The Energon Pub

Here it goes, let me know if i need to change anything.

Blackstar

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Decepticon Air Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron)tetra-jet, (earth)Black and Gold F-15SE Silent Eagle
Weapons: Fuel-Air Explosive (FAE) missile, Dol laser arm rifles.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "When you take a shot in the dark, sometimes the dark shoots back."

Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 7
Endurance: 5
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 6
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 4
Rank: 5

Profile: You wouldn't say there is anything remarkable about the gold and black mech known as Blackstar, as his standard body blends in with most Seekers. He is an undeniably loyal Decepticon, Blackstar would rather let others lead, and often lets the other seekers claim the glory. He is but a career soldier who exists to further the cause, and prefers to follow orders than to give them. Seemingly apathetic to other opinions of him, the only emotions normally associated with Blackstar are arrogance and contempt. Despite his brave and uncaring nature, he has one deep fear: the war ending and his services no longer needed.


Abilities: In vehicle mode, Blackstar's top atmospheric speed is just under Mach 2.0. Armed with Dol-laser rifles that are more powerful than typical laser rifles, packing more punch in a concentrated beam. Though not as advanced as many other, more exotic kinds of Cybertronian arms, Blackstar uses them with his well honed marksmanship to devastating effect. He is also armed with a Thermobaric FAE missile, which causes an intense explosion and shock-wave.

Weaknesses: While not an "energy hog", Blackstar has a smaller fuel tank than the average Seeker to accommodate his stealth property's , limiting his long range potentials. (FAE's produce more explosive energy for a given size than do other conventional explosives, but have the disadvantage of being less predictable in their effect being influenced by weather. i don't know if i need to mention this somewhere)

Sample Post:
Returning to base

Blackstar has been monitoring radio transmissions of the recent battle. He knows had he been there the tide of battle may have been shifted, but probably not too much. Apparently the Autobots had new flyer's, they might be a fun fight. But to his dismay he was not included in the mission. Not surprising, considering the other seekers didn't seem to appreciate his vast skills. He wasn't a fan of 'Warp and "Crackers jokes, and Starscream's lust for power fas a liability. Being a Seeker was a privilege these fools were abusing. Other than Megatron, he felt the rest of the Decepticons were somewhat useful at best and fodder not worth repairing at worst.

His attitude was part of the reason Blackstar was one of the back up troops, primarily used as a reserve. He had achieved quite a few kills in his time, and accomplished his share of missions, but nothing remarkable. Blackstar is a self fashioned sniper and marksman, and is to only be seen when needed. Sure promotions have passed his way, thats not why he fights. He fights because he genuinely loves to follow orders, his only purpose was to serve others. He has nothing to prove, no power struggles, no schemes. He had no desire for the power the others sought for, he just wanted to be useful.

Over the Decepticon base

High above the base Blackstar notices a firefight down below. Had radar sensors not picked up the energy signatures of drones and not Autobots he might have been worried. Returning from his scouting mission Darkstar can't help but feel a certain sense of apathy. "The waste of valuable resources and time was all this training was. Had we had more available troops the battle would have been an overwhelming victory." Blackstar cannot help but think to himself. But orders are orders. Sending a remote signal to the training computes he signals for a few drones to come his way.

Doing a loop-de-loop as a wide back flip, Blackstar flips above the drones diving down from above. After blasting two, he transforms into robot mode. and lines up a clean shot. Sparks fly as he ruptures the inferior drones fuel cell. Signaling for more drones, this time ones with holograms of Autobots, he speeds away allowing them to gather in a group. "Their primitive sensors wont pick him up until I'm smashing threw their processors. Just like the real thing" 'Star thinks to himself.

Speeding back he spins in a barrel roll at the quickly approaching squadron. Transforming in mid-flight he blasts a few shots from his arm lasers. Dodging fire from two of the drones, the shots from a third clip his side. Quickly recovering Blackstar turns and give a blast with both arm rifles, dispatching the droid. Had these been Autobot he would not pull a move so hastily, but what was the point of training if you couldn't have a little fun? He dispatches the last drone, blasting threw the holographic neck structure before firing on the drone its self. Descending threw the opening in the top of the training room, Blackstar is annoyed at wasting time when there were still battles to be fought. and wonders why they were still not waging a full assault.

Jumpstart!

Allegiance: Decepticon.

Function: Medical Assistant/ Fighter

Alt.Mode: Mikoyan MiG-29 (Type of Jet)

Weapons: Electric Swords that extend from her wrists, and blasters (Blasters can only be used in her Alt. mode)

Special abilities: Can use mild Electro shocks to disable a piece of electrical equipment, E.G: A computer or T.V. Also has a long-range Radar.

Height: Nineteen feet and 5 metres.

Quote: 'All Hail Stasream...Uh, I mean....Megatron.'

Strength: 4
Intelligence: 9
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 7
Endurance: 4
Courage: 6
Firepower: 5
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 7
Charisma: 8
Rank:

Profile: Was originally an Autobot, but when sent on a mission to find the Allspark, things went wrong. Her and her team found the Allspark where the other Autobots had believed it was, and began to discuss how to bring it back to Cybertron. A member of the team put across the idea to to merely pick it up and put it in the ship, then fly back to Cybertron. Not waiting for an answer, the Robot did so and the Allspark went crazy. Electric shocks were being sent off everywhere, and Jumpstart commanded all to get back to the ship. They did, except for one. A stray electric shock hit Jumpstart, and it entered her circuits; buzzing around and destroying her slowly from the inside. The member of the Team that stayed brought her back to Cybertron and the Members of Cybertronian Intelligence sent her to be tested for any damage or things wrong with her circuitry. The Spark had dissapeared, and her circuits were fine. The next day, after a long rest, Cybertronian markings similar to those on the AllSpark appeared around Jumpstart's body, and the Cybertronian intelligence ran more tests. As the testing became more powerful, and greater in strength, the less Jumpstart wanted to be tested on. They sent a scanning ray into her body to see what was wrong, and as it scanned it caught on a stray wire in her circuits, ripping it and causing her to lose her memory. She woke up and, confused to where she was, destroyed the testing room. She flew off sadly, into space. Megatron, by now, had received news from a double-agent of a Femme-bot who had absorbed part of the AllSpark. He traced a strangely powerful energy signal on the radar, and found her alone on a moon of Cybertron. He waked over to her, expressing that autobots always were terribly harsh and cruel to Test Subjects like her. She agreed with him, and Megatron asked her to join the Decepticons, and destroy the Autobots. She thought about it hard, and agreed to join the Decepticons. Later, Starscream told her that he heard Megatron saying something about 'Using the Girl's power to rule Cybertron for himself'. Jumpstart thanked Starscream by pledging her allegiance to him, and swearing to help him overcome Megatron when the time is right. Still she waits for the day Starscream and her will kill Megatron and send him offline, forever. (Wow, that was a long Profile. )

Abilities: Can reach up to 100mph without external fuel tanks, and for a range of about 185 metres. Her Electric-Swords can be set in one of three modes, Crackling, Burning, or Piercing. Crackling mode will make the Swords send out bolts of electricity into whoever is being hit with them, and when not attacking resembles small lightning bolts. Burning mode, as it's name supplies, is red hot-like fire- and can melt down smaller pieces of Metal. Finally, Piercing mode; the swords resemble a single lance-like point, and are used to pierce opponents. No special effects, just stabbing and slicing.

Weaknesses: When swords are out, if attacked in any way in the small almost-cannon like figures on her wrists, the Electric-swords will be withdrawn and unable to be used until the Figure is repaired. A direct hit at her Spark chamber will, as with any other Transformer, be deadly, and could send her offline. Isn't exactly 'Graceful' with her steps, so with enough moving around of the enemy, Jumpstart can be tricked into falling over or facing the wrong way.

Sample post:
Clenching her fists tight, Jumpstart felt a whoosh of energy burst out of her wrists as her Electric Swords burst out. The seeker but a few steps ahead of her grinned smugly. "You think you can beat me with simple electric shocks?" He laughed. Jumpstart gritted her teeth, fighting back her anger. She lurched forwards with one sword, narrowly missing Starscream and he weaved around her to her back. Turning around, she tried the same attack but again, it failed. She felt something slice at her Sword-receptors and her swords dissapeared, turning to measly sparks on the floor. Now it was Starscream's turn to attack. His blasters raised, he shot continually at Jumpstart, as she tried to dodge each and every one of the many shots being fired. One hit her in her wing, sending her rebounding off to the right, where another blast hit her leg. She was blown backwards, onto the floor. The seeker towered above her, before suddenly putting down his blasters and aiming them away from Jumpstart. He held his hand down, and she grabbed it, getting up. "Good practice today, kid." Starscream congratulated, and Jumpstart nodded politely. "I almost had you!" She grinned jokingly. "'Course you did." Starscream laughed, walking out of the room. Jumpstart left also, wandering towards her quarters the resided in the right wing of the ship.

Well, here's my attempt at a fan made. I got Ember's permission about using Kup and Razorclaw in my guy's profile. I did my best with the stat numbers. I hope they're okay. Devs said that there'd be about a 2 point deduction for the heightened sense of smell ability. So, the total stats should equal 68. If anything needs changing, just let me know.

Howlstrike

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Hunter / tracker
Alternate Mode: Timber Wolf
Weapons: Energo sword; Laser rifle.
Special Ability: Heightened sense of smell.
Height: 31ft / 9.5m
Motto: “The thrill of the hunt is only exceeded by the smell of fear.”

Strength: 08
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 07
Speed: 05
Endurance: 08
Courage: 08
Firepower: 06
Accuracy: 05
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 04
Charisma: 03
Rank: TBD

Profile: Howlstrike is a quiet loner and enjoys the thrill of the hunt more than most. Once a member of the Predacons, he was kicked out of the elite Decepticon unit for disobeying Razorclaw’s orders to terminate an unarmed mech. Subsequently shunned by his former teammates and other Decepticons, Howlstrike eventually made his way to the Autobots, most of whom also found him less than desirable to have on their side.

Feeling a growing sense of rage and isolation, Howlstrike found solace and acceptance with Kup, the only Autobot willing to give him a chance at redemption. Over time, the aging mech taught Howlstrike how to control his anger and channel it in the right direction. Eventually, more and more Autobots came to accept Howlstrike as one of their own, but many still do not trust him and feel that he will always be a Predacon deep down.

This belief is not helped by the fact that Howlstrike still acts like a Predacon at times, exhibiting intense rage and acting out violently towards others when provoked. Even though the Decepticon symbol has long since been replaced with an Autobot one and his color scheme changed to hunter green and black, many only see these alterations as cosmetic at best and not really indicative of what lies beneath the surface.

