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Postby Stormshadow » Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:41 pm

Name: Rampage
Allegiance: Decepticons
Sub-group: Predacons
Function: Gunner
Alt. mode: Tiger
Weapons: Lightning Rifle, thermo sword, four twin gun ports (in tiger mode); claws and teeth
Special Abilities: Combines with fellow predacons to form Predaking
Height: roughly:- 24 ft 7.3m
Quote: "Those who conquer act; those who are conquered think!"

(stats based on vector sigma database)
STRENGTH:8
INTELLIGENCE:3
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA:4
RANK: 5

Profile: Like an elemental force of nature, Rampage barrels through life with unabated, uncontrolled fury. He has difficulty talking coherently for more the a few seconds at a time before he reverts to his "normal" state, violently lashing out at anything or anyone nearby, even fellow Predacons. Wherever he goes, he leaves a trail of wreckage that's as clear-cut as a black line on white paper. Although feared by his comrades, he's appreciated even more so for the unequalled ferocity with which he fights. Strangely enough, the only thing that has any calming effect on this mechanical menace is television. The more mindless the program, the more Rampage is entranced. He's been known to stare for hours at rock music videos.

Abilities: In tiger mode, Rampage can leap to a height of 300 feet over a distance of 500 feet. He's incredibly strong- a kick from one of his forelegs can crumble a cinder block wall. He has four twin gun-ports, one mounted above each of his legs, and each capable of shooting 300 rounds of small-calibre ammunition per minute. In robot mode, he also uses a powerful lightning rifle, which shoots beams of 60,000-volt electricity. He also has a thermo-sword, which has a blade that heats up to 5000 degrees Centigrade, allowing it to cut through most metals like butter. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form Predaking.

Weaknesses: As a consequence of the punishment they take from his constant leaping, the springs and suspension system in Rampage's four legs often break down and require near-constant maintenance

Sample Post:
Rampage was running through the trees feeling like nothing could stop him. The Predacon didn't give a damn what got in his way any hapless Autobot that came close to him was dispatched in a frenzy in which Rampaged revelled. The feeling of energon running down his frame as he tore apart his helpless prey; was one that he loved, as it made him feel somehow alive. Transforming into his robot mode Rampage walked into the Decepticon camp. It amused him how everyone would scurry out of his way in an attempt to keep their limbs attached. Not that it would actually matter; if he felt like it Rampage would probably just go on a slaughter fest anyhow; no matter who or what was in his way.
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Postby optimal optimus prime1 » Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:56 pm

--You may want to work on it a bit more. Look at some of the profiles I approved and see what's been done. You're doesn't have to be exactly the same, but the profile still needs to be closer. I'll try and give some hints.

--First off having another T-rex besides Grimlock in the Autobots is pretty odd. There are a lot of other dinosaurs around if you're interested. Also a being a dinosaur Autobot probably requires the character to be a Dinobot under Grimlock's command.

--Teleportation is a rather big deal, though not impossible for a character to have it does require a stat penality though. I'm more likely to approve Teleportation since he doesn't have too many weapons actually.

--Cyber keys are specific plot device that would basically require a large plot line to introduce and... in short no we won't be using Cyber keys.

--I'll need more description for his profile, abilities, and weaknesses. Robot mode flight for Autobots costs a stat penality so a jet pack would cost you.

--In the sample post for here and the post for the game you can only control your own character. So basically you can't use Megatron or Starscream in your sample post. Use stardard unknown troops if you need someone for your character to fight with in sample posting.
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ok what about this?on a side note i got rid of the memoryproblem,are mini-cons allowed?

Name:breakdown
Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Function: worrior
Alt. mode: Robotic Dragon & flight mode(like megatron from beast wars)
Weapons: claws , 2 swords that are my tail,beast head shoots flames out in both beast and robot modes.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device,Triple Changer,Shield Generator
Height: 29ft
Quote:"we will win this battle"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:6
Speed:7
Endurance:8
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:8??


Profile:he respects optimus and all of his fellow autobots.
he will protect optimus with his life.he is also a skilled worrior.when he is in beast mode he enjoys to fly.


Abilities:flame breath,& Flight(his wings)

Weaknesses:his need to protect optimus,and his wings(without them he wouldn't be able to fly!!)

Sample post:as he was flying around the world he got a transmision about some decepticons attacking some humans and flew as fast as he could.When he got there he noticed a strange siglan comming from one of the decepticons.

As the fight continued he keept feeling that decepticon,After he had beeten down the other decepticons the one with the strange signal came out.

"who are you"Breakdown asked.

"i am you" the decepticon replied.

"Tell me your name"breakdown demanded!
"you will have to find me" the decepticon said as he teleproted away.



"thats weird" thought breakdown.

And as he left he saw somthing on the ground.It was a toy he used to play with as a child.Then he got a transmission to return to the Autobot base.
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Postby Philcom » Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:36 pm

Big_yellow_glasses wrote:Just made a small decrease in his charisma to balance him out. And editted his origin.

Name:Grave
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion
Weapons: Tail sword, titanium claws
Special Abilities: Beserker (-4), Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:7
Dexterity:6
Speed:5
Endurance:6
Courage:9
Firepower:4
Accuracy:5
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:7
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great prode in his hunting abilities.He found a scan of a lion when he was asked to choose an alt. mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and tends to take command whenever possible. His traits may seem Autobot-like, but his support for the Decepticon cause is unparalleled.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He is also able to go into a "Beserk" mode, giving him the ability to rip apart any bot with ease. This is also his most dangerous attribute, due to the fact that he will attack anything living near him. He is also a great leader and tends to take charge at any given moment. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities.

Weaknesses:

He doesn't use ranged weaponry, which makes him an easy target for marksmen. He must get close to do any real damage and he sometimes suffers from lapses of judgement. His Beserk mode is probably his greatest weakness though, since he cannot control his actions during his attacks.

Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...


--I'm just thinking that you might want to give him a Cybertron form in the profile for use before he would get to Earth. There are Cybertronian beasts around and he could have a lion-like alt mode, and becomes a full lion one he gets to Earth.

