I love your explanation of fem-bots, best ive heard. Couple of spelling mistakes:
“Be careful not to damage the equipment.” Skywarp noted from within the cockpit.
“Thank you for stating the obvious.” Starscream replied angrily.
The white swung his gigantic fist at the attacking humans, smashing them where they stood or knocking them to the ground or into nearby walls. It didn't take him long to put down all the human resistance."
Not strictly a spelling mistake, but you refer to starscream as "The white". I assume the missing word was "seeker"?
"The door to Shockwave's cell slid open, and light flooded inside prompting
Shocwave's single yellow eye to flash into life. His head turned towards the door and surveyed the figures standing in the doorway. Shockwave himself was restrained in the most undignified manner, his body stretched and shackled to the floor and ceiling."
Self explanatory. One of the dangers of proper nouns in a spellchecker
"Shockwave remained silent, he felt no emotion over this decision but quickly scanned through his knowledge of Cybertronian law. Once finished, he remained silent, he had not found anything that would prolong his existence. He had already appealed the decision once before and it was not possible to do so again."
Duplication of the phrase "remained silent". Not a biggy, but just reads slightly odd.
"Berger
noded slowly, he could feel a damp warmth spreading between his legs and he stuttered a response which could vaguely be considered an agreement."
Minor spelling error again.
Still really enjoying it! Nearly done!