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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby WasPWNator » Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:45 pm

Motto: "Motto? I don't know, probably something about molecular structure..."
Weapon: Liquid Flame-Thrower
Ember wrote:
WasPWNator wrote:Ok, for reals this time... I'd like him to start on Earth.

Apologies, I copied the stats from TFU, must've misread the application rules and not noticed those extra stats. Below is my amended application. Thanks!

Name: Huffer
Allegiance: Autobot
Sub-group: Minicars
Function: Construction Engineer
Alt. mode: Semi-Truck
Weapons: None
Special Abilities: Arm sensors can test materials for strength, heat, resistance, elasticity, etc. Extremely strong. Superior mathematical and geometrical abilities.
Height: 15ft/4.572m
Quote: "Molecular structure is the key to success."

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 5
Endurance: 7
Courage: 8
Firepower: 1
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 9
Charisma: 3
Rank: 6

Bio: Huffer, as described by Bumblebee, looks at the world "through sludge-colored windshields." Huffer is dour. He says very little and when he does speak, it's usually to grumble. Huffer's pessimism extends even to his job specialty. He'll grumble that it can't be done and then build the most complex mechanized fortress imaginable. Sometimes it seems he can whip up a suspension bridge out of bobby pins and glue. Huffer isn't too sociable, but in any sort of difficulty he is absolutely reliable. Optimus Prime knows that Huffer secretly misses Cybertron and longs to return there.

Abilities:A complex system of sensors in his arms allows Huffer to test various materials, some of which he uses in construction, for various properties such as tensile strength, heat resistance, elasticity, etc. Although lacking weapons, he is extremely strong and can lift 40,000 pounds. His mathematical and geometrical abilities exceed those of all the other Autobots and help him in his construction designs.

Weaknesses: Has no firepower capabilities and does not carry any sort of gun.

Sample post: Desert, some distance outside Las Vegas, Nevada

Huffer's optics scanned the red dirt below and around him, waiting for the perfect spot to present itself. Not that he was expecting it to. Nothing was ever perfect on this planet.

'What are we waiting for Huffer?' one of the other Autobots chirped, 'just pick a spot already!'

'Shut your unit!' The engineer retorted, 'Do you know what would happen if we built this outpost in the wrong spot? If there's even a slight unevenness, even a fraction of subsidence, the entire building's integrity would be compromised. we might as well balance the lab on top of a tree! Not that I understand why Perceptor wants his new lab up in the air anyhow; surely underground would be a safer place for it? But then, what do I know? I'm just a lowly engineer, tasked with building an unecessary outpost laboratory that I'll probably never get finished anyway in the middle of a desert on a backwater world that isn't even my real home...there! Place the foundations there - that's the perfect spot!'

Huffer gestured towards a point in the ground and his team immediately began moving the excavation machine and the foundation poles into position.

Huffer watched them working. He disliked having a team under him; he was a faster and better engineer than the lot of them put together - they were rookies; unreliable, a liability. But the orders had been clear: they needed training, needed experience. "The Autobots needed more engineers like you, Huffer" Prime had said to him before he set off to Nevada. 'More like me huh?' Huffer pondered on this 'I suppose it would be good to have a few more Autobots around who realised how slagging terrible everything is most of the time,'

Huffer's thoughts were cast back to Cybertron; to building great towering structures that glittered under the sky; glittered in a way none of these earth metals could even compare to. He remembered huge, complex fortresses, perfectly designed to be impenetrable to the enemy but easily accessible to any Autobot who approached it. And further back than that, he dimly recalled designing and creating other buildings, buildings without weapons or armour-coating...

Huffer allowed himself to indulge in this daydream for a few moments more, and then, snapped out of it by the grim, tiresome hazards of reality he called out to one of his team 'No not like that! You're gonna get us all killed! Give it here, let me show you...'


Remove the 'Skill' stat, it's not used in this game. I also wanted to be sure you know that the Autobots and the Decepticons are still under the infiltration protocols and that both factions are now in orbit on their own ships above Earth.


Edited.
Yes I'm aware of that, my sample post was just something I cooked up to get the character and my writing across, it's not directly related to anything happening in the existing RPG right now.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Ember » Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:49 pm

Motto: "I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things."
WasPWNator wrote:
Ember wrote:
WasPWNator wrote:Ok, for reals this time... I'd like him to start on Earth.

Apologies, I copied the stats from TFU, must've misread the application rules and not noticed those extra stats. Below is my amended application. Thanks!

Name: Huffer
Allegiance: Autobot
Sub-group: Minicars
Function: Construction Engineer
Alt. mode: Semi-Truck
Weapons: None
Special Abilities: Arm sensors can test materials for strength, heat, resistance, elasticity, etc. Extremely strong. Superior mathematical and geometrical abilities.
Height: 15ft/4.572m
Quote: "Molecular structure is the key to success."

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 5
Endurance: 7
Courage: 8
Firepower: 1
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 9
Charisma: 3
Rank: 6

Bio: Huffer, as described by Bumblebee, looks at the world "through sludge-colored windshields." Huffer is dour. He says very little and when he does speak, it's usually to grumble. Huffer's pessimism extends even to his job specialty. He'll grumble that it can't be done and then build the most complex mechanized fortress imaginable. Sometimes it seems he can whip up a suspension bridge out of bobby pins and glue. Huffer isn't too sociable, but in any sort of difficulty he is absolutely reliable. Optimus Prime knows that Huffer secretly misses Cybertron and longs to return there.

Abilities:A complex system of sensors in his arms allows Huffer to test various materials, some of which he uses in construction, for various properties such as tensile strength, heat resistance, elasticity, etc. Although lacking weapons, he is extremely strong and can lift 40,000 pounds. His mathematical and geometrical abilities exceed those of all the other Autobots and help him in his construction designs.

Weaknesses: Has no firepower capabilities and does not carry any sort of gun.

Sample post: Desert, some distance outside Las Vegas, Nevada

Huffer's optics scanned the red dirt below and around him, waiting for the perfect spot to present itself. Not that he was expecting it to. Nothing was ever perfect on this planet.

'What are we waiting for Huffer?' one of the other Autobots chirped, 'just pick a spot already!'

'Shut your unit!' The engineer retorted, 'Do you know what would happen if we built this outpost in the wrong spot? If there's even a slight unevenness, even a fraction of subsidence, the entire building's integrity would be compromised. we might as well balance the lab on top of a tree! Not that I understand why Perceptor wants his new lab up in the air anyhow; surely underground would be a safer place for it? But then, what do I know? I'm just a lowly engineer, tasked with building an unecessary outpost laboratory that I'll probably never get finished anyway in the middle of a desert on a backwater world that isn't even my real home...there! Place the foundations there - that's the perfect spot!'

Huffer gestured towards a point in the ground and his team immediately began moving the excavation machine and the foundation poles into position.

Huffer watched them working. He disliked having a team under him; he was a faster and better engineer than the lot of them put together - they were rookies; unreliable, a liability. But the orders had been clear: they needed training, needed experience. "The Autobots needed more engineers like you, Huffer" Prime had said to him before he set off to Nevada. 'More like me huh?' Huffer pondered on this 'I suppose it would be good to have a few more Autobots around who realised how slagging terrible everything is most of the time,'

Huffer's thoughts were cast back to Cybertron; to building great towering structures that glittered under the sky; glittered in a way none of these earth metals could even compare to. He remembered huge, complex fortresses, perfectly designed to be impenetrable to the enemy but easily accessible to any Autobot who approached it. And further back than that, he dimly recalled designing and creating other buildings, buildings without weapons or armour-coating...

Huffer allowed himself to indulge in this daydream for a few moments more, and then, snapped out of it by the grim, tiresome hazards of reality he called out to one of his team 'No not like that! You're gonna get us all killed! Give it here, let me show you...'


Remove the 'Skill' stat, it's not used in this game. I also wanted to be sure you know that the Autobots and the Decepticons are still under the infiltration protocols and that both factions are now in orbit on their own ships above Earth.


Edited.
Yes I'm aware of that, my sample post was just something I cooked up to get the character and my writing across, it's not directly related to anything happening in the existing RPG right now.


Sounds good. He's approved. Have fun with him!
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Firebrand » Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:53 pm

Motto: "The price for peace is war."
Weapon: Gatling Cannon
Going to take a crack at this with a custom character.

Name: Firebrand

Allegiance: Decepticons

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: Navistar International LoneStar, a black heavy-duty semi-truck. (Once a Cybertronian AFV)

Weapons: Heavy-calibre rotary machine gun, slug pistol side-arm, two-handed heat sword.

Special Abilities: Robot-mode flight ability (more specifically: Jump-Thrusters. Limited flight ability, used for bursts of trust to propel Firebrand up or across longer distances quickly and slow descents.)

Height: 32 ft. - 9.75 m

Quote: 'The price for peace is war.'

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile: Firebrand was once a fierce gladiator, fighting and killing for sport and the entertainment of others. When the Decepticons formed, under the leadership of the mighty Megatron, Firebrand took little convincing to fight for his cause. Firebrand was at the sacking of Iacon following the example of his leaders to force obedience on Cybertron.

The war would drag on, Firebrand remained battle after battle. Eventually, Cybertron was a husk, most of what was left of the Autobot resistance had fled the planet, Megatron and a cadre of his finest in pursuit. He was left behind for aeons on the decrepit world heeding the word of Shockwave in mopping up meager resistances and energon scavenging. Luck would have it that Firebrand would be called to the planet Earth, to aid Megatron's offensive, a call he eagerly answered.

Firebrand is ruthless, having been a gladiator he is comfortable with death and slaughter, thinking little of it. Despite this, he one day hopes for order and peace, but is unwilling to compromise or see another means to that goal. Contrary to his profession as a warrior and generally tough exterior, though not unhandsome, Firebrand keeps himself well and prides himself on being what he calls "presentable". He believes the best solution to a problem is the simplest and likes to be straight-forward.

Abilities: Top speed: 135 mph. Jump-thrusters allow Firebrand to leap great distances or cover ground in quick bursts, these also allow him to dampen a fall from great heights.

Weaknesses: Firebrand is not the fastest bot, believing his toughness would compensate. He is prone to hubris and vanity. Firebrand also does not take insults well, especially regarding his appearance.

Sample Post: The din of the battlefield died down as the Decepticon offensive moved through the pitiful Autobot resistance buried in the remains of a munitions storage. Firebrand, his polished ebon chassis contrasting against the rusted grit and scorched steel of the Cybertronian ruin, strode confidently across the cratered lot to the battered storage facility. Faceless Decepticon soldiers stormed into the building, shouting victory cries and roars of battle-lust, Firebrand, however, was unmoved.

Thousands of battles far fiercer than this had hardened the dusky warrior and this 'conflict', if one could call it that, was just a stroll for him. He raised a metal brow, turning his head toward a faint sound coming from a pile of rubble, he calmly makes his way to it and notices a badly beaten Autobot soldier pinned to the ground by a broken girder. The Autobot coughs up a dribble of his energon fluids and looks up at Firebrand with a disgusted look.

Firebrand, his armet-style faceplate retracting into his helm, looks down on the pitiful Autobot with a sneer, "does my appearance offend you, cretin?"
"All you Decepticons are ugly as slag," the soldier retorts, hacking up more energy-blood. Firebrand scoffs and unsheathes his sword from his back, the tungsten-carbide blade igniting to an incandescent white, "If only you could see yourself, Autobot, then maybe you'd rescind that comment," he points the blade to the soldiers' throat, "You should think yourself lucky I'll be the last thing you see, farewell Autobo-"

Firebrand is cut short as the downed soldier had quickly pulled out a hidden energon pistol, the Autobot tries to fire multiple shots but only one makes it out before it shorts out. The beam went wide and only grazed the Decepticon's cheek, Firebrand quickly touches the wound and sees the energon fluid on his fingers. Firebrand's expression went from one of cold confidence to one of wide-eyed fury, his left optic twitching slightly. He snarls and throttles the downed Autobot, gripping his neck tight. The Decepticon strangled the Autobot for a long moment, his formidable structure crushing the bolts, servos, hydraulics and then some.

Firebrand finally let go, the Autobot's head hung limply by a couple of conduit cords and nothing more, his sharp fingers dripping with the vital fluids of the now-dead soldier. With a angered sigh he activated his faceplate, now covering the gash on his face and proceeds to finish the job he was sent to do. A large rotary machine gun forms below his right arm, his hand gripping the handle tight, and Firebrand rushes into the storage facility. The walls of the ruined building echoed with the sound of fiery retribution and screams of despair.
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Strength: 8
Intelligence: 6
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Endurance: 8
Rank: 5
Courage: 8
Firepower: 7
Skill: 7

Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Ember » Fri Aug 19, 2011 9:59 pm

Motto: "I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things."
Decepticon_Firebrand wrote:Going to take a crack at this with a custom character.

Name: Firebrand

Allegiance: Decepticons

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: Navistar International LoneStar, a black heavy-duty semi-truck. (Once a Cybertronian AFV)

Weapons: Heavy-calibre rotary machine gun, slug pistol side-arm, two-handed heat sword.

Special Abilities: Robot-mode flight ability (more specifically: Jump-Thrusters. Limited flight ability, used for bursts of trust to propel Firebrand up or across longer distances quickly and slow descents.)

Height: 32 ft. - 9.75 m

Quote: 'The price for peace is war.'

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile: Firebrand was once a fierce gladiator, fighting and killing for sport and the entertainment of others. When the Decepticons formed, under the leadership of the mighty Megatron, Firebrand took little convincing to fight for his cause. Firebrand was at the sacking of Iacon following the example of his leaders to force obedience on Cybertron.

The war would drag on, Firebrand remained battle after battle. Eventually, Cybertron was a husk, most of what was left of the Autobot resistance had fled the planet, Megatron and a cadre of his finest in pursuit. He was left behind for aeons on the decrepit world heeding the word of Shockwave in mopping up meager resistances and energon scavenging. Luck would have it that Firebrand would be called to the planet Earth, to aid Megatron's offensive, a call he eagerly answered.

Firebrand is ruthless, having been a gladiator he is comfortable with death and slaughter, thinking little of it. Despite this, he one day hopes for order and peace, but is unwilling to compromise or see another means to that goal. Contrary to his profession as a warrior and generally tough exterior, though not unhandsome, Firebrand keeps himself well and prides himself on being what he calls "presentable". He believes the best solution to a problem is the simplest and likes to be straight-forward.

Abilities: Top speed: 135 mph. Jump-thrusters allow Firebrand to leap great distances or cover ground in quick bursts, these also allow him to dampen a fall from great heights.

Weaknesses: Firebrand is not the fastest bot, believing his toughness would compensate. He is prone to hubris and vanity. Firebrand also does not take insults well, especially regarding his appearance.

Sample Post: The din of the battlefield died down as the Decepticon offensive moved through the pitiful Autobot resistance buried in the remains of a munitions storage. Firebrand, his polished ebon chassis contrasting against the rusted grit and scorched steel of the Cybertronian ruin, strode confidently across the cratered lot to the battered storage facility. Faceless Decepticon soldiers stormed into the building, shouting victory cries and roars of battle-lust, Firebrand, however, was unmoved.

Thousands of battles far fiercer than this had hardened the dusky warrior and this 'conflict', if one could call it that, was just a stroll for him. He raised a metal brow, turning his head toward a faint sound coming from a pile of rubble, he calmly makes his way to it and notices a badly beaten Autobot soldier pinned to the ground by a broken girder. The Autobot coughs up a dribble of his energon fluids and looks up at Firebrand with a disgusted look.

Firebrand, his armet-style faceplate retracting into his helm, looks down on the pitiful Autobot with a sneer, "does my appearance offend you, cretin?"
"All you Decepticons are ugly as slag," the soldier retorts, hacking up more energy-blood. Firebrand scoffs and unsheathes his sword from his back, the tungsten-carbide blade igniting to an incandescent white, "If only you could see yourself, Autobot, then maybe you'd rescind that comment," he points the blade to the soldiers' throat, "You should think yourself lucky I'll be the last thing you see, farewell Autobo-"

Firebrand is cut short as the downed soldier had quickly pulled out a hidden energon pistol, the Autobot tries to fire multiple shots but only one makes it out before it shorts out. The beam went wide and only grazed the Decepticon's cheek, Firebrand quickly touches the wound and sees the energon fluid on his fingers. Firebrand's expression went from one of cold confidence to one of wide-eyed fury, his left optic twitching slightly. He snarls and throttles the downed Autobot, gripping his neck tight. The Decepticon strangled the Autobot for a long moment, his formidable structure crushing the bolts, servos, hydraulics and then some.

Firebrand finally let go, the Autobot's head hung limply by a couple of conduit cords and nothing more, his sharp fingers dripping with the vital fluids of the now-dead soldier. With a angered sigh he activated his faceplate, now covering the gash on his face and proceeds to finish the job he was sent to do. A large rotary machine gun forms below his right arm, his hand gripping the handle tight, and Firebrand rushes into the storage facility. The walls of the ruined building echoed with the sound of fiery retribution and screams of despair.


Let's see here. You might want to rethink his alt mode. You've chosen the exact same one as Motormaster. The Autobots didn't leave Cybertron; in all actuality both factions were forced to leave because the planet became uninhabitable, so no one was left on Cybertron except Thunderwing who only survived because of his carapace. That part of your profile needs to be changed.

In the abilities section you mentioned his leaping ability, but I'd also like to see something about his weapons. Explain what kind of damage they're capable of. Also, how long can he maintain his top speed.

Make those couple of changes and re-post him.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Firebrand » Fri Aug 19, 2011 11:42 pm

Motto: "The price for peace is war."
Weapon: Gatling Cannon
Ember wrote:Let's see here. You might want to rethink his alt mode. You've chosen the exact same one as Motormaster. The Autobots didn't leave Cybertron; in all actuality both factions were forced to leave because the planet became uninhabitable, so no one was left on Cybertron except Thunderwing who only survived because of his carapace. That part of your profile needs to be changed.

In the abilities section you mentioned his leaping ability, but I'd also like to see something about his weapons. Explain what kind of damage they're capable of. Also, how long can he maintain his top speed.


Make those couple of changes and re-post him.

Alright, let me try this again, I hope this one makes the cut.

Name: Firebrand

Allegiance: Decepticons

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: Silver Dartz Kombat T98 Armored SUV (Once a Cybertronian AFV)

Weapons:
-Heavy-calibre rotary machine gun: A bulky, three-barreled machine gun that sends 15mm-wide uranium projectiles by electro-magnetic rails at high velocities. Not the most accurate weapon, but sprays a devastating stream of hypersonic bullets. Chews through ammo quickly.
-slug pistol side-arm:A large pistol that fires fragmenting diamond projectiles with a chemical propellant, deadly at point-blank range but less than harmful at range.
-two-handed heat sword: Typical Cybertronian melee weapon, cuts through most alloys.

