The Energon Pub

Tybre wrote:Alright, trying to figure out what stats balance out to what is just way too hard, so I'm going with a canon that is allegedly open. (I don't know when you last updated the roster of taken ones)

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Skydive

Allegiance: Autobot
Sub-Group: Aerialbots
Function: Air Warfare Strategist
Alternate Mode: Cybertronian Silver Interceptor Jet
Weapons: Nega Gun
Height: 30’ft / 9,14m
Motto: "Only by studying the past can we win the present."

(I have no idea how to add the stat-board thing. I can put in a red bar, but not the whole thing. So until I figure that out, it'll be posted as a list)

Strength: 5
Intelligence: 10
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 9
Endurance: 4
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 5
Tech Skill: 7
Charisma: 5
Rank: 6

Profile: Skydive is more interested in reading about jet fighters than being one, He's more likely to have his face stuck in a hologram projection of famous Cybertronian air battles than to be in the air himself. It's not that he's a coward- he's just fascinated by the science of aerial warfare. But even though he's a somewhat reluctant member of the Aerialbot team, he is invaluable- his knowledge of aerial military tactics is without equal. His biggest fault, if you could call it that, is he doesn't realize how smart he really is. At least everyone else around him does.

Abilities: The information-storage capacity of Skydive's cerebro-circuitry is greater than most Transformers'. This enables him to record instantaneously any flying motions he sees, and, within the limits of his design, duplicate them himself. Thus, he's able to simulate the techniques of almost anyone he's studied as well as the gliding patterns of flying creatures he's watched. He is possibly the most skilled flyer of all the flying Transformers. His maximum speed is Mach 2.6 and range is 1400 miles. In jet mode, he can shoot laser-guided missiles with a range of 80 miles. In robot mode, he uses a nega-gun, which shoots a beam that cancels the bonding force between molecules. Only objects held together by the strongest molecular bonds can resist crumbling to dust when hit by the beam.

Weaknesses: Sometimes, in duplicating the flight of another, Skydive pushes his design beyond its limits. This often results in mid-air stalls. He can usually recover before crashing, but while stalled, he is completely vulnerable to attack.

Sample:
The air rippled like water as two F-14 Tomcats soared right past him. He felt them strike against his body, as if the distortions of air and sound waves were tangible. They were to him, anyway. He watched as three new jets soared into the area from the opposite direction, and traveling at much greater speed before. His optical sensors locked on one of the jets and he immediately studied its entire body. When he had a full set of schematics, he began looking into what the peoples of this planet called "internet". It was there that he learned what these jets were - F-22 Raptors. Surely the information he had gathered here would prove useful for the future of Aerialbots. He circled around the air base once more and then went shotting straight up into space, straight home.

Skydive descended near Iacon and landed as the bridge extended. A small section would slide away as he got nearer to the doors, but never enough to make him fall. Once he was inside the Autobot city, he proceeded to the command center and uploaded the data he had gathered into the main database. Next, he called up a hologram of some of the maneuvers he recorded the Tomcats doing, taking careful notice of every last movement to ensure that he would perform them properly. Once that was done, he called up a hologram of what the "internet" had called an Apache helicopter. It was armed to the teeth, rather large, and seemed like it could carry multiple people. If the Autobots found a way of transforming into something like an Apache - the chief difference being that it would need to carry giant robots instead of fleshy humans - then they could turn the tide of the war in
their favor.

"Earth certainly is an excellent research zone." He mumbled to himself.

Approved. Start him in Nova Cronum with the other Aerialbots, and remember, the Autobots have not visited Earth (with the exception of the Dinobots and Jetfire) and know nothing about it yet.

This guy looks interesting and useful *evil laugh*

Name: Ghost
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Stealth Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet/ (Earth) Modified F-15 Eagle
Weapons: Standard Seeker lasers
Special Abilities: Flight ability in robot mode, Nigh undetectable cloacking (-15 pts)
Height: 28 ft (8,35 meters)
Quote: "Do you not know who we are? We are legion."


Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 9
Endurance: 6
Courage: 7
Firepower: 6
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 3
Tech Skill: 3
Charisma: 4
Rank: 7


Appearance: Ghost has a light structure, his main colors are white, dark grey and grey-blue, but these colors are hardly recognizable, because Ghost himself is transparent.

Profile: Ghost is the only survivor of a failed experiment. Decepticon scientists set out to create the ultimate stealth warrior, subjecting volunteers to a new treatment that would enable them to control their molecular structures, thus giving them the ability to literally walk through walls or even disappear before one's very optics. Unfortunately, most subjects couldn't bring themselves back to their original solid states and eventually faded out of existence. Whether it was because of his unwavering loyalty to the Decepticon cause or simple refusal to die, Ghost survived the process, although in a rather degraded physical and mental state.

His comrades call Ghost crazy as he believes he is a link between the living and the dead. He insists that he hears the voices of his fallen brothers who did actually fade away from existence but are still right there with him. Whether this is true or not, none can deny that Ghost is the perfect spy and is invaluable to the Decepticon cause.

Abilities: The experiment had left several traces on Ghost. As a considerable percentage of his molecules disappeared or shifted, his body structure became much lighter than before. As a result, he is transparent, hard to recognize by visual means to the average optics, and is virtually undetectable by radar since there is almost nothing left in his body to reflect radar waves. He can also reach great speeds because of his lighter structure, up to Mach 6.3. He is armed with the standard laser armament for Seekers.

Weaknesses: Ghost is the ultimate stealth warrior who is nearly undetectable, however, once he is detected, he can be dealt with quickly. The experiment affected both his armament and physical state, weakening him and rendering him not suitable for any real combat situations.


Sample post:

His cold body kissed the fine line between death and existence, but that was not what drew his focus at the moment. They could not see nor detect him as he stood among the many sweeps meant to replace his kind. His optics locked onto Scourge and Macabre, the two unworthy decepticons spoke quietly but not quietly enough. Pushing aside the other voices, Ghost took in Their hushed words with a grim smile. They thought Starscream was a joke, an outdated transformer in need of removal. The seekers would not be pushed aside as easily as these two assumed. Feeling that sufficient data had been obtained Ghost rose into the air and quickly transformed into jet mode. Speeding off at Mach 6 to report to the Seeker Commander.

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*Silverblade wrote:This guy looks interesting and useful *evil laugh*

Name: Ghost
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Stealth Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet/ (Earth) Modified F-15 Eagle
Weapons: Standard Seeker lasers
Special Abilities: Flight ability in robot mode, Nigh undetectable cloacking (-15 pts)
Height: 28 ft (8,35 meters)
Quote: "Do you not know who we are? We are legion."


Strength: 6
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 9
Endurance: 6
Courage: 7
Firepower: 6
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 3
Tech Skill: 3
Charisma: 4
Rank: 7


Appearance: Ghost has a light structure, his main colors are white, dark grey and grey-blue, but these colors are hardly recognizable, because Ghost himself is transparent.