--I also want you to take out the part of him being good leader, let that be up to how he's played in the game and his Decepticon commanding officers to decide. You could say that he has some leadership qualities, still to an extend that will be determined by your gameplay. Saying that Grave seeks or desires leadership will do no harm if put in the profile instead.
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Postby Big_yellow_glasses » Thu Mar 15, 2007 8:12 pm

Okay, changed him a bit

And frankly, I believe that any Transformer can have leadership abilities and not be in a leading position.

And he seems like a better Autobot :P

Name:Grave
Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion(Liger pre-earth?)
Weapons: Lion-head cannon(think Cyb.Snarl), Tail Blade
Special Abilities: Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:8
Dexterity:7
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great pride in his hunting abilities.He has always loved beast, so he chose a Cybertronian Liger as his alt mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and strives to take command whenever possible.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He constantly tries to take command and has great leadership qualities. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities.

Weaknesses:

He doesn't use ranged weaponry, which makes him an easy target for marksmen. He must get close to do any real damage and he sometimes suffers from lapses of judgement. His Beserk mode is probably his greatest weakness though, since he cannot control his actions during his attacks.

Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...
Last edited by Big_yellow_glasses on Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Devastron » Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:49 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Big_yellow_glasses wrote:Killin' me here Phil :P

Okay here goes

Name:Grave
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion(Liger pre-earth?)
Weapons: Tail sword, titanium claws
Special Abilities: Beserker (-4), Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:7
Dexterity:6
Speed:5
Endurance:6
Courage:9
Firepower:4
Accuracy:5
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:7
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great pride in his hunting abilities.He has always loved beast, so he chose a Cybertronian Liger as his alt mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and strives to take command whenever possible. His traits may seem Autobot-like, but his support for the Decepticon cause is unparalleled.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He is also able to go into a "Beserk" mode, giving him the ability to rip apart any bot with ease. This is also his most dangerous attribute, due to the fact that he will attack anything living near him. He constantly tries to take command and has great leadership qualities. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities.

Weaknesses:

He doesn't use ranged weaponry, which makes him an easy target for marksmen. He must get close to do any real damage and he sometimes suffers from lapses of judgement. His Beserk mode is probably his greatest weakness though, since he cannot control his actions during his attacks.

Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...


- Your stat total adds up to 76, so you need to get that down to 75 by knocking a point off somewhere.

- Could you give a better description of enhanced senses? Are all of his senses enhanced or just a few, and to what extent?

- You might want to do away with the leadership angle as his weaknesses of lack of judgment and his berserker ability really keep him from being a great leader. Also, new players are not typically given characters of high rank. He can maybe aspire to be a good leader, but he probably wouldn't get many opportunities to lead yet.
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Postby Devastron » Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:59 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
optimal optimus prime1 wrote:ok what about this?on a side note i got rid of the memoryproblem,are mini-cons allowed?

Name:breakdown
Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Function: worrior
Alt. mode: Robotic Dragon & flight mode(like megatron from beast wars)
Weapons: claws , 2 swords that are my tail,beast head shoots flames out in both beast and robot modes.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device,Triple Changer,Shield Generator
Height: 29ft
Quote:"we will win this battle"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:6
Speed:7
Endurance:8
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:8??


Profile:he respects optimus and all of his fellow autobots.
he will protect optimus with his life.he is also a skilled worrior.when he is in beast mode he enjoys to fly.


Abilities:flame breath,& Flight(his wings)

Weaknesses:his need to protect optimus,and his wings(without them he wouldn't be able to fly!!)

Sample post:as he was flying around the world he got a transmision about some decepticons attacking some humans and flew as fast as he could.When he got there he noticed a strange siglan comming from one of the decepticons.

As the fight continued he keept feeling that decepticon,After he had beeten down the other decepticons the one with the strange signal came out.

"who are you"Breakdown asked.

"i am you" the decepticon replied.

"Tell me your name"breakdown demanded!
"you will have to find me" the decepticon said as he teleproted away.

"thats weird" thought breakdown.

And as he left he saw somthing on the ground.It was a toy he used to play with as a child.Then he got a transmission to return to the Autobot base.


- The name Breakdown is already taken by a canon character, so you will need to come up with a different name.

- I'm not sure what you mean by 'flight mode.' You need to describe what that is.

- New players are not typically allowed to take triple changers so you will need to change that.

- A cloaking device and a shield generator both have large stat penalties attached to them. I recommend dropping them both and just sticking with a more standard Transformer to start out with.

- Rank is decided by a moderator, and as this is your first character he will not be high ranking.

- Your profile, abilities and weakness sections need more detail and information in them. I suggest that you look more closely at already approved profiles, which I believe Philcom also suggested you do.

- You need to run the entire profile through a spelling and grammar checker of some sort.

Try and do all of that and we will take another look at your application
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Postby Devastron » Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:10 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Stormshadow wrote:Name: Rampage
Allegiance: Decepticons
Sub-group: Predacons
Function: Gunner
Alt. mode: Tiger
Weapons: Lightning Rifle, thermo sword, four twin gun ports (in tiger mode); claws and teeth
Special Abilities: Combines with fellow predacons to form Predaking
Height: roughly:- 24 ft 7.3m
Quote: "Those who conquer act; those who are conquered think!"

(stats based on vector sigma database)
STRENGTH:8
INTELLIGENCE:3
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA:4
RANK: 5

Profile: Like an elemental force of nature, Rampage barrels through life with unabated, uncontrolled fury. He has difficulty talking coherently for more the a few seconds at a time before he reverts to his "normal" state, violently lashing out at anything or anyone nearby, even fellow Predacons. Wherever he goes, he leaves a trail of wreckage that's as clear-cut as a black line on white paper. Although feared by his comrades, he's appreciated even more so for the unequalled ferocity with which he fights. Strangely enough, the only thing that has any calming effect on this mechanical menace is television. The more mindless the program, the more Rampage is entranced. He's been known to stare for hours at rock music videos.

Abilities: In tiger mode, Rampage can leap to a height of 300 feet over a distance of 500 feet. He's incredibly strong- a kick from one of his forelegs can crumble a cinder block wall. He has four twin gun-ports, one mounted above each of his legs, and each capable of shooting 300 rounds of small-calibre ammunition per minute. In robot mode, he also uses a powerful lightning rifle, which shoots beams of 60,000-volt electricity. He also has a thermo-sword, which has a blade that heats up to 5000 degrees Centigrade, allowing it to cut through most metals like butter. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form Predaking.

