes wishes that he could make the BIG descisions.

Weaknesses: His low courage usually meens he is too timid to charge into battle. His low endurance makes him lesser than his enemies.

Sample Post:
I wrote one, but something dodgy happened and my sample post was deleted!

Go ahead and post your sample and I'll have a look.

It took me EONS to do it! So I'll try again!

Sample Post: In a small room at the Autobot base, Durge was registering onto an online RPG! He was just writing in a sample post, when all the lights turned off. He got up and looked around. He could see nothing. He wandered over to where the door was supposed to be.

"OWW!" He had hit his head of of the door. He tryed to open the door. it did not move. He banged against it. Still no movement. So he SLAMMED his shoulder against the door and it fell down with a huge BANG!
Just then his Fist-Fone started beeping. He flipped up the screen.

<<"Durge, what are you doing?!">>

"Sorry Ultra Magnus. My door got stuck again."

<<"No, I meen what's with the lights?"

"Just bacause I'm clumbsy you blame me for every small aaccident?"

<<"Sorry! Anyway, get up to the bridge now and help me fix the problem!">>

"I'm on my way!" Durge transformed into his jet mode and flew down to the bridge...

The sections of this profile are rather thin and tell very little about your character, and his abilities. Also, fanmade Triplechangers are not allowed in the RPG, especially not as a first character.

And the purpose of the sample post is to show how your character would behave while in the game, interacting with others. The sample post you wrote suggests that you are not taking it seriously.

"Blast, missed again!."

Ruination was quickly becoming frustrated. Being in a ship gave him a huge advantage over the Autobots. But it also kept him too far away from the Autobots for him to aim properly.

"Pilot! Lower the ship so I can get some better shots at them!"

The ship slowly lowered as it slowly crept closer to the ground.

"Steady. I want a clear shot."

Runation aimed his weapon at an autobot. But that one got shot by someone else. So he aimed to the left and just managed to get a glance of another Autobot as it fired a rocket launcher at him.

****
"Ow."

Ruination looked around and remembered that he was in a battle. Then he realised that his head hurt... a lot.
-Blast, I did it again. Why do my thoughts always return to that memory... at the worst possible times.

Ruination turned around and saw an Autobot staring a him, hundreds of feet away. It turned around and ran. Ruination watched it closely as it ran. There was something familiar about it. could it be the one?

"RAAAAAHHHH! Come back here puny Autobot!"

Ruination ran after it, Ignoring several Autobots that would have made much better targets, not knowing that his commander was watching in disaproval. Oh yes. Ruination would be facing guard duty again, as punishment for yet again being distracted by a single foe in the face of so many.
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Durge344 wrote:Name: Wreck
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Missile launcher
Weapons: Rocket launcher and a large laser blaster
Special Abilities: Robot mode flight
Height: 32ft
Quote: "To wreck and destroy! All Deceptcons must have these abilities!"

STRENGTH: 9
INTELLIGENCE: 10
DEXTERITY: 2
SPEED: 3
ENDURANCE: 9
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 8
RANK:

Profile: Nobody knows anything about this mysterious yet powerful monster. He has some relation to an ominous being. (It's Durge. But please don't tell anybody bacause it's a secret) His personalitie is a general tough-guy vibe. But what makes him different is that he is so intelligent.

Abilities: In his tank mode, his huge missile rocket launcher is mounted on his back. The rockets it contains are incredibly powerful and could knock a big jet out the air. Unfortunately, it will only fly straight but due to Wreck's acuracy, it is likely to hit. His fellow Decepticons consider him dangerous and his lust for destruction makes Decepticons uneasy.

Weaknesses: Wreck believes power is the most important thing to him. because of this, he is very slow. But he thinks this is good because if he has low points on "areas he dosen't need" he will have more points to spend on "more important areas"!

