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by **Autobot Outback** » Wed Aug 05, 2009 3:34 pm

Hey everyone,all right I don't know if the the link worked,but they are on Photobucket,under my username AutobotOutback.
All right 4 drawings here,(NOTE: I don't like to draw the other half of the limbs on Cybertron/Pre-Earth artwork,only on Earth work!)
Number One:Pre-Earth Decepticon Autolauncher
http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/ab22 ... uncher.jpg
Number Two:Pre-Earth Decepticon Autostinger
http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/ab22 ... tinger.jpg
Number Three:Pre-Earth Decepticon Autocrasher
http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/ab22 ... rasher.jpg
Number Four:Cybertron Camaro-Bumblebee
http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/ab22 ... blebee.jpg
I know they are not that great but,they are better then others,please tell me if the links work,I'm new to this website.
Thanks for Reading! :grin:

by **Justicity** » Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:59 pm

Hey, welcome to Seiberton:
Warning: May contain nuts!
I like these, but the missing limbs make them look a bit odd. I usually don't draw the detail on the second side limbs either when I'm designing, not wanting to repeat myself, so I just leave it at rough bubbles of where the arms and legs would go.
Your work could also use some more proportioning, try using a guide line underneath, first sketching out the "skeleton" of the 'bot, lines for the torso and shoulder and hip lines, lines/bubbles for the limbs and a circle for the head. Then you can build up the detail, ignoring areas you don't want to draw fully without compromising the drawing.
Check this out to see what I mean:
http://justicity-comics.deviantart.com/art/Cheetor-Prime-sketch-129940744
http://justicity-comics.deviantart.com/art/RotF-Soundwave-interpretation-127953451
See how the left hand limbs are there but in such little detail on the first one, and the base lines on the second?
The second one's actually what I used to teach a class on drawing robots using these ideas. I never got round to finishing it afterwards.

Hope I helped, but I really like the stuff you've got here, don't take the constructive criticism the wrong way ^^
I look forward to seeing more of your stuff, remember to post often XD

by **Autobot Outback** » Wed Aug 05, 2009 6:42 pm

Oh ok,thanks I like your Cheetor Prime,here's someone I just finished,he called "Psycho-Plane" because when thinking of a name,I misprounce Cycle-Plane,I first was going to call him "Thust" because I mixed the BM Thust and the G1 plane Thust,tell me what you think.(NOTE:My scanner cut the name off.)
http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/ab22 ... tPlane.jpg

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