Weaknesses: As a consequence of the punishment they take from his constant leaping, the springs and suspension system in Rampage's four legs often break down and require near-constant maintenance

Sample Post:
Rampage was running through the trees feeling like nothing could stop him. The Predacon didn't give a damn what got in his way any hapless Autobot that came close to him was dispatched in a frenzy in which Rampaged revelled. The feeling of energon running down his frame as he tore apart his helpless prey; was one that he loved, as it made him feel somehow alive. Transforming into his robot mode Rampage walked into the Decepticon camp. It amused him how everyone would scurry out of his way in an attempt to keep their limbs attached. Not that it would actually matter; if he felt like it Rampage would probably just go on a slaughter fest anyhow; no matter who or what was in his way.


- Go ahead and bump his dexterity up to 8, as I imagine he is pretty dexterous when he is leaping and when his legs are fully functional.

- Also, for the time being at least, the Predacons don't have their Earth based alternate modes yet. If you could modify it into something like a Cybertronian Tiger or something to that effect, which probably resembles his Earth mode, then the profile should be good to go. The Predacons will likely get their Earth based modes at some point, but I am not sure when .

Make those two changes and post it again and I will get you approved. :D
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Postby Big_yellow_glasses » Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:52 pm

Okay, changed him a bit

And frankly, I believe that any Transformer can have leadership abilities and not be in a leading position.

And he seems like a better Autobot :P

Name:Grave
Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion(Liger pre-earth?)
Weapons: Lion-head cannon(think Cyb.Snarl), Tail Blade
Special Abilities: Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:8
Dexterity:7
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great pride in his hunting abilities.He has always loved beast, so he chose a Cybertronian Liger as his alt mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and strives to take command whenever possible.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He constantly tries to take command and has great leadership qualities. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities.

Weaknesses:

He doesn't use ranged weaponry, which makes him an easy target for marksmen. He must get close to do any real damage and he sometimes suffers from lapses of judgement. His Beserk mode is probably his greatest weakness though, since he cannot control his actions during his attacks.

Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...

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Postby Stormshadow » Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:05 am

Devastron wrote:
Stormshadow wrote:Name: Rampage
Allegiance: Decepticons
Sub-group: Predacons
Function: Gunner
Alt. mode:Tiger
Weapons: Lightning Rifle, thermo sword, four twin gun ports (in tiger mode); claws and teeth
Special Abilities: Combines with fellow predacons to form Predaking
Height: roughly:- 24 ft 7.3m
Quote: "Those who conquer act; those who are conquered think!"

(stats based on vector sigma database)
STRENGTH:8
INTELLIGENCE:3
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA:4
RANK: 5

Profile: Like an elemental force of nature, Rampage barrels through life with unabated, uncontrolled fury. He has difficulty talking coherently for more the a few seconds at a time before he reverts to his "normal" state, violently lashing out at anything or anyone nearby, even fellow Predacons. Wherever he goes, he leaves a trail of wreckage that's as clear-cut as a black line on white paper. Although feared by his comrades, he's appreciated even more so for the unequalled ferocity with which he fights. Strangely enough, the only thing that has any calming effect on this mechanical menace is television. The more mindless the program, the more Rampage is entranced. He's been known to stare for hours at rock music videos.

Abilities: In tiger mode, Rampage can leap to a height of 300 feet over a distance of 500 feet. He's incredibly strong- a kick from one of his forelegs can crumble a cinder block wall. He has four twin gun-ports, one mounted above each of his legs, and each capable of shooting 300 rounds of small-calibre ammunition per minute. In robot mode, he also uses a powerful lightning rifle, which shoots beams of 60,000-volt electricity. He also has a thermo-sword, which has a blade that heats up to 5000 degrees Centigrade, allowing it to cut through most metals like butter. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form Predaking.

Weaknesses: As a consequence of the punishment they take from his constant leaping, the springs and suspension system in Rampage's four legs often break down and require near-constant maintenance

Sample Post:
Rampage was running through the trees feeling like nothing could stop him. The Predacon didn't give a damn what got in his way any hapless Autobot that came close to him was dispatched in a frenzy in which Rampaged revelled. The feeling of energon running down his frame as he tore apart his helpless prey; was one that he loved, as it made him feel somehow alive. Transforming into his robot mode Rampage walked into the Decepticon camp. It amused him how everyone would scurry out of his way in an attempt to keep their limbs attached. Not that it would actually matter; if he felt like it Rampage would probably just go on a slaughter fest anyhow; no matter who or what was in his way.


- Go ahead and bump his dexterity up to 8, as I imagine he is pretty dexterous when he is leaping and when his legs are fully functional.

- Also, for the time being at least, the Predacons don't have their Earth based alternate modes yet. If you could modify it into something like a Cybertronian Tiger or something to that effect, which probably resembles his Earth mode, then the profile should be good to go. The Predacons will likely get their Earth based modes at some point, but I am not sure when .

Make those two changes and post it again and I will get you approved. :D


You got it... I changed it to a cybertronain tiger as I've never actually seen a pre-earth rampage...so I'll have to go with that if ya don't mind.

Name: Rampage
Allegiance: Decepticons
Sub-group: Predacons
Function: Gunner
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Tiger
Weapons: Lightning Rifle, thermo sword, four twin gun ports (in tiger mode); claws and teeth
Special Abilities: Combines with fellow predacons to form Predaking
Height: roughly:- 24 ft 7.3m
Quote: "Those who conquer act; those who are conquered think!"

(stats based on vector sigma database)
STRENGTH:8
INTELLIGENCE:3
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA:4
RANK: 5

Profile: Like an elemental force of nature, Rampage barrels through life with unabated, uncontrolled fury. He has difficulty talking coherently for more the a few seconds at a time before he reverts to his "normal" state, violently lashing out at anything or anyone nearby, even fellow Predacons. Wherever he goes, he leaves a trail of wreckage that's as clear-cut as a black line on white paper. Although feared by his comrades, he's appreciated even more so for the unequalled ferocity with which he fights. Strangely enough, the only thing that has any calming effect on this mechanical menace is television. The more mindless the program, the more Rampage is entranced. He's been known to stare for hours at rock music videos.