Howlstrike can be a brutal fighter, enjoying the smell of fear when he closes in on his prey. After a victory, he likes to let out a deafening howl to signify his triumph, much to the annoyance of those around him. Nevertheless, underneath his hard exterior lies an honorable warrior that few get to see. His ability to track and locate just about anything or anyone makes him a viable asset to the Autobots and is the reason that most tolerate him. He travels a lot with Kup, his one true friend, and is often referred to as Kup's "pet", which he hates. Howlstrike is also known for going off on his own to explore or to simply meditate.

After arriving on Earth and learning of the Predacons’ new guises, Howlstrike picked a new alt mode similar to theirs in the form of a timber wolf. He did this as a way to spite them the next time he sees the Predacons on the battlefield. Now, he patiently waits for the time to come face-to-face with his former teammates once again and prove who is the better predator.

Abilities: Howlstrike is very strong and has a heightened sense of smell, allowing him to track his designated prey over long distances, whether it be organic or robotic in nature. He prefers close-range combat, expertly wielding an energo sword in robot mode and attacking with serrated claws in wolf mode. Said claws are capable of tearing through most metal with relative ease while his jaws can rip open a car in mere seconds. As a wolf, Howlstrike is very agile and can run at speeds of up to 100 mph. He also carries a standard laser rifle for long-range combat when needed.

Weaknesses: Howlstrike is a loner and has very few friends, which can make it hard for him to find help when he needs it, whether on or off the battlefield. Being a former Predacon, many Autobots have a difficult time trusting him while others don’t trust him at all. While physically strong, Howlstrike possesses only average long-range combat skills. He is also not proficient at using technology, computers or other complicated devices, making it difficult for him to conduct even minor repairs to himself. Furthermore, while he has learned to suppress his anger most of the time, Howlstrike can still become enraged and lose control when others taunt him for too long or the Predacons are nearby.

Sample Post:

Autobot Shuttle

Howlstrike sat silently at the far end of the shuttle’s main deck, sharpening his energo sword with utter precision. It was his weapon of choice, after all, and he wanted it to be as sharp as possible when he sliced it through the next Decepticon he encountered. He did this alone, the other Autobots seated at the opposite end of the deck near the cockpit. They were sharing whispers with one another and giving quick glances over at Howlstrike as they did. It was clear that they were talking about him. It was something Howlstrike had come to expect from many of his Autobot comrades. He was very much a loner that mostly kept to himself. Not to mention he had once been a member of the Predacons. This only served to fuel the others’ distrust and the gossip spread about him. He didn’t like it, but there wasn’t much he could do and still keep his cool.

A burst of laughter echoed down the main deck. Howlstrike turned to look at the others to find them all staring back at him. “Hey, Howl,” one Autobot said with a smirk. “So I see Kup decided to bring your aft along on this mission, huh? Must be nice being his pet.” More laughter came as Howlstrike showed no outward reaction to the newest taunt thrown his way. He didn’t make friends easy, with one notable exception. The old mech known as Kup had befriended him long ago and gave him a chance that no one else would. Kup helped him and treated him with the respect he deserved.

Howlstrike calmly stood and walked down the deck towards the others. “What did you call me?” Howl asked the Autobot who had spoken to him.

“I called you his pet. You got a problem with that, Predacon?” The Autobot said, laughing.

Howlstrike had learned to take a lot of insults without losing control. Kup had taught him that. But there were still some things that could set him off. One was calling him Kup’s pet, which he hated, and the other was calling him a Predacon. This particular Autobot had just called him both things.

“As matter of fact I do,” Howlstrike said with a smile that quickly turned into a scowl as he grabbed the insolent mech and hoisted him into the air. “Have anything more to say to me, hmmm? Do I look like anyone’s pet to you?!” His anger grew worse by the astrosecond as his clawed hands tightened around the Autobot’s neck.

“Howlstrike! Stop it!” It was Kup, exiting the shuttle’s cockpit. “Control yourself! You’re an Autobot! Act like one!”

Howlstrike looked at his mentor and felt a sudden sense of embarrassment. He had let his anger get the better of him again and in front of Kup no less. Howl relaxed his grip and let go of the smaller mech. He then stepped away and returned to his seat at the far end of the deck. Sitting quietly once again, Howlstrike resumed sharpening his blade, his anger beginning to subside…for now.

Smokescreen GT wrote:Well, here's my attempt at a fan made. I got Ember's permission about using Kup and Razorclaw in my guy's profile. I did my best with the stat numbers. I hope they're okay. Devs said that there'd be about a 2 point deduction for the heightened sense of smell ability. So, the total stats should equal 68. If anything needs changing, just let me know.

Howlstrike

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Hunter / tracker
Alternate Mode: Timber Wolf
Weapons: Energo sword; Laser rifle.
Special Ability: Heightened sense of smell.
Height: 31ft / 9.5m
Motto: “The thrill of the hunt is only exceeded by the smell of fear.”

Strength: 08
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 07
Speed: 05
Endurance: 08
Courage: 08
Firepower: 06
Accuracy: 05
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 04
Charisma: 03
Rank: TBD

Profile: Howlstrike is a quiet loner and enjoys the thrill of the hunt more than most. Once a member of the Predacons, he was kicked out of the elite Decepticon unit for disobeying Razorclaw’s orders to terminate an unarmed mech. Subsequently shunned by his former teammates and other Decepticons, Howlstrike eventually made his way to the Autobots, most of whom also found him less than desirable to have on their side.

Feeling a growing sense of rage and isolation, Howlstrike found solace and acceptance with Kup, the only Autobot willing to give him a chance at redemption. Over time, the aging mech taught Howlstrike how to control his anger and channel it in the right direction. Eventually, more and more Autobots came to accept Howlstrike as one of their own, but many still do not trust him and feel that he will always be a Predacon deep down.

This belief is not helped by the fact that Howlstrike still acts like a Predacon at times, exhibiting intense rage and acting out violently towards others when provoked. Even though the Decepticon symbol has long since been replaced with an Autobot one and his color scheme changed to hunter green and black, many only see these alterations as cosmetic at best and not really indicative of what lies beneath the surface.

Howlstrike can be a brutal fighter, enjoying the smell of fear when he closes in on his prey. After a victory, he likes to let out a deafening howl to signify his triumph, much to the annoyance of those around him. Nevertheless, underneath his hard exterior lies an honorable warrior that few get to see. His ability to track and locate just about anything or anyone makes him a viable asset to the Autobots and is the reason that most tolerate him. He travels a lot with Kup, his one true friend, and is often referred to as Kup's "pet", which he hates. Howlstrike is also known for going off on his own to explore or to simply meditate.

After arriving on Earth and learning of the Predacons’ new guises, Howlstrike picked a new alt mode similar to theirs in the form of a timber wolf. He did this as a way to spite them the next time he sees the Predacons on the battlefield. Now, he patiently waits for the time to come face-to-face with his former teammates once again and prove who is the better predator.

Abilities: Howlstrike is very strong and has a heightened sense of smell, allowing him to track his designated prey over long distances, whether it be organic or robotic in nature. He prefers close-range combat, expertly wielding an energo sword in robot mode and attacking with serrated claws in wolf mode. Said claws are capable of tearing through most metal with relative ease while his jaws can rip open a car in mere seconds. As a wolf, Howlstrike is very agile and can run at speeds of up to 100 mph. He also carries a standard laser rifle for long-range combat when needed.

Weaknesses: Howlstrike is a loner and has very few friends, which can make it hard for him to find help when he needs it, whether on or off the battlefield. Being a former Predacon, many Autobots have a difficult time trusting him while others don’t trust him at all. While physically strong, Howlstrike possesses only average long-range combat skills. He is also not proficient at using technology, computers or other complicated devices, making it difficult for him to conduct even minor repairs to himself. Furthermore, while he has learned to suppress his anger most of the time, Howlstrike can still become enraged and lose control when others taunt him for too long or the Predacons are nearby.

Sample Post:

Autobot Shuttle

Howlstrike sat silently at the far end of the shuttle’s main deck, sharpening his energo sword with utter precision. It was his weapon of choice, after all, and he wanted it to be as sharp as possible when he sliced it through the next Decepticon he encountered. He did this alone, the other Autobots seated at the opposite end of the deck near the cockpit. They were sharing whispers with one another and giving quick glances over at Howlstrike as they did. It was clear that they were talking about him. It was something Howlstrike had come to expect from many of his Autobot comrades. He was very much a loner that mostly kept to himself. Not to mention he had once been a member of the Predacons. This only served to fuel the others’ distrust and the gossip spread about him. He didn’t like it, but there wasn’t much he could do and still keep his cool.

A burst of laughter echoed down the main deck. Howlstrike turned to look at the others to find them all staring back at him. “Hey, Howl,” one Autobot said with a smirk. “So I see Kup decided to bring your aft along on this mission, huh? Must be nice being his pet.” More laughter came as Howlstrike showed no outward reaction to the newest taunt thrown his way. He didn’t make friends easy, with one notable exception. The old mech known as Kup had befriended him long ago and gave him a chance that no one else would. Kup helped him and treated him with the respect he deserved.

Howlstrike calmly stood and walked down the deck towards the others. “What did you call me?” Howl asked the Autobot who had spoken to him.

“I called you his pet. You got a problem with that, Predacon?” The Autobot said, laughing.

Howlstrike had learned to take a lot of insults without losing control. Kup had taught him that. But there were still some things that could set him off. One was calling him Kup’s pet, which he hated, and the other was calling him a Predacon. This particular Autobot had just called him both things.

“As matter of fact I do,” Howlstrike said with a smile that quickly turned into a scowl as he grabbed the insolent mech and hoisted him into the air. “Have anything more to say to me, hmmm? Do I look like anyone’s pet to you?!” His anger grew worse by the astrosecond as his clawed hands tightened around the Autobot’s neck.

“Howlstrike! Stop it!” It was Kup, exiting the shuttle’s cockpit. “Control yourself! You’re an Autobot! Act like one!”

Howlstrike looked at his mentor and felt a sudden sense of embarrassment. He had let his anger get the better of him again and in front of Kup no less. Howl relaxed his grip and let go of the smaller mech. He then stepped away and returned to his seat at the far end of the deck. Sitting quietly once again, Howlstrike resumed sharpening his blade, his anger beginning to subside…for now.

Very good application man! Approved, rank 5. You can start him on Earth in the Autobot base, probably having just arrived with Kup I imagine.

Name_Violation wrote:Here it goes, let me know if i need to change anything.