Special Abilities: Robot-mode flight ability (more specifically: Jump-Thrusters. Limited flight ability, used for bursts of trust to propel Firebrand up or across longer distances quickly and slow descents.)

Height: 27 ft. - 8.22 m

Quote: 'The price for peace is war.'

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile: Firebrand was once a fierce gladiator, fighting and killing for sport and the entertainment of others. When the Decepticons formed, under the leadership of the mighty Megatron, Firebrand took little convincing to fight for his cause. Firebrand was at the sacking of Iacon following the example of his leaders to force obedience on Cybertron.

The war would drag on, Firebrand remained battle after battle. Eventually, Cybertron was a husk, what was left of its inhabitants fled to the stars and would come upon a distant planet rife with potential energy sources: Earth. There he would continue his battle alongside the Decepticons and bring this new world to its knees.

Firebrand is ruthless, having been a gladiator he is comfortable with death and slaughter, thinking little of it. Despite this, he one day hopes for order and peace, but is unwilling to compromise or see another means to that goal. Contrary to his profession as a warrior and generally tough exterior, though not unhandsome, Firebrand keeps himself well and prides himself on being what he calls "presentable". He believes the best solution to a problem is the simplest and likes to be straight-forward.

Abilities: Top speed: 145 mph. His vehicle mode can sustain top speed for more than half an hour, but is much less maneuverable. Jump-thrusters allow Firebrand to leap great distances or cover ground in quick bursts, these also allow him to dampen a fall from great heights.

Weaknesses: Firebrand is not the fastest bot, believing his toughness would compensate. He is prone to hubris and vanity. Firebrand also does not take insults well, especially regarding his appearance.

Sample Post: The din of the battlefield died down as the Decepticon offensive moved through the pitiful Autobot resistance buried in the remains of a munitions storage. Firebrand, his sterling chassis contrasting against the rusted grit and scorched steel of the Cybertronian ruin, strode confidently across the cratered lot to the battered storage facility. Faceless Decepticon soldiers stormed into the building, shouting victory cries and roars of battle-lust, Firebrand, however, was unmoved.

Thousands of battles far fiercer than this had hardened the argent warrior and this 'conflict', if one could call it that, was just a stroll for him. He raised a metal brow, turning his head toward a faint sound coming from a pile of rubble, he calmly makes his way to it and notices a badly beaten Autobot soldier pinned to the ground by a broken girder. The Autobot coughs up a dribble of his energon fluids and looks up at Firebrand with a disgusted look.

Firebrand, his armet-style faceplate retracting into his helm, looks down on the pitiful Autobot with a sneer, "does my appearance offend you, cretin?"
"All you Decepticons are ugly as slag," the soldier retorts, hacking up more energy-blood. Firebrand scoffs and unsheathes his sword from his back, the tungsten-carbide blade igniting to an incandescent white, "If only you could see yourself, Autobot, then maybe you'd rescind that comment," he points the blade to the soldiers' throat, "You should think yourself lucky I'll be the last thing you see, farewell Autobo-"

Firebrand is cut short as the downed soldier had quickly pulled out a hidden energon pistol, the Autobot tries to fire multiple shots but only one makes it out before it shorts out. The beam went wide and only grazed the Decepticon's cheek, Firebrand quickly touches the wound and sees the energon fluid on his fingers. Firebrand's expression went from one of cold confidence to one of wide-eyed fury, his left optic twitching slightly. He snarls and throttles the downed Autobot, gripping his neck tight. The Decepticon strangled the Autobot for a long moment, his formidable structure crushing the bolts, servos, hydraulics and then some.

Firebrand finally let go, the Autobot's head hung limply by a couple of conduit cords and nothing more, his sharp fingers dripping with the vital fluids of the now-dead soldier. With a angered sigh he activated his faceplate, now covering the gash on his face and proceeds to finish the job he was sent to do. A large rotary machine gun forms below his right arm, his hand gripping the handle tight, and Firebrand rushes into the storage facility. The walls of the ruined building echoed with the sound of fiery retribution and screams of despair.
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Skill: 7

Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Ember » Sat Aug 20, 2011 7:27 pm

Motto: "I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things."
Decepticon_Firebrand wrote:Alright, let me try this again, I hope this one makes the cut.

Name: Firebrand

Allegiance: Decepticons

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: Silver Dartz Kombat T98 Armored SUV (Once a Cybertronian AFV)

Weapons:
-Heavy-calibre rotary machine gun
-slug pistol side-arm
-two-handed heat sword

Special Abilities: Robot-mode flight ability (more specifically: Jump-Thrusters. Limited flight ability, used for bursts of trust to propel Firebrand up or across longer distances quickly and slow descents.)

Height: 27 ft. - 8.22 m

Quote: 'The price for peace is war.'

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 3
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile: Firebrand was once a fierce gladiator, fighting and killing for sport and the entertainment of others. When the Decepticons formed, under the leadership of the mighty Megatron, Firebrand took little convincing to fight for his cause. Firebrand was at the sacking of Iacon following the example of his leaders to force obedience on Cybertron.

The war would drag on, Firebrand remained battle after battle. Eventually, Cybertron was a husk, what was left of its inhabitants fled to the stars and would come upon a distant planet rife with potential energy sources: Earth. There he would continue his battle alongside the Decepticons and bring this new world to its knees.

Firebrand is ruthless, having been a gladiator he is comfortable with death and slaughter, thinking little of it. Despite this, he one day hopes for order and peace, but is unwilling to compromise or see another means to that goal. Contrary to his profession as a warrior and generally tough exterior, though not unhandsome, Firebrand keeps himself well and prides himself on being what he calls "presentable". He believes the best solution to a problem is the simplest and likes to be straight-forward.

Abilities: Top speed: 145 mph. His vehicle mode can sustain top speed for more than half an hour, but is much less maneuverable. Jump-thrusters allow Firebrand to leap great distances or cover ground in quick bursts, these also allow him to dampen a fall from great heights. His Heavy-calibre rotary machine gun is a bulky, three-barreled machine gun that sends 15mm-wide uranium projectiles by electro-magnetic rails at high velocities. Not the most accurate weapon, but sprays a devastating stream of hypersonic bullets. Chews through ammo quickly. His slug pistol side-arm is a large pistol that fires fragmenting diamond projectiles with a chemical propellant, deadly at point-blank range but less than harmful at range. He also carries a two-handed heat sword which is a typical Cybertronian melee weapon. It's capable of cutting through most alloys.

Weaknesses: Firebrand is not the fastest bot, believing his toughness would compensate. He is prone to hubris and vanity. Firebrand also does not take insults well, especially regarding his appearance.

Sample Post: The din of the battlefield died down as the Decepticon offensive moved through the pitiful Autobot resistance buried in the remains of a munitions storage. Firebrand, his sterling chassis contrasting against the rusted grit and scorched steel of the Cybertronian ruin, strode confidently across the cratered lot to the battered storage facility. Faceless Decepticon soldiers stormed into the building, shouting victory cries and roars of battle-lust, Firebrand, however, was unmoved.

Thousands of battles far fiercer than this had hardened the argent warrior and this 'conflict', if one could call it that, was just a stroll for him. He raised a metal brow, turning his head toward a faint sound coming from a pile of rubble, he calmly makes his way to it and notices a badly beaten Autobot soldier pinned to the ground by a broken girder. The Autobot coughs up a dribble of his energon fluids and looks up at Firebrand with a disgusted look.

Firebrand, his armet-style faceplate retracting into his helm, looks down on the pitiful Autobot with a sneer, "does my appearance offend you, cretin?"
"All you Decepticons are ugly as slag," the soldier retorts, hacking up more energy-blood. Firebrand scoffs and unsheathes his sword from his back, the tungsten-carbide blade igniting to an incandescent white, "If only you could see yourself, Autobot, then maybe you'd rescind that comment," he points the blade to the soldiers' throat, "You should think yourself lucky I'll be the last thing you see, farewell Autobo-"

Firebrand is cut short as the downed soldier had quickly pulled out a hidden energon pistol, the Autobot tries to fire multiple shots but only one makes it out before it shorts out. The beam went wide and only grazed the Decepticon's cheek, Firebrand quickly touches the wound and sees the energon fluid on his fingers. Firebrand's expression went from one of cold confidence to one of wide-eyed fury, his left optic twitching slightly. He snarls and throttles the downed Autobot, gripping his neck tight. The Decepticon strangled the Autobot for a long moment, his formidable structure crushing the bolts, servos, hydraulics and then some.

Firebrand finally let go, the Autobot's head hung limply by a couple of conduit cords and nothing more, his sharp fingers dripping with the vital fluids of the now-dead soldier. With a angered sigh he activated his faceplate, now covering the gash on his face and proceeds to finish the job he was sent to do. A large rotary machine gun forms below his right arm, his hand gripping the handle tight, and Firebrand rushes into the storage facility. The walls of the ruined building echoed with the sound of fiery retribution and screams of despair.


Okay, I made a few edits and put the description of his weapons in the abilities section. With that done and the changes I asked you to make he's good to go. Have him start on the Decepticon frigate Ultrax. Rank 5
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby -Kanrabat- » Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:48 pm

Motto: "Love it? GET IT!
It's that simple."
Weapon: Vibro-Axe
I want in!

:BOT: Kanrabat :BOT:

Allegiance: Autobots

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: KOMATSU GD 655 MOTOR GRADER with snow-plow

Weapons:
A small hidden basic lazer in alt-mode with an almost indestructible plow for, well, plowing, but also, ramming. In robot mode, he have a Armor Axe that can power-up to be more deadly (at the expense of his own energon). His plow become his -almost- indestructible shield. The only firearm he have is the basic regulation lazer pistol a security guard at a mall would have. He barely use it and have poor marksmanship.



Height:
31 ft

Quote:
"I will be your blade. I will be your shield."


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 04
Dexterity: 06
Speed: 04
Endurance: 09
Courage: 08
Firepower: 03
Accuracy: 03
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 04
Field Generator: 08
Rank: ?


Profile: Kanrabat was born in a relatively peaceful Cybertronian colony. There was no Autobots, no Decepticons. Only robotic life. Kanrabat entered the peace-keeping academy at a very young age with dreams of becoming one of the top peacekeepers. Unfortunately for him, he wasn't that great at shcool. He barely managed to pass the shooting course. He flunked leadership and planning. But he was a natural at wrestling and mele combat. He also was the first in line to protect everyone in training. He graduated, but he did not earned a glorious job. He was a bodyguard for a high ranking official. This was the most boring job ever.

However, one day, THEY came. A group of rogue warriors and bandits came into town to pillage, kill, and destroy. At first, Kanrabat did not know what to do. He panicked and he sought his master. He arrived too late. The politician was killed right before Kanrabat's eyes. This made him rage. A lot. Whe plew through his master's killer like a plow through weat. He calmed down and he saw the destruction he made. His first kills made him retch. He was about to fall on his knees to cry, when cries for help pulled him back from his fragile state of mind to a strong sense of duty. He had people to protect. Workers, fembots, protoforms... they needed him. He used his trusty shield and massive body to protect as much people as possible so they can escape. If an ennemy came too close, he was quickly dealt with by axe.

Kanrabat was quickly seen as a serious threat. He was surrounded by a dozen of ennemies. They shot at him all at once. Instinctivly, Kanrabat braced himself behind his shield. Unexpectedly, a powerful forcefield surrounded him. Pleased by this newfound ability, Kanrabat held on. Unfortunately, Kanrabat was quite inexperienced, both in his abilities and his combat skills. The forcefield quickly depleted Kanrabat's energy reserves, making him tired and vulnerable. He was shot repeatedly and was left for dead in a scrapheap.


Abilities: Can generate a powerful forcefield to protect himself and his allies on a max spherical radius of 100 feets, Kanrabat in the center. That forcefield protect from laser, bullets, sharpnel, and explosions. However, large objects like bots and vehicle can come and go unhindered... ally or ennemy. He can also perform basic repairs and first aid.

Weaknesses: Kanrabat is very weak at gun skills. He only feel confortable with his basic academy gun. He can aim and shoot, but he must be standing still and be undisturbed while aiming... a large target! He also take his protecting duties very seriously. If the one who he must proted get killed or hurt, he will not forgive himself and failure depress him for a long time. He's also the kind of guy to act before thinking. He'll be the one charging suddenly while welling "Leeroooooooy Jenkiiiiiiins" even if he have no clue who that is.

Sample Post:
A long time later, Kanrabat found himself in a repair bay on board of a spaceship. The repairbot said his remains were found on a old abandoned colony. In all the old corpses and debris, his remains contain his still active, but dormant spark. They salvaged his sheild because of it's incredible composition, and they gave him a new and sturdyer body. Kanrabat learned of the Autobots and Decepticons war. He found out that his colony was one of the many victims of the rising Decepticons... and that this incident took place MILLIONS OF YEARS AGO! Swearing not revenge but to serve and protect, Kanrabat joined the Autobot cause.

After a real military training, he was sent to a mission to protect a small northen village on a far off planet named Earth. Uppon arrival, Kanrabat was very unfamiliar with the planet and the main species of strange and small little fleshings that inabitated this planet. He was even more surprised to be ordered to scan a local vehicle and transform into it. Of course, he knew how to change into his rammer alt-mode, but THIS? He scanned a local snow-plower that came by. He found this new shape quite confortable and he felt at peace rolling and plowing snow. Of cousre, the Decepticons HAD to come and disturb the peace. He fought, he protected, and he was overwhelmed. Again. But this time, it was different. This time, he had teammates to defend him. Victory was quick. Kanrabat appreciated the fact of having teamates.

To this day, he continue to plow snow in the north, waiting for mission call. When that time come, he'll be ready. And THEN he will make the Autobots leaders proud. :BOT:
Come see my latest creation, the COMPLETE combiner team, Scorponok and his Pretenders, forming SHELLSHOCK

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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby USDA Prime » Sun Sep 04, 2011 2:32 pm

Motto: "Delicious steaks are the right of all sentient beings."
Weapon: Double Barrelled Shell Launcher
Name: Saferoute
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Civilian Transport
Alt. mode: Blue Bird Vision School Bus (77 passenger)
Weapons: Alt. Mode: Dual Lasers, Missile Launcher.
Robot Mode: Laser Rifle
Height: 32 ft/9.75 m
Quote: "Primus' smaller creations that can't fight are the true victims of this war."

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Appearance: Saferoute's alt. mode is a typical yellow school bus, capable of carrying up to 77 human passengers. In her robot mode the front roof and windows split and fold down to make her arms and the back third of the bus splits to form her legs. The front hood of the bus folds back to reveal her head. Her robot mode is tall and bulky, her torso is black with a red Autobot insignia, while her arms and legs orangish yellow.

Holomatter Avatar: An average sized woman in her 40s with long red hair, wearing a frilly bright blue dress.

Profile:
Saferoute joined the Autobots for one reason, and one reason only: To save and protect the small, weaker species that the Decepticons want to enslave or exterminate.
Always a lover of animals, whenever she came across a wounded petro rabbit, or a turbofox that had been shot during a hunt, or any other injured creature, she would take them to her home and nurse them back to health. She grew attached to many of these animals, spending most of her time playing with them. Her attachment would grow to the point where she would talk to them as if she could understand them, and considered them to be far close friends than any member of her own kind.
When the war started to break out she ignored the politics and avoided joining sides, instead focussing all of her efforts to protecting the creatures that she had cared so much for. Unfortunately Saferoute found herself alone in this endevour, and as hard as she fought to preserve the animals she loved, the Decepticon war machine was too much for her to overcome . Her spark sank as she saw most of Cybertron's wildlife become extinct, their habitat's devastated into lifeless wastelands.
Seeing little hope that animals woud ever flourish on her home planet again, she finally joined the Autobots just before the population left the planet. Now she fights to protect the indigenous species on other planets from the Decepticons tyranny, to prevent what happened on Cybertron to happen on other worlds.

Abilities: Saferoute's main function is to evacuate smaller lifeforms away from hostile areas. On Earth she does this as a yellow school bus which can carry up to 77 humans. Her bus mode has a maximum speed of 135 MPH , with a range of 950 miles. Her bus mode is equipped with seat belts, air bags and bullet-proof, shatter-resistant glass to protect any occupants inside. Her bus mode is also equipped with dual lasers inside her headlights, and a missile launcher above the windshield, which can be used for combat or to blow away any obstacles in her path. In robot mode she has above average stength and endurance, and weilds a laser rifle.

Weaknesses: Saferoute has poor manueverability and acceleration in her bus mode, unable to make sharp turns. Her robot mode is also bulky, awkward and slow. Her love of animals is a constant source of problems within the Autobot ranks. She will frequently ignore orders and risk the well-being of herself and her fellow Autobots if she sees a small creature in danger. Though she claims to talk to and understand most species, she is merely acting on intuition and does not have any real way to translate the various sounds of less intelligent creatures.

Sample Post:

Saferoute drove as fast as she could away from the seemingly endless fire and explosions from the battle behind her, confident in the safety of her passengers. As soon as the bus was 10 miles away from the battle, she stopped to let out her passengers. Her avatar pulled open the passenger's door and waved to the humans crowded inside her.

"You should all be safe now, friends." the red headed "driver" said as the passengers walked out in single file, "Make sure to call your loved ones and tell them where you are, I'm sure they're worried. Goodbye, it's was very nice to meet all of you, have wonderful lives."

As soon as the last human walked out she shut the door. She drove ahead and made a wide turn, heading back to the combat zone. As much as it tore her spark in half to leave new friends, she knew there had to be more humans, more innocent victims stuck in the middle of their battle. She couldn't let any harm come to them. She wouldn't allow it.

Primus give me speed.

The fem-bus pushed herself to her maximum speed, heading straight towards the carnage and the chaos that her kind had created. After ten minutes of driving, which had felt like vorns to her, she reached the combat zone. Ignoring both Autobot communications and Decepticon laser fire, she scanned the area for humans, or any other Earth creature caught in the middle. Finally she spotted two, a male and a female several hundred meters ahead.

"Hold on tight!", Saferoute exclaimed to herself, "I'll get you out of this slag-fest all right!"

As she got closer, she noticed a Cybertronian was walking towards them. Her sparked burned with rage as she noticed it was a Decepticon, and he had no good intentions for the small organic lifeforms.

"NO! YOU LEAVE THEM ALONE!" she screamed as she rolled towards them, firing a missile at the enemy.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Mazinman » Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:12 pm

Name: Shadowing

Allegiance: Decepticons

Function: Espionage

Alt. mode: Cybertronian Stealth Jet

Weapons: Standard issue laser rifle which can store in his back. He also possesses two side laser beam guns which he primarily uses in his jet mode but can also fire from his hips in robot mode. His legs store two short swords.

Special Abilities: Subject is designed to minimize his sensor foot print but does not have full invisibility.

Height: 25’


Quote: “Courage trumps everything.”

