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1: a Steampunk show that mainly would be about a group keeping the world (mostly) stable and making sure that no superpower exists for too long
2: a Cyberpunk show revolving around a burned-out SWAT trooper and a mechanical dancer
3: a space opera-esque show that doesn't use the cliches of the genre and is more of a growing up story for a 'next generation' of sentient species (may be tied into the cyberpunk show somewhat)

I have three characters figured out for the cyberpunk show, but I'm not sure if I want to write the other two just yet.

Are you, by any chance, a punk?

Blast Cannon wrote:Are you, by any chance, a punk?

I'm not sure, I'd have to check the various definitions to see if I fit any. I want some critique on the ideas, and the space opera would be more of when the old races leave, it is because they are proud of the younger ones, rather than something like the Vorlon/Shadow war in B5.

In all honesty, I haven't got a clue what the heck you're talking about. Your ideas are very vague at best and you seem to assume that posters would automatically understand the general context of your ideas.

Why don't you send what you have put down here on to a TV executive?

Blast Cannon wrote:In all honesty, I haven't got a clue what the heck you're talking about. Your ideas are very vague at best and you seem to assume that posters would automatically understand the general context of your ideas.

Why don't you send what you have put down here on to a TV executive?

Because I'm still minor. But better to have a chance with a variety of ideas rather than just one or two.

Here is what I've written of the cyberpunk story's characters:

Male, 25, Mechanist/Slight Technopath
Wears a faded Ocean-hue, green and purple tux
Must play Real-Time-Strategies to stay sane
He was part of a secret experiment to create agents capable of using the net to track down those who wanted to usurp the govt. But after a few of them went insane due to having the net as a second vision. ______ was one of the few that didn't lose his mind, but only because he was already addicted to real time strategies. He is slowly getting his mind back, but now he spends far too much of his time aimlessly wandering streets and testing games, just to make ends meet.

Female, 26, Administrator/'Gearbody'
Wears body armor, has one mechanical arm, and three others welded into her spine
Is scatterbrained but a brilliant planner
She is simply an ordinary citizen who has mechanical limbs so she can multitask better. She met _______ after he crashed at the building she worked in. Whatever he told her he saw, it fragmented her mind, but didn't actively harm her. Now, their minds are linked, as while hers is fragmented, his is slowly recovering due to just being there. They have hope for the future, despite being blacklisted on both their jobs due to 'illegal' experiments.

Machine, 2(Looks 25), Dancer/Actor
Fembot Build, lacking full sheet metal plating on its (her?) head/arms/legs
Colored Banana Yellow and Pea Green
Hates its/her fans
Dancer #3066 was an attempt to build a full android, and this succeeded. However, her personality modules are still unstable, leading her to have two personalities, one arrogant and egotistical, and the other soft and panicky. She currently is searching for a name when not acting or having to work in clubs. Some of the higher powers at the corporation that created her have considered her a prototype for a line of female androids