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Well I might not be able to post my sketches of my original characters, but I can post their story. I came up with a storyline, and now I just need to actually write the story.

Setting: Pretty much after the events of Michael Bay's Transformers, except with new characters and revived ones. Plus with more action, and less plotholes (hopefully).

I'll post chapter 1 as soon as a finish it. If you have any suggestions, please reply, and when I start posting chapters, PLEASE, only CONSTRUCTIVE critism, no flaming please. This is just one of FEW fanfics I've written, and I still need practice, so hopefully, you'll now understand.

Character List

AUTOBOTS: Spiderbot, Arcee, Hotrod, Optimus Prime, Ironhide, Jazz (revived), Bumblebee, and Ratchet.

DECEPTICONS: KillBot, Brute, Soundwave, Scorponok, Barricade, Starscream, Wreckage, Megatron.

HUMANS: Sam, Mikela, Dave (original), and more...

I also take character requests, that is if I can think up a movie remix of him/her (or if one is provided). The only characters that I known I CAN'T include are Unicron, the Dinobots, or ALL the Constructicons.

What's Spiderbot like?

How about pitting him against Black Arachnia?

Why Spider-Bot? Why not Tarantulas?

Is Spiderbot related to Spiderman? At least in design?

Auto Bot wrote:Is Spiderbot related to Spiderman? At least in design?

Who knows - maybe Spider-man transforms into Spider-bot

when you say spider-bot, do you mean that hacker guy...

Infernal-Rampage wrote:when you say spider-bot, do you mean that hacker guy...

Umm, hacker guy

An_de wrote:

Infernal-Rampage wrote:when you say spider-bot, do you mean that hacker guy...

Umm, hacker guy

you haven't heard of him? (or her, as the case may be)

No not the hacker guy. He does resemble Spidey, since his lifeless car form was previously owned by a Marvel fan, who painted a spider on the front hood. (Plus with red and blue paint for the car's body. And Black Arachnia does sound like a good foe. I'll try to squeeze her in.

Spiderbot- Old Mustang
Killbot- Dragon
Brute- Futuristic Driller Tank (going for "Big Daddy" look like in Bioshock.)
Arcee will be like the movie concept, and Hot Rod will keep his G1 like apperance. (Only more "complex" and movie like.)

Spideybot into Mustang? Are you gonna create some art works for these?

can spider-bot swing?

I made sketches, but I don't have a scanner. sorry.

He can fly, and swing if he wanted to.

I hope you can post your sketches soon.

His early draft has a transformation similiar to Ultimate Bumblebee.

Spiderbot101 wrote:His early draft has a transformation similiar to Ultimate Bumblebee.

That's interesting. Bumblebee has one of the best transformation in Movie series.

Yeah, though there are some more complex and original details then based on a toy. For example, the seats section folds up and that whole section of the car splits apart and stops at Spiderbot's sides. Plus the way the feet form is somewhat different from Ultimate Bumblebee.

EDIT: Man, to tell you the truth, I can't even get started on chapter 1! To help, I did a comic book version draft, but I still can't manage to write it in words the way I feel it. So you'll just have to bare with me.

1: Origins

Dave Phillips wiped his brow of sweat. The sun was beating down on him with extreme heat. If the temperatures weren’t bad enough, he also had to labor over his “new” car. He wiped the hood then his brow. Not looking, he placed his bare hand upon the metal hood, which had absorbed a large quantity of heat. A string of pain jolted up his fingers and eventually up his arm. He yelped in pain and removed his hand from the burning hot metal.

“Man! None of this would be happening if I could have afforded a real car! Not this piece of junk!” he cried in frustration. He looked down at the rag he had been using. It lay upon a red hood which had black lines extending from black dots in the middle of the hood. The result of the black paint was a spider. A huge spider on the hood of a car that was painted red and blue. In Dave’s eyes, it looked like something that had jumped straight out of a Marvel comic book. But little did he know, that something was coming, something that jumped straight out of an abandoned sector in outer space…