aww finished already
cant wait for more -im very impatont - impashiont?? -I want things quickly- and its gonna suck to read the rest in installment -great though
i would have changed it to oh slag! -or even ***** mostly because i scrolled down to fast and ecspected it to end with something acctually about vector sigma but also because its better to end it without explanation also because to translate it would be oh god or jesus crist but if my head got cut off (and i was a robot) i'd probibly be more mother fcuker!! or atleast oh slag! to me jesus crist seem more not again where as slag would be more wtf
aaannnd i was gonna mention this anyway souls-sparks firstly to translate jesus crist to vector sigma conflicts with not wanting to say sparks instead of souls a bit and imo spark is more apropiote because not only is soul our cheesy name for our contiontness even translteing it -its a spark of life - an actuale phisical thing they can see and even take out, plus its an acctual spark of energy
some actual mistakes
knuckled crack instead of knuckles and
Skywarp think of how Thundercracker instead of thought
anyway great story keep(hurry) it up and get some more up there
-supose i'll get to those mosaics now
ok you spoted knuckels