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Name: Thundercracker
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Incendiary Gun
Special Abilities: N/A
Height: 31 ft
Quote: “The deadliest weapon is terror.”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 9
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: 5

Profile: Soaring swiftly through the clouds, Thundercracker gazes with scorn on the creatures below. He is utterly contemptuous of anything that cannot lift itself off the ground and claim the sky. Occasionally, he expresses that contempt by diving and striking, leaving flame and destruction as he again speeds upward. Yet he is not totally convinced of the cause that he serves. Only the words of his Decepticon companions about the rightness of their cause, the destiny of conquest that is their birthright, convince him to go on. He is persuaded because he wants to be persuaded. Without a sense of purpose, Thundercracker would find his life unbearable.

Abilities: Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thundercracker can attain speeds of up to 1500 mph. He has the additional ability to produce controlled sonic booms of deafening magnitude that can be heard within a 200-mile radius. He can launch a drone rocket with a range of 500 miles that behaves similarly to a cruise missile and has the concussive force of 3000 lbs. of TNT. He has a shoulder-mounted automatic incendiary gun that shoots at 100 rounds per minute heat-resistant ceramic bullets containing a highly explosive flammable material that ignites on impact.

Weaknesses: Lingering doubts in Thundercracker's subconscious sometimes surface and impede his effectiveness, particularly when innocent human lives are endangered. Usually his fear of Decepticon Leader Megatron compels him to overlook these doubts.

Sample Post:

From above, Thundercracker saw an Autobot driving. He couldn’t resist making roadkill from the air. Activating his cruise missiles, he began shooting the other robot. Managing to hit the engine in the back, he transformed from his alt mode to better watch the Autobot swerve, crash, and transform to see what happened. During all this, Thundercracker had managed to fly right down to the injured robot.

“Show time,” he said, allowing the Autobot to hear.

Thundercracker pushed his right foot down on the Autobot’s chest below his insignia. Grinning, he aimed his arm cannon at the symbol. Suddenly, looking at the Autobot’s face, he hesitated.

Why am I even doing this?

The Autobot seemed to understand why Thundercracker had faltered. He gave the Decepticon a sympathetic yet terrified look.

“Because he said so,” the seeker said, pointing his thumb towards a non-present Megatron. The smirk on Thundercracker’s face appeared again. He opened fire.

Name: Blaster
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Communications
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Light-armored Hover-tank
Weapons: Electro Scrambler Gun, Laser Pistol
Special Abilities: Cassetobots
Height: 30 ft
Quote: “When the music is rockin’, I’m rollin’.”

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 2
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 9
RANK: 7

Profile: Blaster likes to turn it up loud. That goes for the way he does everything: fighting, talking, playing- living! If Blaster is involved, he makes his presence known. He is in the forefront of any situation. But aside from the things he normally does in the course of being an Autobot, he has a special passion: music. His ability to monitor radio transmissions has exposed him to many Earthen musical styles, all of which he finds interesting. But it is rock music and hip hop- good, hard and loud- that really sparks his circuits. He'd much rather be lost in the sound of a searing guitar solo than fight Decepticons. However, when called upon he will do what he must for the Autobot cause, albeit reluctantly at times.

Abilities: Blaster can assume to form and shrink to the size of an AM/FM stereo cassette deck. In addition to performing the normal functions of a deck, he can receive radio signals for all frequencies. He can detect signals with power outputs as weak as a millionth of a watt. His ability to transmit radio signals up to 4000 miles makes him the communications center for the Autobots. In robot form he carries an electro-scrambler gun, which emits powerful waves of electromagnetic energy that disrupt the operations of all but the most heavily shielded electrical devices. In theory, the gun should interfere with the minute electrical impulses of the human nervous system, but Blaster has never used the gun on a human.

Weaknesses: Blaster's most obvious weakness is for rock 'n' roll and hip hop. He will walk unwittingly into a trap for the promise of hearing some new tunes. Radio static has the effect of hampering his operation and even, if strong enough, knocking him out completely.

Sample Post:

He sat with his speakers blaring, and bobbing his head to the beat of the bass. Had not it been for his dancing around, he would not have noticed the enemy fleet of Decepticons heading straight towards Autobot City. Immediately the music stopped as Blaster transformed into his tape deck mode.

“Oh snap! Time to switch the station…Optimus! Come in Optimus! The Decepticons are two-steppin’ their way over here and quick! So whatever you’re doin’ you need to pop, lock, and drop it ‘cause there ain’t much time before they get here!”

He transformed into robot mode and activated the alarm. With a pistol in his left hand and his scrambler in his right, he started to walk out and prepare for battle. Suddenly the music came back on, and louder than before.

“Let’s rock ‘n roll!”

I changed the alt mode and adjusted some stats:

Name: Skywarp
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Variable-Caliber machine guns
Special Abilities: Teleportation/Warping
Height: 31 ft
Quote: “Strike when the enemy isn’t looking.”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 9
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 10
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: 9

Profile: Skywarp is the sneakiest of the Decepticons. On Cybertron he was known to appear out of nowhere in the middle of peaceful Autobot villages to rain terror and destruction upon them, if the mood hit him. He'll even use his teleportation powers to play a prank on a fellow Decepticon. Everyone enjoys this except the butt of his joke since Skywarp's sense of humor tends to be rather cruel and physically abusive. Skywarp isn't too smart and would be totally useless without the supervision of Megatron. Skywarp is the sneakiest of the Decepticons. On Cybertron he was known to appear out of nowhere in the middle of peaceful Autobot villages to rain terror and destruction upon them, if the mood hit him. He'll even use his teleportation powers to play a prank on a fellow Decepticon. Everyone enjoys this except the butt of his joke since Skywarp's sense of humor tends to be rather cruel and physically abusive. Skywarp isn't too smart and would be totally useless without the supervision of Megatron.

Abilities: Skywarp can reach a top speed of 1500 mph. But what makes him unique is his ability to instantly teleport himself a maximum distance of 2.5 miles. He also carries a heatseeking missile launcher and a variable-caliber machine gun.

Weaknesses: Skywarp's control of the accuracy of his teleportation power diminishes as the distance he teleports increases. As a result, if he's not too careful, he's likely to crash into things when he arrives at where he's teleporting. Not being too bright doesn't help him avoid these accidents either.

Sample Post:

A sudden beep came from his com-link. His superior’s voice emerged in his receptors: Take the energon. Don’t let them get away with it!

Always silent, yet always following orders, he immediately saw the Autobot car driving as fast as it could through the streets of Cybertron.

Now it’s time to do what I do best…

Skywarp transformed into his jet mode as he flew after the car as high and as quiet as he could. Then, as if by instinct, he dove with such speed that it seemed too fast to calculate an exact reading on any speedometer….BOOM! Skywarp had transformed into robot mode and landed on his feet with such impact that the Autobot car flipped backwards.

With an array of shots towards the escaping car, he managed to keep the car in a close proximity for any attack. And, in what seemed like no time at all, Skywarp teleported in front of the Autobot and plunged his fist into his enemy’s motor with great force.

With the little time that he had before the Autobot recovered from a temporary blackout, Skywarp had taken the energon cargo and fled the scene without making a sound….

“Hahaha! They never see me coming…”

Edited
Im open to suggestions I am very adaptable.

Name: Sub-Zero
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Scout and Message Relay
Alt. mode: Beast mode wolf like Cybertronic beast
Weapons: Absolute Zero Laser Ray, Basic Laser riffle, and basic kinetic energy gun
Special Abilities: The Absolute Zero Ray, Above average sensory, Extreme strength for his size in alt mode(see description below)
Height: 21ft (6.4m) Robot mode / 3ft (0.914m) Beast mode –(mass distortion)

Quote: “War does not make heroes, The actions you take do.”