Abilities: In tiger mode, Rampage can leap to a height of 300 feet over a distance of 500 feet. He's incredibly strong- a kick from one of his forelegs can crumble a cinder block wall. He has four twin gun-ports, one mounted above each of his legs, and each capable of shooting 300 rounds of small-calibre ammunition per minute. In robot mode, he also uses a powerful lightning rifle, which shoots beams of 60,000-volt electricity. He also has a thermo-sword, which has a blade that heats up to 5000 degrees Centigrade, allowing it to cut through most metals like butter. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form Predaking.

Weaknesses: As a consequence of the punishment they take from his constant leaping, the springs and suspension system in Rampage's four legs often break down and require near-constant maintenance

Sample Post:
Rampage was running through the trees feeling like nothing could stop him. The Predacon didn't give a damn what got in his way any hapless Autobot that came close to him was dispatched in a frenzy in which Rampaged revelled. The feeling of energon running down his frame as he tore apart his helpless prey; was one that he loved, as it made him feel somehow alive. Transforming into his robot mode Rampage walked into the Decepticon camp. It amused him how everyone would scurry out of his way in an attempt to keep their limbs attached. Not that it would actually matter; if he felt like it Rampage would probably just go on a slaughter fest anyhow; no matter who or what was in his way
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Postby optimal optimus prime1 » Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:46 pm

Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:(i might add a Supper mode later on)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"kill kill kill!!!!"


Strength:8
Intelligence:7
Dexterity:8
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:8
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:He is the only decepticon besides starscream to stand up to megatron. He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave. After joining the decepticons he decided to scan a new form and he choose and scanned a fire truck. For some reason megaton hates this form,beaculse of this breakaway decided to keep this form,


Abilities:His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.

Weaknesses:He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.

Sample post:Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.
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possible mini-con profile

Name:start up

Alt-mode:a medium sized helicopter (cybertron Jolt)

Abilities: links up with shutdown and allows shutdown to fly.
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Postby Devastron » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:25 am

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Stormshadow wrote:
You got it... I changed it to a cybertronain tiger as I've never actually seen a pre-earth rampage...so I'll have to go with that if ya don't mind.

Name: Rampage
Allegiance: Decepticons
Sub-group: Predacons
Function: Gunner
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Tiger
Weapons: Lightning Rifle, thermo sword, four twin gun ports (in tiger mode); claws and teeth
Special Abilities: Combines with fellow predacons to form Predaking
Height: roughly:- 24 ft 7.3m
Quote: "Those who conquer act; those who are conquered think!"

(stats based on vector sigma database)
STRENGTH:8
INTELLIGENCE:3
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 9
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA:4
RANK: 5

Profile: Like an elemental force of nature, Rampage barrels through life with unabated, uncontrolled fury. He has difficulty talking coherently for more the a few seconds at a time before he reverts to his "normal" state, violently lashing out at anything or anyone nearby, even fellow Predacons. Wherever he goes, he leaves a trail of wreckage that's as clear-cut as a black line on white paper. Although feared by his comrades, he's appreciated even more so for the unequalled ferocity with which he fights. Strangely enough, the only thing that has any calming effect on this mechanical menace is television. The more mindless the program, the more Rampage is entranced. He's been known to stare for hours at rock music videos.

Abilities: In tiger mode, Rampage can leap to a height of 300 feet over a distance of 500 feet. He's incredibly strong- a kick from one of his forelegs can crumble a cinder block wall. He has four twin gun-ports, one mounted above each of his legs, and each capable of shooting 300 rounds of small-calibre ammunition per minute. In robot mode, he also uses a powerful lightning rifle, which shoots beams of 60,000-volt electricity. He also has a thermo-sword, which has a blade that heats up to 5000 degrees Centigrade, allowing it to cut through most metals like butter. He combines with his fellow Predacons to form Predaking.

Weaknesses: As a consequence of the punishment they take from his constant leaping, the springs and suspension system in Rampage's four legs often break down and require near-constant maintenance

Sample Post:
Rampage was running through the trees feeling like nothing could stop him. The Predacon didn't give a damn what got in his way any hapless Autobot that came close to him was dispatched in a frenzy in which Rampaged revelled. The feeling of energon running down his frame as he tore apart his helpless prey; was one that he loved, as it made him feel somehow alive. Transforming into his robot mode Rampage walked into the Decepticon camp. It amused him how everyone would scurry out of his way in an attempt to keep their limbs attached. Not that it would actually matter; if he felt like it Rampage would probably just go on a slaughter fest anyhow; no matter who or what was in his way


Approved. Start him in the Polyhex thread with the other Predacons.
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Postby Devastron » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:37 am

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Big_yellow_glasses wrote:Okay, changed him a bit

And frankly, I believe that any Transformer can have leadership abilities and not be in a leading position.

And he seems like a better Autobot :P

Name:Grave
Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion(Liger pre-earth?)
Weapons: Lion-head cannon(think Cyb.Snarl), Tail Blade
Special Abilities: Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:8
Dexterity:7
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great pride in his hunting abilities.He has always loved beast, so he chose a Cybertronian Liger as his alt mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and strives to take command whenever possible.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He constantly tries to take command and has great leadership qualities. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities.

Weaknesses:

He doesn't use ranged weaponry, which makes him an easy target for marksmen. He must get close to do any real damage and he sometimes suffers from lapses of judgement. His Beserk mode is probably his greatest weakness though, since he cannot control his actions during his attacks.

Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...


- The profile is pretty skimpy. You should describe his personality more. Some description of his weapons in the abilities section would be good as well.

- You still haven't described what his increased sensory abilities are.

- You are using 77 stat points, thats 2 over the limit.
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Postby Devastron » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:49 am

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optimal optimus prime1 wrote:Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:(i might add a Supper mode later on)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"kill kill kill!!!!"


Strength:8
Intelligence:7
Dexterity:8
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:8
Firepower:7
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:He is the only decepticon besides starscream to stand up to megatron. He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave. After joining the decepticons he decided to scan a new form and he choose and scanned a fire truck. For some reason megaton hates this form,beaculse of this breakaway decided to keep this form,


Abilities:His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.

Weaknesses:He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.

Sample post:Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.
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possible mini-con profile

Name:start up

Alt-mode:a medium sized helicopter (cybertron Jolt)

Abilities: links up with shutdown and allows shutdown to fly.


- This is a G1 based game, and as such we don't use Super Modes or mini-cons.

