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TRANSFORMERS:
RISE OF UNICRON.

*Logo transforms into a planet which disintegrates, camera moves to right showing another planet that has horns.*

*camera zooms out for five seconds and shows cybertron*

Optimus: This is my story, I, Optimus prime, and my brother, Megatron, ruled this planet called cybertron together,
until Megatrons desire for power grew too strong, and he desired the all-spark, the source of life for the transformers,
I rose to the challenge of defeating my once friend, I gathered forces to create the Autobots, to fight against Megatrons better trained army, the Decepticons. we fought valiently against them, but we had almost lost, there was only one option,
we jettesonned the all-spark into space. we finally found the all-spark,*Zooms out until you can see earth* but it was too late, we had to fight the decepticons,
we won. however, at the price of one of our warriors. its been about 6 years, and a new threat was already arising.

*zooms into earth*

???: do you read me Barricade?

Barricade: you're alive commander Starscream?

Starscream: yes, of course I am, by the way, you're alive?

Barricade: so whats your bright idea?

Starscream: see if you can get a signal to Scorponok, and call me LORD Starscream, I'm the leader now, Starscream out.

Barricade: Scorponok, do you read? shreik if you hear me.

Scorponok: EEEEK!

Barricade: good, go to the area I've marked.

Scorponok: EEEEEK!

*later*

Scorponok: EEEEEK

*Barricade drives in and converts to robot mode*

Starscream: good, you're all here, wait a minute, You can't be Scorponok, he's already here!

Scorponok: EEEK!?

*another Scorponok crawls out of the shadows.*

Starscream: Hmm. two Scorponoks, interesting.

Barricade: why are we here?

Starscream: I have an idea on how to conquer the galaxy.

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did you like it?

I really like it so far. and welcome to the realm

I'm glad somebody liked it, any way, here's chapter 2

*in the autobots secret base*

Optimus: yes, I understand.

Sam: Thanks, Optimus.

Optimus: anytime, old friend.

*the next day*

Dan: Daddy.

Sam: (yawn) what?

Dan: You promised you'd give me my present.

Sam: Yeah, yeah, let's eat breakfast and I'll show you.

*later*

Sam: 'kay Dan, come with me to the garage.

Dan: Wow, must be big.

*Sam and Dan walk in the garage*

Sam: son, stand here.

*Sam pulls a lever and the floor starts lowering*

(thump)

Sam: come on.

*Sam and Dan walk through a door.*

*Optimus walks over to Dan*

Dan: Daddy, two questions, what's this place doing under your garage, and is that robot my present?

Sam: no, your present is getting to meet the Autobots.

Dan: Oh, Hello mister robot.

Optimus: I am Optimus Prime, and these are the Autobots,

Ratchet: I'm Ratchet, I'm the medic.

Dan: what's a medic?

Ratchet: I believe the word someone of your age would call it is a docter.

Dan: Okay, who's the scary black one?

Ironhide: I'm Ironhide.

Dan: your guns are scary, can you put them away?

Ironhide: uuuuuh, no.

Dan: why not?

Ironhide: The're attached to my arms, I can't.

Dan: okay then.

*Bumblebee walks up to Dan*

Dan: Who's he?

Optimus: that's Bumblebee, he could talk once before the all-spark wars, then it was damaged, then it was repaired, and now, it's completely and utterly destroyed because Ironhide accidentily put bombs in the refridgerator.

*Optimus looks at Ironhide*

Dan: Oh.

Optimus: and you have seen him before,

Dan: I have?

*Bumblebee converts to car*

Dan: that's Daddys car.

Optimus(Jumping and grabbing Sam and Dan): LOOK OUT!

Scorponok: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!

*Bumblebee converts to robot and grabs Sam and Dan*

Optimus: Bumblebee, get them to safety! ugh!

*outside*

Barricade: hello,Bumblebee.

Radio: WHADIAWANT?WHADIAWANT?WHADIAWANT?(Guitar solo)

Barricade: Lord Starscream wants the Matrix Of Leadership

*Bumblebee puts Sam and Dan down, and jumps towards Barricade, Barricade dodges, Barricade tackles Bumblebee,
Bumblebee Backflips onto Barricades back and smacks 'im one, Barricade jumps and dives head first into the concrete, Bumblebee jumps off of Barricade and keeps his head facing concrete until the last second, Bumblebee lands on the ground, Barricades head is stuck in the concrete*

Barricade:MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF!

*meanwhile*

*Optimus cuts Scorponoks right legs off, Scoponoks legs grow back and the separate legs grow the rest of the body creating more Scorponoks*

Optimus: Ironhide, I need assistance!

Ironhide: I have my hands full at the moment, sorry Optimus.

(CRASH)

(BOOM)

(BANG)

*three transformers run into the base and start shooting the Swarm*

Ratchet (Smashing a Scorponoks head): Arcee, Hotrod, Sideways! you're just in time!

Hotrod: Yeah, I'm here with Arcee and Sideways. Sideways?

Arcee: he's over there, shooting scorpions.

*later*

Sam: Guys, what happened here? Who are they?

