A few months ago I tried pitching a Spotlight: Jetfire to IDW. Obviously, I got turned down. So since I'm never going to sell this story I decided to write my comic idea in prose form and share it with everyone for free.
Please, read it and share your opinion of it. Is this something you would have felt satisfied to have paid $4 for? I'm not looking to have my ego stroked here, I want honest opinions of my writing ability.
The Barrier's Between Us for Our Treason