- The abilities section is far too short. You should try and describe his weapons, how he fights, etc. I again ask you to look at other approved profiles for an idea of what we are looking for.

- You need to remove the references to Megatron not like his alternate mode as those require player permission to include.

- If this character did irritate Megatron like you describe, Megatron would probably have him terminated.

I suggest reading other profiles and parts of the RPG to get a feel for the setting and the profiles we are looking for before posting another application.
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Postby optimal optimus prime1 » Sun Mar 18, 2007 4:31 pm

ok again i appologize if i am getting on your nerves.
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Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:9
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:6
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneek up on his autobot foes and destroy them.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.



(ok how is that i thing i got it this time. :oops: :( :-? )
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Postby Devastron » Mon Mar 19, 2007 1:41 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
optimal optimus prime1 wrote:Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:9
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:6
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneek up on his autobot foes and destroy them.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.


- You need to describe how the cloaking device works for me to determine what the stat penalty for it should be. Does it render him invisible to the eye or scanners or both?

- Your profile needs to go through a grammar and spelling checker as there are numerous misspellings and other errors in it.
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Postby Big_yellow_glasses » Tue Mar 20, 2007 11:12 am

Hopefully this is my last time editing Grave...

Name:Grave
Allegiance: :CON:
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion(Liger pre-earth?)
Weapons: Lion-head cannon(think Cyb.Snarl), Tail Blade
Special Abilities: Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:8
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:6
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:7
Melee:8
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great pride in his hunting abilities.He has always loved beast, so he chose a Cybertronian Liger as his alt mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and strives to take command whenever possible. He tends to stay close to high ranking officials, believing that he will gain some respect from his leaders.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He constantly tries to take command and has great leadership qualities. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities, this means he can use enhanced hearing, sight and touch capabilities to find his prey within a 5000 yard radius.

Weaknesses:
He constantly finds himself at a disadvantage when it comes to ranged battle, which is easily understood with his weapon in mind. His cannon can only fire a few yards ahead of him, and it fires out a simple force blast. He is also prone to make a jump for power, a trait that can make him or break him.


Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...
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Postby Devastron » Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:19 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Big_yellow_glasses wrote:Hopefully this is my last time editing Grave...

Name:Grave
Allegiance: :CON:
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Robotic Lion(Liger pre-earth?)
Weapons: Lion-head cannon(think Cyb.Snarl), Tail Blade
Special Abilities: Increased sensory abilities(-2)
Height: 30ft/ 9.14400 meters
Quote: "No prey will escape me!"


Strength:9
Intelligence:8
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:6
Courage:7
Firepower:7
Accuracy:7
Melee:8
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank: ?


Profile:


A noble warrior who takes great pride in his hunting abilities.He has always loved beast, so he chose a Cybertronian Liger as his alt mode. He tends to stay in Beast mode when he hunts, allowing him to stay stealthy. He has great leadership skills and strives to take command whenever possible. He tends to stay close to high ranking officials, believing that he will gain some respect from his leaders.

Abilities:

He is an expert at hand-to-hand combat and stealth tactics. He can sprint a great distance while in beast mode. He constantly tries to take command and has great leadership qualities. He is also a skilled tracker with increased sensory abilities, this means he can use enhanced hearing, sight and touch capabilities to find his prey within a 5000 yard radius.

Weaknesses:
He constantly finds himself at a disadvantage when it comes to ranged battle, which is easily understood with his weapon in mind. His cannon can only fire a few yards ahead of him, and it fires out a simple force blast. He is also prone to make a jump for power, a trait that can make him or break him.


Sample post:

The Amazon

Grave walked calmly across the jungle, he felt home in this kind of enviroment, unfortunately the rest of his comrades were not. They had been sent on a mission to search for any possible energy inside of the natural paradise.

This place must be teeming with Energon, with this much life it has to be full of it, thought the hunter.

"When can we get home? This place is too rough for my frame!" said one of his teammates.

"Stop complaining! You just keep your optics open and if you find anything useful you can go home to your oh-so-lovely base!"

He was starting to grow tired of these in competent troops who seemed to just grow dumber as the years dragged on. Suddenly a figure moved across the jungle, any normal troop would mistake it for a large animal, but Grave was far from normal...

"Get ready for combat, we're not alone..." said Grave.

He crouched down and sharpened his senses. It was circling them, it was probably going to attack the whiner, but even as good as that sounded he couldn't have it happen, he was a fellow comrade anyway.

Come out, come out, wherever you are...


Approved, rank 5. You can start him in the Polyhex thread fighting Autobots.
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Postby optimal optimus prime1 » Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:58 pm

Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:9
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:6
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to the eye and scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.

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Re: Skywatch(repost)

Postby Philcom » Fri Mar 23, 2007 5:38 pm

kencyr wrote:Name: Skywatch
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Airspace Command and Control
Alt. mode: Hovering Multiple Rocket Launch System (MLRS)
Pic link: http://www.cybergooch.com/pages/tibsunarchive/mlrs.htm
Weapons: (veh) 12 Multi-mission interceptor missiles, 4 Ion pulse cannon
(bot) 4 missile box launcher(left shoulder), Ion Tribarrel (right arm mount)
Height: 26’ or 7.92m
Quote: “Someday the skies will be friendly again…someday ”

Strength: 5
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 5 (flight)
Endurance: 6
Courage: 6
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 9
Melee: 4
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 7
Rank: (3)

Profile:
Skywatch is still a young robot, yet understands why this war must be fought. He doesn’t like it, and longs to have his former transport sled form restored. That longing does not prevent him from performing his duty to keep the skies clear of Seekers and their ilk.

He is fairly friendly and idealistic, almost naïve. Not surprising considering he is not yet a full cycle old in his current form. He is still unsure of his capabilities, if given the chance to think on things, but those that have looked him over think he will be fine once he fully integrates into his new function. He is not stupid however; he is aware what war is, having been an incidental casualty already.

Skywatch is inexperienced and should be partnered with a steady hand.

Historical Notes:
Skywatch began his life as a commercial transport sled. As a domestic model, he felt the usual affinity to the Autobots, and was thinking about joining them when the Cybertronian wars broke out. Being technically unaligned at that time did not prevent him from becoming a casualty of Decepticon Seekers looking to blow things up. Things like him. Skywatch was severely damaged and rendered largely non-functional. That was then. With the Autobots needing someone to help keep the skies clear of the evil Decepticons, he has been run through the Autobots repair system and emerged in his current form. Skywatch is unsure about his role and new function.