Profile: Ghost is the only survivor of a failed experiment. Decepticon scientists set out to create the ultimate stealth warrior, subjecting volunteers to a new treatment that would enable them to control their molecular structures, thus giving them the ability to literally walk through walls or even disappear before one's very optics. Unfortunately, most subjects couldn't bring themselves back to their original solid states and eventually faded out of existence. Whether it was because of his unwavering loyalty to the Decepticon cause or simple refusal to die, Ghost survived the process, although in a rather degraded physical and mental state.

His comrades call Ghost crazy as he believes he is a link between the living and the dead. He insists that he hears the voices of his fallen brothers who did actually fade away from existence but are still right there with him. Whether this is true or not, none can deny that Ghost is the perfect spy and is invaluable to the Decepticon cause.

Abilities: The experiment had left several traces on Ghost. As a considerable percentage of his molecules disappeared or shifted, his body structure became much lighter than before. As a result, he is transparent, hard to recognize by visual means to the average optics, and is virtually undetectable by radar since there is almost nothing left in his body to reflect radar waves. He can also reach great speeds because of his lighter structure, up to Mach 6.3. He is armed with the standard laser armament for Seekers.

Weaknesses: Ghost is the ultimate stealth warrior who is nearly undetectable, however, once he is detected, he can be dealt with quickly. The experiment affected both his armament and physical state, weakening him and rendering him not suitable for any real combat situations.


Sample post:

His cold body kissed the fine line between death and existence, but that was not what drew his focus at the moment. They could not see nor detect him as he stood among the many sweeps meant to replace his kind. His optics locked onto Scourge and Macabre, the two unworthy decepticons spoke quietly but not quietly enough. Pushing aside the other voices, Ghost took in Their hushed words with a grim smile. They thought Starscream was a joke, an outdated transformer in need of removal. The seekers would not be pushed aside as easily as these two assumed. Feeling that sufficient data had been obtained Ghost rose into the air and quickly transformed into jet mode. Speeding off at Mach 6 to report to the Seeker Commander.

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Approved. Have him join the Seekers flying from Kaon to Polyhex.

Name: Alpha
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: 2007 Chevy Beat Concept
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z243 ... _ch125.jpg
Weapons: Headlight which are forearms in robot mode shoot out ion lazer beams,
his main weapon is based off an AA-12 fully automatic non recoil shotgun (on future weapons),
the passenger and Driver doors make shield panels on left and right arm.
Height: 16 feet/4.572 meters
Quote: 'Big things come in small packages'

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: ??
Profile: Alpha is only kind to his fellow autobots and he hate traitors,
spys and most of all decepticons, he will destroy any decepticon without hesatation,
and he often rushes into battle before thinking of a strategy.

Abilities: His top speed in vehicle mode is 260 but in robot mode it is 35.

Weaknesses: If you take out his arms he is powerer less and very vulnerable to short and long range attacks.

Sample Post: Alpha was taking a drive, that always calms him down,
he just got yelled at by Optimus Prime for being stupid and running into battles.
He drove past a decepticon named Stealth, whose alt. mode was a red and black Kawisaki Ninja,
with out even noticeing him. Stealth started following him.
Alpha got on the highway than Stealth came up beside him and tried to ram him off.
He was trying to fight back but Steath had way more horsepower than him. But Alpha had a good idea (for once) ,
right when Stealth was about to ram him he completely stopped and Stealth fley right off the highway.
"Optimus is gonna hate me for this" he said transforming in the middle of the highway. People stared in amazement and fear,
they never saw anything like it before. Than Alpha jumpped off the highway on to stealth's body hopeing to finsh him once and for all.
But stealth got back up when alpha got off his body. You are really getting on my nerves" Alpha said as he was charging his right arms ion cannon.
Stealth started rushing at him at full speed. Right before Steath could hit him Alpha blew a hole through Stealth with his ion cannon.
"At least hes finished, but i dont know how pissed Optimus is gonna be."

MechMasterAlpha wrote:Name: Alpha
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: 2007 Chevy Beat Concept
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z243 ... _ch125.jpg
Weapons: Headlight which are forearms in robot mode shoot out ion lazer beams,
his main weapon is based off an AA-12 fully automatic non recoil shotgun (on future weapons),
the passenger and Driver doors make shield panels on left and right arm.
Height: 16 feet/4.572 meters
Quote: 'Big things come in small packages'

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: ??
Profile: Alpha is only kind to his fellow autobots and he hate traitors,
spys and most of all decepticons, he will destroy any decepticon without hesatation,
and he often rushes into battle before thinking of a strategy.

Abilities: His top speed in vehicle mode is 260 but in robot mode it is 35.

Weaknesses: If you take out his arms he is powerer less and very vulnerable to short and long range attacks.

Sample Post: Alpha was taking a drive, that always calms him down,
he just got yelled at by Optimus Prime for being stupid and running into battles.
He drove past a decepticon named Stealth, whose alt. mode was a red and black Kawisaki Ninja,
with out even noticeing him. Stealth started following him.
Alpha got on the highway than Stealth came up beside him and tried to ram him off.
He was trying to fight back but Steath had way more horsepower than him. But Alpha had a good idea (for once) ,
right when Stealth was about to ram him he completely stopped and Stealth fley right off the highway.
"Optimus is gonna hate me for this" he said transforming in the middle of the highway. People stared in amazement and fear,
they never saw anything like it before. Than Alpha jumpped off the highway on to stealth's body hopeing to finsh him once and for all.
But stealth got back up when alpha got off his body. You are really getting on my nerves" Alpha said as he was charging his right arms ion cannon.
Stealth started rushing at him at full speed. Right before Steath could hit him Alpha blew a hole through Stealth with his ion cannon.
"At least hes finished, but i dont know how pissed Optimus is gonna be."

I remember when you posted this exact same profile before, so let me just repeat what I said then.

The profile and abilities sections are far too short and your grammar and spelling need some work before this profile can be accepted. Check out some of the accepted profiles for a better idea of what we are looking for.

Also, do not post any pictures in this thread and do not waste the staff's time by posting the exact same profile without the requested changes again. Thank you.

Name: Datamine

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Research & Development

Alt. mode: Satellite

Weapons: Cluster Bombs [main1 - mounted]
Drill Pistol with Electromagnetic Taser Attachment [sub1]
- The drill pistol fire solid rounds where the aummunition is carved in such a manner that it will cause the round to spiral much like a drill would. This ammuntion is not for large amounts of damage but instead intended to shoot 'clean' holes through a target leaving exposed wires, or leaks. The Electromagnetic Pulse taser mount by it self would do little more then sting a transformer and has very short range. It's true intention is to inflict stunning damange to exposed circuts.

Special Abilities: Radar, Energy Conversation. Two other unique abilities is datamining in which he can sort through massive amounts of recorded or currently viewed data in order to pick and chose select pieces of information which are relevent. The other one which I'd like is something I guess I'll call DataLag, in which if there is an individual Transformer threatening him, he can sort of overload that Transformers processor by sending it massive amounts of what is essentially useless data, but since the Transformer can't process the data as quickly it sort of...lags the transformer for a few moments slowing it down. This process can be continious if Datamine continues the feed, or a quick burst to allow him to gain distance to flee.

