The Energon Pub

Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:6
Intelligence:5
Dexterity:9
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:5
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.
(ok i think i got it)

No Sigs in RPG Forums -Devastron

Edit:
On second thought, lets scratch this one from the application list. For now, anyway. Everyone can ignore this post, now. Any mods or admins are perfectly welcome to delete this post if they feel so inclined.

BLACKBIRD wrote:Ok, second attempt?

NAME: BLACKBIRD
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Intelligence/Assassin
Alt. mode: SR-71 Blackbird ( black in color)
Weapons: Robot Mode: Quantum Lasers, On both arms (one each side, just above the wrist, ejects out and retracts), High Power Sniper Laser Gun with scope(contains, inferred, x-ray, night vision, thermal), Sword, hangs on the left hip about 10’ in length ( harden Cybertronian metal and very sharp), Energon dagger, under left wrist, a cable, with connectors, for hacking into computer terminals or other robots. Electronic warfare, Communications jamming, Radar.
Flight Mode: 2 Quantum Laser guns on both sides midway by the cockpit, Quantum Missiles on both sides of the underbelly below the cockpit.
Special Abilities: Expert in computer hacking, guerrilla warfare, sniper (very deadly)
Height: 24 feet/7.3 meters
Quote: “ I WORK ALONE.......STAY OUT OF MY WAY!!!!! “

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 1
RANK: Requesting a rank of 0

Profile: Blackbird is not well like by his fellow Decepticons, even Starscream cringes at the thought or by sight. Used as a last resort when all other attempts has failed to get the mission done. He likes the challenge of doing the impossible. You see no facial expressions, very professional about his work.

Abilities: Able to hack into any computers, retrieve the information and put a virus to destroy it. Very deadly Assassin. Sword, is very sharp, it can cut thru 5’ of any material with out a scratch on it. Engeron dagger, is used for cutting the throats of his targets, about 6” long and only be used for 5 minutes at a time or it will melt. The equipment he has for Electric warfare/Communication jamming can block almost any thing. In Vehicle mode, top speed Mach 3+.

Weaknesses: He does not trust anyone except the Leader of the Decepticons and works alone.

Sample Post:Decepticon Command Center

Blackbird was ordered to the Command Center, for what reason, unknown.
Blackbird, standing about 20’ from Megatron, sitting on his chair, Starscream beside him, getting very nervous at the sight of Blackbird.

Blackbird was given the order to get information on where the whereabouts of the Autobots new base is located and defenses, then report back to Megatron with his findings. Also, if he had the chance, kill any Autobot, except Prime.

Blackbird nod in agreement, did an about face and left. Once he got outside, he transformed and headed off to the Moon Base 1 where the Autobots were at, setting up his electronic jamming and communtication jammer.

Moon Base 1

Blackbird arrived at Moon Base 1, had a little trouble getting thru the defenses but that was par for the course. Transformed, move around very silently looking for the Main Frame Computer or somehere he could access it. Had to stop and start his movement duded to other Autobots going from place to place but finally he got to a dark room that no one was using. Finding a computer treminal, took his cable from under his left arm and attached it to the computer input jack, got passed the firewalls protecting it, entered the correct user name and password. Found the information that Megatron wanted, downloaded it to his internal memory, exited out of that file and put a virus to destroy it, then all of the sudden alarms went off and a booming voice came over the PA speaker “COMPUTER BREACH! COMPUTER BREACH! ALL AUTOBOTS TO THE MAINFRAME!” Unknown to Blackbird, the Auotbots beefed up their Mainframe, He grabs his sword, prepares to use it, walks towards the exit, gets to exit, doors opens, one Autobot standing their and slices the Autobot in half. Blackbird looks at the Autobot with no remorse for what he has done, looks both ways and goes right, finds an exit door to the outside, opens it, runs out, transforms, engaging the radar jamming and comunication jammer, heads back to Cybertron.

I hope I did this better this time. Edited the parts out with the cloaking devise and corrected the sample post. Now it should make sense.

- You still need the -10 stat penalty for having 2 functions. While sometimes assassination and intelligence missions go together, they certainly don't have to.

- There is a -4 stat penalty for radar.

- I think a -4 stat penalty is in order for the communication jamming ability. That can be quite a powerful ability and one that only the likes of Soundwave and Blaster probably have.

- Just so you know, an accuracy of 7 isn't really sniper material. An accuracy of 7 means you are a good shot. The real sharpshooter or sniper types in the game have at least an accuracy of 8, and most of them are higher.

- A charisma of 1 doesn't mean others fear your character, it means your character doesn't get along with any others. This will more than likely cause them to have a strong dislike for him. Starscream wouldn't be shaking in fear, but he might look on him in disgust.

- Very few Transformers have visited Earth yet, so you will need to take some Cybertronian Blackbird equivalent type of alternate mode.

- I still think you are trying to do too much with this one character. There are reasons why most Transformers just have one straightforward function. If you try to do too many things you end up not doing any of them well.

Name: Havok.
Function: Warrior.
Allegiance: Decepticons.
Sub-group: Corrupticons.
Alt. Mode: Cerberus (3 headed dog like creature)
Weapons: Alt Mode: Plasma-breath.
Robot Mode: Energon Scythe, Twin Shock Maces, Rail Gun.
Height: 8.35m/27.5ft
Quote: "The price of existence is eternal vigilance"


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank: 5

Profile: Cold, calculating, clinical and brutally efficient in what he does, Havok is another member of the Decepticon army who achieved almost legendary status as a gladiator before joining the war and pledging his services to the Decepticon cause. Fully commited to the Decepticon ideals, Havok wants nothing more than to wipe out any and all Autobots he crosses paths with, so the Decepticons can rise to their rightful place as rulers of Cybertron.

Havok's loyalty to the Decepticons is only topped by his loyalty to his fellow Corrupticons, all of whom he has the greatest respect for, though he would never let them know. If the situation arose, he wouldn't hesitate to put himself in a position to take the fall for any one of them, this fact they do know, and this combined with his dedication, discipline and ability in battle means that they too have the greatest respect for him.

His constantly focused and profesional manner makes him ideally suited to being a leader, possibly of the Corrupticons, and many is the time that Decepticon conscripts follow him into battle, whether he wants them to or not. However, it is something that Havok doesn't particularly desire, and he certainly doesn't see himself as any more of a candidate to lead the Corrupticons than his fellow team members, he's quite contented doing his job as part of one of the most feared teams within the Decepticon ranks.

Abilities: Havok is equally proficient in both modes of rendering Autobots inactive, though he prefers to dish out pain in his robot mode. In his Cerberus mode, he possess the ability to spit molten balls of plasma from any of his 3 heads over a distance of about 50 meters, and anything unfortunate to get close to him gets treated to blows from his 2 front paws, or bites from any of his 3 heads.

When in robot mode, he primarily likes to use a huge Energon Scythe to dismember whoever gets in his way, which he wields with frightening effiency. If he ever is disarmed of his Sycthe, his backup comes in the form of 2 small Shock Maces that can cause shockwaves to resonate through anything they come into contact with, or if the situation calls for it, a Rail Gun that comes with 3 slugs per clip, though due to it's often inaccurate nature, Havok tends to stick with his melee weapons.

Weaknesses: While his loyalty to his fellow team members is greatly appreciated by them, it does sometimes lead to Havok putting himself in unnecessary danger, and his legendary endurance doesn't always save him from taking massive damage. Also, his preference to remaining in his robot mode decreases his mobility on occasion, leaving him exposed to ranged attackers.

optimal optimus prime1 wrote:Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:6
Intelligence:5
Dexterity:9
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:5
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred twords optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.
(ok i think i got it)

I still don't feel comfortable with all of the grammar and spelling mistakes in your application.