Blackstar

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Decepticon Air Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron)tetra-jet, (earth)Black and Gold F-15SE Silent Eagle
Weapons: Fuel-Air Explosive (FAE) missile, Dol laser arm rifles.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "When you take a shot in the dark, sometimes the dark shoots back."

Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 7
Endurance: 5
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 6
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 4
Rank: 5 or TBA

Profile: You wouldn't say there is anything remarkable about the gold and black mech known as Blackstar, as his standard body blends in with most Seekers. He is an undeniably loyal Decepticon, Blackstar would rather let others lead, and often lets the other seekers claim the glory. He is but a career soldier who exists to further the cause, and prefers to follow orders than to give them. Seemingly apathetic to other opinions of him, the only emotions normally associated with Blackstar are arrogance and contempt. Despite his brave and uncaring nature, he has one deep fear: the war ending and his services no longer needed.


Abilities: In vehicle mode, Blackstar's top atmospheric speed is just under Mach 2.0. Armed with Dol-laser rifles that are more powerful than typical laser rifles, packing more punch in a concentrated beam. Though not as advanced as many other, more exotic kinds of Cybertronian arms, Blackstar uses them with his well honed marksmanship to devastating effect. He is also armed with a Thermobaric FAE missile, which causes an intense explosion and shock-wave.

Weaknesses: While not an "energy hog", Blackstar has a smaller fuel tank than the average Seeker to accommodate his stealth property's , limiting his long range potentials. (FAE's produce more explosive energy for a given size than do other conventional explosives, but have the disadvantage of being less predictable in their effect being influenced by weather. i don't know if i need to mention this somewhere)

Sample Post:
Returning to base

Blackstar has been monitoring radio transmissions of the recent battle. He knows had he been there the tide of battle may have been shifted, but probably not too much. Apparently the Autobots had new flyer's, they might be a fun fight. But to his dismay he was not included in the mission. Not surprising, considering the other seekers didn't seem to appreciate his vast skills. He wasn't a fan of 'Warp and "Crackers jokes, and Starscream's lust for power fas a liability. Being a Seeker was a privilege these fools were abusing. Other than Megatron, he felt the rest of the Decepticons were somewhat useful at best and fodder not worth repairing at worst.

His attitude was part of the reason Blackstar was one of the back up troops, primarily used as a reserve. He had achieved quite a few kills in his time, and accomplished his share of missions, but nothing remarkable. Blackstar is a self fashioned sniper and marksman, and is to only be seen when needed. Sure promotions have passed his way, thats not why he fights. He fights because he genuinely loves to follow orders, his only purpose was to serve others. He has nothing to prove, no power struggles, no schemes. He had no desire for the power the others sought for, he just wanted to be useful.

Over the Decepticon base

High above the base Blackstar notices a firefight down below. Had radar sensors not picked up the energy signatures of drones and not Autobots he might have been worried. Returning from his scouting mission Moongeist can't help but feel a certain sense of apathy. "The waste of valuable resources and time was all this training was. Had we had more available troops the battle would have been an overwhelming victory." Blackstar cannot help but think to himself. But orders are orders. Sending a remote signal to the training computes he signals for a few drones to come his way.

Doing a loop-de-loop as a wide back flip, Blackstar flips above the drones diving down from above. After blasting two, he transforms into robot mode. and lines up a clean shot. Sparks fly as he ruptures the inferior drones fuel cell. Signaling for more drones, this time ones with holograms of Autobots, he speeds away allowing them to gather in a group. "Their primitive sensors wont pick him up until I'm smashing threw their processors. Just like the real thing" 'Star thinks to himself.

Speeding back he spins in a barrel roll at the quickly approaching squadron. Transforming in mid-flight he blasts a few shots from his arm lasers. Dodging fire from two of the drones, the shots from a third clip his side. Quickly recovering Blackstar turns and give a blast with both arm rifles, dispatching the droid. Had these been Autobot he would not pull a move so hastily, but what was the point of training if you couldn't have a little fun? He dispatches the last drone, blasting threw the holographic neck structure before firing on the drone its self. Descending threw the opening in the top of the training room, Blackstar is annoyed at wasting time when there were still battles to be fought. and wonders why they were still not waging a full assault.

Okay he looks good. Just double check for the old name I spotted a 'Moongeist' in there. Give him a rank of 5 and he's Approved.

Loobylou900 wrote:Jumpstart!

Allegiance: Decepticon.

Function: Medical Assistant/ Fighter

Alt.Mode: Mikoyan MiG-29 (Type of Jet)

Weapons: Electric Swords that extend from her wrists, and blasters (Blasters can only be used in her Alt. mode)

Special abilities: Can use mild Electro shocks to disable a piece of electrical equipment, E.G: A computer or T.V. Also has a long-range Radar.

Height: Nineteen feet and 5 metres.

Quote: 'All Hail Stasream...Uh, I mean....Megatron.'

Strength: 4
Intelligence: 9
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 7
Endurance: 4
Courage: 6
Firepower: 5
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 7
Charisma: 8
Rank:

Profile: Was originally an Autobot, but when sent on a mission to find the Allspark, things went wrong. Her and her team found the Allspark where the other Autobots had believed it was, and began to discuss how to bring it back to Cybertron. A member of the team put across the idea to to merely pick it up and put it in the ship, then fly back to Cybertron. Not waiting for an answer, the Robot did so and the Allspark went crazy. Electric shocks were being sent off everywhere, and Jumpstart commanded all to get back to the ship. They did, except for one. A stray electric shock hit Jumpstart, and it entered her circuits; buzzing around and destroying her slowly from the inside. The member of the Team that stayed brought her back to Cybertron and the Members of Cybertronian Intelligence sent her to be tested for any damage or things wrong with her circuitry. The Spark had dissapeared, and her circuits were fine. The next day, after a long rest, Cybertronian markings similar to those on the AllSpark appeared around Jumpstart's body, and the Cybertronian intelligence ran more tests. As the testing became more powerful, and greater in strength, the less Jumpstart wanted to be tested on. They sent a scanning ray into her body to see what was wrong, and as it scanned it caught on a stray wire in her circuits, ripping it and causing her to lose her memory. She woke up and, confused to where she was, destroyed the testing room. She flew off sadly, into space. Megatron, by now, had received news from a double-agent of a Femme-bot who had absorbed part of the AllSpark. He traced a strangely powerful energy signal on the radar, and found her alone on a moon of Cybertron. He waked over to her, expressing that autobots always were terribly harsh and cruel to Test Subjects like her. She agreed with him, and Megatron asked her to join the Decepticons, and destroy the Autobots. She thought about it hard, and agreed to join the Decepticons. Later, Starscream told her that he heard Megatron saying something about 'Using the Girl's power to rule Cybertron for himself'. Jumpstart thanked Starscream by pledging her allegiance to him, and swearing to help him overcome Megatron when the time is right. Still she waits for the day Starscream and her will kill Megatron and send him offline, forever. (Wow, that was a long Profile. )

Abilities: Can reach up to 100mph without external fuel tanks, and for a range of about 185 metres. Her Electric-Swords can be set in one of three modes, Crackling, Burning, or Piercing. Crackling mode will make the Swords send out bolts of electricity into whoever is being hit with them, and when not attacking resembles small lightning bolts. Burning mode, as it's name supplies, is red hot-like fire- and can melt down smaller pieces of Metal. Finally, Piercing mode; the swords resemble a single lance-like point, and are used to pierce opponents. No special effects, just stabbing and slicing.

Weaknesses: When swords are out, if attacked in any way in the small almost-cannon like figures on her wrists, the Electric-swords will be withdrawn and unable to be used until the Figure is repaired. A direct hit at her Spark chamber will, as with any other Transformer, be deadly, and could send her offline. Isn't exactly 'Graceful' with her steps, so with enough moving around of the enemy, Jumpstart can be tricked into falling over or facing the wrong way.

Sample post:
Clenching her fists tight, Jumpstart felt a whoosh of energy burst out of her wrists as her Electric Swords burst out. The seeker but a few steps ahead of her grinned smugly. "You think you can beat me with simple electric shocks?" He laughed. Jumpstart gritted her teeth, fighting back her anger. She lurched forwards with one sword, narrowly missing Starscream and he weaved around her to her back. Turning around, she tried the same attack but again, it failed. She felt something slice at her Sword-receptors and her swords dissapeared, turning to measly sparks on the floor. Now it was Starscream's turn to attack. His blasters raised, he shot continually at Jumpstart, as she tried to dodge each and every one of the many shots being fired. One hit her in her wing, sending her rebounding off to the right, where another blast hit her leg. She was blown backwards, onto the floor. The seeker towered above her, before suddenly putting down his blasters and aiming them away from Jumpstart. He held his hand down, and she grabbed it, getting up. "Good practice today, kid." Starscream congratulated, and Jumpstart nodded politely. "I almost had you!" She grinned jokingly. "'Course you did." Starscream laughed, walking out of the room. Jumpstart left also, wandering towards her quarters the resided in the right wing of the ship.

This character's background does not fit in at all with the history and background we have in the game. It is unacceptable as it is now. You'll have to completely change the history to line up with the game history and background. I suggest checking out the history and background thread and reading up on the game before submitting another application.

this is my fanmade character.

name:Majide(japanese for "are you serious?")
Faction:decpticon
Function:Shock Trooper(heavyweapons)
Alt. mode:Bucket Wheel Excavator
Weapons:laser rifle,rocket laucher, bucket wheel axe
abilities: can summon fire with axe
Height33ft.,11m.
Quote:Where are they, my lord? i shall wear their sparks on a necklace!
stats:
Skill:6
Strength:9
Endurance:7
Intellegence:1
Dexterety:1
Speed:1
Courage:7
firepower:8
accuracy:4
melee:8
tech skill:2
Charizma:2

Profile:built for war, he is a monster. a strong fighter, he is the thing that many young autobots check their closets for. he is not to be taken lightly.
Abilities:top speed:22mphVehicle,6mphRobot. as above, can summon fire from axe,wears a necklace of several sparks, so he can interchange them.
Weaknesses:Extremely slow:so much thathis top speed is slower than a lawn moer! and if his spark necklace is removed, his own is chained to it, so he dies instantly.
Sample post: foolish autobots(sets axe ablaze, bats ratchet aside.)Ratchet:medic! oh wait,CRAP!


in short, very similar to animted lugnut in mental visons, but similar tocybertron metroplex in armorment. looks very similar to g1 metroplex as well.

