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by **galvason** » Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:52 am

Okay ignor the TERRIBLE spelling and grammer and comment on Megaslashers new Bio

http://www.seibertron.com/heavymetalwar ... r_id=67961

there are some references to transformer shows (and movie) there, tell me if you got them....

by **Dragonoth** » Thu Mar 27, 2008 1:43 am

I give it an 8 /10, not counting the spelling errors, which are mostly in the last paragraph. The profile shows where the character came from, what his purpose is, some of his capabilities, and a hint of his atitude. I think it would be better if you were more specific about what he wants to do about Earth, instead of just implying it. Also, I 'm a bit confused about his motto. His master (Unicron) may be able to rip a planet to shreds, but a car-sized being can't do that (excluding super-saiyans and similar grossly over-powered characters). Good overall, better than my shorter ones.

by **galvason** » Thu Mar 27, 2008 6:28 am

Dragonoth wrote:I give it an 8 /10, not counting the spelling errors, which are mostly in the last paragraph. The profile shows where the character came from, what his purpose is, some of his capabilities, and a hint of his atitude. I think it would be better if you were more specific about what he wants to do about Earth, instead of just implying it. Also, I 'm a bit confused about his motto. His master (Unicron) may be able to rip a planet to shreds, but a car-sized being can't do that (excluding super-saiyans and similar grossly over-powered characters). Good overall, better than my shorter ones.

That motto, i realy should change it, originay, he was sent to earth to destroy all the Autobots there, and found the planet to his immence dislike, vowing to destroy it compleatly upon his depature, but i decided to wirte in Unicron, (Yes there is fan fiction to go along with it) and changed it so that he was sent to gather energy... Did you get all the references?

by **Dragonoth** » Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:29 pm

The shuttle of 5 Autobots is from RID, when Megatron "maeks" the Combaticons (I mean the Commandos). I think Kelly is form the same sieries, as she "drove" X-Brawn. The mindprobe headlights sounds like Movie Barricade. I haven't read the comics, so I miss most of the other references.

by **galvason** » Fri Mar 28, 2008 3:40 am

Dragonoth wrote:The shuttle of 5 Autobots is from RID, when Megatron "maeks" the Combaticons (I mean the Commandos). I think Kelly is form the same sieries, as she "drove" X-Brawn. The mindprobe headlights sounds like Movie Barricade. I haven't read the comics, so I miss most of the other references.

Actualy, you got em all... anyway would you care to check out Giga Addatron's Profile: http://www.seibertron.com/heavymetalwar ... r_id=52837?