Davekma wrote:Name: Havok.
Function: Warrior.
Allegiance: Decepticons.
Sub-group: Corrupticons.
Alt. Mode: Cerberus (3 headed dog like creature)
Weapons: Alt Mode: Plasma-breath.
Robot Mode: Energon Scythe, Twin Shock Maces, Rail Gun.
Height: 8.35m/27.5ft
Quote: "The price of existence is eternal vigilance"


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank: 5

Profile: Cold, calculating, clinical and brutally efficient in what he does, Havok is another member of the Decepticon army who achieved almost legendary status as a gladiator before joining the war and pledging his services to the Decepticon cause. Fully commited to the Decepticon ideals, Havok wants nothing more than to wipe out any and all Autobots he crosses paths with, so the Decepticons can rise to their rightful place as rulers of Cybertron.

Havok's loyalty to the Decepticons is only topped by his loyalty to his fellow Corrupticons, all of whom he has the greatest respect for, though he would never let them know. If the situation arose, he wouldn't hesitate to put himself in a position to take the fall for any one of them, this fact they do know, and this combined with his dedication, discipline and ability in battle means that they too have the greatest respect for him.

His constantly focused and profesional manner makes him ideally suited to being a leader, possibly of the Corrupticons, and many is the time that Decepticon conscripts follow him into battle, whether he wants them to or not. However, it is something that Havok doesn't particularly desire, and he certainly doesn't see himself as any more of a candidate to lead the Corrupticons than his fellow team members, he's quite contented doing his job as part of one of the most feared teams within the Decepticon ranks.

Abilities: Havok is equally proficient in both modes of rendering Autobots inactive, though he prefers to dish out pain in his robot mode. In his Cerberus mode, he possess the ability to spit molten balls of plasma from any of his 3 heads over a distance of about 50 meters, and anything unfortunate to get close to him gets treated to blows from his 2 front paws, or bites from any of his 3 heads.

When in robot mode, he primarily likes to use a huge Energon Scythe to dismember whoever gets in his way, which he wields with frightening effiency. If he ever is disarmed of his Sycthe, his backup comes in the form of 2 small Shock Maces that can cause shockwaves to resonate through anything they come into contact with, or if the situation calls for it, a Rail Gun that comes with 3 slugs per clip, though due to it's often inaccurate nature, Havok tends to stick with his melee weapons.

Weaknesses: While his loyalty to his fellow team members is greatly appreciated by them, it does sometimes lead to Havok putting himself in unnecessary danger, and his legendary endurance doesn't always save him from taking massive damage. Also, his preference to remaining in his robot mode decreases his mobility on occasion, leaving him exposed to ranged attackers.

Remove the bits about that describe him and his abilities as legendary. The Corrupticons are powerful, but I wouldn't put them at legendary, especially when the Decepticons have many other heavy hitters. I will waive the need for a sample post since you are a pretty regular poster.

Well I was going for legendary in the arena, but never mind.

Name: Havok.
Allegiance: Decepticons.
Sub-group: Corrupticons.
Alt. Mode: Cerberus (3 headed dog like creature)
Weapons: Alt Mode: Plasma-breath.
Robot Mode: Energon Scythe, Twin Shock Maces, Rail Gun.
Height: 8.35m/27.5ft
Quote: "Those who don't fear me, don't know me"

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank: 5

Profile: Cold, calculating, clinical and brutally efficient in what he does, Havok is another member of the Decepticon army who gained noteriety and came to be recognised when fighting as a gladiator before the war. When the war started, it didn't take long before he joined the Corrupticons and pledged his services to the Decepticon cause. Fully commited to the Decepticon ideals, Havok wants nothing more than to wipe out any and all Autobots he crosses paths with, so the Decepticons can rise to their rightful place as rulers of Cybertron.

Havok's loyalty to the Decepticons is only topped by his loyalty to his fellow Corrupticons, all of whom he has the greatest respect for, though he would never let them know. If the situation arose, he wouldn't hesitate to put himself in a position to take the fall for any one of them, this fact they do know, and this combined with his dedication, discipline and ability in battle means that they too have the greatest respect for him.

His constantly focused and profesional manner makes him ideally suited to being a leader, and many is the time that Decepticon conscripts follow him into battle, whether he wants them to or not. However, it is something that Havok doesn't particularly desire, and he certainly doesn't see himself as any more of a candidate to lead than his fellow team members, he's quite contented doing his job as part of one of the most feared teams within the Decepticon ranks.

Abilities: Havok is equally proficient in both modes of rendering Autobots inactive, though he prefers to dish out pain in his robot mode. In his Cerberus mode, he possess the ability to spit molten balls of plasma from any of his 3 heads over a distance of about 50 meters, and anything unfortunate to get close to him gets treated to blows from his 2 front paws, or bites from any of his 3 heads.

When in robot mode, he primarily likes to use a huge Energon Scythe to dismember whoever gets in his way, which he wields with frightening effiency. If he ever is disarmed of his Sycthe, his backup comes in the form of 2 small Shock Maces that can cause shockwaves to resonate through anything they come into contact with, or if the situation calls for it, a Rail Gun that comes with 3 slugs per clip, though due to it's often inaccurate nature, Havok tends to stick with his melee weapons.

Weaknesses: While his loyalty to his fellow team members is greatly appreciated by them, it does sometimes lead to Havok putting himself in unnecessary danger, and his high level endurance doesn't always save him from taking massive damage. Also, his preference to remaining in his robot mode decreases his mobility on occasion, leaving him exposed to ranged attackers.

Davekma wrote:Well I was going for legendary in the arena, but never mind.

Name: Havok.
Allegiance: Decepticons.
Sub-group: Corrupticons.
Alt. Mode: Cerberus (3 headed dog like creature)
Weapons: Alt Mode: Plasma-breath.
Robot Mode: Energon Scythe, Twin Shock Maces, Rail Gun.
Height: 8.35m/27.5ft
Quote: "Those who don't fear me, don't know me"

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank: 5

Profile: Cold, calculating, clinical and brutally efficient in what he does, Havok is another member of the Decepticon army who gained noteriety and came to be recognised when fighting as a gladiator before the war. When the war started, it didn't take long before he joined the Corrupticons and pledged his services to the Decepticon cause. Fully commited to the Decepticon ideals, Havok wants nothing more than to wipe out any and all Autobots he crosses paths with, so the Decepticons can rise to their rightful place as rulers of Cybertron.

Havok's loyalty to the Decepticons is only topped by his loyalty to his fellow Corrupticons, all of whom he has the greatest respect for, though he would never let them know. If the situation arose, he wouldn't hesitate to put himself in a position to take the fall for any one of them, this fact they do know, and this combined with his dedication, discipline and ability in battle means that they too have the greatest respect for him.

His constantly focused and profesional manner makes him ideally suited to being a leader, and many is the time that Decepticon conscripts follow him into battle, whether he wants them to or not. However, it is something that Havok doesn't particularly desire, and he certainly doesn't see himself as any more of a candidate to lead than his fellow team members, he's quite contented doing his job as part of one of the most feared teams within the Decepticon ranks.

Abilities: Havok is equally proficient in both modes of rendering Autobots inactive, though he prefers to dish out pain in his robot mode. In his Cerberus mode, he possess the ability to spit molten balls of plasma from any of his 3 heads over a distance of about 50 meters, and anything unfortunate to get close to him gets treated to blows from his 2 front paws, or bites from any of his 3 heads.