Sample Post: BANG BANG BANG!
>>WRECK, WHAT THE RETRO-RAT ARE YOU DOING?!<<
"I am attacking an Autobot station!"
>>Did I give you that order Wreck?<<
Megatron's eyes narrowed.
"I know you didn't, give that order! But I have an advantage over the Autobots in this station. I have calculated that these are non other than puny mninibots and therefore do not stand a chance against my firepower. "
>>AND HOW DID YOU CALCULATE THAT?<<
"... I thought you of all people would know how."
Megatron switched of the transmission.
Wreck continued to smash down the Autobot station door.
Then with a huge BANG! It smashed to pieces...

The same as your other application. And there is no way this character can have all those 9 stats and Intelligence 10. Fanmade characters are currently limited to only one stat 9 at most.

I don't understand! In the rules it says I can have a triplechanger and it says nothing about 9 being highest!

Durge344 wrote:I don't understand! In the rules it says I can have a triplechanger and it says nothing about 9 being highest!

Rule No. 5 wrote:5. Fan created characters: When creating a fan made character the sum value of skills counted together (excluding rank) can be 70 at the highest, lest a permission is given by moderators. Fancreated characters cannot have a value above 9 unless a permission is given by RPG moderators. Also they are limited to one stat of 9 unless special permission is given. It is possible to achieve better stats by playing but it is not easy and shouldn't be expected to be something automatic. If you want your character to have an ability such as cloaking or ability of escaping Earth's velocity for example, you will have less points than normally to distribute between the stat values. It is also to be noted that your first character can have only one alternative mode. In addition, fan created combiner teams are not allowed to be brought into the RPG. Use of a human, transformer or etc. superheroes/heroines, ghosts and other powerful entities also need permission from RPG moderators!

And yes, Triplechangers do exist in the game, and can be applied for, but currently, fanmade Triples are unavailable. And no very first character can be a fanmade Triplechanger.

Now I suggest reading the rules again, thinking through the applications process, instead of spamming the application thread. Thank you.

Gatkowski wrote:

Durge344 wrote:I don't understand! In the rules it says I can have a triplechanger and it says nothing about 9 being highest!

Rule No. 5 wrote:5. Fan created characters: When creating a fan made character the sum value of skills counted together (excluding rank) can be 70 at the highest, lest a permission is given by moderators. Fancreated characters cannot have a value above 9 unless a permission is given by RPG moderators. Also they are limited to one stat of 9 unless special permission is given. It is possible to achieve better stats by playing but it is not easy and shouldn't be expected to be something automatic. If you want your character to have an ability such as cloaking or ability of escaping Earth's velocity for example, you will have less points than normally to distribute between the stat values. It is also to be noted that your first character can have only one alternative mode. In addition, fan created combiner teams are not allowed to be brought into the RPG. Use of a human, transformer or etc. superheroes/heroines, ghosts and other powerful entities also need permission from RPG moderators!

And yes, Triplechangers do exist in the game, and can be applied for, but currently, fanmade Triples are unavailable. And no very first character can be a fanmade Triplechanger.

Now I suggest reading the rules again, thinking through the applications process, instead of spamming the application thread. Thank you.

last time i checked it said the highest amount of points was 75 not 70!

Durge344 wrote:

Gatkowski wrote:

Durge344 wrote:I don't understand! In the rules it says I can have a triplechanger and it says nothing about 9 being highest!

Rule No. 5 wrote:5. Fan created characters: When creating a fan made character the sum value of skills counted together (excluding rank) can be 70 at the highest, lest a permission is given by moderators. Fancreated characters cannot have a value above 9 unless a permission is given by RPG moderators. Also they are limited to one stat of 9 unless special permission is given. It is possible to achieve better stats by playing but it is not easy and shouldn't be expected to be something automatic. If you want your character to have an ability such as cloaking or ability of escaping Earth's velocity for example, you will have less points than normally to distribute between the stat values. It is also to be noted that your first character can have only one alternative mode. In addition, fan created combiner teams are not allowed to be brought into the RPG. Use of a human, transformer or etc. superheroes/heroines, ghosts and other powerful entities also need permission from RPG moderators!