STRENGTH: 9 (not for battle, but for transporting things)
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 2 (alt mode slow)
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: ? (need help here because of special weapon)
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: UNRANKED

Profile:
Sub-Zero is a brave and loyal soldier, but will lead a team if required. When given a choice he prefers to take orders from his commander rather than give orders. He is an independent thinker,and will make decisions to protect his team even if it means going against orders, which will sometimes bother him afterwards. Many of his traits are heightened natural abilities. He has immense strength for his size, often pulling cargo, (in his alt form) that would normally require a rig. This strength has proven valuable in saving the lives of fallen comrades many times bigger than he. His Night Vision and Blue Eyes come in handy during the 24 hours of darkness found on some planets and the blinding white of the sun . He is loveable and friendly, getting along well with fellow Autobots. Sub-Zero can always be counted on, and has a great sense of adventure, not hesitating to join intriguing missions.

NEW History:
Zero was flying a scout mission to gather data on the Deceptacons. His shuttle was over the base where the 4 million-year-old data had been stored from a scientific mission done of north pole of earth. He was discovered, and was shot down by Deceptacon fire which caused him to crash into the outer computer terminal. Part of his craft’s engines smashed through the wall and touching with the computer. He tried to escape from the wreckage only to discover that the Deceptacons were looking for him. Desprate he franticlly punched a few codes into the council in an attempt to fire theship's weapon systems. While he was pinned beneath the wreck, the Decepticon computer sent a surge of energy at his ship, as it does in its own defense. But because of the damage, the surge also carried loose information from the stored scientific data the cons had been harboring. He screamed, as by some unlucky turn of fate his alt mode upgrader within his ship went haywire and shot him while he was still awake, taking from him his beloved cybertronic shuttle alt mode and forcing upon his body some alien shape.

Abilities:
*Many of his traits are heightened natural abilities Although small he can drag a fallen Autobot away from harm, or pull cargo by himself that would normally require a rig. Tracking with his internal pathfinder, Night Vision / Blue Eyes to compensate for extreme dark and extreme light. He can withstand extreme cold that would freeze fuel lines.

** His signature weapon is an Absolute Zero Laser – Absolute zero is the Kelvin temperature at which all atomic motion stops. The universe is at an average of 3* – 4* Kelvin. This weapon drains him severely, down to 25% of functioning energon levels. After use he must be secure or he will go into shutdown. Usually someone on his team will grab him before he collapses, often giving him a ride back to base.

In Robot mode He can use both the basic weaponry and his special weapon. When transforming his robot form comes from a mass shifting much like that of Soundwave.

Weaknesses:
His loss of 75% of energon levels after use of his Absolute Zero Laser could very likely get him killed. Along with his tendency to refuse to rest after sustaining injury, especially if his team is still fighting. Thus limiting the use of this weapon. His small size in alt mode causes difficulties when performing tasks on Cybertron.

EDITED Sample Post:
[This will also describe what happens to him after use of weapons]
Cybertron

The darkness was not as threatening as it could have been, His Night vision took the edge off.
Every two hours a fellow Transformer would run checks on the energon lines to be sure there were no spills or clogs. The Neutral worker bot approached the pipeline unaware of a pair of burning blue optics watching him. Zero found a silent fun in spying on his charges. He grinned to himself.
Since the first attack on energon line Sub-Zero had been stationed by it in order to help protect it. His new alt mode made it easy to hide among turbines and wires. The Autobot commander stationed in his section , had assigned two other Autobots to assist him until a More experienced team could assemble and take over. He was also installed with a communicator that allowed them to call for backup if needed. The blue light in his eyes dimmed as the worker started in his direction. The feeling of being watched spooked the mech into a hurried inspection.
Sub-Zero snorted to himself, these neutrals knew he was their guardian and kept it a secret from the Decepticons, but they were still leery of him. They just could not accept the concept of a talking dog it was uncommon on cybertron, even though he was a robot. It was not his fault the ship went crazy and zapped him. He growled in silence, Oh but they were ok with talking two headed beasts, and those stupid little scooter things. Suddenly a voice buzzed in his internal communicator.
>>
Silence then…..
>>

Sub-Zero still had not responded, his attention was focused on the figure before him. The worker was unaware of the third seeker watching him from behind. Sub-Zero had not needed his comrade’s warning for his sensors had picked up this lone Decepticon before the transmission. The seeker aimed his laser rifle at the worker, the darkness of the cloaking his actions from the busy mech. A blaze of electric blue light crackled in the air, but it did not come from the Decepticon. Sub-Zero moved from his hiding place, darting at the mech and grabbing him by arm, the Autobot pulled him into the inspection station, closing the door with a back leg.

“Zero, What the heck! You scared the life outta me.”
The mech was shaken and obviously scared. The Metallic husky turned his head to look at him.
“You’re lucky I was here, a microsecond later and that Decepticon would have fried you.”
The worker bot slipped himself against a chair.
“You mean the blue flash was him firing at me?”
Zero was facing the door, oddly his body wobbled struggling to stand, he answered.
“No that was my Absolute Zero Laser, but now that I’ve used it I can’t transform nor defend us for 3 astro hours.”

The Cybertronic dog’s blue optics fluxed as his energon levels dipped dangerously low. He needed to contact Polar Ice but did not have enough power to do so.

”Xenon, I need you to radio Polar Ice and Deep Freeze, let them know I’m depleted, and if they can’t handle this they need to call for backup.”

The metal husky put his large paws on the windowsill, and observed the frozen Decepticon. His two seeker wingmates would need to defrost him and reactivate him, that is as long as Zero had missed hitting the poor guy’s spark. If he had hit that the sentience of the other transformer would cease to be, as the power of Zero’s weapon stops all movement at a molecular level. It would certainly kill those made of flesh and bone. As for the Autobot who wheedled it, the weapon brought his levels close to death. It caused a severe pan to trace through his circuits. At times he wished he had never been created with such a thing attached to him, no would he ever wish such a ting on another transformer even a Deceptacon. By now he had learned to hide his discomfort. He jumped down, paceing over to Xenon to listen to his conversation with Polar Ice. Suddenly his legs went out from under him and a high pitched beeping started to pulse. His systems were failing, Zero lay there, as Xenon yelled franticly into the receiver to the other Autobots. He dropped the microphone as the sound of jet engines reached his auds. His optics turned to Zero, fear making them shine like two flashlights.

“Zero, I …. I don’t know what to do.”

The sound of Heavy metal foot falls approached the building ……


******
After thought
He hates ravage
Cats & Dogs

Scene from in the base:
A fellow team mate makes a snide remark about how Sub-Zero reminds him of Ravage.

“Don’t you compare me to Ravage! At least I can transform into robot mode and kick your rear axle! That lowlife has to hide inside of Soundwave.”

Changed the Alt mode and stats just like you asked! ^_^

Name: WheelBar
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Warrior (at one time he was torn between the two, but he decided he was a better strategist than an engineer.)
Alt. mode: smoke-black Cybertronian Vehicle with a bed in the back (much like a truck)
Weapons: His main weapon is a Claymore-style (medieval) sword that he can pull out of his leg. He has two other smaller weapons, a small pistol that comes out of his arm, and small short-range blades he can launch out of his wrists.
Special Abilities: WheelBar has the ability to convert his wheels on his legs to his feet, (like roller skates) which provides greater speed in robot form.
Height: 36 ft, 11m
Quote: “Any battle can be won with the right strategy and persistence.”
STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 3
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: If you would be kind enough to put WheelBar at somewhat of a low rank (not 0 please!) because he wishes to earn his ranks.