When in robot mode, he primarily likes to use a huge Energon Scythe to dismember whoever gets in his way, which he wields with frightening effiency. If he ever is disarmed of his Sycthe, his backup comes in the form of 2 small Shock Maces that can cause shockwaves to resonate through anything they come into contact with, or if the situation calls for it, a Rail Gun that comes with 3 slugs per clip, though due to it's often inaccurate nature, Havok tends to stick with his melee weapons.

Weaknesses: While his loyalty to his fellow team members is greatly appreciated by them, it does sometimes lead to Havok putting himself in unnecessary danger, and his high level endurance doesn't always save him from taking massive damage. Also, his preference to remaining in his robot mode decreases his mobility on occasion, leaving him exposed to ranged attackers.

I know what you were trying to do, but the term legendary has been thrown around a bit too much lately for my liking.

Approved. I figure he can start out in the Polyhex battle with the other Corrupticons, which I am guessing is what you were planning on.

Devastron wrote:
- Very few Transformers have visited Earth yet, so you will need to take some Cybertronian Blackbird equivalent type of alternate mode.

- I still think you are trying to do too much with this one character. There are reasons why most Transformers just have one straightforward function. If you try to do too many things you end up not doing any of them well.

Ok, I'll work on it some more. I was thinking about trying to make 2 characters that work together to do what I was trying to do with one. Once I get it figured out, I'll post it!

Name: Patchwork
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Medic
Alt. mode: V-22 Osprey
Weapons: Robot form-Twin Ion Pistols and Vibro Knife. V-22 form - 2 Ion Guns.
Special Abilities: Ability to create multiple holograms of large scale, Radar.
Height: 25 feet / 7.6 meters
Quote: Can’t you learn to dodge? Ok you’re patched and I’m out of here!

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 4
ACCURACY: 4
MELEE: 2
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 4
RANK: 5

Ability: Top speed of 316 mph in fixed wing mode and 86 mph in hover mode. Able to create multiple holograms in order to disguise himself and confuse an enemy. Carries an array of medic equipment and is strong enough to airlift injured out of danger.

Weakness: The rotation mechanism for his engines a temperamental trapping him in fixed or hover mode. Only lightly armoured in any form. Suffers from memory loss, can sometimes temporarily be disabled because of mental instability, something he hides carefully.

Profile: Patchwork is a white, green and red Autobot leading many to think that his name comes from the patchy paint job he suffers from instead of the reality. Both the memories and physical construction of Patchwork are the source of his name. Created a Neutral, neither Autobot nor Decepticon but with parts salvaged from the wrecks of both sides giving him a rather unusual internal construction. After growing tired of savaging a living and having several unpleasant run ins with the Decepticons he joined the ranks of the Autobots as a sharpshooter called Pitchhit. He fought with distinction until he was severally wounded, nearly destroyed, in a raid on a Decepticon outpost with his unit.
During the mission they succeeded in capturing the outpost but his injuries required immediate attention, through the efforts of his comrades he was saved but has never been the same since. A near complete rebuild combined with lack of time, non-standard parts, inexperience with the operation and his own internal oddities created physical and more importantly mental problems in the form of memory loss and remnants of things from the new circuits. His personality changed and he lost his perfect aim, depressed he quit and wondered aimlessly for a time until an encounter with the Autobot Ratchet showed him a new path in life. Revitalised he dove into it with a vengeance.
Patchwork is sarcastic and holds to his opinions fiercely making him somewhat abrasive to work with. He is also reluctant to place himself into the firing line for fear of making his condition worse, this come off as making him seem uncaring of the lives of his comrades.

Sample Post: Random Battleground
Energy blasts streaked through the air and the sounds of battle filled the area as the band of Autobots hunkered down into the cover they had found and were returning fire at the attacking Decepticons. 3 of them were shooting while the 4th was hovering over a wounded Autobot with an emergency medkit. On a signal the 3 defenders ducked back behind cover as 2 airborne Autobots plastered the Decepticon positions hard. As the two pronged assaults continued another sound intruded from the direction the friendly jets came from. Coming in fast and low a duel propeller aircraft in white, red and green powered in.

With the others distracting the attackers Patchwork was able to safely land and rushed over to the damaged Cybertronian as he started to scan him.

“He’s taken several hits from a seeker.” The patients’ companion informed Patchwork quickly getting a annoyed look in response.

“ I of course couldn’t tell that thank you. It’s not like those same Seekers haven’t taken shots at me.” He replied somewhat bitingly causing the other Autobot to draw back a bit.

Over the next several minutes the medic worked on the fallen Autobot slapping several high tech devices onto him among other things while muttering to himself in an annoyed tone. Eventually getting annoyed looks from the surrounding Autobots.

“ Ok, time to get out of here” Patch said as he finished up.

“ What about your friends?” The other Autobot asked as he pointed up towards the where the Autobot flyers were heavily engaged.

“ They got themselves into it, they should be able to get themselves out again.” Patchwork commented with a shrug before transforming and lowering his rear door.

“ Load him up! I’m getting the hell out of here but I might as well take him along with me.” Patchwork said turning the Autobots angry look into a confused one as he loaded his companion into the VTOL aircraft.

As soon as his new cargo was onboard he took off and headed out of the area as top speed.

shad4c wrote:Name: Patchwork
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Medic
Alt. mode: V-22 Osprey
Weapons: Robot form-Twin Ion Pistols and Vibro Knife. V-22 form - 2 Ion Guns.
Special Abilities: Ability to create multiple holograms of large scale, Radar.
Height: 25 feet / 7.6 meters
Quote: Can’t you learn to dodge? Ok you’re patched and I’m out of here!

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 4
ACCURACY: 4
MELEE: 2
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 4
RANK: 5

Ability: Top speed of 316 mph in fixed wing mode and 86 mph in hover mode. Able to create multiple holograms in order to disguise himself and confuse an enemy. Carries an array of medic equipment and is strong enough to airlift injured out of danger.

Weakness: The rotation mechanism for his engines a temperamental trapping him in fixed or hover mode. Only lightly armoured in any form. Suffers from memory loss, can sometimes temporarily be disabled because of mental instability, something he hides carefully.

Profile: Patchwork is a white, green and red Autobot leading many to think that his name comes from the patchy paint job he suffers from instead of the reality. Both the memories and physical construction of Patchwork are the source of his name. Created a Neutral, neither Autobot nor Decepticon but with parts salvaged from the wrecks of both sides giving him a rather unusual internal construction. After growing tired of savaging a living and having several unpleasant run ins with the Decepticons he joined the ranks of the Autobots as a sharpshooter called Pitchhit. He fought with distinction until he was severally wounded, nearly destroyed, in a raid on a Decepticon outpost with his unit.
During the mission they succeeded in capturing the outpost but his injuries required immediate attention, through the efforts of his comrades he was saved but has never been the same since. A near complete rebuild combined with lack of time, non-standard parts, inexperience with the operation and his own internal oddities created physical and more importantly mental problems in the form of memory loss and remnants of things from the new circuits. His personality changed and he lost his perfect aim, depressed he quit and wondered aimlessly for a time until an encounter with the Autobot Ratchet showed him a new path in life. Revitalised he dove into it with a vengeance.
Patchwork is sarcastic and holds to his opinions fiercely making him somewhat abrasive to work with. He is also reluctant to place himself into the firing line for fear of making his condition worse, this come off as making him seem uncaring of the lives of his comrades.