Abilities:
Enhanced detection and tracking system – links to orbital satellite systems, observation stations on the factory moons, or any other available observational source to get a clear view of his area. With the breadth of sensors available, has a reasonable chance of neutralizing stealth/cloaking systems. If he is in an area where there are no satellites to link to, this has only true line of sight ability. Allows for long range reconnaissance, but functions poorly while on the move in that mode. Best used when not moving quickly (under 100 kph/60 MPH)
(6 points)


Hover system is cybertronian gravitic system. Limited flight ceiling height (15 meters), speed caps out at 350 MPH (no points, flavor text only, speed stat accounts for this)

Weapons:
Vehicle mode
Multi-mission interceptor missiles: missiles with dial-a-payload. Can be used as high-speed anti-air intercept missiles, or as direct-fire anti-armor missiles (with slightly lower effectiveness). Can also be used as torpedoes…though that isn’t recommended due to lack of active guidance.
Range: 78 miles/125 KM (note: same range as modern Air defense missiles)
Limit of 12 (6 per missile pod)

Ion Pulse Cannons: energy bolts that cause a massive disruption of shield and control systems. Minimal physical damage. Causes massive convulsions/seizures that have a chance of lingering for days (think tazer, but with more…duration.) Extremely effective against shield and computerized systems, due to the imbalance of energies imparted.
Range: 2 miles/3 km. effectiveness begins dropping at 1.5 miles, and falls quickly after
2 per pod

Bot mode
4 missile box launcher – as Multi-mission interceptor missiles, but with 4 missiles ready instead of 12

Ion Tribarrel: as Ion Pulse Cannons, but cross linked. Higher physical damage, on par with standard Autobot weapons, with the same shield/control system effects.




Weaknesses:
Has trouble turning at high speeds in vehicle mode
Has hard time righting himself in vehicle mode if overturned
Limited ammunition for missiles
Tends to watch too much satellite TV where available




Possible Sample Post:
“Simulation Complete”. At the announcement the world faded back to the bare walls of the training complex. Skywatch shifted from his vehicle mode and hopped off the support cradle “I got him!” he crowed to the instructor, looking pleased with himself.

“Did you?” The mild response a bit surprising.

“Of course I got him!” Skywatch retorted “No way could I miss with that barrage!”
The instructor snorted “I see. Let’s take a closer look at that and see if you did it this time, shall we?” he moved over to another panel and set up the replay “Begin. “
A small rectangular vehicle with smaller boxes jutting from either side of the rear deck was skimming along a riverbed, spay rooster tailing from the rear. “You objective in this exercise was to secure the” the view zoomed out from the vehicle on display to a topographic map “secure river valley from aerial intrusion.” Another zoom out to show the valley “You chose to use the river itself as a site. Why?”

“Satellite showed only 2 possible ways through the valley” Skywatch tone was clear that he thought that a stupid question “along this line” his fingers sketched a line into the display “by staying on the river I could use my mobility to hit and move”

“Very good” the instructor agreed “What else?”

“I couldn’t handle the hill slopes that well” Groused the younger robot.

“Everyone needs to know their weaknesses as well as their strengths Skywatch . You aren’t the only one to have them.” The instructor chided him gently. “Attacking force was spotted ten minutes earlier, giving you advance warning. Your response?”

“I connected to the satellite to confirm their path and set up for launch.”

“Who were your targets?”

“The Seekers of course!”

“Ah yes, the seekers. Very good” Skywatch got a cold trickle at the tone. He had missed something again.

“I moved to the edge of the foliage cover along the river and set up my first sot. Two missiles, 2 seconds apart. Clean launch” the view slipped back to the vehicle firing ” and the second missile hit”

“Two missiles for one Seeker? A bit extravagant, or a bit insulting…”

“Neither. The first was a decoy. All it was supposed to do was drive the Seeker down into”

“Into the second missile where it couldn’t dodge so easily. Not bad….not bad” the instructor finished

Skywatch beamed.

“Then you ran.”

Skywatch stopped beaming “Yes I did. The last thing I want is to be reset again by those Spark-lost drones. I moved to another position further down the valley”

“So you did” the figures in the display moved in time to the narrative” That kept you from being hit by their counter attack” Two of the four remaining jets transformed and swooped down to the rivers surface. The slablike vehicles turret rotated to face the rear and small angry red bolts spat out at the pursuers. One went down in a giant spray as it went into convulsions “Your accuracy needs some work, or do you have a secret store of Energon?”

Skywatch grumped silently ‘I’m not a created combat model you old Junkion’

“Still one down, the other you had to use another missile on.”

“It worked!” Skywatch protested

“Yes it did, I wasn’t complaining young man, merely observing the events. That left two.”

“One disengaged. Pulled up and left out of the valley. I ignored it and launched everything at the last one.”

“Stupid.”

“EX-cuse me? What do you mean ‘stupid’?”

“Look the word up if you don’t know it. Look” the instructor pointed at the screen again “the missiles were dead on. You got him. Congratulations. You are also so dead…again.”

“What? No way!”

“Way!” the instructor disagreed firmly “You were so busy being trigger-happy that you didn’t see the last Decepticon blow you clear to Primus!”

On the display, a plane blinked into being, moving low and fast, launching four missiles at the hovering craft. The explosion made clear what would have happened “My original question stands: Who were your targets?”

“B-but-“

“You have the ability to look further out than most Skywatch ” The instructor continued remorselessly “..but if you don’t use it properly, that advantage is wasted! How do I make that any clearer? Work on that tonight. We’ll run this again tomorrow”. With that he turned and walked out without waiting for a response, leaving Skywatch staring at the display.

On screen the colors of Skywarp were clear.

EDITED per comments...
Changes:
Removed low fuel use
Dropped Str to 5 (-1)
Upped Int to 8 (+2)
Upped firepower to 8 (+1)
Upped Charisma to 7 (+1)
increased missile range to current day standards
NOTE: for function: Aerospace command and control is a merging (NOT dual function) of air traffic control, air defense and aerial surveilance - he's a slightly enhanced ground based AEGIS system
Historical stuff moved to profile section


--With those changes the character is approved. Rank of 3 is Okay.
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Postby Devastron » Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:57 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
optimal optimus prime1 wrote:Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:9
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:6
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to the eye and scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.