Unicron of light wrote:this is my fanmade character.

name:Majide(japanese for "are you serious?")
Faction:decpticon
Function:Shock Trooper(heavyweapons)
Alt. mode:Bucket Wheel Excavator
Weapons:laser rifle,rocket laucher, bucket wheel axe
abilities: can summon fire with axe
Height33ft.,11m.
Quote:Where are they, my lord? i shall wear their sparks on a necklace!
stats:
Skill:6
Strength:9
Endurance:7
Intellegence:1
Dexterety:1
Speed:1
Courage:7
firepower:8
accuracy:4
melee:8
tech skill:2
Charizma:2

Profile:built for war, he is a monster. a strong fighter, he is the thing that many young autobots check their closets for. he is not to be taken lightly.
Abilities:top speed:22mphVehicle,6mphRobot. as above, can summon fire from axe,wears a necklace of several sparks, so he can interchange them.
Weaknesses:Extremely slow:so much thathis top speed is slower than a lawn moer! and if his spark necklace is removed, his own is chained to it, so he dies instantly.
Sample post: foolish autobots(sets axe ablaze, bats ratchet aside.)Ratchet:medic! oh wait,CRAP!


in short, very similar to animted lugnut in mental visons, but similar tocybertron metroplex in armorment. looks very similar to g1 metroplex as well.

This character will not work in the game. Please refer to the rules and guidelines for the proper way to apply and have another go at it.

Ember wrote:

Unicron of light wrote:this is my fanmade character.

name:Majide(japanese for "are you serious?")
Faction:decpticon
Function:Shock Trooper(heavyweapons)
Alt. mode:Bucket Wheel Excavator
Weapons:laser rifle,rocket laucher, bucket wheel axe
abilities: can summon fire with axe
Height33ft.,11m.
Quote:Where are they, my lord? i shall wear their sparks on a necklace!
stats:
Skill:6
Strength:9
Endurance:7
Intellegence:1
Dexterety:1
Speed:1
Courage:7
firepower:8
accuracy:4
melee:8
tech skill:2
Charizma:2

Profile:built for war, he is a monster. a strong fighter, he is the thing that many young autobots check their closets for. he is not to be taken lightly.
Abilities:top speed:22mphVehicle,6mphRobot. as above, can summon fire from axe,wears a necklace of several sparks, so he can interchange them.
Weaknesses:Extremely slow:so much thathis top speed is slower than a lawn moer! and if his spark necklace is removed, his own is chained to it, so he dies instantly.
Sample post: foolish autobots(sets axe ablaze, bats ratchet aside.)Ratchet:medic! oh wait,CRAP!


in short, very similar to animted lugnut in mental visons, but similar tocybertron metroplex in armorment. looks very similar to g1 metroplex as well.

This character will not work in the game. Please refer to the rules and guidelines for the proper way to apply and have another go at it.

what will i have to do to make it work?
whats wrong with him

Name: Overpressure

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Recon & High Speed Assault

Alt. mode: YF-12 serial 60-6936

The AF-12 is a variant of the YF-12, the predecessor to the famed SR-71 Blackbird. Unlike the Blackbird, which was intended mainly for reconnaissance purposes, the AF-12 had missiles mounted in the bays that were intended for sensory equipment was replaced with bays for missiles.

Featuring two huge jet turbines with specially designed inlet cones, the AF-12 is possibly the fastest fighter aircraft ever constructed.

Of course, Overpressure, in pursuit of speed, could never leave well enough alone and made some modifications to the jet engines housed beneath that black composite skin.

Also painted in radar-deflecting paint, the YF-12 is a sleek and stealthy machine from an age where the F-117 was only an idea on a cocktail napkin.

Weapons:
ALT MODE ONLY:
4x Long Range Radar-Guided Missiles
1x .50 Caliber Gatling Cannon
1x EMP GENERATOR -5

ROBOT MODE ONLY:
4x Missile Launchers
1x Plasma repeater rifle
1x .50 Caliber Gatling Cannon

Special Abilities:
Hypersonic Flight (Escape Velocity Capable) -5
EMP Generator -5


Height: 35 FT Robot, 101ft 8in Alt mode

Quote: Speed isn't everything, it's the only thing.


60/60 avail pts
STRENGTH: 3 (10*)
INTELLIGENCE: 8 (10*)
DEXTERITY: 3 (10*)
SPEED: 9 (10*)
ENDURANCE: 4(10*)
COURAGE: 10
FIREPOWER: 5 (10*)
ACCURACY: 8 (10*)
MELEE: 1 (9*,10*)
TECH SKILL: 5 (10*)
CHARISMA: 4 (10*)
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile:
Built in the early days of Cybertronian history, before the age of Prime and Megatron, Overpressure WAS.
Overpressure isn't the newest bot on the block.
He's been around for megacycles, an observer and casual participant in the great war.
Content to skip amongst the stars as an interstellar cruiser, Overpressure watched with sick fascination as he followed Unicron from planet to planet, his powerful thrust drive system more than enough to keep him out of harm's way... That was, until Earth Year AD 1971, in the month of June on the 24th day... Overpressure lost control of his gravity drive and ended up thrusting himself headlong into earth's atmosphere, colliding with none other than YF-12 serial 60-6936, killing its crew and destroying the original aircraft instantly.

He doesn't so much live to serve the Decepticon cause as much as it serves him to not be a part of the Autobots and their sickeningly "glass half full" attitude.
The glass is never half full to Overpressure. The glass contains 433 milliliters, and prefers objective, indisputable fact.
Though in conversation, he will use fact to twist the conversation his way.

In that same instant, Overpressure assumed the form of the aircraft he'd just destroyed, and disappeared into the sunset.

Living alone on a Desert Island in the tropics, Overpressure is quite content to be by himself, though adventure is only a few minutes (and several thousand gallons of fuel) away...


Abilities: As old as he is, Overpressure is still vicious and sharp as a tack. He's capable of plucking other aircraft from the sky thanks to his EMP Generator. He has limited firepower (though what he has is potent enough when he decides to use it)

Weaknesses: His forte is speed, but strength is his downfall. He's not nimble. He guzzles fuel, he's also in his waning years... (though not as old as our friend Jetfire). His weaponry is effective but the payload is small. After expending his primary ordinance he has little other than a gatling gun to defend himself. Against Cybertronian Armor, the .50 cal isn't all that useful-- and due to his age, he hasn't yet been made aware of Sabot-tipped rounds.

Sample post:
Novel-style Combat (yes, I realize this is moding)
The fabric of the sky shears itself apart as Overpressure's twin jet turbines shred the atmosphere. 30 miles away, a troupe of Autobots have no inkling of the incredible misfortune about to befall them.
The skin of the YF-12's belly splits open, and a quintuplet of missiles gleefully light and race away. The two flaps of skin quickly shut themselves as Overpressures turbines kick on their afterburners.
Putting out far more than the original YF-12 ever did, the paint on the leading edges of the sleek aircraft superheats and begins to boil off, exposing the raw aluminum beneath it. The empty cockpit glows iridescent red, lighting like the eyes of a vulture that's found an easy meal.

As the jet turbines gain speed, Overpressure roars past the missiles he just deployed and rushes silently over the heads of the Autobots he's about to destroy. They turn as the sonic boom hits them, just in time for the nosecones of the radar guided missiles to bury themselves into the Autobots faceplates, their optics shattering into thousands of shards nanonseconds before the missiles detonators go, sending the quartet of now-headless Autobot carcasses crumpling to their knees like fleshling ragdolls. Pushing himself to the load limits of the wings, the thin flaps that made up the lift surface of his wings strained against the intense friction and G-load as he performs an inversion, he turns back towards his fresh kills.

As he approaches, again he is silent to those he is about to descend upon. His long, sleek shape suddenly breaks apart, allowing the aerodynamic friction of his transformation to begin to slow him down, the huge twin thruster nacelles shift into legs, thruster outlets become feet, and the nose splits into two, the body of the plane becoming the Overpressure's chest. The tailcone shifts backward and a set of antennae rise from either side as a long, slender head emerges with beady red eyes leering gleefully at the presumed dead Autobots.

He kicks on the jet turbines again, hundreds of thousands of pounds of thrust erupting from his heels as he slows himself, alighting on the chest of a dead Autobot, still silent. As he touches down, his sonic boom catches up with him, the pressure wave levelling surrounding plantlife, momentarily drowning out every other sound with his own.

A sly grin crosses his glossy, polished aluminum faceplate. He grins gleefully as he thrusts his daggerlike fingertips into the neck of a deceased Autobot, and moves from one to the next, manually extinguishing the dwindling spark in each Autobot's chest between his fingertips, soaking up the remaining energon within them, rejuvenating himself. As he comes upon the last corpse, he finds half o the autobot's face is still intact.
It's still online. A look of disgust wipes the grin off his faceplate.

Its single, pathetic optical sensor turns up at him, and its audio synthesizer manages to crackle, "...why?.."

Overpressure suddenly finds himself grinning again, and kneels before the dying Autobot and replies coolly, "...why, you ask?" He chuckled, the skin of his chestplate shaking slightly as he did.
"...because, you were there."

He placed one hand on the disfigured jaw and the other on its collar plate, and pushed, rending its head from its body.

The light in its one optic dies.
Overpressure beamed with satisfaction, and tossed the dismembered head aside, tired of playing with it already.

He took an ungainly running start like a vulture, and leapt into the air, seamlessly shifting into jet mode as his the jet engines caught air, and the sleek YF-12 fighter raced into the atmosphere, leaving naught but dessicated carcasses and a pair of contrails behind.

**RETURNING TO BASE**
As he raced through the stratosphere, a transmission from Shockwave interrupted his vision-- A dangerous thing at Mach 2.5-- Luckily enough, nothing was in his way.
"The components we needed for the Space Bridge have been found on the other side of the continent. Megatron requires you to return to the Pacific base."
The red illumination of the cockpit dimmed, as if he were narrowing his eyes.
"...Surely there is something the Autobots are protecting at Point Bravo Zulu, One-eye." Overpressure replied, the frustration he felt evident in his voice.
On the other side of the commlink, Shockwave slammed his single fist onto the console, making a dent.
"NO! You are needed in the Pacific in only a few cycles!"
Overpressure's turbines spun down as he slowed, disappointed as he went subsonic, allowing the pressure wave to catch up with him.
He performed a quick inversion, straining against the G-load on his lift surfaces.
His circuits sizzled. He'd been so ready to go, now to be sent back?
Megatron had damned well be able to pay back all the fuel he'd just wasted.
"..Fine, but not for you, cyclops. For Megatron." He again kicked his afterburners on as he completed the turn, accelerating again. Subsonic travel burned so much fuel. Halos of blue rimmed the edges of his thrust nozzles as he raced away to see Megatron.