Sample Post: Random Battleground
Energy blasts streaked through the air and the sounds of battle filled the area as the band of Autobots hunkered down into the cover they had found and were returning fire at the attacking Decepticons. 3 of them were shooting while the 4th was hovering over a wounded Autobot with an emergency medkit. On a signal the 3 defenders ducked back behind cover as 2 airborne Autobots plastered the Decepticon positions hard. As the two pronged assaults continued another sound intruded from the direction the friendly jets came from. Coming in fast and low a duel propeller aircraft in white, red and green powered in.

With the others distracting the attackers Patchwork was able to safely land and rushed over to the damaged Cybertronian as he started to scan him.

“He’s taken several hits from a seeker.” The patients’ companion informed Patchwork quickly getting a annoyed look in response.

“ I of course couldn’t tell that thank you. It’s not like those same Seekers haven’t taken shots at me.” He replied somewhat bitingly causing the other Autobot to draw back a bit.

Over the next several minutes the medic worked on the fallen Autobot slapping several high tech devices onto him among other things while muttering to himself in an annoyed tone. Eventually getting annoyed looks from the surrounding Autobots.

“ Ok, time to get out of here” Patch said as he finished up.

“ What about your friends?” The other Autobot asked as he pointed up towards the where the Autobot flyers were heavily engaged.

“ They got themselves into it, they should be able to get themselves out again.” Patchwork commented with a shrug before transforming and lowering his rear door.

“ Load him up! I’m getting the hell out of here but I might as well take him along with me.” Patchwork said turning the Autobots angry look into a confused one as he loaded his companion into the VTOL aircraft.

As soon as his new cargo was onboard he took off and headed out of the area as top speed.

Looks pretty good, just a couple of really minor things. If you could format it to be like the other profiles, basically with the profile part right after the stats, then abilities and then weaknesses. We like to keep things in the same format here for convenience.

Most of the Autobots haven't been to Earth yet, so if you could give him a cybertronian version of that alternate mode, that would be good.

With the profile as it is now you are only using 70 out of 75 stat points available. You aren't required to used them all if you don't want to, I just wanted to let you know that you do have 5 more points you can assign if you want.

Make those little changes and post it again and I will approve it.

Name: Patchwork
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Medic
Alt. mode: X-54 Cybertronian VTOL.
Weapons: Robot form-Twin Ion Pistols and Vibro Knife. X-52 form - 2 Ion Guns.
Special Abilities: Ability to create multiple holograms of large scale, Low fuel consumption, Radar.
Height: 25 feet / 7.6 meters
Quote: Can’t you learn to dodge? Ok you’re patched and I’m out of here!

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 4
ACCURACY: 4
MELEE: 2
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 4
RANK: 5

Profile: Patchwork is a white, green and red Autobot leading many to think that his name comes from the patchy paint job he suffers from instead of the reality. Both the memories and physical construction of Patchwork are the source of his name. Created a Neutral, neither Autobot nor Decepticon but with parts salvaged from the wrecks of both sides giving him a rather unusual internal construction. After growing tired of savaging a living and having several unpleasant run ins with the Decepticons he joined the ranks of the Autobots as a sharpshooter called Pitchhit. He fought with distinction until he was severally wounded, nearly destroyed, in a raid on a Decepticon outpost with his unit.
During the mission they succeeded in capturing the outpost but his injuries required immediate attention, through the efforts of his comrades he was saved but has never been the same since. A near complete rebuild combined with lack of time, non-standard parts, inexperience with the operation and his own internal oddities created physical and more importantly mental problems in the form of memory loss and remnants of things from the new circuits. His personality changed and he lost his perfect aim, depressed he quit and wondered aimlessly for a time until an encounter with the Autobot Ratchet showed him a new path in life. Revitalised he dove into it with a vengeance.
Patchwork is sarcastic and holds to his opinions fiercely making him somewhat abrasive to work with. He is also reluctant to place himself into the firing line for fear of making his condition worse, this come off as making him seem uncaring of the lives of his comrades.

Ability: Top speed of 316 mph in fixed wing mode and 86mph in hover mode. Able to create multiple holograms in order to disguise himself and confuse an enemy. Carries an array of medic equipment and is strong enough to airlift injured out of danger.

Weakness: The rotation mechanism for his engines a temperamental trapping him in fixed or hover mode. Only lightly armoured in any form. Suffers from memory loss, can sometimes temporarily be disabled because of mental instability, something he hides carefully.

Sample Post: Random Battleground
Energy blasts streaked through the air and the sounds of battle filled the area as the band of Autobots hunkered down into the cover they had found and were returning fire at the attacking Decepticons. 3 of them were shooting while the 4th was hovering over a wounded Autobot with an emergency medkit. On a signal the 3 defenders ducked back behind cover as 2 airborne Autobots plastered the Decepticon positions hard. As the two pronged assaults continued another sound intruded from the direction the friendly jets came from. Coming in fast and low a duel propeller aircraft in white, red and green powered in.

With the others distracting the attackers Patchwork was able to safely land and rushed over to the damaged Cybertronian as he started to scan him.

“He’s taken several hits from a seeker.” The patients’ companion informed Patchwork quickly getting a annoyed look in response.

“ I of course couldn’t tell that thank you. It’s not like those same Seekers haven’t taken shots at me.” He replied somewhat bitingly causing the other Autobot to draw back a bit.

Over the next several minutes the medic worked on the fallen Autobot slapping several high tech devices onto him among other things while muttering to himself in an annoyed tone. Eventually getting annoyed looks from the surrounding Autobots.

“ Ok, time to get out of here” Patch said as he finished up.

“ What about your friends?” The other Autobot asked as he pointed up towards the where the Autobot flyers were heavily engaged.

“ They got themselves into it, they should be able to get themselves out again.” Patchwork commented with a shrug before transforming and lowering his rear door.

“ Load him up! I’m getting the hell out of here but I might as well take him along with me.” Patchwork said turning the Autobots angry look into a confused one as he loaded his companion into the VTOL aircraft.

As soon as his new cargo was onboard he took off and headed out of the area as top speed.

shad4c wrote:Name: Patchwork
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Medic
Alt. mode: X-54 Cybertronian VTOL.
Weapons: Robot form-Twin Ion Pistols and Vibro Knife. X-52 form - 2 Ion Guns.
Special Abilities: Ability to create multiple holograms of large scale, Low fuel consumption, Radar.
Height: 25 feet / 7.6 meters
Quote: Can’t you learn to dodge? Ok you’re patched and I’m out of here!

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 4
FIREPOWER: 4
ACCURACY: 4
MELEE: 2
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 4
RANK: 5

Profile: Patchwork is a white, green and red Autobot leading many to think that his name comes from the patchy paint job he suffers from instead of the reality. Both the memories and physical construction of Patchwork are the source of his name. Created a Neutral, neither Autobot nor Decepticon but with parts salvaged from the wrecks of both sides giving him a rather unusual internal construction. After growing tired of savaging a living and having several unpleasant run ins with the Decepticons he joined the ranks of the Autobots as a sharpshooter called Pitchhit. He fought with distinction until he was severally wounded, nearly destroyed, in a raid on a Decepticon outpost with his unit.
During the mission they succeeded in capturing the outpost but his injuries required immediate attention, through the efforts of his comrades he was saved but has never been the same since. A near complete rebuild combined with lack of time, non-standard parts, inexperience with the operation and his own internal oddities created physical and more importantly mental problems in the form of memory loss and remnants of things from the new circuits. His personality changed and he lost his perfect aim, depressed he quit and wondered aimlessly for a time until an encounter with the Autobot Ratchet showed him a new path in life. Revitalised he dove into it with a vengeance.
Patchwork is sarcastic and holds to his opinions fiercely making him somewhat abrasive to work with. He is also reluctant to place himself into the firing line for fear of making his condition worse, this come off as making him seem uncaring of the lives of his comrades.