Height: 17 feet, 5.5 meters

Quote: "It's not about emotion, morales, or feelings; just facts."

STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 9
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 3
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 3
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: I'm not gonna lie, I tried to post this earlier and it had extensive information from here on out, but this is gonna be kind of short and sweet so excuse the directness. Datamine is cold and calculated. Like any Decepticon he has visions of granduer but would never dare put himself in the spot light. He prefers to act as a puppeter almost pulling the strings in his favor. Ultimately however he is loyal to the Decepticon cause and would never dare cross Megatron, Starscream, Shockwave, or Soundwave - others are questionable, but he would unlikely. He prefers to be alone, and keep his distance. He's watched and recorded a lot of battles - a single death or a massacre mean nothing to him anymore. It's turned him cold. One death, or a thousand all it is, is a number. Cold, calculated, and merciless. He dables in Decepticon Sciences expertmenting with energy conservation methods, virus, upgrades, and occasionally some mad scientest projects. He's borderline manical in the confines of his laboratory, calm and collected at a distance, and nervous in close quaters.

Abilities: His processing unit is very unique in that he can record, review, and datamine serveral seperate streams of information all at once while still functioning properly. He can push himself shutting down various primary functions in order to process more steams of information to the point where can enter a coma like state of stasis. While orbiting he has solar panels that he uses to collect energy in order to continue powering his body. In this state, he can remain in orbit for upwards of four months without refueling due to the tiny amount of energy output during this time. He also has the ability to hack hardwired systems, and lagout or overload wireless systems with extreme ease. Even just by focusing on any given Transformer he can get a complete diagnostic read on him. Not in the sense that Soundwave can read minds, but in the sense of an x-ray almost...sort of seeing "muscles" tense, seind a more rapid flow of fluids in case of adrenaline, or finding a weakness.

Weaknesses: He's a frail Transformer, can't take much hits. Becomes very nervous, unsure of his abilities, and wants to flee when in close quaters even if he is undected. his other main weakness is more of a weakness in ability. If he is just scanning data he'll find everything. However assign him a task - as in telling him or he takes it upon himself and he over looks a lot of vital information. Example, he's told to find where Prime is. He hacks the computer systems and finds where Prime is. The problem being he bypassed tons of information, something even as vital as the fact that Ultra Magnus is leading an ambush attack. under normal circumstances he would have found said information, but when goal oriented he looks past that. Another weakness is that he can get very involved with his experiments, over look minor details and often cause negative sideffects.

Sample Post:

He floated almost lifelessly in space. The only sign of activity was a singular blinking light on the left hand side of the cybertronian born satellite. The satellite bore neither factions icon and appeared defenseless so in appearance in was nothing more then a Cybertronian Civil Satellite orbiting around the planet. Upon closer exmanion though, as most things with this planet the satellite was more then had met the eye. It wasn't relaying information to civil posts, instead through various thrusters and magnetic pulses it managed to keep it's orbit in a small circle around Iacon. Granted, he was far above Iacon in the near depths of space but above Iacon he was. For the time being he simply recordered, replayed, translated, intercepted and traced every outgoing and incoming communication from the city and relayed any relevent information to either Soundwave or Shockwave. While those processors ran at a rapid pace, another part of his mind ran various equations testing out the potential of an experimential virus he was speculating on. Here, in the depths of space he was alone and would remain until he is either summoned to a post to report in face, or told to refuel and escorted to another location - typically in orbit, but he frequents the high skies as well. It's when they call him in for the more up close and personal missions is when he starts to get nervous. He kept his radar scanning on high alert, just in case he detected an Autobot signature making a direct line for him.

looks like we need some sweeps

Discord

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Sweeps
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Hovercraft
Weapons: Heat laser, disintegrator cannons
Special Abilities: Robot Flight Mode, enhanced sensors, ability to escape earth’s gravity
Height: 31ft / 9.46m
Quote: “I like the finer things in life, like crushing the life out of an Autobot.”

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK: 5

Profile: Discord, at first, appears to be the most civilized and sociable of the Sweeps. She can be quite charming and is capable of holding an intelligent conversation on a number of topics, especially on the finer things in life. What her enemies realize, usually too late, is that this is all a façade. Her physical and intellectual charms are used to draw her enemies, and even her friends, into a false sense of security. Inside she is a brutal and savage warrior, preferring to rip her enemies apart with her bare hands.

Abilities: Discord’s primary assets are her intelligence and her social skills. She often serves as spokeswoman for the Sweeps when dealing with other groups. She can often use her wits and charms to get whatever she wants. When that fails she can be a fierce fighter, particularly in hand to hand combat. She is a fast and light fighter. In robot mode, she is armed with a heat laser that can turn most armor into slag. She also possesses the advanced sensors and space flight capabilities common to all of the Sweeps.

Weaknesses: Discord is not very powerful physically, possessing only average strength and endurance.

Sample:
Discord landed with the grace of a dancer only a few feet from Macabre. She approached him with a confident yet seductive step, stopping inches from her superior.

“You said you had an assignment for mer Macabre?”

Her optics glowed giving off a soft light, smiling with a quirk to the side of her mouth. She took a step back. Her usual assignments involved seducing her target and then extracting information from them before ripping out their spark. Discord was the temptress of the Decepticons. The pale lights of the base washed over her supple blue and gold frame glinting here and there as she moved. She looked at him again her voice soft.
“You know I’m always up for a challenge. Is there a possibility you’ll be accompanying me?”


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Torment

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Sweeps
Function: Tracker
Alt. modes: Cybertronian Hovercraft
Weapons: Heat laser, disintegrator cannons, Arm disruptor cannon
Special Abilities: Robot Flight Mode, enhanced sensors, ability to escape earth’s gravity
Height: 31ft / 9.46m
Quote: “I will find you and kill you…slowly.”


STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 3
RANK: 5

Profile: Silent, remorseless, and dedicated to pain. If Torment singles you out for destruction, he will kill you. You will not know when. You will not know how. You will not know why. But it will hurt, a lot, and you will suffer and die slowly. Torment’s only satisfaction comes when his target is screaming in agony as he slowly disintegrates.

Abilities: Torment is one of the fastest of the Sweeps and is second only to Scourge in tracking ability. His right arm is a disruptor cannon capable of slowly dissolving the bonds between its target’s molecules. He also possesses all of the standard weapon and tracking systems of all Sweeps.

Weaknesses: His high speed and tracking function off put him out ahead of the main force. This combined with his loner nature often lead him to being outnumbered in battle and with backup a distance away.

Sample:

Scourge had been halfway through hunting down the target when Megatron had pulled him away for urgent matters, but before the elite sweep left on his new assignment he had summoned Torment, whose skills were second only to Scourge. The Sweep tracker was to complete the kill and report immediately. Closing the panel on his arm Torment took to the sky. There were very few as fast as he, which made his hunting much more successful. A grin played across his face as he thought of his prey. A seeker who had betrayed them to the Autobots.