Profile: WheelBar is a knowledgeable, tactical warrior who is fresh out of Autobot Academy. (I’m new here, so I’m not sure what it’s called) He cares deeply for his fellow companions, and will go to daring feats to keep them out of harm’s way if need be. He is extremely intelligent and uses these skills in the battlefield to help win battles and missions. He is not afraid to speak his mind, and tries to do his best when talking to superiors. (he does hope someday to earn the right to lead missions.) He is extremely loyal, and always keeps his word. (as much as one robot can) Although he can be a serious warrior, WheelBar kind of has an imagination and sense of humor all his own which gives him very unique fighting strategies. Through his abilities and friendliness, he will very likely become close friends with the other Autobots fairly quickly.

Abilities: With his special ability to switch his wheels to his feet, WheelBar can become surprisingly fast in his robot form, which can often bring about strong surprise attacks.

Weaknesses: WheelBar’s weaknesses would be that he is young and sometimes a little to eager, which, added on with his inexperience, can be challenging at times. He is a very good fighter, but he can be overwhelmed by sheer brute force in some situations

Sample Post:

CLASSIFIED CITY: CYBERTRON

Missiles were streaking overhead his cover of overturned steel as WheelBar lay underneath it with his small pistol ready, ready to attack.

“Man, why couldn’t I be a big-gunner right now?!” WheelBar muttered in frustration. Another plasma grenade streamed past him, exploding not to far away.

“Nhh!!” He covered himself from the blast, debris spraying in his face. He wiped his optic sensors and poked his head out to look at the situation of the battle. Scorpinock was in full-fortress mode, assassinating the Autobot troops who were waiting for their desperately needed reinforcements to come.

“Great…” This was a lovely first mission he was having… “Go with guarding the city! I’ll be an easy mission! Decepticons don’t even know we’re here!” He mocked his captain that had assigned him guard duty of a city running on a new kind of energon-fuel.

“Sure…right…easy…” He sighed. He wanted nothing more than to run up to that over-grown bug-scrap, he surely wasn’t afraid! But he knew in his head that charging a city with one pistol and weapons that could cut was definitely not high on the ‘Good Idea List’.

He turned to his right, looking at another Autobot pinned down like him, just as another plasma grenade landed right next to the Autobot.

“LOOK OUT!!!” WheelBar’s instincts took over and he leaped to the other Autobot’s position, pushing both out from under the steel just as the explosive detonated…

Name: Durge344
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Advanced Scout
Alt Mode: Robotic Tyranosaurus Rex
Weapons: Fusion Cannon (A mixture between a Basic Laser Pistol and a Small Bullet Gun)
Hight33ft i'm not sure how much in Metres!
Quote: "I've seen Life, Death and Things Humans were not meant to see. Well, I will soon enough!"

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 6
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: No-one's told me yet
(I would have liked to put an 8 on everything but...)

Profile: I havn't had much practice but...
Durge344 is a young, headstrong scout. He is eager and always willing to help other Autobots in danger. He may be an Autobot but he admires many of the Decepticons. (generally Deathsaurus and Starscream)
Durge344's Alt Mode is robotic T-Rex, not unlike G1 Grimlock's. Durge344 would like to learn how to warp. Because of this, he admires the Decepticon Skywarp. He believes Optimus Prime to be as generous as a god. He would do anything to meet him.

Abilities: Can jump PRETTY HIGH! His Fusion Cannon is launched ona series of machanisms inside his right arm. This meens he can flip his gun out of his arm so that he's ready to blast. (kind of like the Movie Leader Class Optimus Prime)

Weakness: Can be too eager and wreckless to pay attention to his fellow Autobots. And he has a thing for Autographs. He systems may break down momentarily due to the fact he is too active. THE LAST AND MOST IMPORTANT WEAKNESS IS: He trusts Skywarp too much!

Sample Post: I suck at thes things but...
"Erm, hello!"
no reply.
Durge344 gets up looks at his surroundings. Complete and utter Blackness.
THEN a huge blinding flash of light illuminated a large computer, a circut board on a nearby metal wall and a large black transformer mumbling something into a comunicator.
"EXCUSE ME!"
The yellow transformer jumped in surprise and turned to face Durge344. An Autobot sighn was noticable his chest.
"Can I help you?" he asked.
"By Primus, you're..." Durge344 began to say.
Then an alarm sounded. "MALFUNCTION, MALFUNCTION! Decepticons detected in sector 7!"
"SKYWARP! The autobot yelled."

ATTENTION!!!!!!!
A little question! How do you become a gestault?

Name: Cessna
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Aerial Recon
Alt. mode: Cessna Citation X
Weapons: Small saber, and a gatling gun.
Special Abilities: She can project a human hologram.
Height: 29 ft
Quote: “Thank you for flying Cessna air...I know you have a choice in terror providers, and I appreciate you choosing to scream with me....”

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 7
CHARISMA: 9
RANK:

Profile: Cessna is a high class robot, preferring to fly into battles with amazing grace and agility, than with brute strength. She is a born deceiver, enjoying posing as a passenger jet, just to immediately shoot off into the air, causing her victims extreme terror and all around discomfort and injury. When in battle, she is seen from above, almost freefalling towards her 'prey', in order to swoop up and launch a barrage of attacks.

Abilities: Cessna was named due to her vehicle mode, a Cessna Citation X. Due to her form, she has reached high speeds, hitting Mach 0.92 and climbing to 43,000 feet. She can transform in mid fall or flight, back and forth. She flies and fights with high agility, and grace. She isn't above doing a fancy twist here and there....

Weaknesses: Despite her agility and speed, she isn't overly strong or big. She could easily be beaten by someone bigger or stronger than her. She can't take many hits. She often lets her pride and fun loving get in the way, hence her penchant for tricking unsuspecting people into riding her, and then doing all sorts of dangerous manuevers.

Sample Post:

She shot out of the crevace, arms outstretched and letting out a loud but shrill laugh. She flew high into the air, before rising into a dramatic arc, and transforming into her vehicle form. She sped up as she dove downwards, almost completly perpendicular from the ground. She then turned into her robot form, and began to strafe the ground....

Cessna slowed and just sat above the ground, legs crossed as if she were in a seat.

"Oh come on...you don't want to run from lil' ol' me do you?" She said with a laugh, in an voice fit for a friendly but snobby flight attendant, rather than an angry fighter.

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Name: Flash
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Signal
Alt. mode: Porshe Carrera GT
Weapons: Laser, small dagger like blade.
Special Abilities: Low fuel consumption
Height: 25 ft
Quote: “Take a walk on the wild side, do that thing...it don't mean a thing if you ain't got that swing...”

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 9
RANK:

Profile: She is friendly, she's cute, she's popoular to boot! Or at least that was what she said after catching a glimpse of a human movie at a drive in. In reality, she loves to have fun, joke around and loves to keep certain human trends, especially in her dialogue. She's even learned some rather comical dance moves. She likes to wear her emotions on her sleeve, and even goes so far as to broadcast them with a human song as she speaks (she speaks really fast). If you hear some triumphant music during a charge, that's her. She has an overall aesthetic appearance, her sleekness goes in both forms. She's a showboat.