Ability: Top speed of 316 mph in fixed wing mode and 86mph in hover mode. Able to create multiple holograms in order to disguise himself and confuse an enemy. Carries an array of medic equipment and is strong enough to airlift injured out of danger.

Weakness: The rotation mechanism for his engines a temperamental trapping him in fixed or hover mode. Only lightly armoured in any form. Suffers from memory loss, can sometimes temporarily be disabled because of mental instability, something he hides carefully.

Sample Post: Random Battleground
Energy blasts streaked through the air and the sounds of battle filled the area as the band of Autobots hunkered down into the cover they had found and were returning fire at the attacking Decepticons. 3 of them were shooting while the 4th was hovering over a wounded Autobot with an emergency medkit. On a signal the 3 defenders ducked back behind cover as 2 airborne Autobots plastered the Decepticon positions hard. As the two pronged assaults continued another sound intruded from the direction the friendly jets came from. Coming in fast and low a duel propeller aircraft in white, red and green powered in.

With the others distracting the attackers Patchwork was able to safely land and rushed over to the damaged Cybertronian as he started to scan him.

“He’s taken several hits from a seeker.” The patients’ companion informed Patchwork quickly getting a annoyed look in response.

“ I of course couldn’t tell that thank you. It’s not like those same Seekers haven’t taken shots at me.” He replied somewhat bitingly causing the other Autobot to draw back a bit.

Over the next several minutes the medic worked on the fallen Autobot slapping several high tech devices onto him among other things while muttering to himself in an annoyed tone. Eventually getting annoyed looks from the surrounding Autobots.

“ Ok, time to get out of here” Patch said as he finished up.

“ What about your friends?” The other Autobot asked as he pointed up towards the where the Autobot flyers were heavily engaged.

“ They got themselves into it, they should be able to get themselves out again.” Patchwork commented with a shrug before transforming and lowering his rear door.

“ Load him up! I’m getting the hell out of here but I might as well take him along with me.” Patchwork said turning the Autobots angry look into a confused one as he loaded his companion into the VTOL aircraft.

As soon as his new cargo was onboard he took off and headed out of the area as top speed.

Approved, and you have already been given permission to post. Go ahead and start him out in the big Polyhex fight, should be plenty of Bots needing repairs there.

ok i ran it through spell check.
Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:6
Intelligence:5
Dexterity:9
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:5
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred towards optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.

NO SIGS IN RPG FORUMS -Devastron

Name: Soundwave
Allegiance: Decepticons
Alt. Mode: Cybertronian light-armored tank
Weapons: Concussion blaster, multi-chambered rocket launcher
Special Abilities: Highly advanced sensors, especially audio; ability to “read” electrical impulses (telepathy); photographic memory; cassettes
Height: 33 ft/10.07 m
Quote: “Cries and screams are music to my ears.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 9
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 2
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 9
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 10
Charisma: 7
Rank: 8

Profile: [From the Datatracks of Megatron, Decepticon Leader] What is more valuable to a commander: loyalty or reliability? Loyalty is a luxury, but reliability is a necessity for effective military operations. Soundwave exemplifies the latter while projecting as much of the former as realistically possible. Soundwave is an indispensable lieutenant and a fierce warrior, with seemingly unshakable loyalty to me and our cause. When I enter combat with Soundwave beside me, I am assured that he will perform his role unerringly. I am, however, well aware of his blackmailing of other Decepticons and the fearsome retribution he takes on any who attempt to cross him, safe in the knowledge that he is virtually untouchable in his current position. His flaunting of his role has led many to turn against him, which has only strengthened his need for my favor and implicit protection. Thus far, Soundwave has been utterly faithful to my commands and risked his own life on my behalf several times. But is he only biding his time until his own power base is secure enough? Many great commanders have been undone by trust and friendship throughout history . . . can I afford to extend these to even my most capable soldier?

Abilities: Subject has great physical strength and intelligence. He is a skilled and highly professional soldier and lieutenant. Subject’s internal scanners can detect even the lowest energy transmissions for communications purposes, as well as sounds that are nearly inaudible to most audio sensors. His advanced sensor suite allows him to monitor electrical impulses, giving him a limited level of telepathy at close range. Subject can also act as a communications center for the Decepticons, keeping all units within 1,000 miles in contact. In robot mode, he wields a concussion gun and shoulder-mounted, multi-chambered mini-rocket launcher. In both modes, he can store the compressed forms of the assorted Decepticon cassettes. Subject can then select and launch any of the stored cassettes. His top speed in vehicle mode is 45 mph over most terrain.

Weaknesses: [From the Personal Datatracks of Starscream, Decepticon Aerospace Commander] I’ve warned Megatron about this two-faced wreck before. He hides behind that monotone loyalty routine, but there’s a reason most Decepticons fear him: he can’t be trusted! Of course, neither can I, and I’m still here. Guess Megatron just can’t win.

Sample RP

The situation was dire. Decepticon losses continued to mount on all sides, and the Autobots, determined to make the most of the recent inroads they had made against their long-time enemies, pressed their attack against Polyhex with a determination that belied their weak, pacifist ideology. Their victory was not assured by any means, but the very fact that the results of the present engagement should be in doubt was in itself worrisome. The loss of one of their traditional centers of power would be terrible blow to both Decepticon morale and their already overextended infrastructure.

Even more troubling than these possible outcomes, however, was the fact that Megatron himself had gone to oversee the battle for Polyhex personally. Alone. Soundwave could understand the necessity of drawing as little attention to his presence so near the front line as possible. He could even accept having been left behind in order to better maintain that essential secrecy. But he did not like it, all the same. Not when there was a chance, slender though it may have been, that their leader would not be returning.

With Megatron having chosen to intervene directly, there was far more at risk than the fate of a single city-state. The future of the entire Decepticon cause now hung in the balance. Everything that Soundwave had ever worked for was in jeopardy.

Not even these concerns, though, urgent as they were, could move Soundwave to disregard his orders. Secure within the Cradle, he monitored the siege of Polyhex and every other site of Decepticon activity across the surface of Cybertron with dispassionate optics. His unfaltering obedience to Megatron’s instructions would serve as an example to all the other Decepticons who had remained behind to safeguard their remaining holdings. And any trace of disloyalty or an attempt to capitalize upon the present crisis for personal gain would be noted and filed away for future disciplinary action.

Megatron would return. He always did. And when that happened, Soundwave would be in a prime position to reap the full rewards that his faithful, efficient service must warrant.

optimal optimus prime1 wrote:ok i ran it through spell check.
Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:6
Intelligence:5
Dexterity:9
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:5
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred towards optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.

I still don't feel comfortable approving this application. Your grammar still needs work and the profile doesn't really describe his personality much.

Longshot wrote:Name: Soundwave
Allegiance: Decepticons
Alt. Mode: Cybertronian light-armored tank
Weapons: Concussion blaster, multi-chambered rocket launcher
Special Abilities: Highly advanced sensors, especially audio; ability to “read” electrical impulses (telepathy); photographic memory; cassettes
Height: 33 ft/10.07 m
Quote: “Cries and screams are music to my ears.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 9
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 2
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 9
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 10
Charisma: 7
Rank: 8

Profile: [From the Datatracks of Megatron, Decepticon Leader] What is more valuable to a commander: loyalty or reliability? Loyalty is a luxury, but reliability is a necessity for effective military operations. Soundwave exemplifies the latter while projecting as much of the former as realistically possible. Soundwave is an indispensable lieutenant and a fierce warrior, with seemingly unshakable loyalty to me and our cause. When I enter combat with Soundwave beside me, I am assured that he will perform his role unerringly. I am, however, well aware of his blackmailing of other Decepticons and the fearsome retribution he takes on any who attempt to cross him, safe in the knowledge that he is virtually untouchable in his current position. His flaunting of his role has led many to turn against him, which has only strengthened his need for my favor and implicit protection. Thus far, Soundwave has been utterly faithful to my commands and risked his own life on my behalf several times. But is he only biding his time until his own power base is secure enough? Many great commanders have been undone by trust and friendship throughout history . . . can I afford to extend these to even my most capable soldier?

