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Dark_Lord_Prime wrote:Ok, I changed page two slightly: the first "crying" panel just shows tears welling in the corners or her eyes, and I redid the other one with lighter tear tracks.

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That looks much better DLP...it looks way better!

Great job!

MetalSamamon wrote:

Dark_Lord_Prime wrote:Ok, I changed page two slightly: the first "crying" panel just shows tears welling in the corners or her eyes, and I redid the other one with lighter tear tracks.

(scroll up to see the page)

That looks much better DLP...it looks way better!

Great job!

I'm working on page 3 now, and it's gonna take me longer than the others, simply because of all the extra detail of Dinobot's hat and cloak. I just finished the first panel (except for some falling leaves I missed), and I think it looks pretty good so far.

After a lengthy delay (problems at work, I was sick, and I got distracted by my Leobreaker project), may I present page 3:

I like it...I think you did an excellent job with the thickness of the lines; especially with her tear tracks

Good job!

BTW, good to see that you didn't forget about this !

Hey, Shin!

What's happening with this project? Did it die? Just on hiatus?

It's not dead, just on a big hiatus for now.