Abilities: Her weight does not prevent her from giving 0-100-0 mph a time of less than 10 seconds with the maximum speed of 253 mph. She can transform in mid drive, often using the momentum to give her a boost as she leaps towards her enemies. She is extremely agile, alot of her moves being seen as acrobatic, and very show offy. The bottom of her feet can have wheels, which causes her to look as if she were skating in robot form. Her most comical ability would be her super speakers, she can blast a song so loud that busts nearby windows. She brags and calls her her bass. She can also use that to pick up distant signals.

Weaknesses: Despite her agility and speed, she isn't overly strong or big. She could easily be beaten by someone bigger or stronger than her. She can't take many hits. She doesn't seem to realize this, and will often go into majorly one sided (against her...) battles, and will come back severly damaged. Shes a bit of an adrenaline (speed) junkie, and will lose herself to the thrill of how fast she can now go.

Sample Post:

"Yea!" She shouted. Soon a very eye catching silver car, one you might see in the movies or in car shows (where she acquired her form from...), shot over an edge, and was now flying accross a canyon. The car began to turn, and seemed to change.

Soon Flash was facing the opposite direction, flying backwards. She reached behind her back, pulling out a laser type of blaster, and shot repeatedly, as she skidded onto the ground ont he other side. She then twisted around on the ground, and rose to her feet in mid slide. She then ran as fast as she could, using the wheels on her feet as extra boost...

Name: Storm

Allegiance: Autobot

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: Single headed winged dragon

Weapons:
Ion Particle Chargers (x2, Robot mode only)
Internal Flamethrower (x1, Dragon mode only)
Horns (x3, Dragon mode only)
Mecha Fangs (x2, Dragon mode only)
Claws (x10)
Tail Mounted Blades (x5)
Arm-Mounted Spikes (x3 on each arm)

Special Abilities:
Robot mode flight ability

Height: 42 feet/12,8 meters

Quote: "Brute strength is the only efficient way of getting things done."

STRENGTH: 9
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 4
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Not yet determined

Profile:
When it comes to fighting, she's the best around, no questions asked. Her dragon alt mode is enough to scare the living daylights out of any enemy she comes across. Storm's always tough, even when off duty. Her wicked sense of humor never leaves her and she almost never hesitates to hurt someone who insults her, even if that someone is her friend. Storm's gained most of her battle experience from fighting in battle arenas. She's always been tough, but years of dueling and fighting in the arena has made her a brutal fighter. Her claws make short work of the opposition, no matter what the opposition is.

Abilities:
Storm possesses ten stainless steel claws which can slice through most metals with ease. In the air, she can fly at speeds of up to 225 mph. In a nosedive, Storm is capable of exceeding speeds of 365 mph. The five blades on her tail make ideal mele weapons and usually manage to keep enemies at a comfortable distance. She prefers hand-to-hand combat however, if she finds herself at a distance, she possesses an internal flamethrower at the base of her throat that can be utilized in her dragon mode to project a jet of white-hot flames towards her opposition. Her long, slender form allows her to perform complex aerial maneuvers and provides her with superb agility. Also, she has twin ion particle chargers embedded into the palms of her hands that, when charged, can produce a brilliant ion particle beam that has a range of several hundred feet.


Weaknesses:
Storm, although having a vast array of weapons, has limited options if caught in long-range combat. Her rage can easily consume her and she will push herself far beyond her limits, to the point of near death. Her wings, although strongly armored on the back, can be rendered useless if the delicate membrane underneath is even slightly damaged. In both forms, her tail is extremely sensitive. If removed she loses her center of balance, and if it is damaged, the pain can render her immobile. Also, Storm relies heavily on mele combat, leaving her quite unskilled in how to use firearms efficiently. Her abilities with technology are also quite limited, only to the extent of basic first aid.

Sample Post:
Hitting the ground with deadly force, the blue-gray Autobot warrior tumbled along the dry earth like a rag doll, finally coming to rest near a patch of dead foliage. The red and gold seeker sneered from above, detecting no motion from the metallic heap on the ground. He made his way towards the rust-colored earth, coming to rest just a few paces from the fallen warrior.

"So, this is the best the Autobots had to offer?" he said with a laugh.

The blue-gray Autobot began to rise to it's feet.

"Some silly little femme with the wits of a Sharkticon? Megatron should have no trouble seizing control of this wretched planet."

"Y-you're one to talk small fry." The female said, struggling to hold her form above the ground. She had to hand it to the Decepticon, he was quite brave to be insulting her, considering she towered over him by about 18 feet or so. She attempted to spread her wings, but the searing pain that ensued indicated that they were broken. "I-if I were you I'd watch who you mouth off to."

"Oooh, I'm shaking in my boots" He sneered.

A dissatisfied growl escaped from the dragoness's vocal circuits. Her clawed hand gripped at the wound in her side, steadily oozing fluids, pooling around her large, taloned feet. "Trust me, you don't want to make me angry..." She snarled in disgust, her words pronounced as sharply as her steel fangs.

The Decepticon scoffed "Please, you're pathetic you worthless trash heap!"

Without a moment's hesitation, the Autobot lunged, her claws slashing at everything in sight. With one successful swipe after another, she tore the seeker's wings to pieces. Suddenly, a brilliant bolt of energy sent her flying backwards. This time she was unable to stand. She watched as the seeker came closer, weapon drawn and aimed at her head.

"You know, I was considering letting you live and taking you as a prisoner." The all-too familiar hum of a laser charging filled the air as the seeker's finger squeezed on the trigger. "But now, I'm going to kill you."

In an instant, his optics grew bright in surprise and his weapon hit the ground.

"Think again." The femme sneered.

The seeker looked down. The dragoness's tail blade had impaled him straight through the chest. Through his spark.

"I ain't dieing pal." she panted as the red and gold jet's body went limp. She could hear more Autobots coming her to her location. The Decepticon slid off of her tail-mounted blades, collapsing in a pool of his own fluids.

"STORM!" She heard the medic exclaim in urgency.

A smile crept across her face, and the world around her began to fade into darkness "At least, not today."

With those words said, her optics dimmed and she slipped into unconsciousness.

Nico wrote:Name: Shadewing
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Hunter
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Stealth Bomber*
Weapons (Alt Mode): Bomb, Missile
Weapons (Robot Mode): Laser Rifle, Missile
Special Abilities: Flight, Cheap Cloaking
Height: 18 Ft**
Quote: "If you see me...that mean youre scrapmetal!.'

STRENGTH: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 4
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: Ask from the leader of the faction you belong.

Profile:
Shadewing is a hunter. When assigned a target, he never back down on the challenge. He begin by collecting information about his prey. When this is done, he chase it until he find the right moment (That mean in a dark place whit no one watching) He fly around and bomb him. Once his target is wounded, he land somewhere he can transform and finish-off his target.

Abilities:
Shadewing is fast, despite is size. He can fly at 450 Mph. He is an expert sharpshooter and skilled hunter. When assigned to track someone, he will never stop until is mission is done. Shadewing posses very limited cloaking capacity. Those are limited to Chameleon-Like ability***. Its very easy to spot him in bright area but its much harder where light is very low. He also make almost no noise in Vehicule mode.****

Weaknesses:
Shadewing is a poor melee fighter. He's also sacred of bright area where he can't hide. Oh, and he's claustrophobic too! His cloaking ability take sometime to activate. He has to wait 20 second before beign able to alter his color again. It take twice as long in Vehicule mode.