And yes, Triplechangers do exist in the game, and can be applied for, but currently, fanmade Triples are unavailable. And no very first character can be a fanmade Triplechanger.

Now I suggest reading the rules again, thinking through the applications process, instead of spamming the application thread. Thank you.

last time i checked it said the highest amount of points was 75 not 70!

Check them again, they were recently updated. Now stop making non application related posts in this thread. Thank you.

Rancid
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Assassin, and unofficial bargaining device
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Motorcycle (Cyb. Ransack)
Weapons: 2x Small Energy blades,and a standard issue energy rifle.
Special Abilities: Low fuel consumption(-5)
Height: 30ft- 9.1 meters
Quote:"It's not that I'm afraid of dying, it's just that I really want to live."

STRENGTH:6
INTELLIGENCE:8
DEXTERITY:9
SPEED:6
ENDURANCE:4
COURAGE:4
FIREPOWER:4
ACCURACY:8
MELEE:8
TECH SKILL:8
CHARISMA:3
RANK:

Profile:
Lazy, unspirited, and downright unpleasant. Rancid has built a reputation as one of the most hated individuals in the Decepticon ranks. Most of his comrades would rather sell him to a Quintesson for use as a slave than work with him. He fights with a sharp blade and an even sharper tongue, insulting not only his opponents but his allies as well. When not serving the Decepticon army , he well... does nothing at all. Known to spend entire cycles just wandering aimlessly or staring into space daydreaming. He never liked the war, and voices his feelings often about it. He dreams of an easy life, simply cruising around with any direction. The only reason he's is even in the Decepticons is the promise of freedom that the Autobots deny him, and the only reason the Decepticons keep him around is for the massive ammount of information he holds, many of which could ruin the entire Decepticon agenda. He loves to be a jerk and get into arguments with the dumber of the species, it's one of the few times he actually puts forth an effort.

Abilities:
Rancid is quick, skillful, and deadly. With an almost unlimited knowledge of Cybertronian martial arts, he can devise the best way to dispose of a foe in mere nanoseconds. When in his alt. mode, he can reach speeds of 199mph, leaving most of his allies left behind eating his dust particles. One of his greatest weaknesses is also his greatest, he is completely mellow and stays calm (if not completely oblivious) in even the most nerve-racking situations. He can also move very silently in both alt. modes, allowing stealth kills, but these usually take to much effort and are used only when his plating is in jepoardy.

Weaknesses:
He is lazy,simple as that, he has hardly any redeeming social skills that benefit the team. His inability to give any kind of effort in a job is quite possibly his greatest weakness. His defiant behavior causes many problems not only for himself, but for his teammates. His known physical weaknesses are the usual for smaller transformers like himself, including weak armor and light weaponry.

Sample Post:

Decepticon Barracks

Rancid lay on the top of the barracks staring into space, his mind wandering off into the depths of the cosmos.

What a stupid place this is, metal everywhere, you can always hear some battle going on three hundred miles away, man I gotta get outta here...

He closed his optics and let out the robotic equivalent to a yawn. He get up and walked inside and headed for the Energon cantine. The usuals were there, old burnt out models still holding onto the Decepticon cause even though they were useless and probably going to become smelted for the next "genius" idea Megatron came up with, the energy addicts, and his favorite specimen, the Class A Retardicon.

The collective idiotic being that was this special brand of Decepticon wrecking crew knew Rancid well. He constantly caused problems for them, usually by burning up their limited logic sensors or redirecting their energy rechargers into an exhaust system, rendering them useless for multiple cycles.

The largest and dumbest one of them walked up to him and smiled.