Snapdragon

Allegiance: Decepticons
Sub-group: Horrorcons
Function: Interceptor
Alt. mode: Pitt Beast / Inteceptor Jet
Weapons: Gyro-gun / Laser Cannon (Robot and Dragon mode), Four Laser Cannons (Jet Mode)
Height: 34ft / 10.37m
Quote: "If it doesn't get you dirty, it's not worth doing."

Strength: 10.
Intelligence: 9.
Dexterity: 8.
Speed: 9.
Endurance: 8.
Courage: 7.
Firepower: 8.
Accuracy: 7.
Melee: 8.
Tech: 6.
Charisma: 6.
Rank: 6.

Profile: Wading up to his neck in grease is Snapdragon's idea of a good time. And if a grease pit isn't handy, he'd be just as happy cracking open an enemy and bathing in his fuel. Not surprisingly, Snapdragon drips a petrochemical trail wherever he goes. His penchant for lolling around on his back in sludge pools gives many the impression that Snapdragon is lazy and difficult to motivate. He is. But he also hides a hair-trigger temper. Cross him and he'll rip your chest plate off with a lightning-fast slash of his claws. When Snapdragon says he doesn't want to be disturbed, he means it.

Abilities: In jet mode, Snapdragon uses dual turbo-booster rocket engines to reach speeds of 8800 mph. Four independently targetable laser cannons mounted on his tail wings make him a challenge to anyone flying within 12 miles. In reptile mode, Snapdragon has heat-treated carbon-steel claws and teeth that can cut through virtually any substance. In robot mode, he uses two gyro-guns, which interferes with the balancing circuitry of any robot its beam hits. Both of these gyro-guns can also be used as laser cannons. Snapdragon is also extremely intelligent which is made more dangerous by the fact that his nature hides that intelligence.

Weaknesses: Snapdragon's can be prone to bouts of extreme laziness. When relaxing in a grease pit it can be a very difficult process to get him motivated enough to do whatever task is required and it usually triggers his hair-trigger temper on whoever dared disturb him. Apeface usually has an easier time of it but it is still not a quick process.

Apeface

Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-Group: Horrorcons
Function: Saboteur
Alt. mode: Cybertronian beast, Cybertronian jet
Weapons: Semi-Automatic Sonic Boomer Gun
Height: 33ft / 10m
Quote: "Obnoxiousness is not a problem, it is an art."


Strength:10Intelligence:09Dexterity:08Speed:08Endurance:08Courage:08Firepower:07Accuracy:07Melee:08Tech Skill:07Charisma:04Rank:06

Profile: Apeface is a thuggish bully. He is loudly insulting, prone to violent outbursts, thoroughly messy and odiferous, and generally crass Decepticons smile to his face, but wary of becoming his next victims. Apeface is viewed as a simple-minded, violent hoodlum to be avoided by both his allies and his foes. His detractors are only half right. The highly intelligent Apeface had taken calculated steps to become the most foul, frightening being possible. His seemingly animalistic, savage demeanor is all part of a concerted effort to dominate all those around him through fear. With his overwhelming physical strength and abilities, he has no problem backing up his desired image. Though what truly lies beneath his sturdy hide, goals and purposes, only he knows.

Abilities: Apeface is a Triplechanger, able to switch between three modes at twice the speed of the average Transformer. In jet mode, maximum speed is 3250 mph, range of 7000 miles. In beast mode, pneumatic joints give him super-agility that he can partially access in robot mode. In robot mode, carries an electro-shield that emits a small force-field and a semi-automatic sonic boomer gun that fires blasts of concentrated sound.

Weaknesses: Lack of offensive weapons makes him fairly vulnerable in jet mode.

*Silverblade wrote:looks like we need some sweeps

Discord

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Sweeps
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Hovercraft
Weapons: Heat laser, disintegrator cannons
Special Abilities: Robot Flight Mode, enhanced sensors, ability to escape earth’s gravity
Height: 31ft / 9.46m
Quote: “I like the finer things in life, like crushing the life out of an Autobot.”

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK: 5

Profile: Discord, at first, appears to be the most civilized and sociable of the Sweeps. She can be quite charming and is capable of holding an intelligent conversation on a number of topics, especially on the finer things in life. What her enemies realize, usually too late, is that this is all a façade. Her physical and intellectual charms are used to draw her enemies, and even her friends, into a false sense of security. Inside she is a brutal and savage warrior, preferring to rip her enemies apart with her bare hands.

Abilities: Discord’s primary assets are her intelligence and her social skills. She often serves as spokeswoman for the Sweeps when dealing with other groups. She can often use her wits and charms to get whatever she wants. When that fails she can be a fierce fighter, particularly in hand to hand combat. She is a fast and light fighter. In robot mode, she is armed with a heat laser that can turn most armor into slag. She also possesses the advanced sensors and space flight capabilities common to all of the Sweeps.

Weaknesses: Discord is not very powerful physically, possessing only average strength and endurance.

Sample:
Discord landed with the grace of a dancer only a few feet from Macabre. She approached him with a confident yet seductive step, stopping inches from her superior.

“You said you had an assignment for mer Macabre?”

Her optics glowed giving off a soft light, smiling with a quirk to the side of her mouth. She took a step back. Her usual assignments involved seducing her target and then extracting information from them before ripping out their spark. Discord was the temptress of the Decepticons. The pale lights of the base washed over her supple blue and gold frame glinting here and there as she moved. She looked at him again her voice soft.
“You know I’m always up for a challenge. Is there a possibility you’ll be accompanying me?”


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Torment

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Sweeps
Function: Tracker
Alt. modes: Cybertronian Hovercraft
Weapons: Heat laser, disintegrator cannons, Arm disruptor cannon
Special Abilities: Robot Flight Mode, enhanced sensors, ability to escape earth’s gravity
Height: 31ft / 9.46m
Quote: “I will find you and kill you…slowly.”


STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 3
RANK: 5

Profile: Silent, remorseless, and dedicated to pain. If Torment singles you out for destruction, he will kill you. You will not know when. You will not know how. You will not know why. But it will hurt, a lot, and you will suffer and die slowly. Torment’s only satisfaction comes when his target is screaming in agony as he slowly disintegrates.

Abilities: Torment is one of the fastest of the Sweeps and is second only to Scourge in tracking ability. His right arm is a disruptor cannon capable of slowly dissolving the bonds between its target’s molecules. He also possesses all of the standard weapon and tracking systems of all Sweeps.

Weaknesses: His high speed and tracking function off put him out ahead of the main force. This combined with his loner nature often lead him to being outnumbered in battle and with backup a distance away.

Sample:

Scourge had been halfway through hunting down the target when Megatron had pulled him away for urgent matters, but before the elite sweep left on his new assignment he had summoned Torment, whose skills were second only to Scourge. The Sweep tracker was to complete the kill and report immediately. Closing the panel on his arm Torment took to the sky. There were very few as fast as he, which made his hunting much more successful. A grin played across his face as he thought of his prey. A seeker who had betrayed them to the Autobots.