Name: Shade.

Allegiance: Autobots

Function: Sniper

Alt. mode: Hook-armed crane

Weapons: Sniper Rifle, Grappling hook.
Special Abilities: Cloaking device or radar jammer, which ever you guys would prefer
Height: 21’ tall, 7mt.

Quote: “Boom. Headshot” (in an Australian accent)
STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 4
ENDURANCE: 3
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 6
total so far:59

Profile: During the time before the war, Shade was a guard of the tower that held
future rivals, Optimus and Megatron. When the war started, the Autobots and Decepticons both rejected him, so he worked as a freelancer for quite some time. Working for both Autobot and Decepticon, he saw a grim battle or two, betraying former teammates to get more and more energon. Shade Drew the line when Shockwave sent him to assassinate the leader himself, Optimus Prime. He shot Shockwave right between the optics, and ran to join the Autobot forces and destroy Megatron.

During a battle at the city of Iacon, Shade was Ambushed by Megatron himself.
Shade was offline for 4 Million Stellar cycles, until Optimus and Ratchet Stepped in. Using Prowl’s offline corpse, they rebuilt him. When he came to, he was as he was before, but he realized he was more accurate. Ratchet had upgraded his optics so he could zoom in and out, like a sniper rifle scope. He now uses his newfound accuracy and the power of his rifle to end many battles before they start.

Abilities: Speed range:66-90mph. He has enhanced optic sensors. The sniper does different damage depending on who he hits. For example, a shot to a micro-cassette like frenzy or rumble will result in immediate stasis lock, whereas it would tack 2 direct Headshots to down Megatron. In terms of appearance, he looks a lot like the constructicon hook, but in Prowl’s colors.

Weaknesses: Shade is not very adept in melee combat, and is not very strong either.
Also, when scoped, he has no idea what is going on in his surroundings. He is also not that fast compared to most Decepticons.

Sample Post: (note: this and all of my posts for Shade will be in first person)
Zooming in on my scope, I looked around the city of Iacon, wondering to myself if I would survive the coming battle. I zoomed out, and walked back into Iacon’s main building. “Anything, Shade?” Prime said. “Yes.” I said. And it was true. I had seen the platoon of seekers coming. They are coming for me.

I loaded my gun with a fresh battery, and used my grappler to ascend the tower. I took a shot at the yellow one, and it fell to the ground. That really cheesed the rest of them of. They rocketed at me, lasers charged. I took another shot. The black one and the blue one both fell. The notification voice rang in my head, Double Kill! I smiled, then shot the gray one. “You know, there are rules to being a sniper: Be polite. Be efficient. Have a plan to kill everyone you meet,” I thought to myself, as I took my last shot.

I hope you liked it!

Unicron of light wrote:Name: Shade.

Allegiance: Autobots

Function: Sniper

Alt. mode: Hook-armed crane

Weapons: Sniper Rifle, Grappling hook.
Special Abilities: Cloaking device or radar jammer, which ever you guys would prefer
Height: 21’ tall, 7mt.

Quote: “Boom. Headshot” (in an Australian accent)
STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 4
ENDURANCE: 3
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 6
total so far:59

Profile: During the time before the war, Shade was a guard of the tower that held
future rivals, Optimus and Megatron. When the war started, the Autobots and Decepticons both rejected him, so he worked as a freelancer for quite some time. Working for both Autobot and Decepticon, he saw a grim battle or two, betraying former teammates to get more and more energon. Shade Drew the line when Shockwave sent him to assassinate the leader himself, Optimus Prime. He shot Shockwave right between the optics, and ran to join the Autobot forces and destroy Megatron.

During a battle at the city of Iacon, Shade was Ambushed by Megatron himself.
Shade was offline for 4 Million Stellar cycles, until Optimus and Ratchet Stepped in. Using Prowl’s offline corpse, they rebuilt him. When he came to, he was as he was before, but he realized he was more accurate. Ratchet had upgraded his optics so he could zoom in and out, like a sniper rifle scope. He now uses his newfound accuracy and the power of his rifle to end many battles before they start.

Abilities: Speed range:66-90mph. He has enhanced optic sensors. The sniper does different damage depending on who he hits. For example, a shot to a micro-cassette like frenzy or rumble will result in immediate stasis lock, whereas it would tack 2 direct Headshots to down Megatron. In terms of appearance, he looks a lot like the constructicon hook, but in Prowl’s colors.

Weaknesses: Shade is not very adept in melee combat, and is not very strong either.
Also, when scoped, he has no idea what is going on in his surroundings. He is also not that fast compared to most Decepticons.

Sample Post: (note: this and all of my posts for Shade will be in first person)
Zooming in on my scope, I looked around the city of Iacon, wondering to myself if I would survive the coming battle. I zoomed out, and walked back into Iacon’s main building. “Anything, Shade?” Prime said. “Yes.” I said. And it was true. I had seen the platoon of seekers coming. They are coming for me.

I loaded my gun with a fresh battery, and used my grappler to ascend the tower. I took a shot at the yellow one, and it fell to the ground. That really cheesed the rest of them of. They rocketed at me, lasers charged. I took another shot. The black one and the blue one both fell. The notification voice rang in my head, Double Kill! I smiled, then shot the gray one. “You know, there are rules to being a sniper: Be polite. Be efficient. Have a plan to kill everyone you meet,” I thought to myself, as I took my last shot.

I hope you liked it!

Please remove all references in his history to any other characters and make it fit in with the game's background. Please go back and read the background and setting before applying again. We do not write in the first person. Read through some of the posts in the game to see what the writing is like.

Autobot_Switchback wrote:Name: Overpressure

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Recon & High Speed Assault

Alt. mode: YF-12 serial 60-6936

The AF-12 is a variant of the YF-12, the predecessor to the famed SR-71 Blackbird. Unlike the Blackbird, which was intended mainly for reconnaissance purposes, the AF-12 had missiles mounted in the bays that were intended for sensory equipment was replaced with bays for missiles.

Featuring two huge jet turbines with specially designed inlet cones, the AF-12 is possibly the fastest fighter aircraft ever constructed.

Of course, Overpressure, in pursuit of speed, could never leave well enough alone and made some modifications to the jet engines housed beneath that black composite skin.

Also painted in radar-deflecting paint, the YF-12 is a sleek and stealthy machine from an age where the F-117 was only an idea on a cocktail napkin.

Weapons:
ALT MODE ONLY:
4x Long Range Radar-Guided Missiles
1x .50 Caliber Gatling Cannon
1x EMP GENERATOR -5

ROBOT MODE ONLY:
4x Missile Launchers
1x Plasma repeater rifle
1x .50 Caliber Gatling Cannon

Special Abilities:
Hypersonic Flight (Escape Velocity Capable) -5
EMP Generator -5


Height: 35 FT Robot, 101ft 8in Alt mode

Quote: Speed isn't everything, it's the only thing.


60/60 avail pts
STRENGTH: 3 (10*)
INTELLIGENCE: 8 (10*)
DEXTERITY: 3 (10*)
SPEED: 9 (10*)
ENDURANCE: 4(10*)
COURAGE: 10
FIREPOWER: 5 (10*)
ACCURACY: 8 (10*)
MELEE: 1 (9*,10*)
TECH SKILL: 5 (10*)
CHARISMA: 4 (10*)
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile:
Built in the early days of Cybertronian history, before the age of Prime and Megatron, Overpressure WAS.
Overpressure isn't the newest bot on the block.
He's been around for megacycles, an observer and casual participant in the great war.
Content to skip amongst the stars as an interstellar cruiser, Overpressure watched with sick fascination as he followed Unicron from planet to planet, his powerful thrust drive system more than enough to keep him out of harm's way... That was, until Earth Year AD 1971, in the month of June on the 24th day... Overpressure lost control of his gravity drive and ended up thrusting himself headlong into earth's atmosphere, colliding with none other than YF-12 serial 60-6936, killing its crew and destroying the original aircraft instantly.

He doesn't so much live to serve the Decepticon cause as much as it serves him to not be a part of the Autobots and their sickeningly "glass half full" attitude.
The glass is never half full to Overpressure. The glass contains 433 milliliters, and prefers objective, indisputable fact.
Though in conversation, he will use fact to twist the conversation his way.

In that same instant, Overpressure assumed the form of the aircraft he'd just destroyed, and disappeared into the sunset.

Living alone on a Desert Island in the tropics, Overpressure is quite content to be by himself, though adventure is only a few minutes (and several thousand gallons of fuel) away...


Abilities: As old as he is, Overpressure is still vicious and sharp as a tack. He's capable of plucking other aircraft from the sky thanks to his EMP Generator. He has limited firepower (though what he has is potent enough when he decides to use it)

Weaknesses: His forte is speed, but strength is his downfall. He's not nimble. He guzzles fuel, he's also in his waning years... (though not as old as our friend Jetfire). His weaponry is effective but the payload is small. After expending his primary ordinance he has little other than a gatling gun to defend himself. Against Cybertronian Armor, the .50 cal isn't all that useful-- and due to his age, he hasn't yet been made aware of Sabot-tipped rounds.

Sample post:
Novel-style Combat (yes, I realize this is moding)
The fabric of the sky shears itself apart as Overpressure's twin jet turbines shred the atmosphere. 30 miles away, a troupe of Autobots have no inkling of the incredible misfortune about to befall them.
The skin of the YF-12's belly splits open, and a quintuplet of missiles gleefully light and race away. The two flaps of skin quickly shut themselves as Overpressures turbines kick on their afterburners.
Putting out far more than the original YF-12 ever did, the paint on the leading edges of the sleek aircraft superheats and begins to boil off, exposing the raw aluminum beneath it. The empty cockpit glows iridescent red, lighting like the eyes of a vulture that's found an easy meal.

As the jet turbines gain speed, Overpressure roars past the missiles he just deployed and rushes silently over the heads of the Autobots he's about to destroy. They turn as the sonic boom hits them, just in time for the nosecones of the radar guided missiles to bury themselves into the Autobots faceplates, their optics shattering into thousands of shards nanonseconds before the missiles detonators go, sending the quartet of now-headless Autobot carcasses crumpling to their knees like fleshling ragdolls. Pushing himself to the load limits of the wings, the thin flaps that made up the lift surface of his wings strained against the intense friction and G-load as he performs an inversion, he turns back towards his fresh kills.

