Duke of Luns wrote:Also, this is how comics in general used to be written I believe, or pretty close to it, with the writer giving a brief overview of what he would like on a page, and then putting dialog in once he saw the finished page.
christron101 wrote:Small problem First Gen, my Email appears to have stopped working so I can't send you my Email address yet so I could be some time as I didn't set my Email up and I won't see the person who did until Saturday.
Jeysie wrote:Whoo, congrats, Duke!
Any chance of getting to see the other stories too, in text format, maybe?
First Gen wrote:Yes. I can do one with your script if you like. I can either send it to you or post it. Your choice.
Jeysie wrote:Heh, cool. I have to admit that if this was the final artwork I probably would have written the third and sixth panels a bit differently, but otherwise it still works.
Also, you did a bit of editing, hmm. (Mostly to avoid using bolded type, it looks like.) The sixth and last panels should really just be regular questions, then, not exclamation ones. :>
First Gen wrote:Yeah, without text boxes I couldnt fit the whole script in. I dont have the ability to do that, no program, but if you do, I can send you the textless version and you can plug in text boxes to make it look better.
First Gen wrote:I changed the last two panels slightly to more fit Dukes script. Plus it took awhile to draw as I took my time to make it look better than my first attempt.
Jeysie wrote:First Gen wrote:Yeah, without text boxes I couldnt fit the whole script in. I dont have the ability to do that, no program, but if you do, I can send you the textless version and you can plug in text boxes to make it look better.
Sure, I could give it a go (or, more likely, try to bribe someone else to do it for me XD ), but other than that quibble the editing's fine enough.First Gen wrote:I changed the last two panels slightly to more fit Dukes script. Plus it took awhile to draw as I took my time to make it look better than my first attempt.
Ahh. Well, I do like the new art for the most part (I admit I liked your Ariel in the first one a little better). Just instinctively thinking about it from a writer's perspective. :>
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