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile: Shadowing was once an agent of the old Cybertronian Senate. At first he was a young and somewhat naïve agent who always thought he was doing what was best for the planet. As time went on this innocence was shattered by being assigned to darker tasks such as spying on seemingly peaceful movements and associations. For a while longer he maintained his belief that he was doing these acts for the best but soon he grew disillusioned and realized he was just another tool of a corrupt government. By then, however, he felt himself trapped. His hands were much too dirty to ever do something else. When the government fell this same feeling lead him to join the Decepticons. Eventually he settled into becoming an assistant to Shockwave working to keep him protected from threats his logic will not allow him to see while undertaking his spy duties (I asked the player beforehand).

Abilities: Shadowing is accomplished in stealth, recon, and spy work. His Jet Mode his form is designed to minimize exposure to radar and can fly silently although its peak speed is only Mach 0.5. It can also glide for a distance. He is also a skilled fighter combining Cybertronian martial arts with every dirty move in the book, and a few he created, to get an advantage over an opponent.

Weaknesses: Shadowing’s jet form is not really built for dog fighting or speed. His stealth capabilities come at the price of his armor being relatively weak. He is not truly convinced of the Decepticons cause and only continues with his duty because he sees no other path. His professionalism usually keeps this aspect firmly hidden however.

Sample Post:

In the past…

The canyons of Seiberton where dark and quiet, not filled with much life except when soldiers passed by. One would assume this would make the job of a scout easier but Shadowing knew better. The combination of the two elements with the huge walls made the entire scene a creepy one which kept soldiers alert. He could be doing his job well and some random piece of scrap might fall near him, causing jumpy soldiers to instantly look in his direction. He had come here a long time before to pick an optimal location in a cave up high on the canyon walls.

He had heard that this unit would be moving by here while operating under cover in a local bar. Young Autobots were always prone to talk too much especially when under the effects of a little too much energon. They mentioned that a unit was going to pass by here but he could not get from them any details on size or purpose before they passed out so he had to do the job himself.

He could tell the column was a relatively large one filled with a lot of combat types. They were definitely going to be reinforcing at some point and it had to be for an attack since he knew of no Decepticon offensive actions ongoing here at the moment. He wanted to know where the attack would be coming but he also could not allow such an easy target to get away. He activated a signal on a special frequency and soon the squadron of Seekers came, laying their destructive fire across the Autobot forces trapped so close together. He took one last look before moving deeper into the cave and into safety.

“So much death… all caused by one drink too many.” He muttered as he shook his head. There would likely be another reward for him for the carnage of this day but he took no satisfaction from the act. It was his duty and that was all.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Cryhavok » Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:58 pm

Motto: ""It is all about pain.""
Weapon: Fusion-Powered Anti-Gravity Gun
Mazinman wrote:Name: Shadowing

Allegiance: Decepticons

Function: Espionage

Alt. mode: Cybertronian Stealth Jet

Weapons: Standard issue laser rifle which can store in his back. He also possesses two side laser beam guns which he primarily uses in his jet mode but can also fire from his hips in robot mode. His legs store two short swords.

Special Abilities: Subject is designed to minimize his sensor foot print but does not have full invisibility.

Height: 25’


Quote: “Courage trumps everything.”

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Profile: Shadowing was once an agent of the old Cybertronian Senate. At first he was a young and somewhat naïve agent who always thought he was doing what was best for the planet. As time went on this innocence was shattered by being assigned to darker tasks such as spying on seemingly peaceful movements and associations. For a while longer he maintained his belief that he was doing these acts for the best but soon he grew disillusioned and realized he was just another tool of a corrupt government. By then, however, he felt himself trapped. His hands were much too dirty to ever do something else. When the government fell this same feeling lead him to join the Decepticons. Eventually he settled into becoming an assistant to Shockwave working to keep him protected from threats his logic will not allow him to see while undertaking his spy duties (I asked the player beforehand).

Abilities: Shadowing is accomplished in stealth, recon, and spy work. His Jet Mode his form is designed to minimize exposure to radar and can fly silently although its peak speed is only Mach 0.5. It can also glide for a distance. He is also a skilled fighter combining Cybertronian martial arts with every dirty move in the book, and a few he created, to get an advantage over an opponent.

Weaknesses: Shadowing’s jet form is not really built for dog fighting or speed. His stealth capabilities come at the price of his armor being relatively weak. He is not truly convinced of the Decepticons cause and only continues with his duty because he sees no other path. His professionalism usually keeps this aspect firmly hidden however.

Sample Post:

In the past…

The canyons of Seiberton where dark and quiet, not filled with much life except when soldiers passed by. One would assume this would make the job of a scout easier but Shadowing knew better. The combination of the two elements with the huge walls made the entire scene a creepy one which kept soldiers alert. He could be doing his job well and some random piece of scrap might fall near him, causing jumpy soldiers to instantly look in his direction. He had come here a long time before to pick an optimal location in a cave up high on the canyon walls.

He had heard that this unit would be moving by here while operating under cover in a local bar. Young Autobots were always prone to talk too much especially when under the effects of a little too much energon. They mentioned that a unit was going to pass by here but he could not get from them any details on size or purpose before they passed out so he had to do the job himself.

He could tell the column was a relatively large one filled with a lot of combat types. They were definitely going to be reinforcing at some point and it had to be for an attack since he knew of no Decepticon offensive actions ongoing here at the moment. He wanted to know where the attack would be coming but he also could not allow such an easy target to get away. He activated a signal on a special frequency and soon the squadron of Seekers came, laying their destructive fire across the Autobot forces trapped so close together. He took one last look before moving deeper into the cave and into safety.

“So much death… all caused by one drink too many.” He muttered as he shook his head. There would likely be another reward for him for the carnage of this day but he took no satisfaction from the act. It was his duty and that was all.


Welcome back mr. Maz. Character approved. Being biased as I am, I'll leave the Autobot apps to the staff members more qualified to deal with Autobots. :-B
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Ember » Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:30 pm

Motto: "I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things."
Wreck 'n Rule wrote:Name: Saferoute
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Civilian Transport
Alt. mode: Blue Bird Vision School Bus (77 passenger)
Weapons: Alt. Mode: Dual Lasers, Missile Launcher.
Robot Mode: Laser Rifle
Height: 32 ft/9.75 m
Quote: "Primus' smaller creations that can't fight are the true victims of this war."

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 5
RANK: Assigned by RPG moderators.

Appearance: Saferoute's alt. mode is a typical yellow school bus, capable of carrying up to 77 human passengers. In her robot mode the front roof and windows split and fold down to make her arms and the back third of the bus splits to form her legs. The front hood of the bus folds back to reveal her head. Her robot mode is tall and bulky, her torso is black with a red Autobot insignia, while her arms and legs orangish yellow.

Holomatter Avatar: An average sized woman in her 40s with long red hair, wearing a frilly bright blue dress.

Profile:
Saferoute joined the Autobots for one reason, and one reason only: To save and protect the small, weaker species that the Decepticons want to enslave or exterminate.
Always a lover of animals, whenever she came across a wounded petro rabbit, or a turbofox that had been shot during a hunt, or any other injured creature, she would take them to her home and nurse them back to health. She grew attached to many of these animals, spending most of her time playing with them. Her attachment would grow to the point where she would talk to them as if she could understand them, and considered them to be far close friends than any member of her own kind.
When the war started to break out she ignored the politics and avoided joining sides, instead focussing all of her efforts to protecting the creatures that she had cared so much for. Unfortunately Saferoute found herself alone in this endevour, and as hard as she fought to preserve the animals she loved, the Decepticon war machine was too much for her to overcome . Her spark sank as she saw most of Cybertron's wildlife become extinct, their habitat's devastated into lifeless wastelands.
Seeing little hope that animals woud ever flourish on her home planet again, she finally joined the Autobots just before the population left the planet. Now she fights to protect the indigenous species on other planets from the Decepticons tyranny, to prevent what happened on Cybertron to happen on other worlds.

Abilities: Saferoute's main function is to evacuate smaller lifeforms away from hostile areas. On Earth she does this as a yellow school bus which can carry up to 77 humans. Her bus mode has a maximum speed of 135 MPH , with a range of 950 miles. Her bus mode is equipped with seat belts, air bags and bullet-proof, shatter-resistant glass to protect any occupants inside. Her bus mode is also equipped with dual lasers inside her headlights, and a missile launcher above the windshield, which can be used for combat or to blow away any obstacles in her path. In robot mode she has above average stength and endurance, and weilds a laser rifle.

Weaknesses: Saferoute has poor manueverability and acceleration in her bus mode, unable to make sharp turns. Her robot mode is also bulky, awkward and slow. Her love of animals is a constant source of problems within the Autobot ranks. She will frequently ignore orders and risk the well-being of herself and her fellow Autobots if she sees a small creature in danger. Though she claims to talk to and understand most species, she is merely acting on intuition and does not have any real way to translate the various sounds of less intelligent creatures.

Sample Post:

Saferoute drove as fast as she could away from the seemingly endless fire and explosions from the battle behind her, confident in the safety of her passengers. As soon as the bus was 10 miles away from the battle, she stopped to let out her passengers. Her avatar pulled open the passenger's door and waved to the humans crowded inside her.

"You should all be safe now, friends." the red headed "driver" said as the passengers walked out in single file, "Make sure to call your loved ones and tell them where you are, I'm sure they're worried. Goodbye, it's was very nice to meet all of you, have wonderful lives."

As soon as the last human walked out she shut the door. She drove ahead and made a wide turn, heading back to the combat zone. As much as it tore her spark in half to leave new friends, she knew there had to be more humans, more innocent victims stuck in the middle of their battle. She couldn't let any harm come to them. She wouldn't allow it.

Primus give me speed.

The fem-bus pushed herself to her maximum speed, heading straight towards the carnage and the chaos that her kind had created. After ten minutes of driving, which had felt like vorns to her, she reached the combat zone. Ignoring both Autobot communications and Decepticon laser fire, she scanned the area for humans, or any other Earth creature caught in the middle. Finally she spotted two, a male and a female several hundred meters ahead.

"Hold on tight!", Saferoute exclaimed to herself, "I'll get you out of this slag-fest all right!"

As she got closer, she noticed a Cybertronian was walking towards them. Her sparked burned with rage as she noticed it was a Decepticon, and he had no good intentions for the small organic lifeforms.

"NO! YOU LEAVE THEM ALONE!" she screamed as she rolled towards them, firing a missile at the enemy.


Um, she's a very interesting character. Approved. Rank 5.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Devastron » Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:45 am

Weapon: Energo-Sword
-Kanrabat- wrote:I want in!

:BOT: Kanrabat :BOT:

Allegiance: Autobots

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: KOMATSU GD 655 MOTOR GRADER with snow-plow

Weapons:
A small hidden basic lazer in alt-mode with an almost indestructible plow for, well, plowing, but also, ramming. In robot mode, he have a Armor Axe that can power-up to be more deadly (at the expense of his own energon). His plow become his -almost- indestructible shield. The only firearm he have is the basic regulation lazer pistol a security guard at a mall would have. He barely use it and have poor marksmanship.



Height:
31 ft

Quote:
"I will be your blade. I will be your shield."


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 04
Dexterity: 06
Speed: 04
Endurance: 09
Courage: 08
Firepower: 03
Accuracy: 03
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 04
Field Generator: 08
Rank: ?


Profile: Kanrabat was born in a relatively peaceful Cybertronian colony. There was no Autobots, no Decepticons. Only robotic life. Kanrabat entered the peace-keeping academy at a very young age with dreams of becoming one of the top peacekeepers. Unfortunately for him, he wasn't that great at shcool. He barely managed to pass the shooting course. He flunked leadership and planning. But he was a natural at wrestling and mele combat. He also was the first in line to protect everyone in training. He graduated, but he did not earned a glorious job. He was a bodyguard for a high ranking official. This was the most boring job ever.

However, one day, THEY came. A group of rogue warriors and bandits came into town to pillage, kill, and destroy. At first, Kanrabat did not know what to do. He panicked and he sought his master. He arrived too late. The politician was killed right before Kanrabat's eyes. This made him rage. A lot. Whe plew through his master's killer like a plow through weat. He calmed down and he saw the destruction he made. His first kills made him retch. He was about to fall on his knees to cry, when cries for help pulled him back from his fragile state of mind to a strong sense of duty. He had people to protect. Workers, fembots, protoforms... they needed him. He used his trusty shield and massive body to protect as much people as possible so they can escape. If an ennemy came too close, he was quickly dealt with by axe.

Kanrabat was quickly seen as a serious threat. He was surrounded by a dozen of ennemies. They shot at him all at once. Instinctivly, Kanrabat braced himself behind his shield. Unexpectedly, a powerful forcefield surrounded him. Pleased by this newfound ability, Kanrabat held on. Unfortunately, Kanrabat was quite inexperienced, both in his abilities and his combat skills. The forcefield quickly depleted Kanrabat's energy reserves, making him tired and vulnerable. He was shot repeatedly and was left for dead in a scrapheap.


Abilities: Can generate a powerful forcefield to protect himself and his allies on a max spherical radius of 100 feets, Kanrabat in the center. That forcefield protect from laser, bullets, sharpnel, and explosions. However, large objects like bots and vehicle can come and go unhindered... ally or ennemy. He can also perform basic repairs and first aid.

Weaknesses: Kanrabat is very weak at gun skills. He only feel confortable with his basic academy gun. He can aim and shoot, but he must be standing still and be undisturbed while aiming... a large target! He also take his protecting duties very seriously. If the one who he must proted get killed or hurt, he will not forgive himself and failure depress him for a long time. He's also the kind of guy to act before thinking. He'll be the one charging suddenly while welling "Leeroooooooy Jenkiiiiiiins" even if he have no clue who that is.

Sample Post:
A long time later, Kanrabat found himself in a repair bay on board of a spaceship. The repairbot said his remains were found on a old abandoned colony. In all the old corpses and debris, his remains contain his still active, but dormant spark. They salvaged his sheild because of it's incredible composition, and they gave him a new and sturdyer body. Kanrabat learned of the Autobots and Decepticons war. He found out that his colony was one of the many victims of the rising Decepticons... and that this incident took place MILLIONS OF YEARS AGO! Swearing not revenge but to serve and protect, Kanrabat joined the Autobot cause.

After a real military training, he was sent to a mission to protect a small northen village on a far off planet named Earth. Uppon arrival, Kanrabat was very unfamiliar with the planet and the main species of strange and small little fleshings that inabitated this planet. He was even more surprised to be ordered to scan a local vehicle and transform into it. Of course, he knew how to change into his rammer alt-mode, but THIS? He scanned a local snow-plower that came by. He found this new shape quite confortable and he felt at peace rolling and plowing snow. Of cousre, the Decepticons HAD to come and disturb the peace. He fought, he protected, and he was overwhelmed. Again. But this time, it was different. This time, he had teammates to defend him. Victory was quick. Kanrabat appreciated the fact of having teamates.

To this day, he continue to plow snow in the north, waiting for mission call. When that time come, he'll be ready. And THEN he will make the Autobots leaders proud. :BOT:


Your writing style and tone aren't quite what we use on this board. I think checking out some of the in game posts would probably help. Also the history doesn't really work too well with the one we have in the game. Going over the game history and summary would help with that too.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Baneblade » Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:56 pm

Motto: "Scream....it only make it more fun"
Weapon: Plasma Cannon
++Had to edit this as a few things didn't add up right++

Here's my shot at this...

NAME: Contemptor
ALLEGIANCE: Decepticon
FUNCTION: Hacker
ALT. MODE [Earth]: 1988 Mack Bicentennial Super Liner
ALT. MODE [Cybertron]: Assault ATV - Post Reformat

WEAPONS:
    AUTO-CANNON - Contemptor’s main weapon is a Twin-linked, heavy calibre automatic-assault cannon that fires a compound shell atypically filled with shards of hardened cybertonium, and capped with a tipped hollow-point. The bullets are fired each using a small charge similar to rail-gun technology allowing for solid repeat firing.

    CHAIN-FIST - A retractable arm mounted chainsaw, is Contemptor’s preferred method of close quarters combat. The saw blade itself takes shape over the middle two fingers of Contemptor’s hand and extends up over his forearm. The blade, said to be one of Mixmaster's work's of art, is a sinister chemical concoction of hardened cybertonium and hardened adamantium, and is deadly at close quarters combat. As such it can chew through most metals.

    KAON PATTERN BURST-PISTOL - Contemptor’s additional weapon for close quarters combat is a repeating plasma pistol. It is a deadly weapon at close range, but farther distances mean that the weapon becomes increasingly inaccurate and less potent. It fires in short bursts of three and overheats rapidly as a result.

HEIGHT: Contemptor stands at 40ft

QUOTE: “The only thing better than hacking Systems, is hacking Autobots!”

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 4
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 5
RANK:

PROFILE: Contemptor was once known as Xirit and operated as a systems analyst for Cybertronian Systems Administration and Data department (C.S.A.D), but had the misfortune to notice several discrepancies in several of the data files that had to be constantly reviewed and updated.

Xirit had the unenviable task of investigating these files, and tracing the information back to its original source. The source, much to Xirit’s dismay was one of the high council members. He presented his evidence to his superiors, and was immediately rubbished for his claims of corruption, even though the stack of evidence was piling high.

His relentless digging, however, brought him unwanted attention, and soon – with the stack of information – Xirit was running the underground networks of Cybertron, relentlessly pursued by sentry drones, and Autobot Enforcers. His fate however, was something completely different, as his flight through the twisting tunnels brought him deep into the controlled zones of Kaon. The tunnels soon brought him under the hidden gladiatorial arena, the tell tale signs were the parts of the fallen littered about the flow-pipes and tunnels.

Bodies were stacked higher the closer he came to the bowels of the arena.

His reformatting from Xirit to Contemptor came at a near fatal price, as an encounter with Ravage left him broken, pleading with Megatron to trade his information for his life, and a chance to extract vengeance on those who had turned their backs on him. Xirit was left in the capable, some say insane, build plans of Scrapper, who soon gave him a new lease of life. Hooked up to a CR Chamber, Xirit described the kind of power and stature he wished to have, and was obliged.

The reformat took place, and from the cold steam of the reformatting chamber, Contemptor proudly strode forth to tower over the Decepticon leader, and, recognising the superior in command, Contemptor bent to one knee and bowed his head, loudly proclaiming "All..Hail..Megatron!"

ABILITIES: Computer, Mainframe and Systems Hacking, Robot Flight Mode - allows Contemptor to attain a flight speed of 150mph

WEAKNESSES: Contemptor’s size has a detriment to his speed and agility. He isn’t the most agile of Deceptions' in general, as his broad size has to allow for him to carry around his primary weapon. Other weaknesses of Contemptor are the belt mechanism on his Cannon; it is unshielded to allow for flexibility in combat, and the ammunition feed mechanism is prone to jamming, as it acts as a constant feed when in use. Its other weakness is that it connects directly to the hopper mounted across Contemptor’s back, meaning a well placed series of shots can completely incapacitate Contemptor from combat, or worse place him in stasis lock.