As he approaches, again he is silent to those he is about to descend upon. His long, sleek shape suddenly breaks apart, allowing the aerodynamic friction of his transformation to begin to slow him down, the huge twin thruster nacelles shift into legs, thruster outlets become feet, and the nose splits into two, the body of the plane becoming the Overpressure's chest. The tailcone shifts backward and a set of antennae rise from either side as a long, slender head emerges with beady red eyes leering gleefully at the presumed dead Autobots.

He kicks on the jet turbines again, hundreds of thousands of pounds of thrust erupting from his heels as he slows himself, alighting on the chest of a dead Autobot, still silent. As he touches down, his sonic boom catches up with him, the pressure wave levelling surrounding plantlife, momentarily drowning out every other sound with his own.

A sly grin crosses his glossy, polished aluminum faceplate. He grins gleefully as he thrusts his daggerlike fingertips into the neck of a deceased Autobot, and moves from one to the next, manually extinguishing the dwindling spark in each Autobot's chest between his fingertips, soaking up the remaining energon within them, rejuvenating himself. As he comes upon the last corpse, he finds half o the autobot's face is still intact.
It's still online. A look of disgust wipes the grin off his faceplate.

Its single, pathetic optical sensor turns up at him, and its audio synthesizer manages to crackle, "...why?.."

Overpressure suddenly finds himself grinning again, and kneels before the dying Autobot and replies coolly, "...why, you ask?" He chuckled, the skin of his chestplate shaking slightly as he did.
"...because, you were there."

He placed one hand on the disfigured jaw and the other on its collar plate, and pushed, rending its head from its body.

The light in its one optic dies.
Overpressure beamed with satisfaction, and tossed the dismembered head aside, tired of playing with it already.

He took an ungainly running start like a vulture, and leapt into the air, seamlessly shifting into jet mode as his the jet engines caught air, and the sleek YF-12 fighter raced into the atmosphere, leaving naught but dessicated carcasses and a pair of contrails behind.

**RETURNING TO BASE**
As he raced through the stratosphere, a transmission from Shockwave interrupted his vision-- A dangerous thing at Mach 2.5-- Luckily enough, nothing was in his way.
"The components we needed for the Space Bridge have been found on the other side of the continent. Megatron requires you to return to the Pacific base."
The red illumination of the cockpit dimmed, as if he were narrowing his eyes.
"...Surely there is something the Autobots are protecting at Point Bravo Zulu, One-eye." Overpressure replied, the frustration he felt evident in his voice.
On the other side of the commlink, Shockwave slammed his single fist onto the console, making a dent.
"NO! You are needed in the Pacific in only a few cycles!"
Overpressure's turbines spun down as he slowed, disappointed as he went subsonic, allowing the pressure wave to catch up with him.
He performed a quick inversion, straining against the G-load on his lift surfaces.
His circuits sizzled. He'd been so ready to go, now to be sent back?
Megatron had damned well be able to pay back all the fuel he'd just wasted.
"..Fine, but not for you, cyclops. For Megatron." He again kicked his afterburners on as he completed the turn, accelerating again. Subsonic travel burned so much fuel. Halos of blue rimmed the edges of his thrust nozzles as he raced away to see Megatron.

Ok, this one needs a lot of work if not a complete revamp. Melee of 1 is unacceptable as listed in the fanmade rules. His history is totally unacceptable. He isn't older than everyone else, he did not roam through space following Unicron and he didn't not crash on Earth and set up his own little base on an island decades ago. None of that remotely works with the background set up for this game. You need to explain what an 'EMP Generator' is exactly and how he 'plucks aircraft from the sky.' I suggest taking a close look at the setting and background for the game and rethinking this character before applying again.

Ember wrote:

Unicron of light wrote:Name: Shade.

Allegiance: Autobots

Function: Sniper

Alt. mode: Hook-armed crane

Weapons: Sniper Rifle, Grappling hook.
Special Abilities: Cloaking device or radar jammer, which ever you guys would prefer
Height: 21’ tall, 7mt.

Quote: “Boom. Headshot” (in an Australian accent)
STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 4
ENDURANCE: 3
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 6
total so far:59

Profile: During the time before the war, Shade was a guard of the tower that held
future rivals, Optimus and Megatron. When the war started, the Autobots and Decepticons both rejected him, so he worked as a freelancer for quite some time. Working for both Autobot and Decepticon, he saw a grim battle or two, betraying former teammates to get more and more energon. Shade Drew the line when Shockwave sent him to assassinate the leader himself, Optimus Prime. He shot Shockwave right between the optics, and ran to join the Autobot forces and destroy Megatron.

During a battle at the city of Iacon, Shade was Ambushed by Megatron himself.
Shade was offline for 4 Million Stellar cycles, until Optimus and Ratchet Stepped in. Using Prowl’s offline corpse, they rebuilt him. When he came to, he was as he was before, but he realized he was more accurate. Ratchet had upgraded his optics so he could zoom in and out, like a sniper rifle scope. He now uses his newfound accuracy and the power of his rifle to end many battles before they start.

Abilities: Speed range:66-90mph. He has enhanced optic sensors. The sniper does different damage depending on who he hits. For example, a shot to a micro-cassette like frenzy or rumble will result in immediate stasis lock, whereas it would tack 2 direct Headshots to down Megatron. In terms of appearance, he looks a lot like the constructicon hook, but in Prowl’s colors.

Weaknesses: Shade is not very adept in melee combat, and is not very strong either.
Also, when scoped, he has no idea what is going on in his surroundings. He is also not that fast compared to most Decepticons.

Sample Post: (note: this and all of my posts for Shade will be in first person)
Zooming in on my scope, I looked around the city of Iacon, wondering to myself if I would survive the coming battle. I zoomed out, and walked back into Iacon’s main building. “Anything, Shade?” Prime said. “Yes.” I said. And it was true. I had seen the platoon of seekers coming. They are coming for me.

I loaded my gun with a fresh battery, and used my grappler to ascend the tower. I took a shot at the yellow one, and it fell to the ground. That really cheesed the rest of them of. They rocketed at me, lasers charged. I took another shot. The black one and the blue one both fell. The notification voice rang in my head, Double Kill! I smiled, then shot the gray one. “You know, there are rules to being a sniper: Be polite. Be efficient. Have a plan to kill everyone you meet,” I thought to myself, as I took my last shot.

I hope you liked it!

Please remove all references in his history to any other characters and make it fit in with the game's background. Please go back and read the background and setting before applying again. We do not write in the first person. Read through some of the posts in the game to see what the writing is like.

kay. i;ll check and rewrite

Name: Razatron

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Mercinary

Alt. mode: Blue and White Cone Headed F16 Eagle

Weapons: Null Ray Rifle, Concussion Rifle, and Flak Rifle

Special Abilities: Able to short out radio waves for 2 miles

Height: 35 ft. 10.668 meters.

Quote: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend"

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 7
RANK:

Profile: He was originally created to protect the City of Iacon, but when the war started he had decided to join the Decepticons. After years of fighting and not gaining anything, he quit the Decepticons and left Cybertron to fight for someone else. after the Autobots and Decepticons then awoke from their falling out, he then decided to join up with the Decepticons again, except with better weapons than he did the last time he joined. He took the form of an F16 Eagle, to blend in and to able of destroying earth's governments from within.

Abilities: He is capable of going either mach 3, or at escape velocity in his alternate mode, and his firing range is about 3 miles. He can knock out guards with his Concussion Rifle, he can blast holes into his opponents with his Flak Rifle, and can short out equipment with his Null Ray Rifle. He has the ability to short out radio frequencies for only 2 miles. His alternate mode is a Blue and White F 16.

Weaknesses: He has a tendency to be arrogant, and there for gives him the thoughts that maybe he should be the leader of the Decepticons. He tends to think these things, without thinking about trying to hide his thoughts. He also has a physical weakness, in that he can easily have his legs shot off.

Sample Post:
Arrival 0100 Hours(2:00 AM)

The last of the air patrols are going back to base. He doesn't want any one to see him in is bot mode, so he scans on of the flying jets and takes its form. No longer needing the jet he scanned he then blasted it out of the sky. When he landed he then started to be a regular fighter jet.

After he felt seismic waves in the area that the Ark crashed, he then came out of hiding. When he found the Decepticons working on a new base and a new ship he then requested he join the Decepticons again. Once accepted back he then started on secret raids to collect energon so that he and the Decepticons can later take over all of Cybertron.

NAME:METALSPARK
FUNCTION:
ALTERNATE MODES:SUPERMARINE SPITFIRE,STAGHOUND ARMOURED CAR
ALLIANCE:AUTOBOT

STRENGTH:6
INTELLIGENCE:9
RANK:7
SPEED:8
ENDURANCE:8
FIREPOWER:6
COURAGE:10
MELEE:6
ACCURACY:9
TECH SKILLS:7
DEXTERITY:9
CHARISMA:7

WEAPONS:BLACKLIGHT SWORD,MACHINE GUNS(8) AND A MORTAR CANNON
HEIGHT:12 FEET

BIO:
METALSPARK LANDED IN GREAT BRITAN IN 1939 JUST BEFORE THE OUTBREAK OF WORLD WAR 2. SENSING HE WAS NEEDED HE TOOK ON HIS ALTERNATE MODES DURING A MILITARY PARADE. IN 1945 AFTER AN AIR RAID HE WAS SENT INTO STASIS.
IN 1997 HE WAS WOKEN BY A GROUP OF TEENAGERS DIGGING FOR GUNS.
WHEN HE WAS WOKEN HE ALSO INTERCEPTED A CALL FROM OPTIMUS PRIME CALLING FOR ANY OTHER AUTOBOTS WHO JUST ARRIVED FROM CYBERTRON.
HE LOOKS UP TO AIR RAID AND JETFIRE AS IDOLS AND HOPES TO LEARN A THING OR TWO FROM THEM.


WEAKNESS:
METALSPARK IS YOUNG AND NEEDS ATTENTION OR HE'LL GO OFF AND DO SOMETHING WHICH USUALLY ENDS IN CATASTROPHE.

Razatron wrote:Name: Razatron

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Mercinary

Alt. mode: Blue and White Cone Headed F16 Eagle

Weapons: Null Ray Rifle, Concussion Rifle, and Flak Rifle

Special Abilities: Able to short out radio waves for 2 miles

Height: 35 ft. 10.668 meters.

Quote: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend"

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 7
RANK:

Profile: He was originally created to protect the City of Iacon, but when the war started he had decided to join the Decepticons. After years of fighting and not gaining anything, he quit the Decepticons and left Cybertron to fight for someone else. after the Autobots and Decepticons then awoke from their falling out, he then decided to join up with the Decepticons again, except with better weapons than he did the last time he joined. He took the form of an F16 Eagle, to blend in and to able of destroying earth's governments from within.