- For a cloaking device that powerful it would be a -12 stat penalty.

- For someone who charges into battle without thinking his courage is pretty low.

- The profile still needs to be run through a spell checker.
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Postby optimal optimus prime1 » Sat Mar 24, 2007 4:27 pm

ok i will make some changes and run it through spell check.

ok here it is.

Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:9
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.

No sigs in RPG forums please -Devastron
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Postby BLACKBIRD » Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:53 pm

NAME: BLACKBIRD
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Intelligence/Assassin
Alt. mode: SR-71 Blackbird ( black in color)
Weapons: Robot Mode: Quantum Lasers, On both arms (one each side, just above the wrist, ejects out and retracts), High Power Sniper Laser Gun with scope(contains, inferred, x-ray, night vision, thermal), Sword, hangs on the left hip about 10’ in length ( harden Cybertronian metal and very sharp), Energon dagger, under left wrist, a cable, with connectors, for hacking into computer terminals or other robots. Electronic warfare, Communications jamming, Radar.
Flight Mode: 2 Quantum Laser guns on both sides midway by the cockpit, Quantum Missiles on both sides of the underbelly below the cockpit.
Special Abilities: Expert in computer hacking, guerrilla warfare, sniper (very deadly), has a cloaking device for means of stealth.
Height: 24 feet/7.3 meters
Quote: “ I WORK ALONE…….STAY OUT OF MY WAY!!!!! “

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 1
RANK: Requesting a rank of 0

Profile: Blackbird is not well like by his fellow Decepticons, even Starscream cringes at the thought or by sight. Used as a last resort when all other attempts has failed to get the mission done. He likes the challenge of doing the impossible. You see no facial expressions, very professional about his work.

Abilities: Able to hack into any computers, retrieve the information and put a virus to destroy it. Very deadly Assassin. Sword, is very sharp, it can cut thru 5’ of any material with out a scratch on it. Engeron dagger, is used for cutting the throats of his targets, about 6” long and only be used for 5 minutes or it will melt. The equipment he has for Electric warfare/Communication jamming can block almost any thing. In Vehicle mode, top speed Mach 3+. Cloaking Devise, invisable to Radar and eyes (-6 to -12)



Weaknesses: He does not trust anyone except the Leader of the Decepticons and works alone.

Sample Post:Decepticon Command Center

Blackbird was ordered to the Command Center, for what reason, unknown.
Blackbird, standing about 20’ from Megatron, sitting on his chair, Starscream beside him, getting very nervous at the sight of Blackbird.

Blackbird was given the order to get information on where the whereabouts of the Autobots new base is located and defenses, then report back to Megatron with his findings. Also, if he had the chance, kill any Autobot except Prime.

Blackbird nod in agreement, did an about face and left. Once he got outside, he transformed and headed off to the Moon Base 1 that the Autobots were at, setting up his electronic jamming and engaging his cloaking devise.

Moon Base 1

Blackbird arrived at Moon Base 1, had a little trouble getting thru the defenses but that was par for the course. Transformed, still cloaked, move around very silently looking for the Main Frame Computer. Had to stop and start his movement duded to other Autobots going from place to place but finally he got to the Main Frame. Finding a corner where he would not be noticed, took his cable from under his left arm and attached it to the computer input jack, got passed the firewalls protecting it, entered the correct user name and password. Found the information that Megatron wanted, downloaded it to his internal memory, exited out of that file and put a virus to destroy it, then all of the sudden alarms went off and a booming voice came over the PA speaker “COMPUTER BREACH! COMPUTER BREACH! ALL AUTOBOTS TO THE MAINFRAME!” Unknown to Blackbird, the Auotbots beefed up their Mainframe, He gets his sword, walks towards the exit, still cloaked, gets to exit, doors opens, One Autobot standing their, prepares to use his sword, uncloaks, and slices the Autobot in half. Blackbird looks at the Autobot with no remorse for what he has done, looks both ways and goes right, finds a exit door to the outside, opens it runs out, transforms, engaging the cloak and radar jamming and heads back to Cybertron.

I am not sure where to put the proper Stat pentys at, so I do applogize for that. It has been a long time since I have done one of this things.
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Postby Devastron » Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:19 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
optimal optimus prime1 wrote:ok i will make some changes and run it through spell check.

ok here it is.

Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:7
Intelligence:6
Dexterity:9
Speed:6
Endurance:7
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:8
Tech Skill:4
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.


- The state penalty for a cloaking device invisible to just scanners is 6. You need to take that into account when you distribute your state points.
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Postby Devastron » Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:30 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
BLACKBIRD wrote:NAME: BLACKBIRD
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Intelligence/Assassin
Alt. mode: SR-71 Blackbird ( black in color)
Weapons: Robot Mode: Quantum Lasers, On both arms (one each side, just above the wrist, ejects out and retracts), High Power Sniper Laser Gun with scope(contains, inferred, x-ray, night vision, thermal), Sword, hangs on the left hip about 10’ in length ( harden Cybertronian metal and very sharp), Energon dagger, under left wrist, a cable, with connectors, for hacking into computer terminals or other robots. Electronic warfare, Communications jamming, Radar.
Flight Mode: 2 Quantum Laser guns on both sides midway by the cockpit, Quantum Missiles on both sides of the underbelly below the cockpit.
Special Abilities: Expert in computer hacking, guerrilla warfare, sniper (very deadly), has a cloaking device for means of stealth.
Height: 24 feet/7.3 meters
Quote: “ I WORK ALONE…….STAY OUT OF MY WAY!!!!! “

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 1
RANK: Requesting a rank of 0

Profile: Blackbird is not well like by his fellow Decepticons, even Starscream cringes at the thought or by sight. Used as a last resort when all other attempts has failed to get the mission done. He likes the challenge of doing the impossible. You see no facial expressions, very professional about his work.