Cool, now the Sweeps aren't outnumbered as badly. Approved. Start them in Kaon with Macabre.

Datamine wrote:Name: Datamine

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Research & Development

Alt. mode: Satellite

Weapons: Cluster Bombs [main1 - mounted]
Drill Pistol with Electromagnetic Taser Attachment [sub1]
- The drill pistol fire solid rounds where the aummunition is carved in such a manner that it will cause the round to spiral much like a drill would. This ammuntion is not for large amounts of damage but instead intended to shoot 'clean' holes through a target leaving exposed wires, or leaks. The Electromagnetic Pulse taser mount by it self would do little more then sting a transformer and has very short range. It's true intention is to inflict stunning damange to exposed circuts.

Special Abilities: Radar, Energy Conversation. Two other unique abilities is datamining in which he can sort through massive amounts of recorded or currently viewed data in order to pick and chose select pieces of information which are relevent. The other one which I'd like is something I guess I'll call DataLag, in which if there is an individual Transformer threatening him, he can sort of overload that Transformers processor by sending it massive amounts of what is essentially useless data, but since the Transformer can't process the data as quickly it sort of...lags the transformer for a few moments slowing it down. This process can be continious if Datamine continues the feed, or a quick burst to allow him to gain distance to flee.

Height: 17 feet, 5.5 meters

Quote: "It's not about emotion, morales, or feelings; just facts."

STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 9
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 3
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 3
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: I'm not gonna lie, I tried to post this earlier and it had extensive information from here on out, but this is gonna be kind of short and sweet so excuse the directness. Datamine is cold and calculated. Like any Decepticon he has visions of granduer but would never dare put himself in the spot light. He prefers to act as a puppeter almost pulling the strings in his favor. Ultimately however he is loyal to the Decepticon cause and would never dare cross Megatron, Starscream, Shockwave, or Soundwave - others are questionable, but he would unlikely. He prefers to be alone, and keep his distance. He's watched and recorded a lot of battles - a single death or a massacre mean nothing to him anymore. It's turned him cold. One death, or a thousand all it is, is a number. Cold, calculated, and merciless. He dables in Decepticon Sciences expertmenting with energy conservation methods, virus, upgrades, and occasionally some mad scientest projects. He's borderline manical in the confines of his laboratory, calm and collected at a distance, and nervous in close quaters.

Abilities: His processing unit is very unique in that he can record, review, and datamine serveral seperate streams of information all at once while still functioning properly. He can push himself shutting down various primary functions in order to process more steams of information to the point where can enter a coma like state of stasis. While orbiting he has solar panels that he uses to collect energy in order to continue powering his body. In this state, he can remain in orbit for upwards of four months without refueling due to the tiny amount of energy output during this time. He also has the ability to hack hardwired systems, and lagout or overload wireless systems with extreme ease. Even just by focusing on any given Transformer he can get a complete diagnostic read on him. Not in the sense that Soundwave can read minds, but in the sense of an x-ray almost...sort of seeing "muscles" tense, seind a more rapid flow of fluids in case of adrenaline, or finding a weakness.

Weaknesses: He's a frail Transformer, can't take much hits. Becomes very nervous, unsure of his abilities, and wants to flee when in close quaters even if he is undected. his other main weakness is more of a weakness in ability. If he is just scanning data he'll find everything. However assign him a task - as in telling him or he takes it upon himself and he over looks a lot of vital information. Example, he's told to find where Prime is. He hacks the computer systems and finds where Prime is. The problem being he bypassed tons of information, something even as vital as the fact that Ultra Magnus is leading an ambush attack. under normal circumstances he would have found said information, but when goal oriented he looks past that. Another weakness is that he can get very involved with his experiments, over look minor details and often cause negative sideffects.

Sample Post:

He floated almost lifelessly in space. The only sign of activity was a singular blinking light on the left hand side of the cybertronian born satellite. The satellite bore neither factions icon and appeared defenseless so in appearance in was nothing more then a Cybertronian Civil Satellite orbiting around the planet. Upon closer exmanion though, as most things with this planet the satellite was more then had met the eye. It wasn't relaying information to civil posts, instead through various thrusters and magnetic pulses it managed to keep it's orbit in a small circle around Iacon. Granted, he was far above Iacon in the near depths of space but above Iacon he was. For the time being he simply recordered, replayed, translated, intercepted and traced every outgoing and incoming communication from the city and relayed any relevent information to either Soundwave or Shockwave. While those processors ran at a rapid pace, another part of his mind ran various equations testing out the potential of an experimential virus he was speculating on. Here, in the depths of space he was alone and would remain until he is either summoned to a post to report in face, or told to refuel and escorted to another location - typically in orbit, but he frequents the high skies as well. It's when they call him in for the more up close and personal missions is when he starts to get nervous. He kept his radar scanning on high alert, just in case he detected an Autobot signature making a direct line for him.

Hmm, interesting. The DataLag attack isn't really permissible since I can't see how Datamine would get access to a Transformer's processors while that TF was attacking him.

My main reservation with this character is that it sounds like his function and abilities will keep him out in the middle of nowhere for long stretches, not really interacting with anyone. Perhaps he could be modified to be a little more...action-/roleplay-friendly somehow?

Thoughts, other mods?

Snapdragon and Apeface are approved to start in Kaon. Whew, since when does Stone play Decepticons?

Name: Azura.
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Soldier
Alt. mode: A female gorrila. (pink convertible)
Weapons: SHe has an anti matter gun. and two mini partical turrets on each of her soulders.
Height: 6 feet 2meters.
Quote: One shell fight to makes things better. But not at the expance of nature'

STRENGTH: 1-9 (3*)
INTELLIGENCE: 1-9 (7*)
DEXTERITY: 1-9 (2*)
SPEED: 1-9 (10*)
ENDURANCE: 1-9 (4*)
COURAGE: 1-10 (10*
FIREPOWER: 1-9 (7*)
ACCURACY: 1-9 (5*)
MELEE: 1-9 (9*)
TECH SKILL: 1-9 (3*)
CHARISMA: 1-9 (5*)
RANK: n/a.(ATM)

Profile: She was around since the beastwars and has been laying deep with in the jungle dormant. Five hundred years later something awakens her. And she finds her self in a weird new world. She seeks to keep her appearance scarce.And away from harm. But in other words she is friendly and has a tendancy to attack those who harm the wildlife.

Abilities: She has the ablility to speak with others through dreams. And draws more strangths through the sprite of the wild. Her spark is connected with nature.

Weaknesses: harming of the wildlife. Has great concern about others being harmed.Pain surges.
Sample Post: The jungle surrounded her as she slept. But a strange wave hits her, awakening her. She has realized yet another war has begon but Ither fraction is reconized. She slowly walked through out the jungle to the sorce of the wave and sees unknown vehicalar robots fighting nearby. One fires a rocket at the one that looks like a truck. It dodged and the stray missil plunged into the jungle, spewwing fire everywhere. She rushed over to it and tried to put it out but it spread to quickly and engulfed the very home she slept in. Grabbing her chest she bellowed over and pian and let out an agonizing yell that can be heard from afar.