Abilities: He is capable of going either mach 3, or at escape velocity in his alternate mode, and his firing range is about 3 miles. He can knock out guards with his Concussion Rifle, he can blast holes into his opponents with his Flak Rifle, and can short out equipment with his Null Ray Rifle. He has the ability to short out radio frequencies for only 2 miles. His alternate mode is a Blue and White F 16.

Weaknesses: He has a tendency to be arrogant, and there for gives him the thoughts that maybe he should be the leader of the Decepticons. He tends to think these things, without thinking about trying to hide his thoughts. He also has a physical weakness, in that he can easily have his legs shot off.

Sample Post:
Arrival 0100 Hours(2:00 AM)

The last of the air patrols are going back to base. He doesn't want any one to see him in is bot mode, so he scans on of the flying jets and takes its form. No longer needing the jet he scanned he then blasted it out of the sky. When he landed he then started to be a regular fighter jet.

After he felt seismic waves in the area that the Ark crashed, he then came out of hiding. When he found the Decepticons working on a new base and a new ship he then requested he join the Decepticons again. Once accepted back he then started on secret raids to collect energon so that he and the Decepticons can later take over all of Cybertron.

Ok, my first suggestion here is to go read the game setting and history using the link in my sig. Your character needs to work with the setting we have established for the game. After that you need to make sure your stats equal 70 points total and no more. I would drop the special ability since it will require a stat penalty. I'm not sure why he has three different rifles, that seems a bit extreme and should be two at the most. The weaknesses section could also use some rewording since right now it is fairly confusing.

metalspark wrote:NAME:METALSPARK
FUNCTION:
ALTERNATE MODES:SUPERMARINE SPITFIRE,STAGHOUND ARMOURED CAR
ALLIANCE:AUTOBOT

STRENGTH:6
INTELLIGENCE:9
RANK:7
SPEED:8
ENDURANCE:8
FIREPOWER:6
COURAGE:10
MELEE:6
ACCURACY:9
TECH SKILLS:7
DEXTERITY:9
CHARISMA:7

WEAPONS:BLACKLIGHT SWORD,MACHINE GUNS(8) AND A MORTAR CANNON
HEIGHT:12 FEET

BIO:
METALSPARK LANDED IN GREAT BRITAN IN 1939 JUST BEFORE THE OUTBREAK OF WORLD WAR 2. SENSING HE WAS NEEDED HE TOOK ON HIS ALTERNATE MODES DURING A MILITARY PARADE. IN 1945 AFTER AN AIR RAID HE WAS SENT INTO STASIS.
IN 1997 HE WAS WOKEN BY A GROUP OF TEENAGERS DIGGING FOR GUNS.
WHEN HE WAS WOKEN HE ALSO INTERCEPTED A CALL FROM OPTIMUS PRIME CALLING FOR ANY OTHER AUTOBOTS WHO JUST ARRIVED FROM CYBERTRON.
HE LOOKS UP TO AIR RAID AND JETFIRE AS IDOLS AND HOPES TO LEARN A THING OR TWO FROM THEM.


WEAKNESS:
METALSPARK IS YOUNG AND NEEDS ATTENTION OR HE'LL GO OFF AND DO SOMETHING WHICH USUALLY ENDS IN CATASTROPHE.

There is nothing about this application that is acceptable. Please go back and read the rules and background for the game before applying again. Also make sure to turn your caps lock off.

Name: Razatron

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Mercinary

Alt. mode: Blue and White F16 Eagle

Weapons: Null Ray Rifle, and Flak Rifle

Special Abilities: Able to fly in robot mode

Height: 35 ft. 10.668 meters.

Quote: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend"

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 7
RANK:

Profile: He was originally created to protect the Senators, but when the war started he sympathized with and join the Decepticons. After years of fighting and not gaining any profit, he quit the Decepticons and left Cybertron to fight for someone else in their wars. After the Autobots and Decepticons then awoke from their falling out, he then decided to join up with the Decepticons again, except with better weapons than he did the last time he joined. He took the form of an F16 Eagle, to blend in and to able of destroying earth's governments from within.

In secret he hopes to find Vector Sigma, or the All Spark and use them to create an army of robots that he could use to overthrow Megatron and Optimus Prime.

Abilities: He is capable of going either mach 3, or at escape velocity in his alternate mode. He can blast holes into his opponents with his Flak Rifle, and can short out equipment with his Null Ray Rifle. He has the ability to fly while in his bot mode. His alternate mode is a Blue and White F 16.

Weaknesses: He has a tendency to be arrogant, and there for thinks that he should be the leader of the Decepticons, he how ever has failed to keep this information from their current leader. He has a physical weakness that when he is in a fight he is more likely to lose when they blast him in the knees, and neck.

Sample Post:
Arrival 0100 Hours(1:00 AM)

The last of the air patrols are going back to base. He doesn't want any one to see him in is bot mode, so he scans one of the flying jets and takes its form. When he landed he then started to pretend to be a regular fighter jet.

After he felt seismic waves in the area that the Ark crashed, he then came out of hiding. When he found the Decepticons working on a new base and a new ship he then requested he join the Decepticons again. Once accepted back he then started on secret raids to collect energon so that he and the Decepticons can later take over all of Cybertron, and hopefully re-power it, and bring it back to life.

Okay, here I go. My previous character, Hubcap, was denied, so I'm going for Ironhide.


Name: Ironhide

Allegiance: Autobot

Function: Security

Alt. Mode: Red SUV

Weapons: Gatling Gun, laser rifle

Special Abilities: Water Gun (shoots liquid nitrogen, glue, ect.)

Height: 20 ft/5.20 m

Quote: "High tech security is no replacement for guts!"

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 3
Endurance: 9
Courage: 10
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 7
Rank:

Profile: "Go chew on a microchip!" is Ironhide's slogan. Prefers action to words. Bodyguard to Optimus Prime. In charge of guarding anything of importance. Gruff, but kind. Trithyllium-steel skin makes him nearly invulnerable to attack. Shoots variety of liquids from supercooled nitrogen to superheated lead. Has sonar, radar, radiowave detector. Ironhide was built at a time when armor was thick, and circuitry was simple. He is one of the older Autobots, tested in thousands of battles, over countless centuries. He has been injured many times, but never deactivated. For every scratch and scar that he bears he has a tale to tell, and most of the younger Autobots are all too eager to hear them. Gruff, and sometimes grumpy, he is also naturally protective of the other Autobots. He is tough, rough, and nearly impossible to damage.

Abilites: Ironhide is a tough, impossible-to-stop Autobot. He can hit a top speed of 100 mph, and though he isn't the fastest Autobot, he is one of the toughest. He can use his water gun to great effect. The wall in Shockwave's base hates the weapon -- he's broken in and out of that base many times using it. The water gun has been used to glue Decepticons' feet to the ground, stick Starscream's mouth shut, and at one time hold together a chunk of the Ark that had broken off. But his favorite use for it is the time when Megatron was about to blast Optimus with his fusion cannon. He fired some instant glue in the cannon's barrel, and the weapon exploded in Megatron's face! He isn't a sharpshooter when it comes down to a sniping mission, but when he gets up close, the Decepticon he is fighting has oil dripping from many cracked joints.

Weaknesses: Perhaps one of Ironhide's only weaknesses is the fact that he's overeager. Whenever he finds out that something wrong, he rushes right in, not taking into account the fact that the situation might be an ambush. If he is ambushed, he often is not able to fight back before he is defeated. Only the fact that he's close friends with Optimus Prime has saved his life time and again.

Sample Post: Ironhide marched down the hallway of the Ark and into the command center. Once again, Ratchet was working on injured Autobots. He shook his head. If he were Ratchet, he wouldn't have the patience to fix everyone.

"Howdy, Ironhide."

That was young Bumblebee, the smallest Autobot. Ironhide looked down at his little buddy. Bumblebee was limping up to Ratchet. Ironhide followed closely.

"Uh, what happened?" Ironhide asked the young Autobot.

"I was...ambushed by Runabout," Bumblebee muttered.

Ironhide punched the wall and fingered the gattling gun hanging loosely on his waist. No one did that to his little buddy! He turned to run out of the base. This was his opportunity to do something! Optimus Prime grabbed his shoulder firmly.

"Calm down, Ironhide," Optimus said gently. "You don't even know where Runabout is."

"I don't care!" Ironhide replied. "I'm going out to find him!"

"Very well." Optimus sighed and released Ironhide's arm. "At least take Bumper and Outback with you, Ironhide."

"Alright," Ironhide mumbled. "Guys, let's roll out!"

Ironhide didn't wait for his two teammates to catch up. He put the pedal to the metal and roared straight into the middle of the desert. He was picking up a faint energy signature. There was a Decepticon nearby. He transformed into his bipedal robot mode. Why did Optimus have to team him up with others, anyway? It was like Optimus didn't respect him, didn't trust him, even! Aw, he'd clear that up later. It was time to get back to the business at hand.

"Alright, Runabout, where are you?" he shouted.

Behind him, Bumper and Outback were getting closer. He pulled out his gattling gun in one hand while transforming his other hand into a water gun and setting it to its liquid nitrogen mode.

"Wait up!" cried Bumper.

Behind a nearby hill, a shadowy form aimed a sniper rifle at Ironhide's head. Just another second, and the old bot would be dead.

"Hurry up!" Ironhide cried.

Before he knew what was happening, there was a loud *BOOM*. The next thing he knew, he was on the ground. oil was leaking out of one eye. It had been an ambush all along. Prime was right...

"G-guys...get me b-back...to R-Ratchet...before I..."

He blacked out, and for many long hours, did not wake up. He was tossed into fitful dreams about his past. He remembered his first battle, when he'd met Optimus, and...

"He's been fully repaired," Ratchet said.

Ironhide sat up. He was okay. Thank goodness.

Devastron wrote:

metalspark wrote:NAME:METALSPARK
FUNCTION:
ALTERNATE MODES:SUPERMARINE SPITFIRE,STAGHOUND ARMOURED CAR
ALLIANCE:AUTOBOT

STRENGTH:6
INTELLIGENCE:9
RANK:7
SPEED:8
ENDURANCE:8
FIREPOWER:6
COURAGE:10
MELEE:6
ACCURACY:9
TECH SKILLS:7
DEXTERITY:9
CHARISMA:7

WEAPONS:BLACKLIGHT SWORD,MACHINE GUNS(8) AND A MORTAR CANNON
HEIGHT:12 FEET

BIO:
METALSPARK LANDED IN GREAT BRITAN IN 1939 JUST BEFORE THE OUTBREAK OF WORLD WAR 2. SENSING HE WAS NEEDED HE TOOK ON HIS ALTERNATE MODES DURING A MILITARY PARADE. IN 1945 AFTER AN AIR RAID HE WAS SENT INTO STASIS.
IN 1997 HE WAS WOKEN BY A GROUP OF TEENAGERS DIGGING FOR GUNS.
WHEN HE WAS WOKEN HE ALSO INTERCEPTED A CALL FROM OPTIMUS PRIME CALLING FOR ANY OTHER AUTOBOTS WHO JUST ARRIVED FROM CYBERTRON.
HE LOOKS UP TO AIR RAID AND JETFIRE AS IDOLS AND HOPES TO LEARN A THING OR TWO FROM THEM.