"What're you doin' here runt?" he sneered

Rancid wore the usual indifferent expression on his faced and clearly said, "Getting a drink, and you? Probably going to smash things and break stuff!?" he did his best impression of the large robot, implying his dislike for him.

"You better start watchin' yaself punk, or I'll-"

"Or you'll what? You may not like me, but open fire on any of your comrades, in here of all places, and you'll be finding yourself in Charr digging up useless rocks."

The big robot grimaced, he snorted and walked away. Rancid, feeling accomplished, walked up to the bar and ordered himself a small refresher. After he finished his drink, he went to his recharging base and started to doze off into standby.

I wonder if I could get away with that recharging trick again...

Blurr

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Data Courier
Alt. mode: Hovercar
Weapons: Electro-Laser
Special Abilities: Due to a design quirk combined with an aerodynamic body frame, Blurr is capable of travelling in both forms at incredibly fast speeds.
Height: 27 ft / 8.1m
Quote: "The faster it is, the better I like it."


STR: 7
INT: 8
DEX: 10
SPD: 10
END: 6
COU: 8
FPR: 7
ACC: 7
MEL: 5
TEC: 7
CHA: 8
RANK: 5

Profile: Blurr is the fastest Autobot in motion and in conversation. He talks non-stop and continuously - if no one tells him to put a sock in it. And he is a superior messenger because he can whisk information from one place to another so fast that he is a blur in motion - hence his name - and almost a blur in giving his report until he's told to slow it down to a thousand words a minute or something somebody can understand. He is rather nervous and high-strung... not unusual for an Autobot who sometimes seems to be part-thoroughbred Cybertronic race horse (if there were such a thing). But he is courageous and loyal and determined to do what's required whether or not it's dangerous.

Abilities: In robot mode, he carries an electro-laser that reverses the polarity of an enemy robot's microcircuits and leaves him motionless. His humanoid mode is built for speed- and he looks longer and leaner than most Autobots. When he's in his vehicular mode, he is a hovercar that routinely breaks the speed of sound and then some, leaving a trailing image as it hurtles across distances.

Weaknesses: The faster Blurr moves, the quicker he drains his energy. As a result, he is prone to losing focus in combat situations.

Sample Post:
Blurr tucked the data chip away for safe keeping as he analyzed the readout on the wall screen. As far as he could determine, he had a couple different routes available to him to make the delivery. The fastest way appeared to be zipping through the badlands, but that would take him uncomfortably close to Decepticon controlled territory.

I.need.to.get.Jazz’s.report.to.Prime.so.he.
can.have.the.information.he.needs.for.this.upcoming.
battle.but.if.I.get.captured.
then.the.report.won’t.make.it.
there.in.time.and.they.may.not.have.time.to.send.
someone.else.and.I.will.be.sitting.in.a.
Decepticon.holding.cell.assuming.
they.even.both.with.a.cell.and-

“Well Blurr are you ready to get going?,” Jazz inquired as he strolled into the room.

“Yes.Jazz.I.am.ready.to.go.always.ready,
ready.to.go.I.am.a.little.worried.about.
passing.so.close.too.the.Decepitcons.
but.that.shouldn’t.be.a.problem.no.
problem.really.I.can.just.dash.past.them,I-”

“That’s excellent Blurr, you should head out now then, I will see you when you return,” Jazz said as he cutoff Blurr’s never-ending torrent of words.

“Ok.Jazz.I’ll.leave.then,I’ll.just.use.the.south.gates.
since.there.open.anyway.I.will.be.back.before.anyone.notices.
I.have.gone,” Blurr exclaimed in a hyper tone of nervousness.

Blurr bolted through the door before Jazz had a chance to respond and made a beeline for the tunnels to the southern gate. As soon as he hit the entrance to the gate he was going to transform and blast through the badlands so fast the Decepticons were going to be seeing his afterimage on their optics for weeks.