Sample Post:

Somewhere in the sky
Shadewing was flying silently over Seibertron. This was just a random flight. He had nothing to do these day, despite the war. *Im a hunter...not a frontline grunt* thought Shadewing. Then he saw them. Autobot. What where they doing there? He had no idea what they where doing there. But it din't matter. They where gonna go "BOOM"! That was what he had in mind. The Autobot never saw him coming. When they realised he was there, it was too late. The bomb hit them a second later. One of them was blown up and damaged. The other, well, they "learned" to fly! Thinking he had won, Shadewing transformed and flyed toward his hideout. But the Autobot where still alive and chasing him...
"I should have stayed to the old-fashion ambush!"

*Its somewhat based around the B-2 Sprit
**Im trying not to Mass-Shift too much
***He still cast a shadow
****Anyone whit good hearing can detect him

Well I am not sure what you mean about the mass shifting. At only 18ft tall he is too small to transform into a bomber without mass shifting. I would suggest making him taller, maybe 25ft tall. That still keeps him shorter than most Decepticons but is a bit more realistic for him transforming. Also, if you could run the application through some sort of spelling and grammar checker that would help. We don't require perfect spelling or grammar but improving it is always good.

Armorwind wrote:Name: Springer
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Aerial Defense
Alt. mode: Helicopter and Cybertronian Car
Weapons: Energy saber, Laser
Special Abilities: Springing power
Height: 32 ft
Quote: “Strength is more than just physical.”

STRENGTH: 9
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 9
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 5
CHARISMA: 9
RANK: 7

Profile: Springer is a wise-cracking, easy-going, sharp-witted and somewhat caustic fighting Autobot. He has an unfailing optimism and good humor and courage beyond known bounds, and with it all, the willingness to sacrifice himself for his friends and the sake of his mission.

Abilities: Springer has an incredible springing power, enabling him to cover distances by springing pogo stick-like by using the strength in his mighty legs. This he does in his robotic mode and his physique is heavily powerful, his chest massive, his arms enormous and well proportioned like the most massive body-builder. When he transforms, his automotive mode is superpowerful with the attributes of battle tank and speedcar combined. In robot mode, he carries a laser that produces giant wind funnels. His helicopter blade transforms into a light saber that can cut through concrete.

Weaknesses: At times, Springer can be overly confident in his abilities, leading him to overestimate himself in some combat situations

Sample Post:

A blast hit a part of the wall by Springer’s head. He hid behind the scrap metal to think He turned slightly as some debris flew right by his face. The shots continued.

“They didn’t list this in the job description,” he said. Another shot hit close to his leg. Springer smiled. “Alright, if you want to play rough.”

Suddenly, he transformed into his car mode and headed straight towards the Decepticon. The shots kept coming, hitting him every few times.

“That’s probably going to hurt in the morning,” he chuckled. “My turn: how about a nice breeze?”

His mounted cannon began blowing out high speed winds, forcing the Decepticon to move out of Springer’s path. The Autobot kept a lock on the enemy.

We’re not playing hide and seek

When the firing stopped, Springer transformed into his robot mode. He bent his knees in the air. After planting his feet in the ground, he jumped into the air, barely dodging the enemy fire. He quickly transformed into his helicopter mode, this time diving straight towards the Decepticon. Transforming into his robot mode, Springer drew out his sword.

I guess it’s your turn now.

Approved, you can start him in the Polyhex thread where he probably too part in the recently concluded fighting.

Armorwind wrote:Name: Thundercracker
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Incendiary Gun
Special Abilities: N/A
Height: 31 ft
Quote: “The deadliest weapon is terror.”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 9
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 7
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: 5

Profile: Soaring swiftly through the clouds, Thundercracker gazes with scorn on the creatures below. He is utterly contemptuous of anything that cannot lift itself off the ground and claim the sky. Occasionally, he expresses that contempt by diving and striking, leaving flame and destruction as he again speeds upward. Yet he is not totally convinced of the cause that he serves. Only the words of his Decepticon companions about the rightness of their cause, the destiny of conquest that is their birthright, convince him to go on. He is persuaded because he wants to be persuaded. Without a sense of purpose, Thundercracker would find his life unbearable.

Abilities: Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thundercracker can attain speeds of up to 1500 mph. He has the additional ability to produce controlled sonic booms of deafening magnitude that can be heard within a 200-mile radius. He can launch a drone rocket with a range of 500 miles that behaves similarly to a cruise missile and has the concussive force of 3000 lbs. of TNT. He has a shoulder-mounted automatic incendiary gun that shoots at 100 rounds per minute heat-resistant ceramic bullets containing a highly explosive flammable material that ignites on impact.

Weaknesses: Lingering doubts in Thundercracker's subconscious sometimes surface and impede his effectiveness, particularly when innocent human lives are endangered. Usually his fear of Decepticon Leader Megatron compels him to overlook these doubts.

Sample Post:

From above, Thundercracker saw an Autobot driving. He couldn’t resist making roadkill from the air. Activating his cruise missiles, he began shooting the other robot. Managing to hit the engine in the back, he transformed from his alt mode to better watch the Autobot swerve, crash, and transform to see what happened. During all this, Thundercracker had managed to fly right down to the injured robot.

“Show time,” he said, allowing the Autobot to hear.

Thundercracker pushed his right foot down on the Autobot’s chest below his insignia. Grinning, he aimed his arm cannon at the symbol. Suddenly, looking at the Autobot’s face, he hesitated.

Why am I even doing this?

The Autobot seemed to understand why Thundercracker had faltered. He gave the Decepticon a sympathetic yet terrified look.

“Because he said so,” the seeker said, pointing his thumb towards a non-present Megatron. The smirk on Thundercracker’s face appeared again. He opened fire.

Go ahead and drop his courage down to 5 as that is what it is listed as on his tech specs. Also if you could list all his weapons in the weapons list area, you didn't put his missile thing there, and his sonic booms under special abilities we should be all set.

Aggiebot wrote:Name: Blaster
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Communications
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Light-armored Hover-tank
Weapons: Electro Scrambler Gun, Laser Pistol
Special Abilities: Cassetobots
Height: 30 ft
Quote: “When the music is rockin’, I’m rollin’.”

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 2
ENDURANCE: 8
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 9
RANK: 7

Profile: Blaster likes to turn it up loud. That goes for the way he does everything: fighting, talking, playing- living! If Blaster is involved, he makes his presence known. He is in the forefront of any situation. But aside from the things he normally does in the course of being an Autobot, he has a special passion: music. His ability to monitor radio transmissions has exposed him to many Earthen musical styles, all of which he finds interesting. But it is rock music and hip hop- good, hard and loud- that really sparks his circuits. He'd much rather be lost in the sound of a searing guitar solo than fight Decepticons. However, when called upon he will do what he must for the Autobot cause, albeit reluctantly at times.

Abilities: Blaster can assume to form and shrink to the size of an AM/FM stereo cassette deck. In addition to performing the normal functions of a deck, he can receive radio signals for all frequencies. He can detect signals with power outputs as weak as a millionth of a watt. His ability to transmit radio signals up to 4000 miles makes him the communications center for the Autobots. In robot form he carries an electro-scrambler gun, which emits powerful waves of electromagnetic energy that disrupt the operations of all but the most heavily shielded electrical devices. In theory, the gun should interfere with the minute electrical impulses of the human nervous system, but Blaster has never used the gun on a human.

Weaknesses: Blaster's most obvious weakness is for rock 'n' roll and hip hop. He will walk unwittingly into a trap for the promise of hearing some new tunes. Radio static has the effect of hampering his operation and even, if strong enough, knocking him out completely.

