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Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

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Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Richter » Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:02 pm

The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:
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POEM

Story and Art by:
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Colors by:
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Letters by:
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Quaternion » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:53 pm

Weapon: Dual Impact Maces
nice mosaics

Poem: That is dark. I'd like to see a 'Dan's Revenge' follow up after Daniel has grown up and spent the last 10 misdirected, self destructive, years training to kill ravage. Give him lots of emotional problems and an make him an alcoholic.

Overwatch: Yay! More Red Alert please! Paranoid as ever.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby zenosaurus_x » Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:27 pm

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NOOO, SOUNDWAAAVE!!!!
*Ahem*
Well, that was...strange, and kinda sad I suppose, maybe I read it too fast to get into the "meaning."
On a side note, why does everyone supposedly hate Daniel?
I don't know anything about him so...
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Hairball178 » Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:34 pm

I thought it was from Ravage's P.o.v. until I got to the end. Either I'm dumb or that was a great plot twist...either way, very good Mosaic.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Skullgrin140 » Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:43 pm

Very dark and very well written. Excellent work.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby NebulanFree » Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:56 pm

Heh. Mervin.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Duke of Luns » Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:43 pm

zenosaurus_x wrote:NOOO, SOUNDWAAAVE!!!!
*Ahem*
Well, that was...strange, and kinda sad I suppose, maybe I read it too fast to get into the "meaning."
On a side note, why does everyone supposedly hate Daniel?
I don't know anything about him so...


I don't think the writer "hates" Daniel, he was mainly writing to express how we should always appreciate what he have, because a human body is very fragile, and can be broken at any moment. Or at least he said something to that extent on Deviantart.

I for one thought it was a very well written Mosaic, and quite moving, due to the twist. I really enjoy Mosaic's that feature stories we wouldn't see in a normal Transformers comic, for one reason or another.

Also, everyone hates Daniel? I don't, as the first "real" Mosaic I wrote was about him: http://duke-of-luns.deviantart.com/#/d1z189g Of course, it didn't get "published" until a few months ago due to several factors, but hey :D .
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Just Negare » Mon Jun 21, 2010 9:19 pm

Motto: "Who ate all the pies?"
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Aww. Poor Ravage.
Something memorable here.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby GEEWUN » Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:02 am

Motto: ""I'm not Psychotic... just Crazy!!!""
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ummmm... okaaay.... :CON:
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby zenosaurus_x » Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:08 am

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Duke of Luns wrote:
zenosaurus_x wrote:NOOO, SOUNDWAAAVE!!!!
*Ahem*
Well, that was...strange, and kinda sad I suppose, maybe I read it too fast to get into the "meaning."
On a side note, why does everyone supposedly hate Daniel?
I don't know anything about him so...


I don't think the writer "hates" Daniel, he was mainly writing to express how we should always appreciate what he have, because a human body is very fragile, and can be broken at any moment. Or at least he said something to that extent on Deviantart.

I for one thought it was a very well written Mosaic, and quite moving, due to the twist. I really enjoy Mosaic's that feature stories we wouldn't see in a normal Transformers comic, for one reason or another.

Also, everyone hates Daniel? I don't, as the first "real" Mosaic I wrote was about him: http://duke-of-luns.deviantart.com/#/d1z189g Of course, it didn't get "published" until a few months ago due to several factors, but hey :D .



Oh no, I didn't mean the writer hated Daniel, but I saw something on the TFwiki that said "It's his fault Daniel didn't die sooner" or something like that, which made me think people in general didn't like him. That's what I was wondering about.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby 80sgeek » Tue Jun 22, 2010 2:16 pm

... wow. Very grim "happy fathers day" Mosaic. As a guy who lost his father at a young age, that was a little too much. If it wasn't a fathers day one, it might not have been so harsh. This should have been an appreciation of Spike & Daniel, not a little boy crying at a funeral.

Enough emotional harping, back to TF criticism. Someone needs to do their research. The battle where Soundwave was "killed" took place during Headmasters in 2011, at Autobot City. He and Blaster (missing here) destroyed each other and both were later reformatted. Also, if it was 2010 like the tombstone said, Bee would have been Goldbug. He was reformatted during Rebirth, which would have been between '06-'09. And the only continuity that that had Spike's existence being terminated was in Marvel's G2 comic.
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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Poem"

Postby Zombie Starscream » Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:05 am

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Wow, that was good. And I liked the twist ;)
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