Contemptor’s close combat pistol has a violent tendency to overheat. The pistol fires a repeater shot of three per burst, but as it is a plasma based weapon – its coolant has to be constantly replaced, or used sparingly. At longer ranges, the weapon is increasingly inaccurate.

SAMPLE POST: Contemptor stalked through the ruins of the factory, the rubble and metal was scattered and broken throughout as grease-like smears marred random locations of both still standing walls, and twisted wrecks of metal and stone. Proof that there once, life existed.

The outpost on the small planetoid was once home to worker bots and Autobot guards, a small ore processing facility aiding the Autobot cause. It was now reduced to a smouldering ruin. The few guards were damaged, in stasis lock, or dead. The greasy smears on the surfaces testament to the fallen as Contemptor forced his foot down hard on the brain-casing of a downed Autobot Guard. The body twitched as he leant his full weight slowly onto the prone Autobot.

There was the slow groaning sound of the metal beginning to buckle under the pressure and the guard let out a moan of pain.

Contemptor’s features broke into a sinister snarl.

“It seems I missed one...I’m getting very sloppy these days....” A cruel guttural sound rose from Contemptor’s throat. The guard slowly realised that Contemptor was laughing.

Holstering the Auto-Cannon against his back, Contemptor reached down and roughly hauled the injured guard from the ground. A ragged, gaping hole in the guard’s shoulder gave Contemptor a welcome grip, one which he exploited fully.

The guard let out a broken scream of agony as Contemptor’s hand forcefully tore through the damaged sensors and receptors in a vice-like grip.

“...Tell me little Auto-brat...why the interest in this desolate rock? “ He sneered as he slammed the injured Autobot into the wall. Energon shot from the Autobot's mouth and landed on Contemptor's cheek-plate, proof that the Autobot's systems were damaged internally.

“I’ll make it painless...all you have to do is...tell!” He forcefully rattled the 'bot against the ruined wall several times, denting its already broken surface. There was still silence as the Autobot glared back in defiance.

'This is becoming tedious...bah wretches...no wonder they are worthless!' He thought to himself. Contemptor battered the damaged Autobot off the wall again and then, seeing an opportunity, impaled the hapless warrior onto a bent girder and gave a snarl as his chainfist sprung into life. The teeth building up to a sonic shrill as the Autobot’s optics widened. Contemptor began to laugh with glee as he drank in the fear in his opponent. He tortured the injured Guard by swiping the saw back and forth over the Dura-Alloy wall, the scream of the metal and the hot sparks adding to the terror in the poor Autobot. But apart from the wails of terror, the Autobot said nothing.

“...Gr.. You Auto-filth are all the same! Hiding all your dirty little secrets! Maybe I need to be more persuasive!?” The temper in his voice began to break as the guard’s silence began to tear away at Contemptor’s resolve. Drawing his arm back as if to throw a punch, he drove the chain-blade into the Autobot’s abdomen, the sound of tearing metal, alloy, and endo-structure filled the air with the Autobot’s scream of pain. Contemptor began to laugh with the insanity of a madman as the butchering took over. He thrust his arm upwards, tearing the Autobot open, sending sparks and energon flying, as its' screams filtered into broken static crackles.

Contemptor watched, a twisted grin on his face, as the remaining life-force of his prey, poured into the rubble. He retracted his chainfist and looked at the still twitching torso of the Autobot. With a look that mixed contempt with hate, he smashed his fist into the exposed spark casing of his victim and tore it from the shattered body.

His thirst for slaughter finally sated, Contemptor began to wipe the splattered energon from his face; slowly dragging his hand down past his mouth he casually tasted the life-force of his lacklustre foe.

++"Contemptor to Shuttle... I await extraction..."++

As the shuttle came into view, Contemptor’s final words echoed around the ruined factory

“...All Hail Megatron!”
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Devastron » Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:50 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Baneblade wrote:++Had to edit this as a few things didn't add up right++

Here's my shot at this...

NAME: Contemptor
ALLEGIANCE: Decepticon
FUNCTION: Hacker
ALT. MODE [Earth]: 1988 Mack Bicentennial Super Liner
ALT. MODE [Cybertron]: Assault ATV - Post Reformat

WEAPONS:
    AUTO-CANNON - Contemptor’s main weapon is a Twin-linked, heavy calibre automatic-assault cannon that fires a compound shell atypically filled with shards of hardened cybertonium, and capped with a tipped hollow-point. The bullets are fired each using a small charge similar to rail-gun technology allowing for solid repeat firing.

    CHAIN-FIST - A retractable arm mounted chainsaw, is Contemptor’s preferred method of close quarters combat. The saw blade itself takes shape over the middle two fingers of Contemptor’s hand and extends up over his forearm. The blade, said to be one of Mixmaster's work's of art, is a sinister chemical concoction of hardened cybertonium and hardened adamantium, and is deadly at close quarters combat. As such it can chew through most metals.

    KAON PATTERN BURST-PISTOL - Contemptor’s additional weapon for close quarters combat is a repeating plasma pistol. It is a deadly weapon at close range, but farther distances mean that the weapon becomes increasingly inaccurate and less potent. It fires in short bursts of three and overheats rapidly as a result.

HEIGHT: Contemptor stands at 40ft

QUOTE: “The only thing better than hacking Systems, is hacking Autobots!”

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 4
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 5
RANK:

PROFILE: Contemptor was once known as Xirit and operated as a systems analyst for Cybertronian Systems Administration and Data department (C.S.A.D), but had the misfortune to notice several discrepancies in several of the data files that had to be constantly reviewed and updated.

Xirit had the unenviable task of investigating these files, and tracing the information back to its original source. The source, much to Xirit’s dismay was one of the high council members. He presented his evidence to his superiors, and was immediately rubbished for his claims of corruption, even though the stack of evidence was piling high.

His relentless digging, however, brought him unwanted attention, and soon – with the stack of information – Xirit was running the underground networks of Cybertron, relentlessly pursued by sentry drones, and Autobot Enforcers. His fate however, was something completely different, as his flight through the twisting tunnels brought him deep into the controlled zones of Kaon. The tunnels soon brought him under the hidden gladiatorial arena, the tell tale signs were the parts of the fallen littered about the flow-pipes and tunnels.

Bodies were stacked higher the closer he came to the bowels of the arena.

His reformatting from Xirit to Contemptor came at a near fatal price, as an encounter with Ravage left him broken, pleading with Megatron to trade his information for his life, and a chance to extract vengeance on those who had turned their backs on him. Xirit was left in the capable, some say insane, build plans of Scrapper, who soon gave him a new lease of life. Hooked up to a CR Chamber, Xirit described the kind of power and stature he wished to have, and was obliged.

The reformat took place, and from the cold steam of the reformatting chamber, Contemptor proudly strode forth to tower over the Decepticon leader, and, recognising the superior in command, Contemptor bent to one knee and bowed his head, loudly proclaiming "All..Hail..Megatron!"

ABILITIES: Computer, Mainframe and Systems Hacking, Robot Flight Mode - allows Contemptor to attain a flight speed of 150mph

WEAKNESSES: Contemptor’s size has a detriment to his speed and agility. He isn’t the most agile of Deceptions' in general, as his broad size has to allow for him to carry around his primary weapon. Other weaknesses of Contemptor are the belt mechanism on his Cannon; it is unshielded to allow for flexibility in combat, and the ammunition feed mechanism is prone to jamming, as it acts as a constant feed when in use. Its other weakness is that it connects directly to the hopper mounted across Contemptor’s back, meaning a well placed series of shots can completely incapacitate Contemptor from combat, or worse place him in stasis lock.

Contemptor’s close combat pistol has a violent tendency to overheat. The pistol fires a repeater shot of three per burst, but as it is a plasma based weapon – its coolant has to be constantly replaced, or used sparingly. At longer ranges, the weapon is increasingly inaccurate.

SAMPLE POST: Contemptor stalked through the ruins of the factory, the rubble and metal was scattered and broken throughout as grease-like smears marred random locations of both still standing walls, and twisted wrecks of metal and stone. Proof that there once, life existed.

The outpost on the small planetoid was once home to worker bots and Autobot guards, a small ore processing facility aiding the Autobot cause. It was now reduced to a smouldering ruin. The few guards were damaged, in stasis lock, or dead. The greasy smears on the surfaces testament to the fallen as Contemptor forced his foot down hard on the brain-casing of a downed Autobot Guard. The body twitched as he leant his full weight slowly onto the prone Autobot.

There was the slow groaning sound of the metal beginning to buckle under the pressure and the guard let out a moan of pain.

Contemptor’s features broke into a sinister snarl.

“It seems I missed one...I’m getting very sloppy these days....” A cruel guttural sound rose from Contemptor’s throat. The guard slowly realised that Contemptor was laughing.

Holstering the Auto-Cannon against his back, Contemptor reached down and roughly hauled the injured guard from the ground. A ragged, gaping hole in the guard’s shoulder gave Contemptor a welcome grip, one which he exploited fully.

The guard let out a broken scream of agony as Contemptor’s hand forcefully tore through the damaged sensors and receptors in a vice-like grip.

“...Tell me little Auto-brat...why the interest in this desolate rock? “ He sneered as he slammed the injured Autobot into the wall. Energon shot from the Autobot's mouth and landed on Contemptor's cheek-plate, proof that the Autobot's systems were damaged internally.

“I’ll make it painless...all you have to do is...tell!” He forcefully rattled the 'bot against the ruined wall several times, denting its already broken surface. There was still silence as the Autobot glared back in defiance.

'This is becoming tedious...bah wretches...no wonder they are worthless!' He thought to himself. Contemptor battered the damaged Autobot off the wall again and then, seeing an opportunity, impaled the hapless warrior onto a bent girder and gave a snarl as his chainfist sprung into life. The teeth building up to a sonic shrill as the Autobot’s optics widened. Contemptor began to laugh with glee as he drank in the fear in his opponent. He tortured the injured Guard by swiping the saw back and forth over the Dura-Alloy wall, the scream of the metal and the hot sparks adding to the terror in the poor Autobot. But apart from the wails of terror, the Autobot said nothing.

“...Gr.. You Auto-filth are all the same! Hiding all your dirty little secrets! Maybe I need to be more persuasive!?” The temper in his voice began to break as the guard’s silence began to tear away at Contemptor’s resolve. Drawing his arm back as if to throw a punch, he drove the chain-blade into the Autobot’s abdomen, the sound of tearing metal, alloy, and endo-structure filled the air with the Autobot’s scream of pain. Contemptor began to laugh with the insanity of a madman as the butchering took over. He thrust his arm upwards, tearing the Autobot open, sending sparks and energon flying, as its' screams filtered into broken static crackles.

Contemptor watched, a twisted grin on his face, as the remaining life-force of his prey, poured into the rubble. He retracted his chainfist and looked at the still twitching torso of the Autobot. With a look that mixed contempt with hate, he smashed his fist into the exposed spark casing of his victim and tore it from the shattered body.

His thirst for slaughter finally sated, Contemptor began to wipe the splattered energon from his face; slowly dragging his hand down past his mouth he casually tasted the life-force of his lacklustre foe.

++"Contemptor to Shuttle... I await extraction..."++

As the shuttle came into view, Contemptor’s final words echoed around the ruined factory

“...All Hail Megatron!”


Got a few problems with this one. We prefer to have the description of the weapons included in the abilities section. That said I still don't understand how the chainsaw or auto-cannon work exactly. The description of them isn't as clear as I would like.

The history is going to need some work as well. Why did he change his name and why did he change it to that particular name? You'll have to get permission to use all of those other characters in the history from their players. Why did Ravage beat him so badly? Why would the Decepticons rebuild him to his specifications? His information might be useful to the Decepticons but not crucial.

The abilities section will need the weapons included in it. It also needs some expansion into his other physical abilities. For someone who's function is hacker you barely mention his abilities at it. I also don't understand why he would have such a large body if that is his primary function. It feels like you are trying to fit a warrior into a tech type.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Baneblade » Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:51 pm

Motto: "Scream....it only make it more fun"
Weapon: Plasma Cannon
++Edit: forgot to remove my sig++
Take two....

NAME: Contemptor
ALLEGIANCE: Decepticon
FUNCTION: Warrior
ALT. MODE [Earth]: 1988 Mack Bicentennial Super Liner
ALT. MODE [Cybertron]: Assault ATV
WEAPONS: Twin-Barrel Plasma Cannon, Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol, Energon War Axe, Chain Lash

HEIGHT: 40ft

QUOTE: “There are no prisoners....only trophies!”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK:

PROFILE: Contemptor – originally named Hipshot - was once a scout for the Cybertron Army. During the time of peace, and slowly rising Autobot Autocracy, and the greed of Autobot Council, many planets were brought to heel by the armies of Cybertron. Contemptor acted as an advance scout for many of the forces, and had the – some say bad - luck of the draw to be amongst the thickest of the warfare.

Contemptor was originally smaller and more lightly armoured than he is now due to his assigned status within the Cybertron Army. His role usually had him and his team move through tightly packed spaces, or amongst limited or shallow cover. It was one such mission that things would change for Contemptor.

And it was a dark change.

An infiltration mission to a Base Station located in the Merbus System was where things went drastically wrong. The shuttle carrying the 6-bot team touched down in treacherous weather conditions, as a local thunderstorm made the landing more difficult. Contemptor and his five comrades disembarked and began the routine infiltration to establish a beachhead for the main army. The mission was to infiltrate a factory that was in the process of building weapons and other armaments. The poor weather was making things difficult as the ground was soft underfoot. Torrential rainfall turned run-off into small streams, and made the ground into a waterlogged mud-pool. Trees and other large plant life were toppled and broken from the pounding weather. Their route to the munitions factory deviated due to hazards caused by the weather, obstacles and barricades erected by whoever was running the munitions plant. One of the infiltration team had surmised that they knew that Cybertronian’s would come, as tank traps and other mobility inhibitors were present in the place’s defences but unknown to the team, they were being shadowed as they approached the factory, red and gold optics shone dimly in the dark as they watched the six Cybertronian’s scramble towards the munitions plant. The warriors in the shadows let their infiltrators work their way towards the open ground before springing their trap.

Laser fire cut through the darkness and Contemptor watched his teammate’s head explode in a riot of metal and sparks – his brain casing obliterated as his body fell to the ground. The rest of the team scrambled for what shallow cover they could find. Two of them fell almost immediately, smoking holes evidence of their execution. Contemptor made a frenzied attempt to contact the main ship in orbit, but there was no reply to the distress call. Contemptor didn’t want to think it, and as he did, another two of the infiltration team fell in the crossfire, smouldering craters in their chests, the faint glow of their sparks ebbing away. One of the team made it to Contemptor’s position just as a grenade went off. The grenade shredded Contemptor’s left arm, and the left side of his face. His companion was not as fortunate as the grenade had hit, and detonated in his lower torso.

Contemptor fell, his vision blurred with static as the attackers slowly made their presence felt. Injured – Contemptor looked on in shock as he saw the rough shapes of the attackers, the unknown symbol on their bodies adding more to the horror of the decimation of the infiltration team. Contemptor’s injuries were serious, but he managed to drag himself to his feet, his body injured, his mind wracked with pain as the slow realisation of the betrayal sank into his mind. He burned all over as his pain receptors and warnings popped up on his HUD. His journey back was broken; his memory banks were cutting out as stasis lock slowly threatened to kick in. Through the pain, Contemptor boarded the drop-ship, and using his still functioning right arm, badly piloted the ship towards his fallen comrades. Using the autopilot feature the ship landed, and Contemptor tried to stand, but his energy levels were too depleted to move more, and – kicking his systems into repair mode – he collapsed onto the deck of the shuttle.

Several days had passed and Contemptor’s systems began to kick in. He had narrowly averted Stasis Lock, but he was still visibly damaged, for below his left optic, his face was marred with scars, and his left arm was a shattered ruin. Anger and rage filled Contemptor as he looked upon the carnage of the ambush, his comrades were all ruins, dead shells of what they once were. Contemptor dragged their bodies onto the shuttle one by one with his good arm, and made for space. Injured and seething with anger and rage he forced the ship as far as it could go until the drop-ship’s fuel cells ran dry, and in a fit of rage, punched the navigation console and cracked the display monitors.

Sitting alone in the cockpit’s chair, Contemptor looked around at the ruined shells of his comrades, their staring dead optics. He was lost in his own thoughts, and was unaware of the ship that had pulled him into its hangar bay. Contemptor, energy levels depleted, was tired and in no mood to argue with the assortments of aliens and robots onboard. However, through intensive bartering – and using the broken bodies of his fallen teammates as payment – Contemptor effectively bought his way back to Cybertron, and in a double stroke, managed to have paid less than what he had promised the captain of the ship.

Effectively classed as Killed in Action, and making his way into Cybertron’s underbelly, Contemptor – using parts as trade – managed to barter enough components to modify him to be more heavily armoured. He had even heard rumour about an underground gladiator pit. Changing his name from Hipshot to Contemptor, and fighting with the fury of a berserker, it solidified his new found hatred towards all Autobots, and in particular the Autobot Autocracy, He had found his calling in the ranks of the Deceptions’.

ABILITIES:

    Robot Flight Mode: Allows Contemptor to attain a flight speed of 150mph
    Twin Barrelled Plasma Cannon: Contemptor’s primary weapon is a longer barrelled Plasma Cannon that is partly mounted onto Contemptor’s right forearm. It is an assault weapon, capable of two to three bursts at a time, and is dependent on fuel cell flasks, and being hardwired into the coolant capacitor that is mounted across Contemptor’s shoulder. The plasma cannon is partially mounted because of the coolant fuel lines mounted along Contemptor’s forearm, and along to the dispenser on his back.
    Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol: Contemptor’s primary close combat weapon, is a repeating plasma pistol that requires the use of fuel cell flasks as well as coolant cell flasks. Because of its portability, it is unable to utilise the coolant systems in use for the Plasma Cannon
    Energon War Axe: A cruel looking hook headed axe that can easily be mistaken as a glaive or halberd because of the orientation of the head. The axe is used for the more up close and personal encounters, and the blade slowly glows with the energy inside it.
    Chain Lash: A weapon gleaned from the days of the Gladiator Pit fights. It is nothing more than a series of cybertonium chain, ended with a large pounding head, almost like a mace or flail.

WEAKNESSES: Contemptor’s size has a detriment to his speed and agility. He isn’t the most agile of Deceptions' in general, as his broad size has to allow for him to carry around his primary weapon.

Other weaknesses are the coolant mechanism on his Plasma Cannon; the piping and connectors are unshielded to allow for flexibility in combat. The cannon itself drinks down the fuel cells to empty with just six shots, requiring it to be reloaded constantly. Its other weakness is that the coolant system is mounted onto Contemptor’s back, meaning it is harder to hide behind cover, and that a well placed shot could cripple him.