Arcee: I'm Arcee, these guys are Hotrod and Sideways

Ironhide: Well you sure helped out a lot, Right Optimus? Optimus?

*Shows Autobot symbol, Autobot symbol converts to Decepticon symbol*

Optimus: I'll never give you the matrix!

Starscream: (sinister chuckle) perhaps you won't give me the matrix,

*a ball of black liquid comes out of Optimus, Ball takes shape of Optimus*

Starscream: But he will, meet NEMESIS PRIME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

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tell me how I'm doing.

Thats is sooooo cool man only one thing to say it aint bad, but wat i would have like to seen...

Starscream: But he will, meet his NEMESIS PRIME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Nemesis Hacker wrote:Thats is sooooo cool man only one thing to say it aint bad, but wat i would have like to seen...

Starscream: But he will, meet his NEMESIS PRIME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Haven't you heard of Nemesis Prime anywhere?

yeh i know who nemesis prime is, it just makes it sound like ur saying 'meet his nemesis' and saying 'meet nemesis prime'it sounds good when i say it at least lol prob dosent look/sound rite written sorry

That has to be the coolest thing I have ever read. EVER!!!!

here is the next chapter.

Starscream: by courtesy of Nemesis, we have the matrix, and the only one fragment of Megatron, we will now execute phase 2 of th- *Nemesis grabs Starscream by neck* urk!

Nemesis: I should do the planning, don't you think so?

*Nemesis throws Starscream into the wall*

Nemesis: as he was saying, phase two:these are your new allies, Astrotrain and Blackarachnia.

*2 transformers enter room*

*a Scorponok and Blackarachnia cuddle with each other*

Nemesis: Set a course for Cybertron, Astrotrain.

*Decepticons walk into the ship.*
(BOOM)

*door falls over*

Optimus: you aren't going anywhere, Nemesis.

*Optimus jumps at Nemesis, Nemesis grabs Optimus*

Nemesis:Quite the contrary, Prime.

*Nemesis throws Optimus into wall, Nemesis walks into Astrotrain*

Optimus: this... can't... be...happening.

*Optimus blacks out, Astrotrain converts to starship, Astrotrain takes off*

*later*

Hotrod: OPTIMUS!

*Ratchet examines Optimus*

Ratchet: He'll be alright, he's taken a beating though.

*an hour earlier*

Mikaela: all done, here's your ship.

Hotrod: hope it works.

Arcee: better not complain Hotrod.

Hotrod: I mean she never built a ship before!

Arcee: so?

Hotrod: I almost guarantee the ship's gonna break down as soon as we leave the atmosphere!

*a transformer runs in the room incredibly fast*

Blurr: HellomynameisBlurrIwannagowithyoubacktaCybertroncanIcanIcanI?

Autobots: ...

Blurr: okaythanksthanksthanks!

*Blurr runs in ship*

Hotrod: ...well that was weird!

*Present, Planet Cybertron*

*Astrotrain lands on Cybertron*

Starscream: hehehehe, He never expected that I'd do this.

*Nemesis opens the closet*

Nemesis: yes I would.

Starscream: oh, well um, I thought I'd er... tag along?

Nemesis: I really don't want to kick you out but we need room for the Insecticons.

Starscream: WHAT!?

*Nemesis throws Starscream outside Astrotrain*

Starscream: how rude.

Sideways: I should say the same thing about you, Decepticon, however, I need you.

Starscream: how so, Autobot?

Sideways: call me Sideways...

*Sideways' Faction symbol changes from Autobot to Decepticon*

Sideways: I'm on your side, lord Starscream.

*Sideways bows*

Starscream: you would betray your dear priceless Autobots?

Sideways: I was never on their side, I was looking for the chosen one, YOU, my master.

Starscream: chosen one?

Sideways: The one to become one with Cybertron, to become ruler of the galaxy, TO BECOME UNICRON!

Starscream: Unicron eh? I like the sound of that, I accept, my subject, how do I do it?

Sideways: come with me, I'll show you.
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ooooh, Sideways is a traitor, but of course you knew that.

see ya!

This is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice work i can c the old movie comming out in a new way with some 07 spins on it nice work im thinking about creating my own tf short story since i cant draw but i love to write

This is funny, I never expected anyone liking it as much as they do, thanks for your support, I promise I'll post up the next chapter next time I post.

here's the last chapter, as promised.

*Sideways hands Starscream a golden orb with horns*

Starscream: What the Primus is this?

Sideways: The map, my master.

Starscream: The map? How on Cybertron am I suppost to use it?

*orb starts to shine north*

Sideways: Follow the light to find your destiny.

Starscream: Follow the light.

*Later*

*Starscream walks onto a pedestal, Orb stops shining*

Starscream: Now what?

Sideways: I will now recite the poem that shall awaken Unicron.

Starscream: Which is?

Sideways: Follow the light to find your destiny,'tis what the tablet says, the chosen one to become Unicron to rule with an iron fist!

*Two horn-like pillars rise out of the ground, laser shot knocks Starscream of the pedestal*

Sideways: Who dares to delay my masters destiny?!