(OOC- I wasn’t sure how to express Blurr’s really fast manner of speaking while still keeping it readable, so I used the periods, but I am open to suggestions if you guys have other recommendations. Also does anyone know how to get it to not do that strange thing with the text?)

BlackDiamond wrote:

(OOC- I wasn’t sure how to express Blurr’s really fast manner of speaking while still keeping it readable, so I used the periods, but I am open to suggestions if you guys have other recommendations.)

I did a quick edit to your post to keep it from stretching the page. Probably the best way to do it is with dashes and occasionally hit enter to avoid page stretching. I or another mod will take a look at your application soon.

BlackDiamond wrote:Blurr

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Data Courier
Alt. mode: Hovercar
Weapons: Electro-Laser
Special Abilities: Due to a design quirk combined with an aerodynamic body frame, Blurr is capable of travelling in both forms at incredibly fast speeds.
Height: 27 ft / 8.1m
Quote: "The faster it is, the better I like it."


STR: 7
INT: 8
DEX: 10
SPD: 10
END: 6
COU: 8
FPR: 7
ACC: 7
MEL: 5
TEC: 7
CHA: 8
RANK: 5

Profile: Blurr is the fastest Autobot in motion and in conversation. He talks non-stop and continuously - if no one tells him to put a sock in it. And he is a superior messenger because he can whisk information from one place to another so fast that he is a blur in motion - hence his name - and almost a blur in giving his report until he's told to slow it down to a thousand words a minute or something somebody can understand. He is rather nervous and high-strung... not unusual for an Autobot who sometimes seems to be part-thoroughbred Cybertronic race horse (if there were such a thing). But he is courageous and loyal and determined to do what's required whether or not it's dangerous.

Abilities: In robot mode, he carries an electro-laser that reverses the polarity of an enemy robot's microcircuits and leaves him motionless. His humanoid mode is built for speed- and he looks longer and leaner than most Autobots. When he's in his vehicular mode, he is a hovercar that routinely breaks the speed of sound and then some, leaving a trailing image as it hurtles across distances.

Weaknesses: The faster Blurr moves, the quicker he drains his energy. As a result, he is prone to losing focus in combat situations.

Sample Post:
Blurr tucked the data chip away for safe keeping as he analyzed the readout on the wall screen. As far as he could determine, he had a couple different routes available to him to make the delivery. The fastest way appeared to be zipping through the badlands, but that would take him uncomfortably close to Decepticon controlled territory.

I.need.to.get.Jazz’s.report.to.Prime.so.he.
can.have.the.information.he.needs.for.this.upcoming.
battle.but.if.I.get.captured.
then.the.report.won’t.make.it.
there.in.time.and.they.may.not.have.time.to.send.
someone.else.and.I.will.be.sitting.in.a.
Decepticon.holding.cell.assuming.
they.even.both.with.a.cell.and-

“Well Blurr are you ready to get going?,” Jazz inquired as he strolled into the room.

“Yes.Jazz.I.am.ready.to.go.always.ready,
ready.to.go.I.am.a.little.worried.about.
passing.so.close.too.the.Decepitcons.
but.that.shouldn’t.be.a.problem.no.
problem.really.I.can.just.dash.past.them,I-”

“That’s excellent Blurr, you should head out now then, I will see you when you return,” Jazz said as he cutoff Blurr’s never-ending torrent of words.

“Ok.Jazz.I’ll.leave.then,I’ll.just.use.the.south.gates.
since.there.open.anyway.I.will.be.back.before.anyone.notices.
I.have.gone,” Blurr exclaimed in a hyper tone of nervousness.

Blurr bolted through the door before Jazz had a chance to respond and made a beeline for the tunnels to the southern gate. As soon as he hit the entrance to the gate he was going to transform and blast through the badlands so fast the Decepticons were going to be seeing his afterimage on their optics for weeks.


(OOC- I wasn’t sure how to express Blurr’s really fast manner of speaking while still keeping it readable, so I used the periods, but I am open to suggestions if you guys have other recommendations. Also does anyone know how to get it to not do that strange thing with the text?)