Contemptor’s close combat pistol has a violent tendency to overheat. The pistol fires a repeater shot of three per burst, but as it is a plasma based weapon – its coolant has to be constantly replaced. At longer ranges, the weapon is increasingly inaccurate.

The Energon Axe is one of the many standard issue close combat weapons that Cybertronian’s use, however due to the depletion of Energon – this weapon currently cannot be used for any length of time.

The chain lash is a long and entangling weapon. It requires more concentration to utilise the Chain lash in combat, making its wielder more prone to sneak attacks, or an ambush

SAMPLE POST: Contemptor stalked through the ruins of the factory, the rubble and metal was scattered and broken throughout as grease-like smears marred random locations of both still standing walls, and twisted wrecks of metal and stone. Proof that there once, life existed.

The outpost on the small planetoid was once home to worker bots and Autobot guards, a small ore processing facility aiding the Autobot cause. It was now reduced to a smouldering ruin. The few guards were damaged, in stasis lock, or dead. The greasy smears on the surfaces testament to the fallen as Contemptor forced his foot down hard on the brain-casing of a downed Autobot Guard. The body twitched as he leant his full weight slowly onto the prone Autobot.

There was the slow groaning sound of the metal beginning to buckle under the pressure and the guard let out a moan of pain.

Contemptor’s features broke into a sinister snarl.

“It seems I missed one...I’m getting very sloppy these days....” A cruel guttural sound rose from Contemptor’s throat. The guard slowly realised that Contemptor was laughing.

Holstering the Plasma Cannon against his back, Contemptor reached down and roughly hauled the injured guard from the ground. A ragged, gaping hole in the guard’s shoulder gave Contemptor a welcome grip, one which he exploited fully.

The guard let out a broken scream of agony as Contemptor’s hand forcefully tore through the damaged sensors and receptors in a vice-like grip.

“...Tell me little Auto-brat...why the interest in this desolate rock? “ He sneered as he slammed the injured Autobot into the wall. Energon shot from the Autobot's mouth and landed on Contemptor's cheek-plate, proof that the Autobot's systems were damaged internally.

“I’ll make it painless...all you have to do is...tell!” He forcefully rattled the 'bot against the ruined wall several times, denting its already broken surface. There was still silence as the Autobot glared back in defiance.

'This is becoming tedious...bah wretches...no wonder they are worthless!' He thought to himself. Contemptor battered the damaged Autobot off the wall again and then, seeing an opportunity, used his Chain Lash to begin hanging the hapless warrior using a bent girder as part of the hoist. Contemptor gave a snarl as he hauled down on the chain, the Autobot being strangled and hung. Contemptor began tormenting the Autobot with his Energon Axe, battering the blade off the broken rubble on the ground as the Autobot’s optics widened. Contemptor began to laugh with glee as he drank in the fear in his opponent. He tortured the injured Guard by swiping the axe back and forth over the Dura-Alloy wall, the shrill clang of the metal and the sparks adding to the terror in the poor Autobot. But apart from the wails of terror, the Autobot said nothing.

“...Gr... You Auto-filth are all the same! Hiding all your dirty little secrets! Maybe I need to be more persuasive!?” The temper in his voice began to break as the guard’s silence began to tear away at Contemptor’s resolve. Drawing his arm back as if to throw a punch, he drove the pointed tip of the axe into the Autobot’s abdomen, the sound of tearing metal, alloy, and endo-structure filled the air with the Autobot’s scream of pain. Contemptor began to laugh with the insanity of a madman as the butchering took over. He thrust his arm upwards, tearing the Autobot open, sending sparks and energon flying, as its' screams filtered into broken static crackles.

Contemptor watched with a twisted grin on his face, as the remaining life-force of his prey, poured into the rubble. He re-holstered his axe and watched absently at the still twitching torso of the Autobot. With a look that mixed contempt with hate, he smashed his fist into the exposed spark casing of his victim and tore it from the shattered body.

His thirst for slaughter finally sated, Contemptor began to wipe the splattered energon from his face; slowly dragging his hand down past his mouth he casually tasted the life-force of his lacklustre foe as he began to retrieve his Chain Lash.

++"Contemptor to Shuttle... I await extraction..."++

the shuttle came into view, and as Contemptor boarded, his final words echoed around the ruined factory

“...All Hail Megatron!”
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby BWO Jackel » Mon Sep 26, 2011 1:13 am

Name of your character:Starflight

Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Sub-group:Aerial-bot
Function:Pilot
Alternate Modes:Cybertronian jet
Weapons:Neutron Assault rifle and concealed pistol
Special Abilities:Can repair any bot including himself at a unusual speed.
Height: 25ft/ 7.62m
Quote:“Get the job done right and everybody here comes home alright.”


Strength:5
Intelligence:4
Dexterity:10
Speed:8
Endurance:6
Courage:7
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:2
Tech Skill:9
Charisma:8
Rank:6


Profile:An officer of the Cybertronian air and space force Starflight has always known that only one thing matters ever since he was a protoform-get the job done right and everybody here comes home alright. Unfortunately that wasn't the case when he was delivering and guarding highly explosive energon to cybertron and crash landed. Starflight has been in stasis lock for billions of years to conserve energon ever since he has crash landed on the planet Nebulos and becoming seprated from his squadron of fellow Aerial-bots. As such he hails from a much older and peaceful Cybertron, Starflight has not known of any wars between the heroic Autobots and the villainous Decepticons. He has awakened from his stasis lock due to an battle nearby between Autobots and Decepticons....

Abilities:Weapons are standard issue.Learned how to repair himself and others from a young Junkion named Wreck-Gar.

Weaknesses:It is very easy to provoke him into action especially when innocent lives are at stake and even if the chances of him dying/wounded if he does are 100%.He is only knowledgeable in flight and space tech so his uses in tech is limited to space ships. He will also have a hard time adapting to his new surroundings due to being from a totally different era and planet.



Sample post:Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzttttttttttttttt. The first thought in Starflight's head was "How long have iv'e been in stasis?". His optics were dark at first but then his heads-up display started filling up with symbols and signs rapidly he could easily read, understand, and use to determine how badly damaged he was.

He thought to himself "Oh well that's a pleasant surprise. Coil damage to my left servo, I have no left wing, and OHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Im leaking energon so much that if in 20 cycles if not fixed ill go offline again. Ugh great."

Knowing he had no more time to complain he got up and searched the area nearby for spare parts.It was then he saw something totally horrific that it him want rip out his optics at the mere sight of it.

"Oh Primus what happened here?"

He took a knee to take it all in. There were bodies of cybertronians and what appeared to be the local inhabitants of the planet he had crash landed on. He then pulled himself up as he saw a repair kit nearby.

"Well time to get this patched up." he said.

After sealing his energon leak he realized something.

"Hmmmmmmmmm.... This repair kit looks far more advanced than the ones back on cybertron. How long has it been since I went into stasis lock? And what kinda insignia is this? This sure isn't the Autobot's." he thought to himself.

He then walked to a nearby cybertronian body and kneed next to it with several tools.

"Well this is no time to be squeamish. Care to donate a few parts for the living?"

He then salvaged what parts he could from the dead cybertronian, transformed, and took of into the sunset.

As he flew he thought to himself "Time to find out what the slag is going one here."

END


P.S. His character will become more developed when he interacts with other players and his history will be explained more in the rpg.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Devastron » Mon Sep 26, 2011 11:22 pm

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Take two....

NAME: Contemptor
ALLEGIANCE: Decepticon
FUNCTION: Warrior
ALT. MODE [Earth]: 1988 Mack Bicentennial Super Liner
ALT. MODE [Cybertron]: Assault ATV
WEAPONS: Twin-Barrel Plasma Cannon, Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol, Energon War Axe, Chain Lash

HEIGHT: 40ft

QUOTE: “There are no prisoners....only trophies!”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK:

PROFILE: Contemptor – originally named Hipshot - was once a scout for the Cybertron Army. During the time of peace, and slowly rising Autobot Autocracy, and the greed of Autobot Council, many planets were brought to heel by the armies of Cybertron. Contemptor acted as an advance scout for many of the forces, and had the – some say bad - luck of the draw to be amongst the thickest of the warfare.

Contemptor was originally smaller and more lightly armoured than he is now due to his assigned status within the Cybertron Army. His role usually had him and his team move through tightly packed spaces, or amongst limited or shallow cover. It was one such mission that things would change for Contemptor.

And it was a dark change.

An infiltration mission to a Base Station located in the Merbus System was where things went drastically wrong. The shuttle carrying the 6-bot team touched down in treacherous weather conditions, as a local thunderstorm made the landing more difficult. Contemptor and his five comrades disembarked and began the routine infiltration to establish a beachhead for the main army. The mission was to infiltrate a factory that was in the process of building weapons and other armaments. The poor weather was making things difficult as the ground was soft underfoot. Torrential rainfall turned run-off into small streams, and made the ground into a waterlogged mud-pool. Trees and other large plant life were toppled and broken from the pounding weather. Their route to the munitions factory deviated due to hazards caused by the weather, obstacles and barricades erected by whoever was running the munitions plant. One of the infiltration team had surmised that they knew that Cybertronian’s would come, as tank traps and other mobility inhibitors were present in the place’s defences but unknown to the team, they were being shadowed as they approached the factory, red and gold optics shone dimly in the dark as they watched the six Cybertronian’s scramble towards the munitions plant. The warriors in the shadows let their infiltrators work their way towards the open ground before springing their trap.

Laser fire cut through the darkness and Contemptor watched his teammate’s head explode in a riot of metal and sparks – his brain casing obliterated as his body fell to the ground. The rest of the team scrambled for what shallow cover they could find. Two of them fell almost immediately, smoking holes evidence of their execution. Contemptor made a frenzied attempt to contact the main ship in orbit, but there was no reply to the distress call. Contemptor didn’t want to think it, and as he did, another two of the infiltration team fell in the crossfire, smouldering craters in their chests, the faint glow of their sparks ebbing away. One of the team made it to Contemptor’s position just as a grenade went off. The grenade shredded Contemptor’s left arm, and the left side of his face. His companion was not as fortunate as the grenade had hit, and detonated in his lower torso.

Contemptor fell, his vision blurred with static as the attackers slowly made their presence felt. Injured – Contemptor looked on in shock as he saw the rough shapes of the attackers, the unknown symbol on their bodies adding more to the horror of the decimation of the infiltration team. Contemptor’s injuries were serious, but he managed to drag himself to his feet, his body injured, his mind wracked with pain as the slow realisation of the betrayal sank into his mind. He burned all over as his pain receptors and warnings popped up on his HUD. His journey back was broken; his memory banks were cutting out as stasis lock slowly threatened to kick in. Through the pain, Contemptor boarded the drop-ship, and using his still functioning right arm, badly piloted the ship towards his fallen comrades. Using the autopilot feature the ship landed, and Contemptor tried to stand, but his energy levels were too depleted to move more, and – kicking his systems into repair mode – he collapsed onto the deck of the shuttle.

Several days had passed and Contemptor’s systems began to kick in. He had narrowly averted Stasis Lock, but he was still visibly damaged, for below his left optic, his face was marred with scars, and his left arm was a shattered ruin. Anger and rage filled Contemptor as he looked upon the carnage of the ambush, his comrades were all ruins, dead shells of what they once were. Contemptor dragged their bodies onto the shuttle one by one with his good arm, and made for space. Injured and seething with anger and rage he forced the ship as far as it could go until the drop-ship’s fuel cells ran dry, and in a fit of rage, punched the navigation console and cracked the display monitors.

Sitting alone in the cockpit’s chair, Contemptor looked around at the ruined shells of his comrades, their staring dead optics. He was lost in his own thoughts, and was unaware of the ship that had pulled him into its hangar bay. Contemptor, energy levels depleted, was tired and in no mood to argue with the assortments of aliens and robots onboard. However, through intensive bartering – and using the broken bodies of his fallen teammates as payment – Contemptor effectively bought his way back to Cybertron, and in a double stroke, managed to have paid less than what he had promised the captain of the ship.

Effectively classed as Killed in Action, and making his way into Cybertron’s underbelly, Contemptor – using parts as trade – managed to barter enough components to modify him to be more heavily armoured. He had even heard rumour about an underground gladiator pit. Changing his name from Hipshot to Contemptor, and fighting with the fury of a berserker, it solidified his new found hatred towards all Autobots, and in particular the Autobot Autocracy, He had found his calling in the ranks of the Deceptions’.

ABILITIES:

    Robot Flight Mode: Allows Contemptor to attain a flight speed of 150mph
    Twin Barrelled Plasma Cannon: Contemptor’s primary weapon is a longer barrelled Plasma Cannon that is partly mounted onto Contemptor’s right forearm. It is an assault weapon, capable of two to three bursts at a time, and is dependent on fuel cell flasks, and being hardwired into the coolant capacitor that is mounted across Contemptor’s shoulder. The plasma cannon is partially mounted because of the coolant fuel lines mounted along Contemptor’s forearm, and along to the dispenser on his back.
    Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol: Contemptor’s primary close combat weapon, is a repeating plasma pistol that requires the use of fuel cell flasks as well as coolant cell flasks. Because of its portability, it is unable to utilise the coolant systems in use for the Plasma Cannon
    Energon War Axe: A cruel looking hook headed axe that can easily be mistaken as a glaive or halberd because of the orientation of the head. The axe is used for the more up close and personal encounters, and the blade slowly glows with the energy inside it.
    Chain Lash: A weapon gleaned from the days of the Gladiator Pit fights. It is nothing more than a series of cybertonium chain, ended with a large pounding head, almost like a mace or flail.

WEAKNESSES: Contemptor’s size has a detriment to his speed and agility. He isn’t the most agile of Deceptions' in general, as his broad size has to allow for him to carry around his primary weapon.

Other weaknesses are the coolant mechanism on his Plasma Cannon; the piping and connectors are unshielded to allow for flexibility in combat. The cannon itself drinks down the fuel cells to empty with just six shots, requiring it to be reloaded constantly. Its other weakness is that the coolant system is mounted onto Contemptor’s back, meaning it is harder to hide behind cover, and that a well placed shot could cripple him.

Contemptor’s close combat pistol has a violent tendency to overheat. The pistol fires a repeater shot of three per burst, but as it is a plasma based weapon – its coolant has to be constantly replaced. At longer ranges, the weapon is increasingly inaccurate.

The Energon Axe is one of the many standard issue close combat weapons that Cybertronian’s use, however due to the depletion of Energon – this weapon currently cannot be used for any length of time.

The chain lash is a long and entangling weapon. It requires more concentration to utilise the Chain lash in combat, making its wielder more prone to sneak attacks, or an ambush

SAMPLE POST: Contemptor stalked through the ruins of the factory, the rubble and metal was scattered and broken throughout as grease-like smears marred random locations of both still standing walls, and twisted wrecks of metal and stone. Proof that there once, life existed.

The outpost on the small planetoid was once home to worker bots and Autobot guards, a small ore processing facility aiding the Autobot cause. It was now reduced to a smouldering ruin. The few guards were damaged, in stasis lock, or dead. The greasy smears on the surfaces testament to the fallen as Contemptor forced his foot down hard on the brain-casing of a downed Autobot Guard. The body twitched as he leant his full weight slowly onto the prone Autobot.

There was the slow groaning sound of the metal beginning to buckle under the pressure and the guard let out a moan of pain.

Contemptor’s features broke into a sinister snarl.

“It seems I missed one...I’m getting very sloppy these days....” A cruel guttural sound rose from Contemptor’s throat. The guard slowly realised that Contemptor was laughing.

Holstering the Plasma Cannon against his back, Contemptor reached down and roughly hauled the injured guard from the ground. A ragged, gaping hole in the guard’s shoulder gave Contemptor a welcome grip, one which he exploited fully.

The guard let out a broken scream of agony as Contemptor’s hand forcefully tore through the damaged sensors and receptors in a vice-like grip.

“...Tell me little Auto-brat...why the interest in this desolate rock? “ He sneered as he slammed the injured Autobot into the wall. Energon shot from the Autobot's mouth and landed on Contemptor's cheek-plate, proof that the Autobot's systems were damaged internally.

“I’ll make it painless...all you have to do is...tell!” He forcefully rattled the 'bot against the ruined wall several times, denting its already broken surface. There was still silence as the Autobot glared back in defiance.

'This is becoming tedious...bah wretches...no wonder they are worthless!' He thought to himself. Contemptor battered the damaged Autobot off the wall again and then, seeing an opportunity, used his Chain Lash to begin hanging the hapless warrior using a bent girder as part of the hoist. Contemptor gave a snarl as he hauled down on the chain, the Autobot being strangled and hung. Contemptor began tormenting the Autobot with his Energon Axe, battering the blade off the broken rubble on the ground as the Autobot’s optics widened. Contemptor began to laugh with glee as he drank in the fear in his opponent. He tortured the injured Guard by swiping the axe back and forth over the Dura-Alloy wall, the shrill clang of the metal and the sparks adding to the terror in the poor Autobot. But apart from the wails of terror, the Autobot said nothing.

“...Gr... You Auto-filth are all the same! Hiding all your dirty little secrets! Maybe I need to be more persuasive!?” The temper in his voice began to break as the guard’s silence began to tear away at Contemptor’s resolve. Drawing his arm back as if to throw a punch, he drove the pointed tip of the axe into the Autobot’s abdomen, the sound of tearing metal, alloy, and endo-structure filled the air with the Autobot’s scream of pain. Contemptor began to laugh with the insanity of a madman as the butchering took over. He thrust his arm upwards, tearing the Autobot open, sending sparks and energon flying, as its' screams filtered into broken static crackles.

Contemptor watched with a twisted grin on his face, as the remaining life-force of his prey, poured into the rubble. He re-holstered his axe and watched absently at the still twitching torso of the Autobot. With a look that mixed contempt with hate, he smashed his fist into the exposed spark casing of his victim and tore it from the shattered body.

His thirst for slaughter finally sated, Contemptor began to wipe the splattered energon from his face; slowly dragging his hand down past his mouth he casually tasted the life-force of his lacklustre foe as he began to retrieve his Chain Lash.

++"Contemptor to Shuttle... I await extraction..."++

the shuttle came into view, and as Contemptor boarded, his final words echoed around the ruined factory

“...All Hail Megatron!”


You have some solid stuff here, but I fear there is a problem with the history. Generally speaking I've never really seen a G1 continuity where pre Civil War Cybertron was particularly warmongering. Since we are mostly following an IDW type history I would definitely say they did not actively go out and seek to conquer or wage wars on others. At the most they likely fought some defensive skirmishes with more aggressive races that attacked them. I'm afraid that part of the history will have to change which will likely result in some big changes overall. I can see that you did work hard on this and I hope that these changes won't discourage you from trying to apply again. I do think this character can be restructured to work in the game.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Devastron » Mon Sep 26, 2011 11:29 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
BWO Jackel wrote:Name of your character:Starflight

Allegiance:Autobot :BOT:
Sub-group:Aerial-bot
Function:Pilot
Alternate Modes:Cybertronian jet
Weapons:Neutron Assault rifle and concealed pistol
Special Abilities:Can repair any bot including himself at a unusual speed.
Height: 25ft/ 7.62m
Quote:“Get the job done right and everybody here comes home alright.”