The J Writer wrote:

Datamine wrote:Name: Datamine

Allegiance: Decepticon

Function: Research & Development

Alt. mode: Satellite

Weapons: Cluster Bombs [main1 - mounted]
Drill Pistol with Electromagnetic Taser Attachment [sub1]
- The drill pistol fire solid rounds where the aummunition is carved in such a manner that it will cause the round to spiral much like a drill would. This ammuntion is not for large amounts of damage but instead intended to shoot 'clean' holes through a target leaving exposed wires, or leaks. The Electromagnetic Pulse taser mount by it self would do little more then sting a transformer and has very short range. It's true intention is to inflict stunning damange to exposed circuts.

Special Abilities: Radar, Energy Conversation. Two other unique abilities is datamining in which he can sort through massive amounts of recorded or currently viewed data in order to pick and chose select pieces of information which are relevent. The other one which I'd like is something I guess I'll call DataLag, in which if there is an individual Transformer threatening him, he can sort of overload that Transformers processor by sending it massive amounts of what is essentially useless data, but since the Transformer can't process the data as quickly it sort of...lags the transformer for a few moments slowing it down. This process can be continious if Datamine continues the feed, or a quick burst to allow him to gain distance to flee.

Height: 17 feet, 5.5 meters

Quote: "It's not about emotion, morales, or feelings; just facts."

STRENGTH: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 9
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 3
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 3
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 3
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile: I'm not gonna lie, I tried to post this earlier and it had extensive information from here on out, but this is gonna be kind of short and sweet so excuse the directness. Datamine is cold and calculated. Like any Decepticon he has visions of granduer but would never dare put himself in the spot light. He prefers to act as a puppeter almost pulling the strings in his favor. Ultimately however he is loyal to the Decepticon cause and would never dare cross Megatron, Starscream, Shockwave, or Soundwave - others are questionable, but he would unlikely. He prefers to be alone, and keep his distance. He's watched and recorded a lot of battles - a single death or a massacre mean nothing to him anymore. It's turned him cold. One death, or a thousand all it is, is a number. Cold, calculated, and merciless. He dables in Decepticon Sciences expertmenting with energy conservation methods, virus, upgrades, and occasionally some mad scientest projects. He's borderline manical in the confines of his laboratory, calm and collected at a distance, and nervous in close quaters.

Abilities: His processing unit is very unique in that he can record, review, and datamine serveral seperate streams of information all at once while still functioning properly. He can push himself shutting down various primary functions in order to process more steams of information to the point where can enter a coma like state of stasis. While orbiting he has solar panels that he uses to collect energy in order to continue powering his body. In this state, he can remain in orbit for upwards of four months without refueling due to the tiny amount of energy output during this time. He also has the ability to hack hardwired systems, and lagout or overload wireless systems with extreme ease. Even just by focusing on any given Transformer he can get a complete diagnostic read on him. Not in the sense that Soundwave can read minds, but in the sense of an x-ray almost...sort of seeing "muscles" tense, seind a more rapid flow of fluids in case of adrenaline, or finding a weakness.

Weaknesses: He's a frail Transformer, can't take much hits. Becomes very nervous, unsure of his abilities, and wants to flee when in close quaters even if he is undected. his other main weakness is more of a weakness in ability. If he is just scanning data he'll find everything. However assign him a task - as in telling him or he takes it upon himself and he over looks a lot of vital information. Example, he's told to find where Prime is. He hacks the computer systems and finds where Prime is. The problem being he bypassed tons of information, something even as vital as the fact that Ultra Magnus is leading an ambush attack. under normal circumstances he would have found said information, but when goal oriented he looks past that. Another weakness is that he can get very involved with his experiments, over look minor details and often cause negative sideffects.

Sample Post:

He floated almost lifelessly in space. The only sign of activity was a singular blinking light on the left hand side of the cybertronian born satellite. The satellite bore neither factions icon and appeared defenseless so in appearance in was nothing more then a Cybertronian Civil Satellite orbiting around the planet. Upon closer exmanion though, as most things with this planet the satellite was more then had met the eye. It wasn't relaying information to civil posts, instead through various thrusters and magnetic pulses it managed to keep it's orbit in a small circle around Iacon. Granted, he was far above Iacon in the near depths of space but above Iacon he was. For the time being he simply recordered, replayed, translated, intercepted and traced every outgoing and incoming communication from the city and relayed any relevent information to either Soundwave or Shockwave. While those processors ran at a rapid pace, another part of his mind ran various equations testing out the potential of an experimential virus he was speculating on. Here, in the depths of space he was alone and would remain until he is either summoned to a post to report in face, or told to refuel and escorted to another location - typically in orbit, but he frequents the high skies as well. It's when they call him in for the more up close and personal missions is when he starts to get nervous. He kept his radar scanning on high alert, just in case he detected an Autobot signature making a direct line for him.

Hmm, interesting. The DataLag attack isn't really permissible since I can't see how Datamine would get access to a Transformer's processors while that TF was attacking him.

My main reservation with this character is that it sounds like his function and abilities will keep him out in the middle of nowhere for long stretches, not really interacting with anyone. Perhaps he could be modified to be a little more...action-/roleplay-friendly somehow?

Thoughts, other mods?

The character seems like he would be a bit too isolated to play and not very active. The alternate mode of a satellite isn't particularly useful since I imagine that just have standard satellites. A more active alternate mode might be better.

rebel_rosy wrote:Name: Azura.
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Soldier
Alt. mode: A female gorrila. (pink convertible)
Weapons: SHe has an anti matter gun. and two mini partical turrets on each of her soulders.
Height: 6 feet 2meters.
Quote: One shell fight to makes things better. But not at the expance of nature'

STRENGTH: 1-9 (3*)
INTELLIGENCE: 1-9 (7*)
DEXTERITY: 1-9 (2*)
SPEED: 1-9 (10*)
ENDURANCE: 1-9 (4*)
COURAGE: 1-10 (10*
FIREPOWER: 1-9 (7*)
ACCURACY: 1-9 (5*)
MELEE: 1-9 (9*)
TECH SKILL: 1-9 (3*)
CHARISMA: 1-9 (5*)
RANK: n/a.(ATM)

Profile: She was around since the beastwars and has been laying deep with in the jungle dormant. Five hundred years later something awakens her. And she finds her self in a weird new world. She seeks to keep her appearance scarce.And away from harm. But in other words she is friendly and has a tendancy to attack those who harm the wildlife.

Abilities: She has the ablility to speak with others through dreams. And draws more strangths through the sprite of the wild. Her spark is connected with nature.

Weaknesses: harming of the wildlife. Has great concern about others being harmed.Pain surges.
Sample Post: The jungle surrounded her as she slept. But a strange wave hits her, awakening her. She has realized yet another war has begon but Ither fraction is reconized. She slowly walked through out the jungle to the sorce of the wave and sees unknown vehicalar robots fighting nearby. One fires a rocket at the one that looks like a truck. It dodged and the stray missil plunged into the jungle, spewwing fire everywhere. She rushed over to it and tried to put it out but it spread to quickly and engulfed the very home she slept in. Grabbing her chest she bellowed over and pian and let out an agonizing yell that can be heard from afar.