Looks good to me, approved. He is fighting in the battle at Tagan Heights currently. It would help reading the last few pages of that thread to get a picture of what is going on.

And remember Dev's advice when you post speeeches with the swift-talking mech.

Name: Colossus
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Dual Laser Beam rifle and a rocket launcher on his back(Blastwave must bend down to use this)
Special Abilities: None
Height: 25 Feet 7.62 metres
Quote: If we cannot win peacefully, WIN BY FORCE!
STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: Colossus is a loyal soldier. No matter how much he hates a transformer, if they are in charge, Colossus will follow orders. He can fight autobots close-up, with fire-power, or stalk them in the air. he is fearless, and will look in the face of death and spit on it. His main goal is to make sure the Decepticons win. He was unfit to take part in the battle at polyhex, so unknown to Megatron, Starscream had sent him to spy and on other bases and battles. In melee battles, Colossus can punch hard and also can jump up high and crush them under his weight.

Abilities: Colossus can fly at a speed of up to Mach 3,0 and can travel 3000 miles before running out of energy. When he is flying in his jet mode, he uses heat seeking missiles to attack his enemies, in robot mode, Colossus carries dual laser beam rifles that can blast through armour and metal machinery. For his Rocket Launcher, must bend down to get a better angle to fire. His rocket launcher is heat-seeking, so it is safer that he is closer to his target incase another object distracts the missile. In battle, only the strongest of autobots(or other enemies) can withstand nonstop fire from the two rifles(and possible his rocket launcher)at the same time without their armour shattering or breaking.

Weaknesses: As most of his spark powers up his combat and firepower, his armour is relativly weak, and if hit at the moment in the right place. Colossus armour may shatter and needs to be fixed

Sample Post: The forgotten Asteroid (just a asteroid on its own)

Colossus landed on the asteroid, a moon was a pouple kilometres from here, it wouldn't take long to get there. Hopefully there were Autobots on it so Colossus could have fun with them.

As calculated, the moon was in sight. Colossus scanned the place and--"Yes, some autobot drones, i wonder what their doing this far away from Cybertron, aw well!" The drones already scanned a decepticon in the area and open fired on Colossus. He quickly converted to robot mode, there were 10 drones on the moon. Colossus pulled out his dual laser rifles and shot down 2 of them.

Their continuous fire was scarring his chest plate. the drones were huddled together, so a rocket will destroy them all. Bending right down, Colossus fired a rocket and it hit and destroyed the remaining drones. Colossus got bored, converted to jet mode and flew off.

I may finally have one that works.

Name: Aftershock
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Sniper
Alt. mode: Jet
Weapons: Sniper rifle, 3-barreled shotgun.
Height: 32 feet (9.76 M)
Quote: The ground is so below me

STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 2
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: Aftershock likes heights. He can't stand being on the ground. He feels that he is above it. He feels that those who are earthbound are weak and inferior. Since Autobots generally cannot fly, he particularly hates them. When in battle, Aftershock always manages to find a high spot to snipe from. He delights in the chaos that follows an Autobot's realization that he is being sniped at. They usually don't have long to worry. Aftershock fires frequently and rarely misses. However, being shot by Aftershosk usually isn't immediately fatal. More often than not, he shoots an Autobot's legs in an attempt to cripple them before finishing off as many as possible with shots raining from his shotgun.

Abilities: Aftershock has very good aim, and his weapons are very powerful. He has a cloaking device that doesn't render him invisible to the optic, but makes him completely vanish from radar.

Weaknesses: Aftershock is a great soldier when he has his guns, but is helpless without them. He is definitley not the warrior type. his tendancy to not immediately kill his targets allows quite a number of them to escape. Also his personality and function isolate him from his comrades, and so his social/teamwork skills are quite poor.

Sample post.