Strength:5
Intelligence:4
Dexterity:10
Speed:8
Endurance:6
Courage:7
Firepower:6
Accuracy:6
Melee:2
Tech Skill:9
Charisma:8
Rank:6


Profile:An officer of the Cybertronian air and space force Starflight has always known that only one thing matters ever since he was a protoform-get the job done right and everybody here comes home alright. Unfortunately that wasn't the case when he was delivering and guarding highly explosive energon to cybertron and crash landed. Starflight has been in stasis lock for billions of years to conserve energon ever since he has crash landed on the planet Nebulos and becoming seprated from his squadron of fellow Aerial-bots. As such he hails from a much older and peaceful Cybertron, Starflight has not known of any wars between the heroic Autobots and the villainous Decepticons. He has awakened from his stasis lock due to an battle nearby between Autobots and Decepticons....

Abilities:Weapons are standard issue.Learned how to repair himself and others from a young Junkion named Wreck-Gar.

Weaknesses:It is very easy to provoke him into action especially when innocent lives are at stake and even if the chances of him dying/wounded if he does are 100%.He is only knowledgeable in flight and space tech so his uses in tech is limited to space ships. He will also have a hard time adapting to his new surroundings due to being from a totally different era and planet.



Sample post:Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzttttttttttttttt. The first thought in Starflight's head was "How long have iv'e been in stasis?". His optics were dark at first but then his heads-up display started filling up with symbols and signs rapidly he could easily read, understand, and use to determine how badly damaged he was.

He thought to himself "Oh well that's a pleasant surprise. Coil damage to my left servo, I have no left wing, and OHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Im leaking energon so much that if in 20 cycles if not fixed ill go offline again. Ugh great."

Knowing he had no more time to complain he got up and searched the area nearby for spare parts.It was then he saw something totally horrific that it him want rip out his optics at the mere sight of it.

"Oh Primus what happened here?"

He took a knee to take it all in. There were bodies of cybertronians and what appeared to be the local inhabitants of the planet he had crash landed on. He then pulled himself up as he saw a repair kit nearby.

"Well time to get this patched up." he said.

After sealing his energon leak he realized something.

"Hmmmmmmmmm.... This repair kit looks far more advanced than the ones back on cybertron. How long has it been since I went into stasis lock? And what kinda insignia is this? This sure isn't the Autobot's." he thought to himself.

He then walked to a nearby cybertronian body and kneed next to it with several tools.

"Well this is no time to be squeamish. Care to donate a few parts for the living?"

He then salvaged what parts he could from the dead cybertronian, transformed, and took of into the sunset.

As he flew he thought to himself "Time to find out what the slag is going one here."

END


P.S. His character will become more developed when he interacts with other players and his history will be explained more in the rpg.


This character isn't really going to work as is. We don't recommend starting your first character on Nebulos. There are also some problems with the stats that are covered in the rules. The abilities section needs some expansion, and removal of Wreck-Gar from it. I would recommend having a character who is up to date on Cybertronian history too just to make it easier for you to get into the game the first time.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby #Sideways# » Tue Sep 27, 2011 4:23 pm

Motto: "Wake up. Wake up and smell the ashes."
Weapon: Dual Compression Cannons
//Hope this guy is able to be played in the RPG, and/or it isn't too soon to apply. But here goes nothin'! :D



Punch/Counterpunch

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Double Agent
Alternate Modes: A blue Pontiac Fiero
Weapons: Autobot: Twin Mortar Launcher; Decepticon: Photon Cannon
Special Abilities: Ability to change form from Punch to Counterpunch.
Height: 25 feet / 7.62 meters
Quote: “In my business, there are no friends, only suspects.”


Strength: 6.0
Intelligence: 9.0
Dexterity: 7.0
Speed: 6.0
Endurance: 6.0
Courage: 10.0
Firepower: 6.0
Accuracy: 8.0
Melee: 7.0
Tech Skill: 6.0
Charisma: 5.0
Rank: 7.0


Profile: On the surface, Punch is as cool-headed and well-adjusted a character as you could wish to meet. At times of crisis, he keeps his head and takes command, his authoritative nature and imposing presence helping to calm those around him. Many are the Autobots who have admired his tight-lipped, stoic attitude. But Punch fools himself almost as completely as he fools others. He likes to think that he is a robot of few words because, in his business, to say too much is to invite death. In truth, Punch says little because he distrusts absolutely everyone! His role as double agent, constantly switching his appearance to Counter Punch so as to blend in with the Decepticon forces, has left him a paranoid bundle of neuro-circuits. He hides it well, but Punch is constantly on edge, guarding against possible betrayal (from his fellow Autobots) and discovery (by the Decepticons). Only Autobot leader Optimus Prime suspects that Punch's long undercover operations, taking him into the dark heart of the Decepticon camp, may be having an adverse effect. He sees not the calm, aloof warrior others see. He sees a powder keg, about to explode. Knowing how easily and confidently he walks with the Decepticons, Punch looks at his fellow Autobots, wondering if one of them is actually a Decepticon double-agent. Despite all of this, there is no doubting Punch's courage and dedication. Each time Punch receives another infiltration mission, Optimus Prime gives him the chance to back out with absolutely no loss of face. And each time, Punch remains silent.

Abilities: As both Punch and Counter Punch, he can transform into a sleek, aerodynamic car capable of reaching a maximum speed of 160 miles per hour, with a range of 1200 miles. In Autobot mode, he uses a twin mortar launcher capable of firing its highly-combustible firebombs a distance of 3000 yards, In Decepticon mode, he wields a photon cannon, which emits a high-density stream of circuit-scrambling energy, destroying enemies from the inside out. In order to maintain Punch's cover, all Autobots are fitted with a damper device that reduces the cannon's effect but produces enough fireworks to convince the Decepticons that they have been destroyed. All the Autobots have to do is remember to fall down!

Weaknesses: All of Punch's weaknesses stem from the mental split between him and his alter ego, Counter Punch. He is in constant danger of slipping too fully into his Decepticon role and turning on his Autobot comrades. Should this ever happen, the Autobots would have little option but to stop him. Whether they could do this without harming him remains to be seen. All that is held in check as Punch finds savage release as Counter Punch.

Sample Post:

Ultrax Mess Hall

Counterpunch swirled his drink of the Energon Substitute as he looked around the room suspicious of anything surrounding him. However, there was only one Mech in the room at that time. Counterpunch kept his optics trained on the larger Mech until he left the room.

I don't think he noticed me. Thought Counterpunch as he took a large swig of his drink, and shook his head at a rapid rate for the taste was too strong.

Counterpunch took a quick glance around the room until he got up from his chair and moved over to the Synthetic Energon dispenser and filled his cup again. He again looked around the empty room in search of anything out of the ordinary.

It was odd. It was like he was being watched.

"Show yourself." Said Counterpunch as he reached for his weapon clipped at his hip.

"Oh, that's not necessary Punch," Said a voice from one of the many shadows in the dark corners of the room, "Thats right, I know who you are and where your alligences lie."

Out of the corner came a Femme about the same size as Counterpunch, colored black and purple, it was obvious who she was. Bleakwoode. She was a spy that was in his same training class, and he got her job. She left the Autobot guard afterwards.

"Don't worry, I'm on assignment too," She said as she stepped even further out of the shadows revealing her delicate form, "I'm here to kill you."

Counterpuch laughed as he firmed his grip on his Photon Cannon, but he knew she was serious. But who would want him dead? He took a swig from his cup again and squinted at her.

"Why me?" Counterpunch asked as he left his vunerable position at the table and took a placement in the center of the room.

"You know me! I don't ask questions," Bleakwoode pranced into the opposite side of the room with a dasterdly smile, "I just do my job."

And in what seemed to be in a split second, Bleakwoode drew her weapon and fired on Counterpunch, but the laser only tasted air when Counterpunch lept out of the way and landed behind a table which he overturned. He then heard a horrifying sound, it was Bleakwoode's laugh, no, cackle. She was enjoying trying to kill her old friend.

"We don't have to do this, you know," Bleakwoode's voice said as she hunted her prey around the room, "My recommendation? Lay down and die!"

He snuck around the room in the shadows while she hunted for him.

"Ha! You were always the one to run before you fought for yourself." Bleakwoode cackled as she moved in a circle around the Mess hall.

Counterpunch snuck up behind her and said, "You were always the one to act before you thought."

Bleakwoode spun around with horrid rage on her face as he flipped a knife out from her hip and tried to cut at Counterpunch's faceplate. Counterpunch acted fast, ducking under the whirling arm and gave a quick upercut to the chest, and lept up to snap an open hand on her neck, silencing her voice transmitter. She spun her dagger down and tried to stab him in the Cranial Unit, Counterpunch threw up his left arm and caught the dagger in his forearm, slicing clean through his armor. Counterpunch backflipped away and looked at his injured arm, it didn't look good, however it was nothing the repair drones couldn't fix.

Bleakwoode lunged forward with her dagger and counterpunch slid around her and latched onto her back. Counterpunch grabbed onto her arm and twisted to the point of breaking, however she couldn't scream, only release her grip of the dagger. The dagger fell to the floor with a clank, and Counterpunch lashed out a kick to the bend of her knee, bringing her to one knee helplessly. Counterpunch then picked up her paralyzed body and brought her to an Airlock.

"It was fun, Bleakwood," Counterpunch said as he opened the first door and placed her on the floor gently, "Just remember to think your plan out before you do it. Things will always end this way."

His Audio Receptors picked up a sound from her returning Voice Transmitter, it almost sounded like she was saying "Next time you-", Counterpunch didn't wait to find out what she said, as he closed the inner door and released the outer one, letting Bleakwoode fly out into space.

She would be back.

"Counterpunch? What was that you just jettisoned!?" A voice said from behind him.

Counterpunch whirled around to see a hulking form of Space Case. Dumb, and gullible. This was going to be easy.

"Oh nothing too important for someone of your, well, specialty, my friend," Counterpunch said as he patted him on the shoulder with his left arm, wincing afterwards, "I hear there is a huge disaster in the Mess Hall, you should go and check if everything is okay."

Counterpunch walked away and into his quarters where he locked the door behind him. After checking to see if anyone was there, he transformed into Punch. It felt good to be back to his normal form. He then opened a communicator on his wrist, completely sealed to any onlooking forces that were not Autobot, he sent a signal to Prowl.

>>Prowl. I've found nothing so far. Only the fact of Bleakwoode, she was in my training unit, finding me somehow. She has turned into a Bounty Hunter. My cover is stable.<< Punch said blankly over the Comm Link.

>>Its been a while! Good to know you haven't lost you cover. Keep a lookout.<< Prowl's voice came back over the line, and then it shut off.

Punch went to his own CR Chamber and stepped in while transforming back into Counterpunch. He layed back in the chamber and let the repair drones go to work. He had a big day ahead of him.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Baneblade » Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:29 pm

Motto: "Scream....it only make it more fun"
Weapon: Plasma Cannon
++Ok third times the charm - you can tell i'm rusty as buggery with this!++
++oh shee-yut...editing to add in part of the history. I missed something...drats...++

NAME: Contemptor
ALLEGIANCE: Decepticon
FUNCTION: Warrior
ALT. MODE [Earth]: 1988 Mack Bicentennial Super Liner
ALT. MODE [Cybertron]: Assault ATV
WEAPONS: Twin-Barrel Plasma Cannon, Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol, Energon War Axe, Chain Lash

HEIGHT: 35ft

QUOTE: “There are no prisoners....only trophies!”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK:

PROFILE: Contemptor – originally named Hipshot - was once a pilot for the Cybertron Science Corp. During the time of peace, Contemptor would pilot a various number of ships to deploy a number of probes and scanners in nearby systems or onto any planetoid that raised significant interest. Some Cybertronian’s would say that he was lucky. Others said his luck would run out one day.

Contemptor was originally more lightly armoured than he is now due to his assigned status within the Cybertron Science Corp. His role usually had him and his partner move through dense asteroid belts, gaseous spaces, or amongst sprawling solar systems. However, it was a dead star that would change things for Contemptor.

And it was a dark change.

A scientific mission to an unregistered star system near the Merbus System was where things went drastically wrong. The shuttle carrying the 2-bot team passed calmly through a nebulous gas cloud which began to emit peculiar signals and gaseous eruptions. Contemptor and his comrade braced for impact as the ship began to shudder with the fluctuations of the nebula. Their primary mission was to launch a sensor probe towards a young planet to assess its capabilities and what benefit it would have to Cybertron, however sensing an opportunity at some additionally valuable information, they decided to launch a secondary probe to gather data on the strange readings from the nebula.

Contemptor stabilised the craft as the best his abilities would allow him. His team-mate made towards the rear of the craft to prepare the probe for launch into the nebula before a thunderous impact shook the ship hard.

A surge of intense energy blew the main stabiliser controls on the ship, and Contemptor’s teammate smashed into the side of the cargo hold. He let out a shout of displeasure as Contemptor wrestled with the controls in an attempt to engage the backup stabilisers in the shuttle, but the energy surges from the nebula was making things more difficult. Contemptor shouted through the com to his teammate that they would have to abort launching the probe into the gas cloud, or they would be torn in half. Contemptor’s teammate replied that it would be insane to miss such a valuable opportunity, and they should continue on as greatness was in their immediate future. Giving a growl of frustration Contemptor managed to get the auxiliary stabilisers online, and setting the ship to auto-pilot, moved from the cockpit to the cargo hold to help lower the pod.

Getting to the probe, Contemptor and his comrade manually opened the launch hatch. The jolt from the energy surge had disabled most of the functions of the shuttle, so the launch hatch had to be opened with the manual release lever. Hauling on the lever, the green lock light switched to red, signifying that the hatch was now opening.

Some said Contemptor was lucky. Others said his luck would run out.

His luck ran out.

A bolt of errant energy shot from the nebula and into the cargo hold. Contemptor helplessly watched his teammate’s head explode in a riot of metal and sparks – his brain casing obliterated as his body fell to the ground. The energy struck the probe and it blew, the fuel tank causing an audio-receptor clogging bang as it washed the small space in energon induced fire. It scorched the cargo hold, and the intense heat caused some of the panelling to melt – holes appearing in the interior of the shuttle. Warning klaxons sounded as the integrity of the shuttle began to depressurise against the infinite pull of space. Contemptor scrambled towards the cockpit, clawing his way towards the pilots chair as he pulled himself upright. Another internal explosion in the shuttle rocked the entire ship, and Contemptor fell almost immediately, as smoke billowed from the connecting door. Contemptor made a frenzied attempt to contact Cybertron, but there was no reply to the distress call. After repeated attempts at sending a long wave transmission, a broken reply came through.

++....maintain....research valuable....you shall.......forgotten...++

A stunned expression came over Contemptor - the voice was familiar, and at once distant memories began to flood back to him.

Contemptor didn’t want to think it, and as he did he punched out a distress beacon that hopefully would bring help. Another two explosions came from the ships engines, the smouldering craters in the portside thrusters left them in ruins.

Contemptor and his dead compatriot were adrift - left to the floating mercy of space.

With a loud bang, a final eruption of energy surged through the shuttle, causing the center control console to explode, the outburst of energy flooded through as the debris and shrapnel of the console bit Contemptor. He managed to turn away from the exploding console, but only barely, as the explosion shredded Contemptor’s left arm, and the left side of his face.

Contemptor fell, his vision blurred with static as the shuttle was thrown from its trajectory, the nebula ejecting the craft as if dismissing an unwanted guest. Contemptor burned all over as his pain receptors and warnings popped up on his HUD. His journey back was broken; his memory banks were cutting out as stasis lock slowly threatened to kick in. Through the pain, Contemptor blacked out periodically as the shuttle was pulled onboard an alien deep space salvage ship. Using his still functioning right arm, he pulled himself up onto his knees to look out the cracked glass at the frigate. Contemptor tried to stand, but his energy levels were too depleted to move more, and – kicking his systems into repair mode – he collapsed onto the deck of the shuttle.

Several days had passed and Contemptor’s systems began to kick in. He had narrowly averted Stasis Lock, but he was still visibly damaged, for below his left optic, his face was marred with scars, and his left arm was a shattered ruin. Anger and rage filled Contemptor as he looked upon the carnage of the shuttle; his comrade lay in ruins, a dead shell of what he once was. Contemptor dragged his body from the shuttle with his good arm onto the frigate, and looked upon the aliens who occupied the frigate. Injured and seething with anger and rage he forced himself to speak as far as he could go with the aliens and robots until his patience ran dry, and in a fit of rage, punched the side of the broken shuttle and further cracked the glass of the cockpit.

His energy levels depleted, Contemptor was tired and in no mood to argue with the assortments of aliens and robots onboard. However, through intensive bartering – and using the broken body of his fallen team-mate, and the salvageable parts of the shuttle as payment – Contemptor effectively bought his way back to Cybertron, and in a double stroke, managed to have paid less than what he had promised the captain of the ship.

Effectively classed as Missing presumed Dead, and making his way into Cybertron’s underbelly, Contemptor – using the parts of his fallen team-mate as trade – managed to barter enough components to modify himself to be more heavily armoured. He had even heard rumour about an underground gladiator pit.

His times in the pits made him focus on his new-found strengths and abilities in combat, and in the rise of the warrior, the skills of a pilot, and research assistant began to fade slowly. The more that he became involved, the more he hungered for combat and the thrill of spilling the life-force of his opponents; the more inconsequential, and irrelevant his previous abilities became.

And all the while his hate and anger grew.

Finally, changing his name from Hipshot to Contemptor, and fighting with the full fury of a berserker, his new-found hate towards all Autobots, and in particular the Autobot Autocracy, solidified his change of personality.

He had found his calling in the ranks of the Deceptions’.

ABILITIES:
Robot Flight Mode: Allows Contemptor to attain a flight speed of 150mph

Twin Barrelled Plasma Cannon: Contemptor’s primary weapon is a longer barrelled Plasma Cannon that is partly mounted onto Contemptor’s right forearm. It is an assault weapon, capable of two to three bursts at a time, and is dependent on fuel cell flasks, and being hardwired into the coolant capacitor that is mounted across Contemptor’s shoulder. The plasma cannon, is partially mounted because of the coolant fuel lines of the cannon run along Contemptor’s forearm, and up to the dispenser on his back.

Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol: Contemptor’s primary close combat weapon is a repeating plasma pistol that requires the use of fuel cell flasks as well as coolant cell flasks. Because of its portability, it is unable to utilise the coolant systems in use for the Plasma Cannon

Energon War Axe: A cruel looking hook headed axe that can easily be mistaken as a glaive or halberd because of the orientation of the head. The axe is used for the more up close and personal encounters, and the blade slowly glows with the energy inside it.

Chain Lash: A weapon gleaned from the days of the Gladiator Pit fights. It is nothing more than a series of cybertonium chain, ended with a large pounding head, almost like a mace or flail.

WEAKNESSES: Contemptor’s size has a detriment to his speed and agility. He isn’t the most agile of Deceptions' in general, as his broad size has to allow for him to carry around his primary weapon.

Other weaknesses are the coolant mechanism on his Plasma Cannon; the piping and connectors are wunshielded to allow for flexibility in combat. The cannon itself drinks down the fuel cells to empty with just six shots, requiring it to be reloaded constantly. Its other weakness is that the coolant system is mounted onto Contemptor’s back, meaning it is harder to hide behind cover, and that a well placed shot could cripple him.

Contemptor’s close combat pistol has a violent tendency to overheat. The pistol fires a repeater shot of three per burst, but as it is a plasma based weapon – its coolant has to be constantly replaced. At longer ranges, the weapon is increasingly inaccurate.

The Energon Axe is one of the many standard issue close combat weapons that Cybertronian’s use, however due to the depletion of Energon – this weapon currently cannot be used for any length of time.

The Chain Lash is a long and entangling weapon. It requires more concentration to utilise the Chain Lash in combat, making its wielder more prone to sneak attacks, or an ambush

SAMPLE POST: Contemptor stalked through the ruins of the factory, the rubble and metal was scattered and broken throughout as grease-like smears marred random locations of both still standing walls, and twisted wrecks of metal and stone. Proof that there once, life existed.

The outpost on the small planetoid was once home to worker bots and Autobot guards, a small ore processing facility aiding the Autobot cause. It was now reduced to a smouldering ruin. The few guards were damaged, in stasis lock, or dead. The greasy smears on the surfaces testament to the fallen as Contemptor forced his foot down hard on the brain-casing of a downed Autobot Guard. The body twitched as he leant his full weight slowly onto the prone Autobot.

There was the slow groaning sound of the metal beginning to buckle under the pressure and the guard let out a moan of pain.

Contemptor’s features broke into a sinister snarl.

“It seems I missed one...I’m getting very sloppy these days....” A cruel guttural sound rose from Contemptor’s throat. The guard slowly realised that Contemptor was laughing.

Holstering the Plasma Cannon against his back, Contemptor reached down and roughly hauled the injured guard from the ground. A ragged, gaping hole in the guard’s shoulder gave Contemptor a welcome grip, one which he exploited fully.

The guard let out a broken scream of agony as Contemptor’s hand forcefully tore through the damaged sensors and receptors in a vice-like grip.

“...Tell me little Auto-brat...why the interest in this desolate rock? “ He sneered as he slammed the injured Autobot into the wall. Energon shot from the Autobot's mouth and landed on Contemptor's cheek-plate, proof that the Autobot's systems were damaged internally.

“I’ll make it painless...all you have to do is...tell!” He forcefully rattled the 'bot against the ruined wall several times, denting its already broken surface. There was still silence as the Autobot glared back in defiance.

'This is becoming tedious...bah wretches...no wonder they are worthless!' He thought to himself. Contemptor battered the damaged Autobot off the wall again and then, seeing an opportunity, used his Chain Lash to begin hanging the hapless warrior using a bent girder as part of the hoist. Contemptor gave a snarl as he hauled down on the chain, the Autobot being strangled and hung. Contemptor began tormenting the Autobot with his Energon Axe, battering the blade off the broken rubble on the ground as the Autobot’s optics widened. Contemptor began to laugh with glee as he drank in the fear in his opponent. He tortured the injured Guard by swiping the axe back and forth over the Dura-Alloy wall, the shrill clang of the metal and the sparks adding to the terror in the poor Autobot. But apart from the wails of terror, the Autobot said nothing.

“...Gr... You Auto-filth are all the same! Hiding all your dirty little secrets! Maybe I need to be more persuasive!?” The temper in his voice began to break as the guard’s silence began to tear away at Contemptor’s resolve. Drawing his arm back as if to throw a punch, he drove the pointed tip of the axe into the Autobot’s abdomen, the sound of tearing metal, alloy, and endo-structure filled the air with the Autobot’s scream of pain. Contemptor began to laugh with the insanity of a madman as the butchering took over. He thrust his arm upwards, tearing the Autobot open, sending sparks and energon flying, as its' screams filtered into broken static crackles.

Contemptor watched with a twisted grin on his face, as the remaining life-force of his prey, poured into the rubble. With a final swing, there was a metallic thud as the doomed guard's head fell to the ground. He re-holstered his axe and watched absently at the still twitching torso of the Autobot. With a look that mixed contempt with hate, he smashed his fist into the exposed spark casing of his victim and tore it from the shattered body.

His thirst for slaughter finally sated, Contemptor began to wipe the splattered energon from his face; slowly dragging his hand down past his mouth he casually tasted the life-force of his lacklustre foe as he began to retrieve his Chain Lash, and his prize.

++"Contemptor to Shuttle... I await extraction..."++

The shuttle came into view, and as Contemptor boarded looking at his grisly trophy, his final words echoed around the ruined factory...

"There are no prisoners...only trophies!...ALL HAIL MEGATRON!!"
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Ember » Tue Sep 27, 2011 8:28 pm

Motto: "I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things."
#Sideways# wrote://Hope this guy is able to be played in the RPG, and/or it isn't too soon to apply. But here goes nothin'! :D



Punch/Counterpunch

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Double Agent
Alternate Modes: A blue Pontiac Fiero
Weapons: Autobot: Twin Mortar Launcher; Decepticon: Photon Cannon
Special Abilities: Ability to change form from Punch to Counterpunch.
Height: 25 feet / 7.62 meters
Quote: “In my business, there are no friends, only suspects.”


Strength: 6.0
Intelligence: 9.0
Dexterity: 7.0
Speed: 6.0
Endurance: 6.0
Courage: 10.0
Firepower: 6.0
Accuracy: 8.0
Melee: 7.0
Tech Skill: 6.0
Charisma: 5.0
Rank: 7.0


Profile: On the surface, Punch is as cool-headed and well-adjusted a character as you could wish to meet. At times of crisis, he keeps his head and takes command, his authoritative nature and imposing presence helping to calm those around him. Many are the Autobots who have admired his tight-lipped, stoic attitude. But Punch fools himself almost as completely as he fools others. He likes to think that he is a robot of few words because, in his business, to say too much is to invite death. In truth, Punch says little because he distrusts absolutely everyone! His role as double agent, constantly switching his appearance to Counter Punch so as to blend in with the Decepticon forces, has left him a paranoid bundle of neuro-circuits. He hides it well, but Punch is constantly on edge, guarding against possible betrayal (from his fellow Autobots) and discovery (by the Decepticons). Only Autobot leader Optimus Prime suspects that Punch's long undercover operations, taking him into the dark heart of the Decepticon camp, may be having an adverse effect. He sees not the calm, aloof warrior others see. He sees a powder keg, about to explode. Knowing how easily and confidently he walks with the Decepticons, Punch looks at his fellow Autobots, wondering if one of them is actually a Decepticon double-agent. Despite all of this, there is no doubting Punch's courage and dedication. Each time Punch receives another infiltration mission, Optimus Prime gives him the chance to back out with absolutely no loss of face. And each time, Punch remains silent.

Abilities: As both Punch and Counter Punch, he can transform into a sleek, aerodynamic car capable of reaching a maximum speed of 160 miles per hour, with a range of 1200 miles. In Autobot mode, he uses a twin mortar launcher capable of firing its highly-combustible firebombs a distance of 3000 yards, In Decepticon mode, he wields a photon cannon, which emits a high-density stream of circuit-scrambling energy, destroying enemies from the inside out. In order to maintain Punch's cover, all Autobots are fitted with a damper device that reduces the cannon's effect but produces enough fireworks to convince the Decepticons that they have been destroyed. All the Autobots have to do is remember to fall down!

Weaknesses: All of Punch's weaknesses stem from the mental split between him and his alter ego, Counter Punch. He is in constant danger of slipping too fully into his Decepticon role and turning on his Autobot comrades. Should this ever happen, the Autobots would have little option but to stop him. Whether they could do this without harming him remains to be seen. All that is held in check as Punch finds savage release as Counter Punch.

Sample Post:

Ultrax Mess Hall

Counterpunch swirled his drink of the Energon Substitute as he looked around the room suspicious of anything surrounding him. However, there was only one Mech in the room at that time. Counterpunch kept his optics trained on the larger Mech until he left the room.

I don't think he noticed me. Thought Counterpunch as he took a large swig of his drink, and shook his head at a rapid rate for the taste was too strong.

Counterpunch took a quick glance around the room until he got up from his chair and moved over to the Synthetic Energon dispenser and filled his cup again. He again looked around the empty room in search of anything out of the ordinary.

It was odd. It was like he was being watched.

"Show yourself." Said Counterpunch as he reached for his weapon clipped at his hip.

"Oh, that's not necessary Punch," Said a voice from one of the many shadows in the dark corners of the room, "Thats right, I know who you are and where your alligences lie."

Out of the corner came a Femme about the same size as Counterpunch, colored black and purple, it was obvious who she was. Bleakwoode. She was a spy that was in his same training class, and he got her job. She left the Autobot guard afterwards.

"Don't worry, I'm on assignment too," She said as she stepped even further out of the shadows revealing her delicate form, "I'm here to kill you."

Counterpuch laughed as he firmed his grip on his Photon Cannon, but he knew she was serious. But who would want him dead? He took a swig from his cup again and squinted at her.

"Why me?" Counterpunch asked as he left his vunerable position at the table and took a placement in the center of the room.

"You know me! I don't ask questions," Bleakwoode pranced into the opposite side of the room with a dasterdly smile, "I just do my job."

And in what seemed to be in a split second, Bleakwoode drew her weapon and fired on Counterpunch, but the laser only tasted air when Counterpunch lept out of the way and landed behind a table which he overturned. He then heard a horrifying sound, it was Bleakwoode's laugh, no, cackle. She was enjoying trying to kill her old friend.

"We don't have to do this, you know," Bleakwoode's voice said as she hunted her prey around the room, "My recommendation? Lay down and die!"

He snuck around the room in the shadows while she hunted for him.

"Ha! You were always the one to run before you fought for yourself." Bleakwoode cackled as she moved in a circle around the Mess hall.

Counterpunch snuck up behind her and said, "You were always the one to act before you thought."

Bleakwoode spun around with horrid rage on her face as he flipped a knife out from her hip and tried to cut at Counterpunch's faceplate. Counterpunch acted fast, ducking under the whirling arm and gave a quick upercut to the chest, and lept up to snap an open hand on her neck, silencing her voice transmitter. She spun her dagger down and tried to stab him in the Cranial Unit, Counterpunch threw up his left arm and caught the dagger in his forearm, slicing clean through his armor. Counterpunch backflipped away and looked at his injured arm, it didn't look good, however it was nothing the repair drones couldn't fix.

Bleakwoode lunged forward with her dagger and counterpunch slid around her and latched onto her back. Counterpunch grabbed onto her arm and twisted to the point of breaking, however she couldn't scream, only release her grip of the dagger. The dagger fell to the floor with a clank, and Counterpunch lashed out a kick to the bend of her knee, bringing her to one knee helplessly. Counterpunch then picked up her paralyzed body and brought her to an Airlock.

"It was fun, Bleakwood," Counterpunch said as he opened the first door and placed her on the floor gently, "Just remember to think your plan out before you do it. Things will always end this way."

His Audio Receptors picked up a sound from her returning Voice Transmitter, it almost sounded like she was saying "Next time you-", Counterpunch didn't wait to find out what she said, as he closed the inner door and released the outer one, letting Bleakwoode fly out into space.

She would be back.

"Counterpunch? What was that you just jettisoned!?" A voice said from behind him.

Counterpunch whirled around to see a hulking form of Space Case. Dumb, and gullible. This was going to be easy.

"Oh nothing too important for someone of your, well, specialty, my friend," Counterpunch said as he patted him on the shoulder with his left arm, wincing afterwards, "I hear there is a huge disaster in the Mess Hall, you should go and check if everything is okay."

Counterpunch walked away and into his quarters where he locked the door behind him. After checking to see if anyone was there, he transformed into Punch. It felt good to be back to his normal form. He then opened a communicator on his wrist, completely sealed to any onlooking forces that were not Autobot, he sent a signal to Prowl.

>>Prowl. I've found nothing so far. Only the fact of Bleakwoode, she was in my training unit, finding me somehow. She has turned into a Bounty Hunter. My cover is stable.<< Punch said blankly over the Comm Link.

>>Its been a while! Good to know you haven't lost you cover. Keep a lookout.<< Prowl's voice came back over the line, and then it shut off.

Punch went to his own CR Chamber and stepped in while transforming back into Counterpunch. He layed back in the chamber and let the repair drones go to work. He had a big day ahead of him.


Unfortunately Punch/Counterpunch is too complicated a character to have in the game. Keeping him alive in game would be almost impossible. Sorry.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Devastron » Wed Sep 28, 2011 8:31 pm

Weapon: Energo-Sword
Baneblade wrote:++Ok third times the charm - you can tell i'm rusty as buggery with this!++
++oh shee-yut...editing to add in part of the history. I missed something...drats...++

NAME: Contemptor
ALLEGIANCE: Decepticon
FUNCTION: Warrior
ALT. MODE [Earth]: 1988 Mack Bicentennial Super Liner
ALT. MODE [Cybertron]: Assault ATV
WEAPONS: Twin-Barrel Plasma Cannon, Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol, Energon War Axe, Chain Lash

HEIGHT: 40ft

QUOTE: “There are no prisoners....only trophies!”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 8
RANK:

PROFILE: Contemptor – originally named Hipshot - was once a pilot for the Cybertron Science Corp. During the time of peace, Contemptor would pilot a various number of ships to deploy a number of probes and scanners in nearby systems or onto any planetoid that raised significant interest. Some Cybertronian’s would say that he was lucky. Others said his luck would run out one day.

Contemptor was originally more lightly armoured than he is now due to his assigned status within the Cybertron Science Corp. His role usually had him and his partner move through dense asteroid belts, gaseous spaces, or amongst sprawling solar systems. However, it was a dead star that would change things for Contemptor.

And it was a dark change.

A scientific mission to an unregistered star system near the Merbus System was where things went drastically wrong. The shuttle carrying the 2-bot team passed calmly through a nebulous gas cloud which began to emit peculiar signals and gaseous eruptions. Contemptor and his comrade braced for impact as the ship began to shudder with the fluctuations of the nebula. Their primary mission was to launch a sensor probe towards a young planet to assess its capabilities and what benefit it would have to Cybertron, however sensing an opportunity at some additionally valuable information, they decided to launch a secondary probe to gather data on the strange readings from the nebula.

Contemptor stabilised the craft as the best his abilities would allow him. His team-mate made towards the rear of the craft to prepare the probe for launch into the nebula before a thunderous impact shook the ship hard.

A surge of intense energy blew the main stabiliser controls on the ship, and Contemptor’s teammate smashed into the side of the cargo hold. He let out a shout of displeasure as Contemptor wrestled with the controls in an attempt to engage the backup stabilisers in the shuttle, but the energy surges from the nebula was making things more difficult. Contemptor shouted through the com to his teammate that they would have to abort launching the probe into the gas cloud, or they would be torn in half. Contemptor’s teammate replied that it would be insane to miss such a valuable opportunity, and they should continue on as greatness was in their immediate future. Giving a growl of frustration Contemptor managed to get the auxiliary stabilisers online, and setting the ship to auto-pilot, moved from the cockpit to the cargo hold to help lower the pod.

Getting to the probe, Contemptor and his comrade manually opened the launch hatch. The jolt from the energy surge had disabled most of the functions of the shuttle, so the launch hatch had to be opened with the manual release lever. Hauling on the lever, the green lock light switched to red, signifying that the hatch was now opening.

Some said Contemptor was lucky. Others said his luck would run out.

His luck ran out.

A bolt of errant energy shot from the nebula and into the cargo hold. Contemptor helplessly watched his teammate’s head explode in a riot of metal and sparks – his brain casing obliterated as his body fell to the ground. The energy struck the probe and it blew, the fuel tank causing an audio-receptor clogging bang as it washed the small space in energon induced fire. It scorched the cargo hold, and the intense heat caused some of the panelling to melt – holes appearing in the interior of the shuttle. Warning klaxons sounded as the integrity of the shuttle began to depressurise against the infinite pull of space. Contemptor scrambled towards the cockpit, clawing his way towards the pilots chair as he pulled himself upright. Another internal explosion in the shuttle rocked the entire ship, and Contemptor fell almost immediately, as smoke billowed from the connecting door. Contemptor made a frenzied attempt to contact Cybertron, but there was no reply to the distress call. After repeated attempts at sending a long wave transmission, a broken reply came through.

++....maintain....research valuable....you shall.......forgotten...++

A stunned expression came over Contemptor - the voice was familiar, and at once distant memories began to flood back to him.

Contemptor didn’t want to think it, and as he did he punched out a distress beacon that hopefully would bring help. Another two explosions came from the ships engines, the smouldering craters in the portside thrusters left them in ruins.

Contemptor and his dead compatriot were adrift - left to the floating mercy of space.

With a loud bang, a final eruption of energy surged through the shuttle, causing the center control console to explode, the outburst of energy flooded through as the debris and shrapnel of the console bit Contemptor. He managed to turn away from the exploding console, but only barely, as the explosion shredded Contemptor’s left arm, and the left side of his face.

Contemptor fell, his vision blurred with static as the shuttle was thrown from its trajectory, the nebula ejecting the craft as if dismissing an unwanted guest. Contemptor burned all over as his pain receptors and warnings popped up on his HUD. His journey back was broken; his memory banks were cutting out as stasis lock slowly threatened to kick in. Through the pain, Contemptor blacked out periodically as the shuttle was pulled onboard an alien deep space salvage ship. Using his still functioning right arm, he pulled himself up onto his knees to look out the cracked glass at the frigate. Contemptor tried to stand, but his energy levels were too depleted to move more, and – kicking his systems into repair mode – he collapsed onto the deck of the shuttle.

Several days had passed and Contemptor’s systems began to kick in. He had narrowly averted Stasis Lock, but he was still visibly damaged, for below his left optic, his face was marred with scars, and his left arm was a shattered ruin. Anger and rage filled Contemptor as he looked upon the carnage of the shuttle; his comrade lay in ruins, a dead shell of what he once was. Contemptor dragged his body from the shuttle with his good arm onto the frigate, and looked upon the aliens who occupied the frigate. Injured and seething with anger and rage he forced himself to speak as far as he could go with the aliens and robots until his patience ran dry, and in a fit of rage, punched the side of the broken shuttle and further cracked the glass of the cockpit.