Sample Post:

He sat with his speakers blaring, and bobbing his head to the beat of the bass. Had not it been for his dancing around, he would not have noticed the enemy fleet of Decepticons heading straight towards Autobot City. Immediately the music stopped as Blaster transformed into his tape deck mode.

“Oh snap! Time to switch the station…Optimus! Come in Optimus! The Decepticons are two-steppin’ their way over here and quick! So whatever you’re doin’ you need to pop, lock, and drop it ‘cause there ain’t much time before they get here!”

He transformed into robot mode and activated the alarm. With a pistol in his left hand and his scrambler in his right, he started to walk out and prepare for battle. Suddenly the music came back on, and louder than before.

“Let’s rock ‘n roll!”

The rest of the profile needs to be consistent with his cybertronian mode. You still mention him turning into a radio. I also don't believe he carries a secondary pistol as part of his regular arsenal. He can grab one sometimes, but he normally just has his Electro scrambler.

Aggiebot wrote:I changed the alt mode and adjusted some stats:

Name: Skywarp
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Variable-Caliber machine guns
Special Abilities: Teleportation/Warping
Height: 31 ft
Quote: “Strike when the enemy isn’t looking.”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 9
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 10
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: 9

Profile: Skywarp is the sneakiest of the Decepticons. On Cybertron he was known to appear out of nowhere in the middle of peaceful Autobot villages to rain terror and destruction upon them, if the mood hit him. He'll even use his teleportation powers to play a prank on a fellow Decepticon. Everyone enjoys this except the butt of his joke since Skywarp's sense of humor tends to be rather cruel and physically abusive. Skywarp isn't too smart and would be totally useless without the supervision of Megatron. Skywarp is the sneakiest of the Decepticons. On Cybertron he was known to appear out of nowhere in the middle of peaceful Autobot villages to rain terror and destruction upon them, if the mood hit him. He'll even use his teleportation powers to play a prank on a fellow Decepticon. Everyone enjoys this except the butt of his joke since Skywarp's sense of humor tends to be rather cruel and physically abusive. Skywarp isn't too smart and would be totally useless without the supervision of Megatron.

Abilities: Skywarp can reach a top speed of 1500 mph. But what makes him unique is his ability to instantly teleport himself a maximum distance of 2.5 miles. He also carries a heatseeking missile launcher and a variable-caliber machine gun.

Weaknesses: Skywarp's control of the accuracy of his teleportation power diminishes as the distance he teleports increases. As a result, if he's not too careful, he's likely to crash into things when he arrives at where he's teleporting. Not being too bright doesn't help him avoid these accidents either.

Sample Post:

A sudden beep came from his com-link. His superior’s voice emerged in his receptors: Take the energon. Don’t let them get away with it!

Always silent, yet always following orders, he immediately saw the Autobot car driving as fast as it could through the streets of Cybertron.

Now it’s time to do what I do best…

Skywarp transformed into his jet mode as he flew after the car as high and as quiet as he could. Then, as if by instinct, he dove with such speed that it seemed too fast to calculate an exact reading on any speedometer….BOOM! Skywarp had transformed into robot mode and landed on his feet with such impact that the Autobot car flipped backwards.

With an array of shots towards the escaping car, he managed to keep the car in a close proximity for any attack. And, in what seemed like no time at all, Skywarp teleported in front of the Autobot and plunged his fist into his enemy’s motor with great force.

With the little time that he had before the Autobot recovered from a temporary blackout, Skywarp had taken the energon cargo and fled the scene without making a sound….

“Hahaha! They never see me coming…”

Ok, there is a problem with the stats and its not your fault at all. I believe when they printed the tech specs for Skywarp and Starscream the two got confused and Skywarp ended up with Starscream's stats. You can tell by how he has INT of 9 but is described as being not too bright. Go ahead and just copy the stats from the already approved profile in the Canon Decepticon Profiles List thread in the character profiles forum.

*Silverblade wrote:Edited
Im open to suggestions I am very adaptable.

Name: Sub-Zero
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Scout and Message Relay
Alt. mode: Beast mode wolf like Cybertronic beast
Weapons: Absolute Zero Laser Ray, Basic Laser riffle, and basic kinetic energy gun
Special Abilities: The Absolute Zero Ray, Above average sensory, Extreme strength for his size in alt mode(see description below)
Height: 21ft (6.4m) Robot mode / 3ft (0.914m) Beast mode –(mass distortion)

Quote: “War does not make heroes, The actions you take do.”

STRENGTH: 9 (not for battle, but for transporting things)
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 2 (alt mode slow)
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: ? (need help here because of special weapon)
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: UNRANKED

Profile:
Sub-Zero is a brave and loyal soldier, but will lead a team if required. When given a choice he prefers to take orders from his commander rather than give orders. He is an independent thinker,and will make decisions to protect his team even if it means going against orders, which will sometimes bother him afterwards. Many of his traits are heightened natural abilities. He has immense strength for his size, often pulling cargo, (in his alt form) that would normally require a rig. This strength has proven valuable in saving the lives of fallen comrades many times bigger than he. His Night Vision and Blue Eyes come in handy during the 24 hours of darkness found on some planets and the blinding white of the sun . He is loveable and friendly, getting along well with fellow Autobots. Sub-Zero can always be counted on, and has a great sense of adventure, not hesitating to join intriguing missions.

NEW History:
Zero was flying a scout mission to gather data on the Deceptacons. His shuttle was over the base where the 4 million-year-old data had been stored from a scientific mission done of north pole of earth. He was discovered, and was shot down by Deceptacon fire which caused him to crash into the outer computer terminal. Part of his craft’s engines smashed through the wall and touching with the computer. He tried to escape from the wreckage only to discover that the Deceptacons were looking for him. Desprate he franticlly punched a few codes into the council in an attempt to fire theship's weapon systems. While he was pinned beneath the wreck, the Decepticon computer sent a surge of energy at his ship, as it does in its own defense. But because of the damage, the surge also carried loose information from the stored scientific data the cons had been harboring. He screamed, as by some unlucky turn of fate his alt mode upgrader within his ship went haywire and shot him while he was still awake, taking from him his beloved cybertronic shuttle alt mode and forcing upon his body some alien shape.

Abilities:
*Many of his traits are heightened natural abilities Although small he can drag a fallen Autobot away from harm, or pull cargo by himself that would normally require a rig. Tracking with his internal pathfinder, Night Vision / Blue Eyes to compensate for extreme dark and extreme light. He can withstand extreme cold that would freeze fuel lines.

** His signature weapon is an Absolute Zero Laser – Absolute zero is the Kelvin temperature at which all atomic motion stops. The universe is at an average of 3* – 4* Kelvin. This weapon drains him severely, down to 25% of functioning energon levels. After use he must be secure or he will go into shutdown. Usually someone on his team will grab him before he collapses, often giving him a ride back to base.

In Robot mode He can use both the basic weaponry and his special weapon. When transforming his robot form comes from a mass shifting much like that of Soundwave.

Weaknesses:
His loss of 75% of energon levels after use of his Absolute Zero Laser could very likely get him killed. Along with his tendency to refuse to rest after sustaining injury, especially if his team is still fighting. Thus limiting the use of this weapon. His small size in alt mode causes difficulties when performing tasks on Cybertron.