Aftershock transforms and lands on a hill. He studies his target: an Autobot outpost. He opens his comlink and reports to his commander.

Aftershock-->

Megatron-->

Aftershock-->

Megatron-->

Aftershock-->

Megatron-->

Aftershock raised his sniper rifle and took aim. He knew the plan was stupid and probably wouldn't work, but he knew better than to defy Megatron.

Decepticonrules wrote:Name: Colossus
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Dual Laser Beam rifle and a rocket launcher on his back(Blastwave must bend down to use this)
Special Abilities: None
Height: 25 Feet 7.62 metres
Quote: If we cannot win peacefully, WIN BY FORCE!
STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: Colossus is a loyal soldier. No matter how much he hates a transformer, if they are in charge, Colossus will follow orders. He can fight autobots close-up, with fire-power, or stalk them in the air. he is fearless, and will look in the face of death and spit on it. His main goal is to make sure the Decepticons win. He was unfit to take part in the battle at polyhex, so unknown to Megatron, Starscream had sent him to spy and on other bases and battles. In melee battles, Colossus can punch hard and also can jump up high and crush them under his weight.

Abilities: Colossus can fly at a speed of up to Mach 3,0 and can travel 3000 miles before running out of energy. When he is flying in his jet mode, he uses heat seeking missiles to attack his enemies, in robot mode, Colossus carries dual laser beam rifles that can blast through armour and metal machinery. For his Rocket Launcher, must bend down to get a better angle to fire. His rocket launcher is heat-seeking, so it is safer that he is closer to his target incase another object distracts the missile. In battle, only the strongest of autobots(or other enemies) can withstand nonstop fire from the two rifles(and possible his rocket launcher)at the same time without their armour shattering or breaking.

Weaknesses: As most of his spark powers up his combat and firepower, his armour is relativly weak, and if hit at the moment in the right place. Colossus armour may shatter and needs to be fixed

Sample Post: The forgotten Asteroid (just a asteroid on its own)

Colossus landed on the asteroid, a moon was a pouple kilometres from here, it wouldn't take long to get there. Hopefully there were Autobots on it so Colossus could have fun with them.

As calculated, the moon was in sight. Colossus scanned the place and--"Yes, some autobot drones, i wonder what their doing this far away from Cybertron, aw well!" The drones already scanned a decepticon in the area and open fired on Colossus. He quickly converted to robot mode, there were 10 drones on the moon. Colossus pulled out his dual laser rifles and shot down 2 of them.

Their continuous fire was scarring his chest plate. the drones were huddled together, so a rocket will destroy them all. Bending right down, Colossus fired a rocket and it hit and destroyed the remaining drones. Colossus got bored, converted to jet mode and flew off.

1. He uses 72 stat points rather than the 70 that fanmade characters are allowed. So two points have to be taken off from somewhere. As well, only one stat of 9 is allowed, so either Speed or Firepower needs to be changed.

2. The bits about Starscream and Megatron need to be removed from his Profile section. Also, Courage 7 is above-average, but not exactly fearless...you may want to edit that bit in the Profile, too.

3. The name Colossus is actually the name of a canon character, so that needs to be changed, too.

Other than these three minor things that need to be changed, doesn't look bad. Change the stuff, repost the app, and should be good to go.

Nassuman wrote:Rancid
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Assassin, and unofficial bargaining device
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Motorcycle (Cyb. Ransack)
Weapons: 2x Small Energy blades,and a standard issue energy rifle.
Special Abilities: Low fuel consumption(-5)
Height: 30ft- 9.1 meters
Quote:"It's not that I'm afraid of dying, it's just that I really want to live."