Nemesis: I do.

Sideways: You will not have the power for yourself, it belongs to my master!

Optimus: Stop quarreling over power that won't be used, Nemesis.

Nemesis: Prime!

*Optimus attacks Nemesis with sword, Nemesis blocks with his own sword, Optimus stabs, Nemesis dodges and counter attacks*

Nemesis: I know every trick in your book Prime, I can counter all of your old manuevers!

Optimus: Luckily, I invented new ones.

*Optimus jumps 100 feet up and uses a down thrust attack*

Starscream: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAAAA! You're too late, Prime!

*Starscream disapears*

Optimus(pulling sword out of Nemesis' head): Sweet Primus.

*Cybertron starts transforming*

*Optimus runs towards the ark*

Optimus: Ratchet! get ready for take off!

*Ratchet types complicated codes into the terminal, Cybertron completes transformation*

Unicron: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA! hello Prime, can you defeat me NOW?! HAHAHAAA!

Optimus: We will fight right here, right now, One shall stand, one shall fall!

Unicron: And the former, WILL BE ME!

Unicron: You cannot defeat me!

*Unicron Punches Optimus*
*Optimus is floating in space*

Arcee: OPTIMUS! UNICRON! YOU WON'T WIN THIS BATTLE IF I HAVE ANY THING TO DO WITH IT!

Unicron: Which You don't!

*Arcee starts shooting Unicron*

Ratchet: Optimus, don't die.

Optimus: I never say die Ratchet, you should know by now.

Ratchet: You can't fight anymore, what hope is left?

*Optimus opens his chest and takes out the Matrix of Leadership*

Unicron: What!? but Nemesis has it!

Optimus: The Matrix of Leadership, it will light our darkest hour.*Optimus opens Matrix*

Voice: The strength of Optimus,*shows Optimus transforming into torso and head* the power of Ironhide,*shows Ironhide transforming into a huge gun* the speed of Bumblebee,*shows Bumblebee transforming into legs and feet*
The skill of Ratchet,*shows Ratchet transforming into arms* and the courage of Jazz.*shows Ghost of Jazz transforming into armor*

Ultimus: I am Ultimus Prime!

*Ultimus punches Unicron in the chest, and Unicron stumbles back.
Unicron strikes back with an uppercut, Ultimus flys up, and counters
with a downthrust.*

*Unicron screams in pain*

Ultimus: give it a second.

Unicron: you cannot defeat me!

Ultimus: you learn something new everyday, Unicron.

*Unicron explodes! You can see Starscream drifting in space*

Starscream: No, my destiny, Sideways, there must be-

Sideways: No, there is not, I shall now look for a new planet, and a new chosen one, this is my duty, as the herald of Unicron.

*Sideways converts to starship mode*

Starscream: Sideways wait!

*Sideways flys away into a black hole*

Starscream: What's happening? I... feel... SIDEWAYS!!!!

*Starscream explodes*

*Earth: The Autobots secret base*

Optimus: We pulled through again Autobots, Congrats.

(Applause)

Arcee: I have polished this golden medal, and I award it to Optimus Prime, for his valor and bravory, and for pulling through even the most narrow halls.

(Applause)

*The black hole*

Sideways: My master.

?????????: He failed, didn't he?

Sideways: Yes indeed.

?????????: The Autobots will have peace, for now, until that day when I will arise, and on that day, I will rule the Universe! MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!

The End? I DON'T THINK SO!
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*Credits roll*

Peter Cullen: Optimus Prime\Nemesis Prime\Ultimus Prime.

Charles Adler: Starscream.

James Earl Jones: Unicron.

Frank Welker: ?????????.

Robert Foxworth: Ratchet.

Jess Harnell: Ironhide.

Susan Blu: Arcee.

Judd Nelson: Hotrod.

Shia LaBeoufe: Sam Witwicky.

Megan Fox: Mikaela Banes.

Dominic Scott Kay: Dan Witwicky.

John Moschitta jr. : Blurr

Singer:TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! DO-DO DO-DO

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! Robot: Robots in disguise!

Singer:Somethin' evil's watchin' over you!Comin' from the sky above, AND THERE'S NOTHIN YOU CAN DO!

PREPARE TO STRIKE! THER'LL BE NO PLACE TO RU-U-UN! WHEN YOU'RE CAUGHT WITHIN THE GRI-I-IP OF THE EVIL UNICROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! Robot: Robots in disguise!

Singer: TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! hiding in plain site!

strong enough to break the bravest heart! so we have to pull together, no we can't stay worlds apart!

to stand devided we will surely fall, but until our darkest hour, when the light will save us all!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! Robot: Robots in disguise!

Singer: TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! hiding in plain site!

the battle's over but the war's begun, and this way it will remain, til the day that all are one!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE!

TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! Robot: Robots in disguise!

Singer: TRANSFORMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS! hiding in plain site!

Robot: Transformers!

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until next fic, adios

lollolllollol

Wow I can tell alot of time went into that great job

So how is Starscream going to come back now?