MetalSamamon wrote:Dark_Lord_Prime wrote:Ok, I changed page two slightly: the first "crying" panel just shows tears welling in the corners or her eyes, and I redid the other one with lighter tear tracks.
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That looks much better DLP...it looks way better!
Great job!
I'm working on page 3 now, and it's gonna take me longer than the others, simply because of all the extra detail of Dinobot's hat and cloak. I just finished the first panel (except for some falling leaves I missed), and I think it looks pretty good so far.