WEAKNESS:
METALSPARK IS YOUNG AND NEEDS ATTENTION OR HE'LL GO OFF AND DO SOMETHING WHICH USUALLY ENDS IN CATASTROPHE.

There is nothing about this application that is acceptable. Please go back and read the rules and background for the game before applying again. Also make sure to turn your caps lock off.

I couldn't turn my caps lock off i had a faulty key board
and can you tell me what characters are avalible

Razatron wrote:Name: Razatron

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Mercinary

Alt. mode: Blue and White F16 Eagle

Weapons: Null Ray Rifle, and Flak Rifle

Special Abilities: Able to fly in robot mode

Height: 35 ft. 10.668 meters.

Quote: "The enemy of my enemy is my friend"

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 7
RANK:

Profile: He was originally created to protect the Senators, but when the war started he sympathized with and join the Decepticons. After years of fighting and not gaining any profit, he quit the Decepticons and left Cybertron to fight for someone else in their wars. After the Autobots and Decepticons then awoke from their falling out, he then decided to join up with the Decepticons again, except with better weapons than he did the last time he joined. He took the form of an F16 Eagle, to blend in and to able of destroying earth's governments from within.

In secret he hopes to find Vector Sigma, or the All Spark and use them to create an army of robots that he could use to overthrow Megatron and Optimus Prime.

Abilities: He is capable of going either mach 3, or at escape velocity in his alternate mode. He can blast holes into his opponents with his Flak Rifle, and can short out equipment with his Null Ray Rifle. He has the ability to fly while in his bot mode. His alternate mode is a Blue and White F 16.

Weaknesses: He has a tendency to be arrogant, and there for thinks that he should be the leader of the Decepticons, he how ever has failed to keep this information from their current leader. He has a physical weakness that when he is in a fight he is more likely to lose when they blast him in the knees, and neck.

Sample Post:
Arrival 0100 Hours(1:00 AM)

The last of the air patrols are going back to base. He doesn't want any one to see him in is bot mode, so he scans one of the flying jets and takes its form. When he landed he then started to pretend to be a regular fighter jet.

After he felt seismic waves in the area that the Ark crashed, he then came out of hiding. When he found the Decepticons working on a new base and a new ship he then requested he join the Decepticons again. Once accepted back he then started on secret raids to collect energon so that he and the Decepticons can later take over all of Cybertron, and hopefully re-power it, and bring it back to life.

The history still doesn't work. He wouldn't have the ability to fly to other worlds on his own and the Ark never crashed on Earth. Both sides secretly arrived on Earth recently and began working infiltration missions. There is also no Vector Sigma or Allspark, no one knows how to create new Transformer life. If he is so outspoken about his desire to lead he would likely be crushed by Megatron or another higher ranking Decepticon at some point. A Null Ray rifle, if it works like Starscream's, will have a stat penalty of probably 4.

Nemesis Rodimus wrote:Okay, here I go. My previous character, Hubcap, was denied, so I'm going for Ironhide.


Name: Ironhide

Allegiance: Autobot

Function: Security

Alt. Mode: Red SUV

Weapons: Gatling Gun, laser rifle

Special Abilities: Water Gun (shoots liquid nitrogen, glue, ect.)

Height: 20 ft/5.20 m

Quote: "High tech security is no replacement for guts!"

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 3
Endurance: 9
Courage: 10
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 7
Rank:

Profile: "Go chew on a microchip!" is Ironhide's slogan. Prefers action to words. Bodyguard to Optimus Prime. In charge of guarding anything of importance. Gruff, but kind. Trithyllium-steel skin makes him nearly invulnerable to attack. Shoots variety of liquids from supercooled nitrogen to superheated lead. Has sonar, radar, radiowave detector. Slowest and most fragile of the group. Ironhide was built at a time when armor was thick, and circuitry was simple. He is the oldest of the Autobots, tested in thousands of battles, over countless centuries. He has been injured many times, but never deactivated. For every scratch and scar that he bears he has a tale to tell, and most of the younger Autobots are all too eager to hear them. Gruff, and sometimes grumpy, he is also naturally protective of the other Autobots. He is tough, rough, and nearly impossible to damage.

Abilites: Ironhide is a tough, impossible-to-stop Autobot. He can hit a top speed of 100 mph, and though he isn't the fastest Autobot, he is one of the toughest. He can use his water gun to great effect. The wall in Shockwave's base hates the weapon -- he's broken in and out of that base many times using it. He isn't a sharpshooter when it comes down to a sniping mission, but when he gets up close, the Decepticon he is fighting has oil dripping from many cracked joints.

Weaknesses: Perhaps one of Ironhide's only weaknesses is the fact that he's overeager. Whenever he finds out that something wrong, he rushes right in, not taking into account the fact that the situation might be an ambush. If he is ambushed, he often is not able to fight back before he is defeated. Only the fact that he's close friends with Optimus Prime has saved his life time and again.

Sample Post: Ironhide marched down the hallway of the Ark and into the command center. Once again, Ratchet was working on injured Autobots. He shook his head. If he were Ratchet, he wouldn't have the patience to fix everyone.
"Howdy, Ironhide."
That was young Bumblebee, the smallest Autobot. Ironhide looked down at his little buddy. Bumblebee was limping up to Ratchet. Ironhide followed closely.
"Uh, what happened?" Ironhide asked the young Autobot.
"I was...ambushed by Runabout," Bumblebee muttered.
Ironhide punched the wall and fingered the gattling gun hanging loosely on his waist. No one did that to his little buddy! He turned to run out of the base. Optimus Prime grabbed his shoulder firmly.
"Calm down, Ironhide," Optimus said gently. "You don't even know where Runabout is."
"I don't care!" Ironhide replied. "I'm going out to find him!"
"Very well." Optimus sighed and released Ironhide's arm. "At least take Bumper and Outback with you, Ironhide."
"Alright," Ironhide mumbled. "Guys, let's roll out!"
Ironhide didn't wait for his two teammates to catch up. He put the pedal to the metal and roared straight into the middle of the desert. He was picking up a faint energy signature. There was a Decepticon nearby. He transformed into his bipedal robot mode.
"Alright, Runabout, where are you?" he shouted.
Behind him, Bumper and Outback were getting closer. He pulled out his gattling gun in one hand while transforming his other hand into a water gun and setting it to its liquid nitrogen mode.
"Wait up!" cried Bumper.
Behind a nearby hill, a shadowy form aimed a sniper rifle at Ironhide's head. Just another second, and the old bot would be dead.
"Hurry up!" Ironhide cried.
Before he knew what was happening, there was a loud *BOOM*. The next thing he knew, he was on the ground. oil was leaking out of one eye. It had been an ambush all along. Prime was right...
"G-guys...get me b-back...to R-Ratchet...before I..."
He blacked out, and for many long hours, did not wake up. He was tossed into fitful dreams about his past. He remembered his first battle, when he'd met Optimus, and...
"He's been fully repaired," Ratchet said.
Ironhide sat up. He was okay. Thank goodness.

I'm a little bit confused on part of the profile. You mention how tough he is but then also call him fragile. As I understand it Ironhide is considered very tough and resistant to damage but has problems with internal breakdowns due to his age. I think you need to clear up that part a bit. Change the bit about him being the oldest Autobot to just one of the older Autobots. I'd also like to see more explanation of his watergun. I think you mean when he slides his hand back into his arm in exchange for a gun but you never really describe it beyond what it does. In the sample post I'd like to see more of his thoughts and not just actions and dialogue. Skipping lines between paragraphs would make it easier to read too.

metalspark wrote:I couldn't turn my caps lock off i had a faulty key board and can you tell me what characters are avalible

There is a canon roster list thread in this forum that lists played and unplayed characters.

"Blade"

Allegiance: Autobots
Function: special ops/spy/warrior
Alt. mode: Nissan 300z
Weapons: Energy katana, Laser blaster
Special Abilities: cloaking device
Height: 24 feet
Quote: "Knowing others is intelligence; knowing yourself is true wisdom."

Strength: 04
Intelligence: 07
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 08
Endurance: 05
Courage: 07
Firepower: 05
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 04
Charisma: 07
Rank:

Profile: Blade knows he isn't the biggest or strongest Autobot, but what he lacks in size he makes up for with shear speed and technique. He has trained in lost Cybertronian ways of combat, and his energy blades can slice through even the thickest of Decepticon armor.

Abilities: Blade relies on his speed, combat dexterity and precision to get the job done. His movements are so fast they sometimes look like a blur on the battlefield. He is a specialist at gaining information behind the battle lines, using his cloaking device and skill to go unnoticed even in the most dangerous of areas.


Weaknesses: His size, while giving him several advantages, also makes him vunerable to more powerful attacks.

Sample post:
Back on Cybertron, the starlight softly reflects off a a dark surface, scared by years of warfare. A lone figure quickly approaches from the distance, quickly moving in and out of cover, with a look of determination on his rigid face.

He was told his mission was suicide, that no Autobot could go so deep into Decepticon territory unnoticed, but he is no normal Autobot. His name in Blades, and he is a dying breed, trained in the arts of stealth, he knows no fear. As he comes upon a Decepticon prison camp, he smirks, engages his cloaking suit and says to himself "This is what I live for".

Blade quickly approaches the prison camp, searching for his friend Bumble Bee who was captured a few nights earlier. The air smells of burning rubber and hot metal, the corpses of dead Autobots litter the area. Using his sensors, he scans the area and sure enough picks up on Bee's energy signature. He knows this task won't be easy, for he is outnumbered 6 to 1 by Decepticon drone soilders. Quickly he strikes the two drones guarding Bee's holding cell, decapitating both with one fell swoop. He carefully downloads the holding cell codes from one of the dead soilder's cortex, and releases his weakened, but still alive friend. As they sneak away into the darkness, Bee asks "What took you so long". Blade dosen't comment, he just smirks.