Abilities: Subject has great physical strength and intelligence. He is a skilled and highly professional soldier and lieutenant. Subject’s internal scanners can detect even the lowest energy transmissions for communications purposes, as well as sounds that are nearly inaudible to most audio sensors. His advanced sensor suite allows him to monitor electrical impulses, giving him a limited level of telepathy at close range. Subject can also act as a communications center for the Decepticons, keeping all units within 1,000 miles in contact. In robot mode, he wields a concussion gun and shoulder-mounted, multi-chambered mini-rocket launcher. In both modes, he can store the compressed forms of the assorted Decepticon cassettes. Subject can then select and launch any of the stored cassettes. His top speed in vehicle mode is 45 mph over most terrain.

Weaknesses: [From the Personal Datatracks of Starscream, Decepticon Aerospace Commander] I’ve warned Megatron about this two-faced wreck before. He hides behind that monotone loyalty routine, but there’s a reason most Decepticons fear him: he can’t be trusted! Of course, neither can I, and I’m still here. Guess Megatron just can’t win.

Sample RP

The situation was dire. Decepticon losses continued to mount on all sides, and the Autobots, determined to make the most of the recent inroads they had made against their long-time enemies, pressed their attack against Polyhex with a determination that belied their weak, pacifist ideology. Their victory was not assured by any means, but the very fact that the results of the present engagement should be in doubt was in itself worrisome. The loss of one of their traditional centers of power would be terrible blow to both Decepticon morale and their already overextended infrastructure.

Even more troubling than these possible outcomes, however, was the fact that Megatron himself had gone to oversee the battle for Polyhex personally. Alone. Soundwave could understand the necessity of drawing as little attention to his presence so near the front line as possible. He could even accept having been left behind in order to better maintain that essential secrecy. But he did not like it, all the same. Not when there was a chance, slender though it may have been, that their leader would not be returning.

With Megatron having chosen to intervene directly, there was far more at risk than the fate of a single city-state. The future of the entire Decepticon cause now hung in the balance. Everything that Soundwave had ever worked for was in jeopardy.

Not even these concerns, though, urgent as they were, could move Soundwave to disregard his orders. Secure within the Cradle, he monitored the siege of Polyhex and every other site of Decepticon activity across the surface of Cybertron with dispassionate optics. His unfaltering obedience to Megatron’s instructions would serve as an example to all the other Decepticons who had remained behind to safeguard their remaining holdings. And any trace of disloyalty or an attempt to capitalize upon the present crisis for personal gain would be noted and filed away for future disciplinary action.

Megatron would return. He always did. And when that happened, Soundwave would be in a prime position to reap the full rewards that his faithful, efficient service must warrant.

The prodigal son has returned again! Welcome back man! Approved, go ahead and start him in Kaon like you have already set up in your sample.

Devastron wrote:

optimal optimus prime1 wrote:ok i ran it through spell check.
Name:Shutdown
Allegiance:Decepticon
Function: warrior
Alt. mode:cybertron fire truck (cybertron optimus prime Except he is red & grey not red and blue)
Weapons:2 plasma cannons in vehicle mode,2 blasters in robot mode.
Special Abilities:Cloaking Device/Invisibility -> (from -6 to -12)
Height:28 ft
Quote:"optimus you will DIE!!!!!!"


Strength:6
Intelligence:5
Dexterity:9
Speed:5
Endurance:8
Courage:8
Firepower:6
Accuracy:5
Melee:7
Tech Skill:5
Charisma:5
Rank:


Profile:
He was originally a Autobot but he didn't like the fact that optimus wouldn't use his power to take control of the universe and decided to leave.but he still has close ties to the autobots including his brother who is a bounty hunter.he dose however have a burning hatred towards optimus,and that may be the only reason he joined up with the decepticons?


Abilities:
His armor is very tough but rockets,missiles,and mines can still blow a hole in his armor.he has a plasma rifle.he also has two energon pistols and a sword for close range combat.
also using the Cloaking Device he can sneak up on his autobot foes and destroy them.It renders him invisible to scanners.


Weaknesses:
He is fairly slow and he rushes into battles without thinking and most of the time gets hurt pretty bad.but when he starts hand to hand combat he is ruthless.

Sample post:
Shutdown walked down an empty street and sat down to think. After a few minutes he felt as though someone was watching him, So he started to walk, As he got out of the alleyway a rocket blasted a hole in front of him. Shutdown turned around and noticed an autobot bounty hunter staring him down. Before the bounty hunter even had a chance to think shutdown had already made it to him and as they fought a few decepticons sat and watched as they already knew that the autobot was dead even though he didn't. The battle was over in less that a minute and as the bounty hunter died SHUTDOWN felt sorry and as the hunters body armor powered down he realized that it was his brother,and a single drop of oil ran from his eye down his cheek.

I still don't feel comfortable approving this application. Your grammar still needs work and the profile doesn't really describe his personality much.

ok i think i have bent over backwards to please you so i can RP is there any way you can help me?

Devastron wrote:

Longshot wrote:Name: Soundwave
Allegiance: Decepticons
Alt. Mode: Cybertronian light-armored tank
Weapons: Concussion blaster, multi-chambered rocket launcher
Special Abilities: Highly advanced sensors, especially audio; ability to “read” electrical impulses (telepathy); photographic memory; cassettes
Height: 33 ft/10.07 m
Quote: “Cries and screams are music to my ears.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 9
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 2
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 9
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 10
Charisma: 7
Rank: 8

Profile: [From the Datatracks of Megatron, Decepticon Leader] What is more valuable to a commander: loyalty or reliability? Loyalty is a luxury, but reliability is a necessity for effective military operations. Soundwave exemplifies the latter while projecting as much of the former as realistically possible. Soundwave is an indispensable lieutenant and a fierce warrior, with seemingly unshakable loyalty to me and our cause. When I enter combat with Soundwave beside me, I am assured that he will perform his role unerringly. I am, however, well aware of his blackmailing of other Decepticons and the fearsome retribution he takes on any who attempt to cross him, safe in the knowledge that he is virtually untouchable in his current position. His flaunting of his role has led many to turn against him, which has only strengthened his need for my favor and implicit protection. Thus far, Soundwave has been utterly faithful to my commands and risked his own life on my behalf several times. But is he only biding his time until his own power base is secure enough? Many great commanders have been undone by trust and friendship throughout history . . . can I afford to extend these to even my most capable soldier?

Abilities: Subject has great physical strength and intelligence. He is a skilled and highly professional soldier and lieutenant. Subject’s internal scanners can detect even the lowest energy transmissions for communications purposes, as well as sounds that are nearly inaudible to most audio sensors. His advanced sensor suite allows him to monitor electrical impulses, giving him a limited level of telepathy at close range. Subject can also act as a communications center for the Decepticons, keeping all units within 1,000 miles in contact. In robot mode, he wields a concussion gun and shoulder-mounted, multi-chambered mini-rocket launcher. In both modes, he can store the compressed forms of the assorted Decepticon cassettes. Subject can then select and launch any of the stored cassettes. His top speed in vehicle mode is 45 mph over most terrain.