EDITED Sample Post:
[This will also describe what happens to him after use of weapons]
Cybertron

The darkness was not as threatening as it could have been, His Night vision took the edge off.
Every two hours a fellow Transformer would run checks on the energon lines to be sure there were no spills or clogs. The Neutral worker bot approached the pipeline unaware of a pair of burning blue optics watching him. Zero found a silent fun in spying on his charges. He grinned to himself.
Since the first attack on energon line Sub-Zero had been stationed by it in order to help protect it. His new alt mode made it easy to hide among turbines and wires. The Autobot commander stationed in his section , had assigned two other Autobots to assist him until a More experienced team could assemble and take over. He was also installed with a communicator that allowed them to call for backup if needed. The blue light in his eyes dimmed as the worker started in his direction. The feeling of being watched spooked the mech into a hurried inspection.
Sub-Zero snorted to himself, these neutrals knew he was their guardian and kept it a secret from the Decepticons, but they were still leery of him. They just could not accept the concept of a talking dog it was uncommon on cybertron, even though he was a robot. It was not his fault the ship went crazy and zapped him. He growled in silence, Oh but they were ok with talking two headed beasts, and those stupid little scooter things. Suddenly a voice buzzed in his internal communicator.
>>
Silence then…..
>>

Sub-Zero still had not responded, his attention was focused on the figure before him. The worker was unaware of the third seeker watching him from behind. Sub-Zero had not needed his comrade’s warning for his sensors had picked up this lone Decepticon before the transmission. The seeker aimed his laser rifle at the worker, the darkness of the cloaking his actions from the busy mech. A blaze of electric blue light crackled in the air, but it did not come from the Decepticon. Sub-Zero moved from his hiding place, darting at the mech and grabbing him by arm, the Autobot pulled him into the inspection station, closing the door with a back leg.

“Zero, What the heck! You scared the life outta me.”
The mech was shaken and obviously scared. The Metallic husky turned his head to look at him.
“You’re lucky I was here, a microsecond later and that Decepticon would have fried you.”
The worker bot slipped himself against a chair.
“You mean the blue flash was him firing at me?”
Zero was facing the door, oddly his body wobbled struggling to stand, he answered.
“No that was my Absolute Zero Laser, but now that I’ve used it I can’t transform nor defend us for 3 astro hours.”

The Cybertronic dog’s blue optics fluxed as his energon levels dipped dangerously low. He needed to contact Polar Ice but did not have enough power to do so.

”Xenon, I need you to radio Polar Ice and Deep Freeze, let them know I’m depleted, and if they can’t handle this they need to call for backup.”

The metal husky put his large paws on the windowsill, and observed the frozen Decepticon. His two seeker wingmates would need to defrost him and reactivate him, that is as long as Zero had missed hitting the poor guy’s spark. If he had hit that the sentience of the other transformer would cease to be, as the power of Zero’s weapon stops all movement at a molecular level. It would certainly kill those made of flesh and bone. As for the Autobot who wheedled it, the weapon brought his levels close to death. It caused a severe pan to trace through his circuits. At times he wished he had never been created with such a thing attached to him, no would he ever wish such a ting on another transformer even a Deceptacon. By now he had learned to hide his discomfort. He jumped down, paceing over to Xenon to listen to his conversation with Polar Ice. Suddenly his legs went out from under him and a high pitched beeping started to pulse. His systems were failing, Zero lay there, as Xenon yelled franticly into the receiver to the other Autobots. He dropped the microphone as the sound of jet engines reached his auds. His optics turned to Zero, fear making them shine like two flashlights.

“Zero, I …. I don’t know what to do.”

The sound of Heavy metal foot falls approached the building ……


******
After thought
He hates ravage
Cats & Dogs

Scene from in the base:
A fellow team mate makes a snide remark about how Sub-Zero reminds him of Ravage.

“Don’t you compare me to Ravage! At least I can transform into robot mode and kick your rear axle! That lowlife has to hide inside of Soundwave.”

Well, the history part is still a bit tricky. Basically he can't have ever landed on Earth. If you want he could have possibly, briefly, scanned the planet at some point and gotten the idea for some sort of beast mode, but this will have to have happened a long time ago.

The beast mode itself is also very tricky. All of the other G1 Transformers that have beast modes turn into giant versions of those animals. The Insecticons are giant insects, Predacons giant animals, even Ravage and Lazerbeak are giant forms of their animals. Turning into an animal that is only 3 ft tall basically totally cripples your character. If you want you can make him a minibot like Bumblebee so he would still be small but effective.

As for his weapon, I'm not really sure what exactly it does. Could you describe its effects on the target a bit more?

Tenkyoen [AKA: WheelBar!] wrote:Name: WheelBar
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Warrior (at one time he was torn between the two, but he decided he was a better strategist than an engineer.)
Alt. mode: Customized (for greater speed) 2004 smoke-black Nissan Titan
Weapons: His main weapon is a Claymore-style (medieval) sword that he can pull out of his leg. He has two other smaller weapons, a small pistol that comes out of his arm, and small short-range blades he can launch out of his wrists.
Special Abilities: WheelBar has the ability to convert his wheels on his legs to his feet, (like roller skates) which provides greater speed in robot form.
Height: 36 ft, 11m
Quote: “Any battle can be won with the right strategy and persistence.”

STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 8
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 3
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: If you would be kind enough to put WheelBar at somewhat of a low rank (not 0 please!) because he wishes to earn his ranks.

Profile: WheelBar is a knowledgeable, tactical warrior who is fresh out of Autobot Academy. (I’m new here, so I’m not sure what it’s called) He cares deeply for his fellow companions, and will go to daring feats to keep them out of harm’s way if need be. He is extremely intelligent and uses these skills in the battlefield to help win battles and missions. He is not afraid to speak his mind, and tries to do his best when talking to superiors. (he does hope someday to earn the right to lead missions.) He is extremely loyal, and always keeps his word. (as much as one robot can) Although he can be a serious warrior, WheelBar kind of has an imagination and sense of humor all his own which gives him very unique fighting strategies. Through his abilities and friendliness, he will very likely become close friends with the other Autobots fairly quickly.

Abilities: With his special ability to switch his wheels to his feet, WheelBar can become surprisingly fast in his robot form, which can often bring about strong surprise attacks.

Weaknesses: WheelBar’s weaknesses would be that he is young and sometimes a little to eager, which, added on with his inexperience, can be challenging at times. He is a very good fighter, but he can be overwhelmed by sheer brute force in some situations

Sample Post:

CLASSIFIED CITY: CYBERTRON

Missiles were streaking overhead his cover of overturned steel as WheelBar lay underneath it with his small pistol ready, ready to attack.

“Man, why couldn’t I be a big-gunner right now?!” WheelBar muttered in frustration. Another plasma grenade streamed past him, exploding not to far away.

“Nhh!!” He covered himself from the blast, debris spraying in his face. He wiped his optic sensors and poked his head out to look at the situation of the battle. Scorpinock was in full-fortress mode, assassinating the Autobot troops who were waiting for their desperately needed reinforcements to come.

“Great…” This was a lovely first mission he was having… “Go with guarding the city! I’ll be an easy mission! Decepticons don’t even know we’re here!” He mocked his captain that had assigned him guard duty of a city running on a new kind of energon-fuel.

“Sure…right…easy…” He sighed. He wanted nothing more than to run up to that over-grown bug-scrap, he surely wasn’t afraid! But he knew in his head that charging a city with one pistol and weapons that could cut was definitely not high on the ‘Good Idea List’.

He turned to his right, looking at another Autobot pinned down like him, just as another plasma grenade landed right next to the Autobot.

“LOOK OUT!!!” WheelBar’s instincts took over and he leaped to the other Autobot’s position, pushing both out from under the steel just as the explosive detonated…

I like what you have here, just a couple of minor points. First, very few Transformers have been to Earth yet, so he still should have a Cybertronian mode. The other thing is the skating ability is a special one, so I am giving it a stat penalty of -2, so adjust your stats accordingly and I will take another look at it.

