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Autobot N wrote:I think the better question is how the police guy keeps getting everyone's weapons.

Will be explained soon enough.

Trying to finish up this storyline. Sorry about the long delay.

Autobot N wrote:

Drapstrip wrote:Are you ???

That part cracked me up

Here's a reminder to everyone reading to check out Madeus Prime's photocomic which this one is based on!

Madeus: Shockwave?! Why don't I have lightsabers?!

Shockwave: ...*sigh* You do.

Madeus: Ooo cool! Mace Windu color!

Bay: And yet you make fun of my light red coloring?

Glad to see that you are having as much fun as I am having! Welcome to the thread btw. (Also, purple and pink are awesome colors. Starscream is just the type that thinks otherwise. )

*Heads Up*

Chapter One will be ending soon. I have officially added a table of contents to my first post in this photo-comic for when the next chapter starts!

Chapter one will be ending on a pretty; well, interesting note. I am excited about filming it! There are a whole lot of plot points I have planned which will keep the story as 3-dimensional as I can make it.

Unlike I originally planned it, this story will be slightly more like a continual story rather than an episodic type thing with different challenges in each arc that have nothing to do with the last one. It'll be a bit more like each chapter is an episode, and then later down the line a new season may start after a cliffhanger in the previous episode that forces some huge changes. Hope y'all are ready for a bumpy ride!

Chapter Two will be coming soon...

Ouch. That looks really painful. Better get a Ratchet or First Aid.

Decepticon Stryker wrote:Ouch. That looks really painful. Better get a Ratchet or First Aid.

I have thought of that... I wish there was an easier-to-get Ratchet on the market right now.

Besides, it's burnt plastic. Something that can't be fixed normally without replacement parts.

SillySpringer wrote:

Decepticon Stryker wrote:Ouch. That looks really painful. Better get a Ratchet or First Aid.

I have thought of that... I wish there was an easier-to-get Ratchet on the market right now.

Besides, it's burnt plastic. Something that can't be fixed normally without replacement parts.

White Sharpie?

Decepticon Stryker wrote:

SillySpringer wrote:

Decepticon Stryker wrote:Ouch. That looks really painful. Better get a Ratchet or First Aid.

I have thought of that... I wish there was an easier-to-get Ratchet on the market right now.

Besides, it's burnt plastic. Something that can't be fixed normally without replacement parts.

White Sharpie?

Lol... no. }:3

EPICE EPICE! EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE

IDW personalities:

#1. Surreal, psychedelic, and strange visuals accompanied with writing that may sound like gibberish to most people, but is meant to be deep. Many things here are also mean-spirited seemingly. (LSotW)

#2. Heart-felt and personal-level writing accompanied with sometimes dark visuals to convey an agony felt in the characters involved, or sometimes brighter visuals with only a slight hint of color to give the impression that there are still good moments in times of fear. (MTMTE)

#3. Larger visuals with more of a night-time mood that give more of a systematic and war-like feeling and centers more on many characters rather than just a few characters, and talks more politically rather than emotionally. (Dark Cybertron/Combiner Wars/Titans Return)

#4. More bright, cheery, and colorful visuals that appeal more to those humorous types, children, and ones looking for cartoony moments. (RiD)

All IDW agents have one or more of these personality traits.

Oh, God. The Madeus Primes are multiplying.

In all seriousness, this comic is looking alright. In the beginning, I thought this was already doing nicely from a comedic perspective by making the objective of the characters to want to go outside. That would've been hilarious having them out on the street getting run over by cars and just getting their asses handed to them by the hustle of human life. Alas, I soon found that this was instead going the "traditional" route of having some bad guy come and cause trouble for the good guys, with the ridiculous set-up trying to take itself seriously, so I sat back and waited for the formula to play out. I found the Dolphin keeping moods high as he reminds me of Gir from Invader Zim. Anyways, I initially found all the IDW agent stuff pretty cookie-cutter and standard for photocomics around here, until the last update..........wh...what's this?!

Ch......ch........CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT?!




In summation, now that I see that this Revive Prime character is actually going to be taken seriously, I'm excited for the next chapter. At this point, my only criticism is that since you're still early into your comic, you should give the other characters more personality before it's too late. Springer, "Beetle", Dragstrip, and the Retarded Policeman are about as distinctive as cardboard slabs smeared with dog feces. I'm not a fan of the name "Revive Prime" either, but that's not going to change, so let it be. Otherwise, keep it up!

Oh don't worry. The next chapter will have probably way too much character development.

Is that Kreo guy Vortex or Soundwave? Or is it a new character? I'm looking forward to this.

First-Aid.

I have decided on a name for chapter two: When All Goes South.