Weaknesses: [From the Personal Datatracks of Starscream, Decepticon Aerospace Commander] I’ve warned Megatron about this two-faced wreck before. He hides behind that monotone loyalty routine, but there’s a reason most Decepticons fear him: he can’t be trusted! Of course, neither can I, and I’m still here. Guess Megatron just can’t win.

Sample RP

The situation was dire. Decepticon losses continued to mount on all sides, and the Autobots, determined to make the most of the recent inroads they had made against their long-time enemies, pressed their attack against Polyhex with a determination that belied their weak, pacifist ideology. Their victory was not assured by any means, but the very fact that the results of the present engagement should be in doubt was in itself worrisome. The loss of one of their traditional centers of power would be terrible blow to both Decepticon morale and their already overextended infrastructure.

Even more troubling than these possible outcomes, however, was the fact that Megatron himself had gone to oversee the battle for Polyhex personally. Alone. Soundwave could understand the necessity of drawing as little attention to his presence so near the front line as possible. He could even accept having been left behind in order to better maintain that essential secrecy. But he did not like it, all the same. Not when there was a chance, slender though it may have been, that their leader would not be returning.

With Megatron having chosen to intervene directly, there was far more at risk than the fate of a single city-state. The future of the entire Decepticon cause now hung in the balance. Everything that Soundwave had ever worked for was in jeopardy.

Not even these concerns, though, urgent as they were, could move Soundwave to disregard his orders. Secure within the Cradle, he monitored the siege of Polyhex and every other site of Decepticon activity across the surface of Cybertron with dispassionate optics. His unfaltering obedience to Megatron’s instructions would serve as an example to all the other Decepticons who had remained behind to safeguard their remaining holdings. And any trace of disloyalty or an attempt to capitalize upon the present crisis for personal gain would be noted and filed away for future disciplinary action.

Megatron would return. He always did. And when that happened, Soundwave would be in a prime position to reap the full rewards that his faithful, efficient service must warrant.

The prodigal son has returned again! Welcome back man! Approved, go ahead and start him in Kaon like you have already set up in your sample.

"Yeah, me too. Like he said." Great to have you back, LS.

Name: Crueljaw
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt Mode: tumbler bridging Vehicle (Batmobile Batman Begins)
Weapons: 1 Plasma Shotgun 1 Vibro knife
Height: 30ft 9,1m
“I’ll justify my reasons with your mech fluid”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 7
Endurance: 8
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank

Since his creation Crueljaw’s been all about 2 things where his next energon ration is coming from and who he has to slag to do it. Designed as an assault vehicle he was dismayed to find he got an experimental bridging vehicle alt mode the project was shelved after the con techs couldn’t get the bridge to work. Since then the stubborn warrior has been shunted from battlefront to battlefront gradually his combat experience was built up. Its been said that Crueljaw’s love for combat has been dulled but you ever see him on the battlefield you’ll be glad your not on the other side. Arrogant and cruel Crueljaw will gladly rip the spark out of a autobot then talk smack as the optics of his victims fades away.

Abilities
In his tumbler alternate mode he’s got a jet booster which will propel him to speeds of up to 220mph this enables him to bridge gaps of up to 80ft. Like most decepticons he is fitted with a flight circuit but only uses it in emergencies he can’t stand flying for long.

Weaknesses
Apart from his arrogance his main weakness is his fear of flying he refuses to use his flight circuit to escape even if it’s the most logical course of action.

Sample post

The Autobot sentry looked up to see the underside of flying black shape landing on him the con didn’t notice what he’d landed on. He only had optics for his objective an autobot observer named Click rumour had it that the bot was skulking around the ruins of an autobot watchtower that had been bombed out by the Seekers two days earlier collecting data on decepticon troop movements.

The deep rumble of his engine had probably alerted the Autobot by now but it didn’t matter to Crueljaw he was already at the base of the watch tower. Transforming he climbed the steps his shotgun in his hands above his audio picked up on something moving above him. The winding steps seemed to go on and on his long optic narrowed as he reached the top of the stairs. Click was waiting for him a shot from the autobots rifle slammed into Crueljaw’s chest sending him tumbling down the steps he lost his shotgun during the fall.

As he came back online he found the Autobot clearing the last of the steps and heading towards him with Crueljaw’s own shotgun in his hands. Crueljaw had seconds before he was put into permanent stasis he reached down and retrieved his vibro blade a small knife really but could cut through most armours. A quick flick of his wrist and the blade flew through the air tearing through the neck of the autobot severing an energon line. The autobot fired the shot going wide. Crueljaw righted himself walked over and recovered his shotgun. “Next time you want to kill someone aim for the head” Crueljaw sneered as he aimed his shotgun and fired point blank into the autobot. As he pulled his blade from his victim he picked up the Datapad that had fallen from the dead autobots wrist compartment. “Well I’ve got what I’ve come for wonder if Soundwave will actually pay me for this or just take all the glory like normal”

optimal optimus prime1 wrote:ok i think i have bent over backwards to please you so i can RP is there any way you can help me?

You don't use capitalization correctly, your spacing after punctuation is incorrect and there are still grammar and spelling errors.

Phaze wrote:Name: Crueljaw
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt Mode: tumbler bridging Vehicle (Batmobile Batman Begins)
Weapons: 1 Plasma Shotgun 1 Vibro knife
Height: 30ft 9,1m
“I’ll justify my reasons with your mech fluid”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 7
Endurance: 8
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank

Since his creation Crueljaw’s been all about 2 things where his next energon ration is coming from and who he has to slag to do it. Designed as an assault vehicle he was dismayed to find he got an experimental bridging vehicle alt mode the project was shelved after the con techs couldn’t get the bridge to work. Since then the stubborn warrior has been shunted from battlefront to battlefront gradually his combat experience was built up. Its been said that Crueljaw’s love for combat has been dulled but you ever see him on the battlefield you’ll be glad your not on the other side. Arrogant and cruel Crueljaw will gladly rip the spark out of a autobot then talk smack as the optics of his victims fades away.

Abilities
In his tumbler alternate mode he’s got a jet booster which will propel him to speeds of up to 220mph this enables him to bridge gaps of up to 80ft. Like most decepticons he is fitted with a flight circuit but only uses it in emergencies he can’t stand flying for long.

Weaknesses
Apart from his arrogance his main weakness is his fear of flying he refuses to use his flight circuit to escape even if it’s the most logical course of action.

Sample post

The Autobot sentry looked up to see the underside of flying black shape landing on him the con didn’t notice what he’d landed on. He only had optics for his objective an autobot observer named Click rumour had it that the bot was skulking around the ruins of an autobot watchtower that had been bombed out by the Seekers two days earlier collecting data on decepticon troop movements.

The deep rumble of his engine had probably alerted the Autobot by now but it didn’t matter to Crueljaw he was already at the base of the watch tower. Transforming he climbed the steps his shotgun in his hands above his audio picked up on something moving above him. The winding steps seemed to go on and on his long optic narrowed as he reached the top of the stairs. Click was waiting for him a shot from the autobots rifle slammed into Crueljaw’s chest sending him tumbling down the steps he lost his shotgun during the fall.