This game isn't really connected with Beast Wars. You should probably check the history and rules of the game again to get a better feel for it and try reapplying.

Whoops I'm sorry I must have misread something here. Do you know where I can go to find a good beastwars rpg?

Here's my go:

Name: Megane
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Engineer
Alt. mode: 2007 Renault Megane Estate
Weapons: Main,Particle Accelerator Rifle, Hybrid Alloy Katana / deflective shield
Special Abilities: Turbo, going into overdrive enhances the top speed of Megane but can only be used for straight line purposes, the alt mode’s mechanical grip is not able to control those speeds when cornering.
Height: 26 ft
Quote: 'A stroll, a cruise, a brawl a bruise.'

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 6
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: Megane is one of the younger bots in a group of binaltech spin-off creations. Excellent electronics knowledge and adaptability is both boon and bane for Megane, he enjoys being called up for experiments with electronics and has found numerous solutions to problems many others found to solve but the contact with his fellow engineers has Megane question his own future in his field of expertise. He looks up to Laguna, a veteran field medic who has what Megane feels, the joy of life that fixing broken circuitry brings when it’s inside your comrades instead of planet bound radar installation.


Abilities: Megane is an excellent electronics engineer showing great adaptability when facing defective or new equipment. Although not the best player at that game, he does seem to have a head start when it comes to fixing, creating or exploring new devices.
The particle rifle is accurate and effective at hammering the armors of opponents but the nature of Megane seems he likes to use it just to scare his opponent at range before using a simplistic but sleek alloy Katana to sever limbs of opponents.
Top speed is around 180Mh without turbo with turbo it’s close to 300Mph at which point the reaction speed is barely sufficient to handle straight line shifts of direction. Without the use of turbo the range is well over 1000miles.
Megane is also blessed with an excellent topographical knowledge and plotting skills often providing a fast route that defies the logic of most Earth veterans.

Weaknesses: Lack of control at high speeds in alt mode, in robot mode he shines in melee combat but is hindered by a simple lack of endurance, often leading to reduced combat awareness after just a couple of minutes of intense fighting. His Mental capacities are sometimes overshadowed by the expression of doubt over his own abilities

Sample Post: “Sometimes it happens that your spoonful is more than a mouthful Megane. Those are the times where you consider the repercussions of chewing of more than you can… ” Laguna’s lecturing made place for absolute attention as his sensor array picked up hints of shockwave’s particle cannon charging.
“Why do you always dally on the job?” asked Laguna rhetorically. “wait… jump right … NOW!” the command that was loud by itself seemed neigh inaudible compared to the sound of the impact of shockwave’s particle blast that cut clean through the thin walls of the fruit storage warehouse the Autobots had hoped to hide behind. While he reached for his rifle, Megane started questioning the whole situation again. Laguna was his role model; “the one with tactical sense, the one that did get noticed by earth command because of his performance.” It seemed a sort of concentration spiral as he lined up his rifle and quickly placed a burst of his particle rifle on shockwave’s canon. “Can we leave already?” said Megane to Laguna. Laguna was left gasping, barely coming to his senses and using time he simply could not afford to spend watching Shockwave recover from the blast to his arm. As both Autobots transformed and made their way out of Shockwave’s reach Megane was left wondering how the bot he looked up to for so long could… fumble when facing a battle situation. “I know what you’re thinking.” said Laguna “We’ve got to get this situation under control First. I’ll explain it later.”

Great, more questions…

neliz wrote:Here's my go:

Name: Megane
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Engineer
Alt. mode: 2007 Renault Megane Estate
Weapons: Main,Particle Accelerator Rifle, Hybrid Alloy Katana / deflective shield
Special Abilities: Turbo, going into overdrive enhances the top speed of Megane but can only be used for straight line purposes, the alt mode’s mechanical grip is not able to control those speeds when cornering.
Height: 26 ft
Quote: 'A stroll, a cruise, a brawl a bruise.'

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 6
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Given by RPG moderators.

Profile: Megane is one of the younger bots in a group of binaltech spin-off creations. Excellent electronics knowledge and adaptability is both boon and bane for Megane, he enjoys being called up for experiments with electronics and has found numerous solutions to problems many others found to solve but the contact with his fellow engineers has Megane question his own future in his field of expertise. He looks up to Laguna, a veteran field medic who has what Megane feels, the joy of life that fixing broken circuitry brings when it’s inside your comrades instead of planet bound radar installation.


Abilities: Megane is an excellent electronics engineer showing great adaptability when facing defective or new equipment. Although not the best player at that game, he does seem to have a head start when it comes to fixing, creating or exploring new devices.
The particle rifle is accurate and effective at hammering the armors of opponents but the nature of Megane seems he likes to use it just to scare his opponent at range before using a simplistic but sleek alloy Katana to sever limbs of opponents.
Top speed is around 180Mh without turbo with turbo it’s close to 300Mph at which point the reaction speed is barely sufficient to handle straight line shifts of direction. Without the use of turbo the range is well over 1000miles.
Megane is also blessed with an excellent topographical knowledge and plotting skills often providing a fast route that defies the logic of most Earth veterans.

Weaknesses: Lack of control at high speeds in alt mode, in robot mode he shines in melee combat but is hindered by a simple lack of endurance, often leading to reduced combat awareness after just a couple of minutes of intense fighting. His Mental capacities are sometimes overshadowed by the expression of doubt over his own abilities

Sample Post: “Sometimes it happens that your spoonful is more than a mouthful Megane. Those are the times where you consider the repercussions of chewing of more than you can… ” Laguna’s lecturing made place for absolute attention as his sensor array picked up hints of shockwave’s particle cannon charging.
“Why do you always dally on the job?” asked Laguna rhetorically. “wait… jump right … NOW!” the command that was loud by itself seemed neigh inaudible compared to the sound of the impact of shockwave’s particle blast that cut clean through the thin walls of the fruit storage warehouse the Autobots had hoped to hide behind. While he reached for his rifle, Megane started questioning the whole situation again. Laguna was his role model; “the one with tactical sense, the one that did get noticed by earth command because of his performance.” It seemed a sort of concentration spiral as he lined up his rifle and quickly placed a burst of his particle rifle on shockwave’s canon. “Can we leave already?” said Megane to Laguna. Laguna was left gasping, barely coming to his senses and using time he simply could not afford to spend watching Shockwave recover from the blast to his arm. As both Autobots transformed and made their way out of Shockwave’s reach Megane was left wondering how the bot he looked up to for so long could… fumble when facing a battle situation. “I know what you’re thinking.” said Laguna “We’ve got to get this situation under control First. I’ll explain it later.”