His energy levels depleted, Contemptor was tired and in no mood to argue with the assortments of aliens and robots onboard. However, through intensive bartering – and using the broken body of his fallen team-mate, and the salvageable parts of the shuttle as payment – Contemptor effectively bought his way back to Cybertron, and in a double stroke, managed to have paid less than what he had promised the captain of the ship.

Effectively classed as Missing presumed Dead, and making his way into Cybertron’s underbelly, Contemptor – using the parts of his fallen team-mate as trade – managed to barter enough components to modify himself to be more heavily armoured. He had even heard rumour about an underground gladiator pit.

His times in the pits made him focus on his new-found strengths and abilities in combat, and in the rise of the warrior, the skills of a pilot, and research assistant began to fade slowly. The more that he became involved, the more he hungered for combat and the thrill of spilling the life-force of his opponents; the more inconsequential, and irrelevant his previous abilities became.

And all the while his hate and anger grew.

Finally, changing his name from Hipshot to Contemptor, and fighting with the full fury of a berserker, his new-found hate towards all Autobots, and in particular the Autobot Autocracy, solidified his change of personality.

He had found his calling in the ranks of the Deceptions’.

ABILITIES:
Robot Flight Mode: Allows Contemptor to attain a flight speed of 150mph

Twin Barrelled Plasma Cannon: Contemptor’s primary weapon is a longer barrelled Plasma Cannon that is partly mounted onto Contemptor’s right forearm. It is an assault weapon, capable of two to three bursts at a time, and is dependent on fuel cell flasks, and being hardwired into the coolant capacitor that is mounted across Contemptor’s shoulder. The plasma cannon, is partially mounted because of the coolant fuel lines of the cannon run along Contemptor’s forearm, and up to the dispenser on his back.

Kaon Pattern Burst Pistol: Contemptor’s primary close combat weapon is a repeating plasma pistol that requires the use of fuel cell flasks as well as coolant cell flasks. Because of its portability, it is unable to utilise the coolant systems in use for the Plasma Cannon

Energon War Axe: A cruel looking hook headed axe that can easily be mistaken as a glaive or halberd because of the orientation of the head. The axe is used for the more up close and personal encounters, and the blade slowly glows with the energy inside it.

Chain Lash: A weapon gleaned from the days of the Gladiator Pit fights. It is nothing more than a series of cybertonium chain, ended with a large pounding head, almost like a mace or flail.

WEAKNESSES: Contemptor’s size has a detriment to his speed and agility. He isn’t the most agile of Deceptions' in general, as his broad size has to allow for him to carry around his primary weapon.

Other weaknesses are the coolant mechanism on his Plasma Cannon; the piping and connectors are wunshielded to allow for flexibility in combat. The cannon itself drinks down the fuel cells to empty with just six shots, requiring it to be reloaded constantly. Its other weakness is that the coolant system is mounted onto Contemptor’s back, meaning it is harder to hide behind cover, and that a well placed shot could cripple him.

Contemptor’s close combat pistol has a violent tendency to overheat. The pistol fires a repeater shot of three per burst, but as it is a plasma based weapon – its coolant has to be constantly replaced. At longer ranges, the weapon is increasingly inaccurate.

The Energon Axe is one of the many standard issue close combat weapons that Cybertronian’s use, however due to the depletion of Energon – this weapon currently cannot be used for any length of time.

The Chain Lash is a long and entangling weapon. It requires more concentration to utilise the Chain Lash in combat, making its wielder more prone to sneak attacks, or an ambush

SAMPLE POST: Contemptor stalked through the ruins of the factory, the rubble and metal was scattered and broken throughout as grease-like smears marred random locations of both still standing walls, and twisted wrecks of metal and stone. Proof that there once, life existed.

The outpost on the small planetoid was once home to worker bots and Autobot guards, a small ore processing facility aiding the Autobot cause. It was now reduced to a smouldering ruin. The few guards were damaged, in stasis lock, or dead. The greasy smears on the surfaces testament to the fallen as Contemptor forced his foot down hard on the brain-casing of a downed Autobot Guard. The body twitched as he leant his full weight slowly onto the prone Autobot.

There was the slow groaning sound of the metal beginning to buckle under the pressure and the guard let out a moan of pain.

Contemptor’s features broke into a sinister snarl.

“It seems I missed one...I’m getting very sloppy these days....” A cruel guttural sound rose from Contemptor’s throat. The guard slowly realised that Contemptor was laughing.

Holstering the Plasma Cannon against his back, Contemptor reached down and roughly hauled the injured guard from the ground. A ragged, gaping hole in the guard’s shoulder gave Contemptor a welcome grip, one which he exploited fully.

The guard let out a broken scream of agony as Contemptor’s hand forcefully tore through the damaged sensors and receptors in a vice-like grip.

“...Tell me little Auto-brat...why the interest in this desolate rock? “ He sneered as he slammed the injured Autobot into the wall. Energon shot from the Autobot's mouth and landed on Contemptor's cheek-plate, proof that the Autobot's systems were damaged internally.

“I’ll make it painless...all you have to do is...tell!” He forcefully rattled the 'bot against the ruined wall several times, denting its already broken surface. There was still silence as the Autobot glared back in defiance.

'This is becoming tedious...bah wretches...no wonder they are worthless!' He thought to himself. Contemptor battered the damaged Autobot off the wall again and then, seeing an opportunity, used his Chain Lash to begin hanging the hapless warrior using a bent girder as part of the hoist. Contemptor gave a snarl as he hauled down on the chain, the Autobot being strangled and hung. Contemptor began tormenting the Autobot with his Energon Axe, battering the blade off the broken rubble on the ground as the Autobot’s optics widened. Contemptor began to laugh with glee as he drank in the fear in his opponent. He tortured the injured Guard by swiping the axe back and forth over the Dura-Alloy wall, the shrill clang of the metal and the sparks adding to the terror in the poor Autobot. But apart from the wails of terror, the Autobot said nothing.

“...Gr... You Auto-filth are all the same! Hiding all your dirty little secrets! Maybe I need to be more persuasive!?” The temper in his voice began to break as the guard’s silence began to tear away at Contemptor’s resolve. Drawing his arm back as if to throw a punch, he drove the pointed tip of the axe into the Autobot’s abdomen, the sound of tearing metal, alloy, and endo-structure filled the air with the Autobot’s scream of pain. Contemptor began to laugh with the insanity of a madman as the butchering took over. He thrust his arm upwards, tearing the Autobot open, sending sparks and energon flying, as its' screams filtered into broken static crackles.

Contemptor watched with a twisted grin on his face, as the remaining life-force of his prey, poured into the rubble. With a final swing, there was a metallic thud as the doomed guard's head fell to the ground. He re-holstered his axe and watched absently at the still twitching torso of the Autobot. With a look that mixed contempt with hate, he smashed his fist into the exposed spark casing of his victim and tore it from the shattered body.

His thirst for slaughter finally sated, Contemptor began to wipe the splattered energon from his face; slowly dragging his hand down past his mouth he casually tasted the life-force of his lacklustre foe as he began to retrieve his Chain Lash, and his prize.

++"Contemptor to Shuttle... I await extraction..."++

The shuttle came into view, and as Contemptor boarded looking at his grisly trophy, his final words echoed around the ruined factory...

"There are no prisoners...only trophies!...ALL HAIL MEGATRON!!"


Looks good, he is approved with one change. Bring his height down to 35'. You can start him on the Ultrax in orbit over Earth. Make the correction to the app and post him in the fanmade profiles forum.
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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Necessary Evil » Fri Sep 30, 2011 5:53 am

Motto: "Always looking for a new motto."
Weapon: Chomping Rotor Blades
Name: Blades
Allegiance: Autobot
Sub-group: Protectobots
Function: Air Support
Alt. mode: Bell UH-1Y Venom Helicopter
Weapons: Photon Pistol, Twin Armour Piercing “smart” Rocket Launchers, Rotor Blades
Height: 26 ft / 7.93 m
Quote: "War's a dirty game—and I'm a dirty player!”


Strength: 7
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 7
Endurance: 5
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 5
Rank: 5

Profile: [FROM: Hot Spot, Protectobot Leader TO: Autobot High Command,
RE: Request Dismissal of Internal Affairs Investigation #455.43]
I don't believe the incident in question [Cross Reference: Emergency Request #455.43, Iacon District] requires any further review. Yes, Blades did act with lethal force, but I believe he did so only out of necessity and completely within the boundaries of his duty. As always, he performed his primary air support function well. At the moment in question, he saw that he had to act decisively to save the innocent mechanoids in the market area, so he did so. True, he did take the unorthodox route of eviscerating the targets with his rotor blades in hand-to-hand combat, but it's no secret that Blades prefers one-on-one confrontations to long-range air attacks. Since the situation didn't specifically call for aerial tactics, I see no reason why Blades should be punished for acting in this fashion. The fact that he finds attacking from a distance unsporting compared to his “street fighting” techniques has never interfered with him doing his job, and he's always been a hard-working, enthusiastic, and loyal trooper—I can't ask for anything more from him.

Abilities: Blades has above-average strength and somewhat above-average intelligence. He's very good at his job, but he'd always rather exercise his unconventional “street fighting” style than attack from above. It's been said that he'd rather use his rotors to slash opponents than fly, and I can't argue that. In helicopter mode, he travels at 400 mph for up to 1,200 miles. In both modes, he's armed with two launchers that fire “smart” rockets; these rockets seek their targets based on digitally encoded images that they can record on the battlefield. In robot mode, he wields a photon pistol that fires intense beams of light. Whenever possible, Blades detaches his rotors for use in hand-to-hand combat.

Holomatter Avatar: A handsome man of about twenty-five attired in full helicopter pilot uniform, red and white dominating the colour scheme. He exhibits a fair complexion, sprightly blue eyes, and wavy, though tousled, dark brown hair. His hands are covered in strips of sports tape, suggesting the young man is involved in the sport of boxing or, perhaps, a form of martial art.

Weaknesses: Strong winds greatly interfere with Blades' flight in helicopter mode. Because of the punishment he puts his rotors through, they're prone to chips and fractures that require frequent maintenance.

Sample Post:

Corridors Outside The Training Facility

Having acquired only minor repairs after his involvement in the Autobots' previous mission on Earth, Blades had made the training facility his next intended destination. His gait was inflamed with speed and aggression, reflecting the bitterness of his mood. It was widely regarded as an extremely hazardous task, one where combat was inevitable and an unfortunate outcome lingered in every event. It promised all of those things to the Autobots and Blades could barely govern his enthusiasm; he couldn't wait to destroy the first Decepticon to be caught in his vision.

But nothing happened.

Yes, a few laser blasts and even a missile or two were directed at him, but that seemed to be the extent of the attacks he came up against. Not once was he opposed by a Decepticon eager to get physical and let his fists do the talking. Not once was Blades presented with even half an opportunity to take somebody's cranial unit off. Given the location and its residents it was ludicrous he encountered no action. He cursed a couple of times quietly.

Blades banished the unfavourable thoughts from his mind as the entrance to the training facility came into view. If anything, he had found the perfect place for his frustration. He crumpled his actuators into compact balls and accelerated his already brisk pace. He entered the training facility.
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Skill: 8

Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby UltraSteel » Sun Oct 02, 2011 12:48 pm

Motto: "Just Win."
Weapon: Semi-Automatic Sonic Boomer Gun
Sandstorm

Allegiance:Autobots
Function:Desert Tactics, Warrior
Alternate Modes: CH-53E Super Stallion
Weapons:Firing Cannons, and two rifles attached to his back.
Height: 28 Ft/ 8.53 M
Quote: “If there's a storm, I'm in it.”


Strength:6
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity:5
Speed:7
Endurance:5
Courage:8
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:6
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:8
Rank:


Profile:Sandstorm is one of the different kinds of bots you see in a Autobot. Although he is a Autobot, he specializes better in a different kind of atmosphere, an atmosphere where most humans would dare not go because of the extremities of the weather. The Desert. And anything to do with Storms, he is anxious to get involved. This is the feature that makes Sandstorm so unique.


Abilities:Sandstorm blends right in with the desert, he can fly up to 250-270 miles per hour while transformed into a CH-53E Super Stallion (Helicopter). He carries around a couple Cannon Launchers with cannons as bullets, and as a side arm, a couple of armed rifles.

Weaknesses:Sandstorm equips a lot of unique skills, but he lacks the skill of accuracy, mainly long-distance shots. He's not what you would call, "The Sniper," Autobot. He also has quite an ego, from his parents, that gets to him and almost makes Sandstorm rush the situation instead of planning, waiting, and then attacking.

Sample Post: What a simple mission. This was Sandstorm's big shot, his moment to shine. He had been sent to destroy a few decepticons, thought to be hiding out by a nearby Desert in Africa. He had been waiting for this opportunity to kick Decepticon butt ever since the war started! And now he finally was able to do so. The only difficulty he had learned about, was hearing about how he was the only one who could control the sandstorm. Which meant he was alone, for the mission. Sandstorm thought in his mind, that this would be his one shot, to prove to the Autobots, that he wasn't just a bonus to the crew.

Since his alt mode was a CH-53E Super Stallion Chopper, he had no problem getting to the Desert, it was as simple as walking down the human's roads. Now it was time to focus, he needed to stay alert to anything unusual around the Deserts of Africa. Mainly one in particular, the Sahara Desert. And man, was this Desert Big. Sandstorm was sure that it stretched over a few countries. This mission, just got three times as hard. Then he spotted something, something that caught his eye.

Sandstorm could tell and discover when a Decepticon was hiding, but it seemed as if not many could tell, right as he approached a few massive sized insects, the insects suddenly transformed in big ugly Insecticons. But Sandstorm was still unsure of what was happening. He saw no source of energon, no sign of Megatron and certainly no sign of any other Autobots or Humans. Nonetheless, the Insecticons, attacked, and they attacked like Wild Beasts hungry for meat. He quickly shot a cannon at the one near his middle of his body. Now with 3 Cannons left in his Cannon rifle, he pulled out the Sandstorm Rifle, the hand-me-down, only accessible in the Desert rifles. One of the bots decided to transform back into a scary and ugly looking spider. He shot the rifle at it's legs, but nothing happened, like the shot just bruised him. He reloaded, and instead fired at his head. It seemed to work, because then the bot was begging for help, then he blasted the remains with his Cannons. He then looked at the last Incepticon, dreading to fight Sandstorm, he surrendered, and offered to switch sides.

Sandstorm looked him right in the eye, and yelled, "You want to JOIN US? You should of made that clear when the war started! You Decepticon Punk..." Sandstorm pulled out the Desert Rifle and while the Decepticon was begging like a little kid wanting a toy, and shot the Insecticon right at his forehead. He collapsed, with parts of him disconnection and ejecting from his body. The mission was over, and it was time to report the news back to Optimus Prime. Hopefully they could Sandstorm seriously now, and possibly put him onto the main crew, the crew with most of the action.

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Re: New NEW Character Applications

Postby Ember » Sun Oct 02, 2011 3:39 pm

Motto: "I'm not psycho...I just like psychotic things."
Plaything wrote:Name: Blades
Allegiance: Autobot
Sub-group: Protectobots
Function: Air Support
Alt. mode: Bell UH-1Y Venom Helicopter
Weapons: Photon Pistol, Twin Armour Piercing “smart” Rocket Launchers, Rotor Blades
Height: 26 ft / 7.93 m
Quote: "War's a dirty game—and I'm a dirty player!”


Strength: 7
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 7
Endurance: 5
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 5
Rank: 5

Profile: [FROM: Hot Spot, Protectobot Leader TO: Autobot High Command,
RE: Request Dismissal of Internal Affairs Investigation #455.43]
I don't believe the incident in question [Cross Reference: Emergency Request #455.43, Iacon District] requires any further review. Yes, Blades did act with lethal force, but I believe he did so only out of necessity and completely within the boundaries of his duty. As always, he performed his primary air support function well. At the moment in question, he saw that he had to act decisively to save the innocent mechanoids in the market area, so he did so. True, he did take the unorthodox route of eviscerating the targets with his rotor blades in hand-to-hand combat, but it's no secret that Blades prefers one-on-one confrontations to long-range air attacks. Since the situation didn't specifically call for aerial tactics, I see no reason why Blades should be punished for acting in this fashion. The fact that he finds attacking from a distance unsporting compared to his “street fighting” techniques has never interfered with him doing his job, and he's always been a hard-working, enthusiastic, and loyal trooper—I can't ask for anything more from him.

Abilities: Blades has above-average strength and somewhat above-average intelligence. He's very good at his job, but he'd always rather exercise his unconventional “street fighting” style than attack from above. It's been said that he'd rather use his rotors to slash opponents than fly, and I can't argue that. In helicopter mode, he travels at 400 mph for up to 1,200 miles. In both modes, he's armed with two launchers that fire “smart” rockets; these rockets seek their targets based on digitally encoded images that they can record on the battlefield. In robot mode, he wields a photon pistol that fires intense beams of light. Whenever possible, Blades detaches his rotors for use in hand-to-hand combat.

Holomatter Avatar: A handsome man of about twenty-five attired in full helicopter pilot uniform, red and white dominating the colour scheme. He exhibits a fair complexion, sprightly blue eyes, and wavy, though tousled, dark brown hair. His hands are covered in strips of sports tape, suggesting the young man is involved in the sport of boxing or, perhaps, a form of martial art.

Weaknesses: Strong winds greatly interfere with Blades' flight in helicopter mode. Because of the punishment he puts his rotors through, they're prone to chips and fractures that require frequent maintenance.

Sample Post:

Corridors Outside The Training Facility

Having acquired only minor repairs after his involvement in the Autobots' previous mission on Earth, Blades had made the training facility his next intended destination. His gait was inflamed with speed and aggression, reflecting the bitterness of his mood. It was widely regarded as an extremely hazardous task, one where combat was inevitable and an unfortunate outcome lingered in every event. It promised all of those things to the Autobots and Blades could barely govern his enthusiasm; he couldn't wait to destroy the first Decepticon to be caught in his vision.

But nothing happened.

Yes, a few laser blasts and even a missile or two were directed at him, but that seemed to be the extent of the attacks he came up against. Not once was he opposed by a Decepticon eager to get physical and let his fists do the talking. Not once was Blades presented with even half an opportunity to take somebody's cranial unit off. Given the location and its residents it was ludicrous he encountered no action. He cursed a couple of times quietly.

Blades banished the unfavourable thoughts from his mind as the entrance to the training facility came into view. If anything, he had found the perfect place for his frustration. He crumpled his actuators into compact balls and accelerated his already brisk pace. He entered the training facility.


Approved. You might not have anyone to RP with in the training facility. Just about everyone was called away for a mission.
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