Abilities: Able to hack into any computers, retrieve the information and put a virus to destroy it. Very deadly Assassin. Sword, is very sharp, it can cut thru 5’ of any material with out a scratch on it. Engeron dagger, is used for cutting the throats of his targets, about 6” long and only be used for 5 minutes or it will melt. The equipment he has for Electric warfare/Communication jamming can block almost any thing. In Vehicle mode, top speed Mach 3+. Cloaking Devise, invisable to Radar and eyes (-6 to -12)



Weaknesses: He does not trust anyone except the Leader of the Decepticons and works alone.

Sample Post:Decepticon Command Center

Blackbird was ordered to the Command Center, for what reason, unknown.
Blackbird, standing about 20’ from Megatron, sitting on his chair, Starscream beside him, getting very nervous at the sight of Blackbird.

Blackbird was given the order to get information on where the whereabouts of the Autobots new base is located and defenses, then report back to Megatron with his findings. Also, if he had the chance, kill any Autobot except Prime.

Blackbird nod in agreement, did an about face and left. Once he got outside, he transformed and headed off to the Moon Base 1 that the Autobots were at, setting up his electronic jamming and engaging his cloaking devise.

Moon Base 1

Blackbird arrived at Moon Base 1, had a little trouble getting thru the defenses but that was par for the course. Transformed, still cloaked, move around very silently looking for the Main Frame Computer. Had to stop and start his movement duded to other Autobots going from place to place but finally he got to the Main Frame. Finding a corner where he would not be noticed, took his cable from under his left arm and attached it to the computer input jack, got passed the firewalls protecting it, entered the correct user name and password. Found the information that Megatron wanted, downloaded it to his internal memory, exited out of that file and put a virus to destroy it, then all of the sudden alarms went off and a booming voice came over the PA speaker “COMPUTER BREACH! COMPUTER BREACH! ALL AUTOBOTS TO THE MAINFRAME!” Unknown to Blackbird, the Auotbots beefed up their Mainframe, He gets his sword, walks towards the exit, still cloaked, gets to exit, doors opens, One Autobot standing their, prepares to use his sword, uncloaks, and slices the Autobot in half. Blackbird looks at the Autobot with no remorse for what he has done, looks both ways and goes right, finds a exit door to the outside, opens it runs out, transforms, engaging the cloak and radar jamming and heads back to Cybertron.

I am not sure where to put the proper Stat pentys at, so I do applogize for that. It has been a long time since I have done one of this things.


- The stat penalty for a cloaking device that makes the subject invisible to both scanners and eyes is 12.

- The penalty for having more than one function is 10.

- I think you are trying to do a bit too much with just one character. While you could possibly pull off an intelligence specialist/assassin, it is going to take a lot of stat points to do it and probably render the character pretty weak. I suggest on focusing on one area with this character. You can always make another one that focuses on another area later.
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Postby BLACKBIRD » Sun Mar 25, 2007 8:24 pm

Ok, second attempt?

NAME: BLACKBIRD
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Intelligence/Assassin
Alt. mode: SR-71 Blackbird ( black in color)
Weapons: Robot Mode: Quantum Lasers, On both arms (one each side, just above the wrist, ejects out and retracts), High Power Sniper Laser Gun with scope(contains, inferred, x-ray, night vision, thermal), Sword, hangs on the left hip about 10’ in length ( harden Cybertronian metal and very sharp), Energon dagger, under left wrist, a cable, with connectors, for hacking into computer terminals or other robots. Electronic warfare, Communications jamming, Radar.
Flight Mode: 2 Quantum Laser guns on both sides midway by the cockpit, Quantum Missiles on both sides of the underbelly below the cockpit.
Special Abilities: Expert in computer hacking, guerrilla warfare, sniper (very deadly)
Height: 24 feet/7.3 meters
Quote: “ I WORK ALONE.......STAY OUT OF MY WAY!!!!! “

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 1
RANK: Requesting a rank of 0

Profile: Blackbird is not well like by his fellow Decepticons, even Starscream cringes at the thought or by sight. Used as a last resort when all other attempts has failed to get the mission done. He likes the challenge of doing the impossible. You see no facial expressions, very professional about his work.

Abilities: Able to hack into any computers, retrieve the information and put a virus to destroy it. Very deadly Assassin. Sword, is very sharp, it can cut thru 5’ of any material with out a scratch on it. Engeron dagger, is used for cutting the throats of his targets, about 6” long and only be used for 5 minutes at a time or it will melt. The equipment he has for Electric warfare/Communication jamming can block almost any thing. In Vehicle mode, top speed Mach 3+.

Weaknesses: He does not trust anyone except the Leader of the Decepticons and works alone.

Sample Post:Decepticon Command Center

Blackbird was ordered to the Command Center, for what reason, unknown.
Blackbird, standing about 20’ from Megatron, sitting on his chair, Starscream beside him, getting very nervous at the sight of Blackbird.

Blackbird was given the order to get information on where the whereabouts of the Autobots new base is located and defenses, then report back to Megatron with his findings. Also, if he had the chance, kill any Autobot, except Prime.

Blackbird nod in agreement, did an about face and left. Once he got outside, he transformed and headed off to the Moon Base 1 where the Autobots were at, setting up his electronic jamming and communtication jammer.

Moon Base 1

Blackbird arrived at Moon Base 1, had a little trouble getting thru the defenses but that was par for the course. Transformed, move around very silently looking for the Main Frame Computer or somehere he could access it. Had to stop and start his movement duded to other Autobots going from place to place but finally he got to a dark room that no one was using. Finding a computer treminal, took his cable from under his left arm and attached it to the computer input jack, got passed the firewalls protecting it, entered the correct user name and password. Found the information that Megatron wanted, downloaded it to his internal memory, exited out of that file and put a virus to destroy it, then all of the sudden alarms went off and a booming voice came over the PA speaker “COMPUTER BREACH! COMPUTER BREACH! ALL AUTOBOTS TO THE MAINFRAME!” Unknown to Blackbird, the Auotbots beefed up their Mainframe, He grabs his sword, prepares to use it, walks towards the exit, gets to exit, doors opens, one Autobot standing their and slices the Autobot in half. Blackbird looks at the Autobot with no remorse for what he has done, looks both ways and goes right, finds an exit door to the outside, opens it, runs out, transforms, engaging the radar jamming and comunication jammer, heads back to Cybertron.

I hope I did this better this time. Edited the parts out with the cloaking devise and corrected the sample post. Now it should make sense.
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