STRENGTH:6
INTELLIGENCE:8
DEXTERITY:9
SPEED:6
ENDURANCE:4
COURAGE:4
FIREPOWER:4
ACCURACY:8
MELEE:8
TECH SKILL:8
CHARISMA:3
RANK:

Profile:
Lazy, unspirited, and downright unpleasant. Rancid has built a reputation as one of the most hated individuals in the Decepticon ranks. Most of his comrades would rather sell him to a Quintesson for use as a slave than work with him. He fights with a sharp blade and an even sharper tongue, insulting not only his opponents but his allies as well. When not serving the Decepticon army , he well... does nothing at all. Known to spend entire cycles just wandering aimlessly or staring into space daydreaming. He never liked the war, and voices his feelings often about it. He dreams of an easy life, simply cruising around with any direction. The only reason he's is even in the Decepticons is the promise of freedom that the Autobots deny him, and the only reason the Decepticons keep him around is for the massive ammount of information he holds, many of which could ruin the entire Decepticon agenda. He loves to be a jerk and get into arguments with the dumber of the species, it's one of the few times he actually puts forth an effort.

Abilities:
Rancid is quick, skillful, and deadly. With an almost unlimited knowledge of Cybertronian martial arts, he can devise the best way to dispose of a foe in mere nanoseconds. When in his alt. mode, he can reach speeds of 199mph, leaving most of his allies left behind eating his dust particles. One of his greatest weaknesses is also his greatest, he is completely mellow and stays calm (if not completely oblivious) in even the most nerve-racking situations. He can also move very silently in both alt. modes, allowing stealth kills, but these usually take to much effort and are used only when his plating is in jepoardy.

Weaknesses:
He is lazy,simple as that, he has hardly any redeeming social skills that benefit the team. His inability to give any kind of effort in a job is quite possibly his greatest weakness. His defiant behavior causes many problems not only for himself, but for his teammates. His known physical weaknesses are the usual for smaller transformers like himself, including weak armor and light weaponry.

Sample Post:

Decepticon Barracks

Rancid lay on the top of the barracks staring into space, his mind wandering off into the depths of the cosmos.

What a stupid place this is, metal everywhere, you can always hear some battle going on three hundred miles away, man I gotta get outta here...

He closed his optics and let out the robotic equivalent to a yawn. He get up and walked inside and headed for the Energon cantine. The usuals were there, old burnt out models still holding onto the Decepticon cause even though they were useless and probably going to become smelted for the next "genius" idea Megatron came up with, the energy addicts, and his favorite specimen, the Class A Retardicon.

The collective idiotic being that was this special brand of Decepticon wrecking crew knew Rancid well. He constantly caused problems for them, usually by burning up their limited logic sensors or redirecting their energy rechargers into an exhaust system, rendering them useless for multiple cycles.

The largest and dumbest one of them walked up to him and smiled.

"What're you doin' here runt?" he sneered

Rancid wore the usual indifferent expression on his faced and clearly said, "Getting a drink, and you? Probably going to smash things and break stuff!?" he did his best impression of the large robot, implying his dislike for him.

"You better start watchin' yaself punk, or I'll-"

"Or you'll what? You may not like me, but open fire on any of your comrades, in here of all places, and you'll be finding yourself in Charr digging up useless rocks."

The big robot grimaced, he snorted and walked away. Rancid, feeling accomplished, walked up to the bar and ordered himself a small refresher. After he finished his drink, he went to his recharging base and started to doze off into standby.

I wonder if I could get away with that recharging trick again...

1. He uses 3 too many points, if my math is correct. 70 is the maximum, including special abilities.

2. "almost unlimited knowledge of martial arts" is a pretty big claim for someone with Melee 8. Melee 8 is very, very good...but that claim's a bit much. More like he's an expert combatant with a lot of knowledge than "almost unlimited knowledge."

3. "Assassin" is enough of a function. The bit about "unofficial bargaining device" needn't be there.

4. Also, what is meant by "massive ammount of information he holds, many of which could ruin the entire Decepticon agenda?" That needs some explanation.

An interesting character with quite a good sample RP...but some work to be done, as well.