The Energon Pub

by **Blastoderm** » Mon Nov 06, 2006 12:07 am

Pencils interperation of the figure. I still lament the fact that the classics line won't have any boxart on the packaging.:/

Anyways, C and C appreciated as usual.

by **jimsloth** » Tue Nov 07, 2006 9:50 pm

Wow acidwing, you've really come a long way since the WWI contest. You're perspective looks 10X better. I only have one minor critique. The left thigh (right of the drawing) looks like its going straight down (not angled front to back at all) while the lower leg is closer to the camera, and yet the thigh is shorter than the one on the other side. Basically to fix this, either cut and paste the lower leg a little lower, and draw in a little more thigh, or redraw the thigh in the same amount of space, but bend it to be coming more towards the camera.

by **Blastoderm** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:16 am

jimsloth wrote:Wow acidwing, you've really come a long way since the WWI contest. You're perspective looks 10X better. I only have one minor critique. The left thigh (right of the drawing) looks like its going straight down (not angled front to back at all) while the lower leg is closer to the camera, and yet the thigh is shorter than the one on the other side. Basically to fix this, either cut and paste the lower leg a little lower, and draw in a little more thigh, or redraw the thigh in the same amount of space, but bend it to be coming more towards the camera.

THanks jimsloth.

As for your critique, since other people have pointed it out (along with other issues), I will do my best to fix Megs up when I get to inks.

But on the meantime, would this rough schematic work out for the left thigh error?