The Energon Pub

Well, here is the synopsis. To avoid continuity problem, i decided to reboot everything:

Cybertron. 350 Year ago...

The War between the Autobot and the Decepticon as raged for too many years. The war was so big that it as spread around the galaxy, destroying countless world. Many Cybertronian Colony where enslaved by the power-hungry Decepticon. But it has not alway been that way...

Once proud warrior, now murderer, the Decepticon are a Warrior caste of Cybertronian. They where once the first, and last, line of defense of Cybertron. They where respected all across the planet. The Autobot where the scientist, tactician and merchant of Cybertron. They where not built for Combat. This is why the Decepticon where made for. To protect Cybertron.

But this harmony was broken, when a young and idealistic soldier, named Megatron, rised to power. In no time, Megatron became a powerfull general. Most of his campaign where succesfull. He never saw defeat. Soon, he became corrupted and tried to assasinate the elder members of the Cybertronian High Council. Many beleived he was a fool, blinded by power. The older Decepticon saw him as a treath, but the newest generation saw him as the greatest leader to ever walk Cybertron.

War raged across Cybertron, as the Autobot and the Decepticon clashed for control of the Planet. To make thing worst, there where rumor that some of the High Council members where traitor. Desperated, the Autobot turned to the newest Prime. Optimus Prime. Once a close friend of Megatron. If someone could end this war, it would be him...

First part will be finished soon...
http://skritz.bravejournal.com/

Looks good so far.
Is the war only going to be featured only on Cybertron, or is it going to Earth as well?

PaskyTheLad wrote:Looks good so far.
Is the war only going to be featured only on Cybertron, or is it going to Earth as well?

The early part will be on Cybertron. Eventually, it will be on earth.

Just so you know, this is just the intro. The first "Episode" will be soon finished.

Here is an early Megatron Pic. I decided to use different design then G1. You won't notice it much in the caracter decription, but i still think its worth mentionning.
I used a Clone War-esque style.

The first Chapter is finished. Its an introduction to some caracter, moslty decepticon. I decided to use the Movie Toyline caracter "Wreckage" because it thought he was cool. Don't bash me for using a caracter not inspired by G1. And dont bash me because the autobot don't get much spotlight.

I find it original to give the 'Con some dialogue. Something the new movie lack...a lot!
Be warned, its much darker then G1. Also, this is my frist fan-fic EVEr and im still having problem writing in english. If there are part that aren't written well....tell me and i will fix it.


Chapter 1
The room was dark. Normal, since it was a prison cell. These room where used by Decepticon to contain Autobot prisoner. Ironhide coulnd even remember for how much cycle he was in there. Or was it a Mega-Cycle. Disarmed and imprisoned in a force field, there was nothing he could do. He just had to wait. or maybe the Decepticon had forgotten his existence. Maybe they wanted him to starve. He was, after all, low on energy and the Decepticon had left im in that cell whit no Energon.

Suddenly, the door opnened. Because of his damaged optics, Ironhide saw only a blurred shape. "Megatron want to see you." said the shape. It voice was cold, metallic and devoid of any emotion. "You have One Cycle to comply". "Yeah...im' coming you stincking Decepticon! But i case ya dont know...im almost blind!" claimed Ironhide. "Wreckage, take the prisoner to Megatron" said the mechanical voice. "Yes Soundwave!" said another voice.

Ironhide was picked by Wreckage, one of Megatron soldier. He was taken to a large, but dark, room. At center stood a throne. Sitting on it was a massize shape. He turned his red yes toward Ironhide and spoke. "So, this is the prisoner" said Megatron, whit a deep and evil voice. "I was expecting a great warrior...not a damaged peice of junk! Wreckage! I told you not to damage him too much...". Wreckage turned toward megatron and said "But..." Megatron standed-up and walked toward Wreckage "BUT WHAT? TELL ME WHAT YOU WHERE ABOUT TO SAY!!!" screamed Megatron. "I am just saying he resisted." said Wreckage. "Did you beleived he would be standing still? This Autobot as fought more battle then any of you!" said the Decepticon leader.

He turned around and looked at Ironhide. "Sorry for this...interruption...can we begin our interrogation?" said Megatron. Ironhide raised is head and looked Megatron in the eyes. "I won't say anything! I will never talk!!!". Megatron looked at Ironhide for a moment and said "I knew you wouldn'd talk, so i have found a way to make you speak..."
He pressed a button on the wall and a small machine appeared. It looked like a large gun. Soundwave took the machine and walked toward Ironhide. Megatron turned is head toward Soundwave. "Do it" said megatron. Soundwave pressed the machine on Ironhide chest and said "Spark Extraction in 5...4..3..2.."

"NO! NO! NO!" screamed Ironhide. Beign tortured is something, but having his Spark Removed was too much.On Cybertron, it was one of the ultimate crime. "Don't do it...i will say everything." claimed Ironhide. In fact, what he was about to tell where lie, but Megatron wasn't aware of that! Ironhide had already seen what a Spark Extractor looked like and he knew this was a fake one.

Suddenly, an explosion made the Decepticon base shake. "Autobot Detected." said Soundwave. "What? I thought we had sentry posted around the base!" screamed Megatron. "Soundwave to Starscream. Soundwave to Starscream. Reply Starscream" said Soundwave in the communicator. "Laserbeak Eject! Operation detection. Target: Starscream". As soon as Soundwave said those word, a mechanical piece ejected from is chest and transformed into an ovoid jet-creature which took-off and flew through the base many rooms. "Guard the prisoner! I am going to pay a visit to our autobot friends..." said Megatron, looking at Wreckage. He runned toward a launching bay, opened the door, jumped from the tower and transformed in mid-air into a large Cybertronian Jet.

To be continued....

I wonder what Ironhide is doing in there...

PaskyTheLad wrote:I wonder what Ironhide is doing in there...

He was captured by .Con. Thrust me, this is gonna be explained. Waht I am wondering is if i did Soundwave ok. is he well-portrayed or should make him even "colder".

I would appreciate some comment...

I think Soundwave is ok

PaskyTheLad wrote:I think Soundwave is ok

I thought he was not Soundwave-ish enough. Im working on part 2 right now.