As he came back online he found the Autobot clearing the last of the steps and heading towards him with Crueljaw’s own shotgun in his hands. Crueljaw had seconds before he was put into permanent stasis he reached down and retrieved his vibro blade a small knife really but could cut through most armours. A quick flick of his wrist and the blade flew through the air tearing through the neck of the autobot severing an energon line. The autobot fired the shot going wide. Crueljaw righted himself walked over and recovered his shotgun. “Next time you want to kill someone aim for the head” Crueljaw sneered as he aimed his shotgun and fired point blank into the autobot. As he pulled his blade from his victim he picked up the Datapad that had fallen from the dead autobots wrist compartment. “Well I’ve got what I’ve come for wonder if Soundwave will actually pay me for this or just take all the glory like normal”

I think you need a bit more in his abilities section, maybe talk about some of his skills along with his physical abilities. You also need to work on your grammar a bit as you have a lot of run-on sentences that either need punctuation or be split into two sentences.

Devastron wrote:

Phaze wrote:Name: Crueljaw
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt Mode: tumbler bridging Vehicle (Batmobile Batman Begins)
Weapons: 1 Plasma Shotgun 1 Vibro knife
Height: 30ft 9,1m
“I’ll justify my reasons with your mech fluid”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 7
Endurance: 8
Courage: 8
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 5
Rank

Since his creation Crueljaw’s been all about 2 things where his next energon ration is coming from and who he has to slag to do it. Designed as an assault vehicle he was dismayed to find he got an experimental bridging vehicle alt mode the project was shelved after the con techs couldn’t get the bridge to work. Since then the stubborn warrior has been shunted from battlefront to battlefront gradually his combat experience was built up. Its been said that Crueljaw’s love for combat has been dulled but you ever see him on the battlefield you’ll be glad your not on the other side. Arrogant and cruel Crueljaw will gladly rip the spark out of a autobot then talk smack as the optics of his victims fades away.

Abilities
In his tumbler alternate mode he’s got a jet booster which will propel him to speeds of up to 220mph this enables him to bridge gaps of up to 80ft. Like most decepticons he is fitted with a flight circuit but only uses it in emergencies he can’t stand flying for long.

Weaknesses
Apart from his arrogance his main weakness is his fear of flying he refuses to use his flight circuit to escape even if it’s the most logical course of action.

Sample post

The Autobot sentry looked up to see the underside of flying black shape landing on him the con didn’t notice what he’d landed on. He only had optics for his objective an autobot observer named Click rumour had it that the bot was skulking around the ruins of an autobot watchtower that had been bombed out by the Seekers two days earlier collecting data on decepticon troop movements.

The deep rumble of his engine had probably alerted the Autobot by now but it didn’t matter to Crueljaw he was already at the base of the watch tower. Transforming he climbed the steps his shotgun in his hands above his audio picked up on something moving above him. The winding steps seemed to go on and on his long optic narrowed as he reached the top of the stairs. Click was waiting for him a shot from the autobots rifle slammed into Crueljaw’s chest sending him tumbling down the steps he lost his shotgun during the fall.

As he came back online he found the Autobot clearing the last of the steps and heading towards him with Crueljaw’s own shotgun in his hands. Crueljaw had seconds before he was put into permanent stasis he reached down and retrieved his vibro blade a small knife really but could cut through most armours. A quick flick of his wrist and the blade flew through the air tearing through the neck of the autobot severing an energon line. The autobot fired the shot going wide. Crueljaw righted himself walked over and recovered his shotgun. “Next time you want to kill someone aim for the head” Crueljaw sneered as he aimed his shotgun and fired point blank into the autobot. As he pulled his blade from his victim he picked up the Datapad that had fallen from the dead autobots wrist compartment. “Well I’ve got what I’ve come for wonder if Soundwave will actually pay me for this or just take all the glory like normal”

I think you need a bit more in his abilities section, maybe talk about some of his skills along with his physical abilities. You also need to work on your grammar a bit as you have a lot of run-on sentences that either need punctuation or be split into two sentences.

k no probs dude

Name: Deadair
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Communications Jammer
Alt. mode: (Cybertronian) Compact Jamming Array / (Earth) Cassette Player
Weapons: Laser Rifle
Special Abilities: communications jamming
Height: 22 ft. or 6.7 m
Quote: “And no one dare disturb the sound of silence.”

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 5
RANK:

Profile: Deadair’s body was built along similar lines as many communications bots, however, unlike any standard comms bot, his systems are designed to disrupt communications, rather than aid them. He is also fairly technically proficient and built himself a pair of cassette partners, Encore and Whitenoise, though he used pre-existing designs and parts to do so. He had planned to construct more, but when the Decepticons could no longer gain access to new sparks these plans got pushed off to the wayside. These plans were then abandoned completely after one of his creations, Encore, was destroyed in combat. This was a rather unsettling experience for Deadair, having grown far closer to his creations than he would have otherwise thought possible for any Decepticon.

Abilities: Deadair is designed to be able to zero in on Autobot communications channels and transmit a signal of his own that blocks them out, giving the Autobots nothing but static. In his robot mode, his jamming equipment is capable of disrupting enemy communications within a range of 75 miles. In his alternate mode, he can boost his jamming signal to cover a range up to 150 miles.

Weaknesses: Due to an unusually quirk in his jamming circuits, when his jammers are activated, his own comm unit and audio receptors will shut down, rendering him completely deaf. The jammers will also drain power from his weapons systems when he is in robot mode, reducing the damage output of his laser rifle. Deadair is rather protective of his remaining creation, Whitenoise, especially after the loss of Encore, and would be easily persuaded to do anything if his cassette was used as leverage against him.

Sample Post:
Deadair peaked around the corner of the building, watching the pair of Autobot scouts that were walking down the street. One looked like a fairly standard car model, the other appeared to be some sort of motorcycle. He readied his weapon and waited.

>>We are in position.>Waiting for your signal.>Roger.>Keep your audios on, cause you know I won’t.>MEDIC!<<

Name: RammerJ
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Fighter and Engineer.
Alt. mode: Blaster Canon.
Weapons: One weapon laser cannon gun.
Special Abilities: Able to sense danger.
Height: RammerJ is about 25feet tall.

Quote: '"Where there is life, there is hope, and where there is hope, there can be peace."
Profile: RammerJ is the epitome of what most of his city origin hold dear. He is primarily concerned with helping his race grow and evolve through self-awareness and constant learning. No one really truly knows where or when he came from, but he seems skilled in all manner of repairs and construction. An inventor and scientist, RammerJ is usually absorbed in some research project that will benefit his people. He will not turn away anyone who needs help, no matter their faction. Usually, he keeps to himself and his studies, and unfortunately does not always remember to take the time to interact with his faction. Oddly, he carries no obvious weaponry and no one ever remebers seeing him transform.
STRENGTH:5
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 5
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA:6
RANK: Normal robot.

Profile: This is a heavy injured robot had been activated back to life by Optimus Prime in order to help Skyfire patroling the city of Cybertron.

Abilities: Able to tranform to laser cannon and can be use
by other Autobot for defence and attack. Able to capture other technology fast and able to solve a devise problem
no matter how hard it is.

Weaknesses: Fast and easily made mistakes, sturborn and
not very skillful in fighting.

Oneday at Cybertron, when Optimus prime visited destroyed cities by the decepticon, as he rolling along with a few autobots team, he pass by a place with full of junk and
destroyed robots. Optimus prime saw a half wreck robots
still functioning and the robot told Optimus that this place had been bombarded with heavy nuclear energy by a group of decepticon robots. They taken off all the energy supply here and destroy this city. This half survive robot told Optimus prime that he no longer surviving and unable to protect his city and urge Optimus prime to discharge his energy as a termination to him.
Optimus prime feel very pity to this robot and inform wheeljack, skyfire, and other autobot to carry him back to
Autobots place in order to revive him.