Great, more questions…

This is a pretty well-written profile, though the sample post could use some breaking up into paragraphs to make it more readable. However, the real issue with this application is that the RPG's setting is Cybertron, and very few TFs have had any contact with Earth. There will be an Earth segment to the game soon, but for now, no one has an Earth-style alt mode other than the Dinobots and Insecticons. As well, Binaltech is not one of the sub-groups in the game. You could certainly have him reformatted into a Renault Megane once he's on Earth, but until then his alt mode would be "Cybertronian luxury-sport vehicle" or something like that. His background would need some editing as well.

The J Writer wrote:This is a pretty well-written profile, though the sample post could use some breaking up into paragraphs to make it more readable. However, the real issue with this application is that the RPG's setting is Cybertron, and very few TFs have had any contact with Earth. There will be an Earth segment to the game soon, but for now, no one has an Earth-style alt mode other than the Dinobots and Insecticons. As well, Binaltech is not one of the sub-groups in the game. You could certainly have him reformatted into a Renault Megane once he's on Earth, but until then his alt mode would be "Cybertronian luxury-sport vehicle" or something like that. His background would need some editing as well.

Thanks for the constructive criticism, I will work on it..

No sigs in any RPG threads. Thanks.

neliz wrote:

The J Writer wrote:This is a pretty well-written profile, though the sample post could use some breaking up into paragraphs to make it more readable. However, the real issue with this application is that the RPG's setting is Cybertron, and very few TFs have had any contact with Earth. There will be an Earth segment to the game soon, but for now, no one has an Earth-style alt mode other than the Dinobots and Insecticons. As well, Binaltech is not one of the sub-groups in the game. You could certainly have him reformatted into a Renault Megane once he's on Earth, but until then his alt mode would be "Cybertronian luxury-sport vehicle" or something like that. His background would need some editing as well.

Thanks for the constructive criticism, I will work on it..

No problem. I actually have a mission in mind for this engineer if you revise his profile, so perhaps that's additional incentive?

The J Writer wrote:No problem. I actually have a mission in mind for this engineer if you revise his profile, so perhaps that's additional incentive?

I'll do my extra best on updating this character and creating a proper sheet for Laguna as well.

neliz wrote:

The J Writer wrote:No problem. I actually have a mission in mind for this engineer if you revise his profile, so perhaps that's additional incentive?

I'll do my extra best on updating this character and creating a proper sheet for Laguna as well.

Sounds good - just remember, no signatures in the RPG threads (you can uncheck the box at the bottom of the "Post a reply" screen).

The J Writer wrote:Sounds good - just remember, no signatures in the RPG threads (you can uncheck the box at the bottom of the "Post a reply" screen).

I did okay for the first post .. but after that

I'll work it! and a sketch for the model too..

Name: Alpha
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: 2007 Chevy Beat Concept
Weapons: Headlights which are forearms in robot mode turn to chargeable ion cannons,
his main weapon is based off an AA-12 fully automatic non recoil shotgun (on future weapons),the passenger and Driver doors make shield panels on left and right arm, and roof of car turns to a shield.
Height: 16 feet/4.572 meters
Quote: 'Big things come in small packages'

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 9
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: ??

Profile: Alpha is only kind to his fellow Autobots and he hates traitors, spies and most of all Decepticons, he will destroy any Decepticon without hesitation, and he often rushes into battle before thinking of a strategy.His comrades think Alpha is hot headed and stupid, even though he is smarter than some of them.He has respect for all his fellow Autobots even if sometimes the are mean to him. Alpha is very glad to be an autobot under the command of Optimus even though he can get on Alpha's nerves sometimes.

Abilities: His top speed in vehicle mode is 260 but in robot mode it is 35, he can charge his ion cannons longer for higher power, his shield is coated with anti-laser technology from Cybertron.

Weaknesses: Alpha's weapons can't reach long range enemies, because his shot gun is short range, and the farther the ion cannons go the weaker they get, so he is an easier target from long range.

Sample Post: Alpha was taking a drive, that always calms him down, he just got yelled at by Optimus Prime for being stupid and running into battles. He drove past a Decepticon named Stealth, whose alt. mode was a red and black Kawasaki Ninja,
with out even noticing him. Stealth started following him.
Alpha got on the highway than Stealth came up beside him and tried to ram him off. He was trying to fight back but Stealth had way more horsepower than him. But Alpha had a good idea (for once) , right when Stealth was about to ram him he completely stopped and Stealth flew right off the highway.
"Optimus is gonna hate me for this" he said transforming in the middle of the highway. People stared in amazement and fear, they never saw anything like it before. Than Alpha jumped off the highway on to stealth's body hoping to finish him once and for all. But stealth got back up when alpha got off his body. You are really getting on my nerves" Alpha said as he was charging his right arms ion cannon.
Stealth started rushing at him at full speed. Right before Stealth could hit him Alpha blew a hole through Stealth with his ion cannon. "At least hes finished, but i don't know how pissed Optimus is gonna be."

Since I just gave up Barrage, I think I'm going to pick up ol' Lead Kaboose.


Name: Ironhide
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Security
Alt. mode: 8-Wheeled Assault Vehicle
Weapons: Liquid-Spewing Rifle (uses as a turret in vehicle mode)
Height: 30ft / 9.1m
Quote: "High tech circuitry is no replacement for guts.“

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 3
ENDURANCE: 9
COURAGE: 10
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 7
SKILL: 7
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: 7

Profile: Ironhide’s been there and back more times than he can remember or cares to admit. He’s one of the oldest of the Autobots, getting old even as the war began, but he’s still pretty feisty. Ironhide prefers to communicate his intentions through actions rather than words and he can’t abide those “young punks” who talk a good game, but never follow through. Time, and conflict has taken its toll, and he’s seen better days physically, but Ironhide is still renowned for his toughness and determination. Never one to back down from a challenge or exhibit fear, he’s still capable of showing up any Autobot or Decepticon upstarts who dismiss him as an old relic, in addition to overall security, Ironhide acts as a personal bodyguard to Optimus Prime and anyone who’s threatened by Decepticon violence. He does so not just because of his formidable defencive skills but also of a deeply held desire to safeguard all life—Transformer or otherwise. Ironhide attempts to hide his softer side by his crotchety demeanour, but Optimus Prime isn’t fooled.

Abilities: Ironhide possesses great physical strength and an above average intelligence. His super-dense trithyllium is lined with radiation dampeners making him nearly invulnerable to physical and radiation attacks. Although his whole body is armoured, the armour is densest in his front section, and a large face shield protects him and whoever he maybe guarding. He carries a rifle that can shoot his choice of liquid chemicals up to 1,000 feet, this rifle becomes a turret in his vehicle mode. He carries a variety of cartridges including super-heated metal, a self-igniting petrochemical spray, and liquid nitrogen among others. Ironhide is a skilled warrior and security specialist. His armoured assault vehicle mode can travel over difficult terrain and can reach speeds of 60 mph.

Weaknesses: Ironhide isn’t getting younger, Ratchet is spending more and more time replacing worn parts. He is also one of the slowest Autobots, and his attitude towards the “young upstarts” sometimes creates unneeded tension in the ranks.