Durge344 wrote:Name: Durge344
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Advanced Scout
Alt Mode: Robotic Tyranosaurus Rex
Weapons: Fusion Cannon (A mixture between a Basic Laser Pistol and a Small Bullet Gun)
Hight33ft i'm not sure how much in Metres!
Quote: "I've seen Life, Death and Things Humans were not meant to see. Well, I will soon enough!"

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 6
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: No-one's told me yet
(I would have liked to put an 8 on everything but...)

Profile: I havn't had much practice but...
Durge344 is a young, headstrong scout. He is eager and always willing to help other Autobots in danger. He may be an Autobot but he admires many of the Decepticons. (generally Deathsaurus and Starscream)
Durge344's Alt Mode is robotic T-Rex, not unlike G1 Grimlock's. Durge344 would like to learn how to warp. Because of this, he admires the Decepticon Skywarp. He believes Optimus Prime to be as generous as a god. He would do anything to meet him.

Abilities: Can jump PRETTY HIGH! His Fusion Cannon is launched ona series of machanisms inside his right arm. This meens he can flip his gun out of his arm so that he's ready to blast. (kind of like the Movie Leader Class Optimus Prime)

Weakness: Can be too eager and wreckless to pay attention to his fellow Autobots. And he has a thing for Autographs. He systems may break down momentarily due to the fact he is too active. THE LAST AND MOST IMPORTANT WEAKNESS IS: He trusts Skywarp too much!

Sample Post: I suck at thes things but...
"Erm, hello!"
no reply.
Durge344 gets up looks at his surroundings. Complete and utter Blackness.
THEN a huge blinding flash of light illuminated a large computer, a circut board on a nearby metal wall and a large black transformer mumbling something into a comunicator.
"EXCUSE ME!"
The yellow transformer jumped in surprise and turned to face Durge344. An Autobot sighn was noticable his chest.
"Can I help you?" he asked.
"By Primus, you're..." Durge344 began to say.
Then an alarm sounded. "MALFUNCTION, MALFUNCTION! Decepticons detected in sector 7!"
"SKYWARP! The autobot yelled."

ATTENTION!!!!!!!
A little question! How do you become a gestault?

Ok, first of all the character's name doesn't make any sense with those numbers, so you need to change it. Very few characters have been to Earth, so you will need a Cybertronian alternate mode. The Fusion cannon is a weapon unique to Megatron so you will need to name your gun something else and describe what it does more. His quote needs to be changed since he will not even know about humans. You also seem a bit confused about the game setting, as there is no Deathsaurus in the game. I suggest reading the RPG History and notes thread. I don't understand why he would trust any Decepticons, so that bit of his weakness doesn't make any sense. The whole thing could use a run through a spelling and grammar checker as well.

As for gestalts, work on getting your first character approved for now. Gestalts aren't going to be prevalent in the game for a while.

Concord wrote:Name: Cessna
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Aerial Recon
Alt. mode: Cessna Citation X
Weapons: Small saber, and a gatling gun.
Special Abilities: She can project a human hologram.
Height: 29 ft
Quote: “Thank you for flying Cessna air...I know you have a choice in terror providers, and I appreciate you choosing to scream with me....”

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 6
ACCURACY: 7
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 7
CHARISMA: 9
RANK:

Profile: Cessna is a high class robot, preferring to fly into battles with amazing grace and agility, than with brute strength. She is a born deceiver, enjoying posing as a passenger jet, just to immediately shoot off into the air, causing her victims extreme terror and all around discomfort and injury. When in battle, she is seen from above, almost freefalling towards her 'prey', in order to swoop up and launch a barrage of attacks.

Abilities: Cessna was named due to her vehicle mode, a Cessna Citation X. Due to her form, she has reached high speeds, hitting Mach 0.92 and climbing to 43,000 feet. She can transform in mid fall or flight, back and forth. She flies and fights with high agility, and grace. She isn't above doing a fancy twist here and there....

Weaknesses: Despite her agility and speed, she isn't overly strong or big. She could easily be beaten by someone bigger or stronger than her. She can't take many hits. She often lets her pride and fun loving get in the way, hence her penchant for tricking unsuspecting people into riding her, and then doing all sorts of dangerous manuevers.

Sample Post:

She shot out of the crevace, arms outstretched and letting out a loud but shrill laugh. She flew high into the air, before rising into a dramatic arc, and transforming into her vehicle form. She sped up as she dove downwards, almost completly perpendicular from the ground. She then turned into her robot form, and began to strafe the ground....

Cessna slowed and just sat above the ground, legs crossed as if she were in a seat.

"Oh come on...you don't want to run from lil' ol' me do you?" She said with a laugh, in an voice fit for a friendly but snobby flight attendant, rather than an angry fighter.

.............................

Name: Flash
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Signal
Alt. mode: Porshe Carrera GT
Weapons: Laser, small dagger like blade.
Special Abilities: Low fuel consumption
Height: 25 ft
Quote: “Take a walk on the wild side, do that thing...it don't mean a thing if you ain't got that swing...”

STRENGTH: 4
INTELLIGENCE: 6
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 4
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 5
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 9
RANK:

Profile: She is friendly, she's cute, she's popoular to boot! Or at least that was what she said after catching a glimpse of a human movie at a drive in. In reality, she loves to have fun, joke around and loves to keep certain human trends, especially in her dialogue. She's even learned some rather comical dance moves. She likes to wear her emotions on her sleeve, and even goes so far as to broadcast them with a human song as she speaks (she speaks really fast). If you hear some triumphant music during a charge, that's her. She has an overall aesthetic appearance, her sleekness goes in both forms. She's a showboat.

Abilities: Her weight does not prevent her from giving 0-100-0 mph a time of less than 10 seconds with the maximum speed of 253 mph. She can transform in mid drive, often using the momentum to give her a boost as she leaps towards her enemies. She is extremely agile, alot of her moves being seen as acrobatic, and very show offy. The bottom of her feet can have wheels, which causes her to look as if she were skating in robot form. Her most comical ability would be her super speakers, she can blast a song so loud that busts nearby windows. She brags and calls her her bass. She can also use that to pick up distant signals.

Weaknesses: Despite her agility and speed, she isn't overly strong or big. She could easily be beaten by someone bigger or stronger than her. She can't take many hits. She doesn't seem to realize this, and will often go into majorly one sided (against her...) battles, and will come back severly damaged. Shes a bit of an adrenaline (speed) junkie, and will lose herself to the thrill of how fast she can now go.

Sample Post:

"Yea!" She shouted. Soon a very eye catching silver car, one you might see in the movies or in car shows (where she acquired her form from...), shot over an edge, and was now flying accross a canyon. The car began to turn, and seemed to change.

Soon Flash was facing the opposite direction, flying backwards. She reached behind her back, pulling out a laser type of blaster, and shot repeatedly, as she skidded onto the ground ont he other side. She then twisted around on the ground, and rose to her feet in mid slide. She then ran as fast as she could, using the wheels on her feet as extra boost...

Well the big problems with these is the lack of contact Transformers have had with Earth. I suppose Cybertron could pick up some stray signals from the planet that could lead a few Transformers into getting into human culture, but they would certainly be looked at as oddballs. Either way they shouldn't have Earth forms yet.

indigirl wrote:Name: Storm

Allegiance: Autobot

Function: Warrior

Alt. mode: Single headed winged dragon

Weapons:
Ion Particle Chargers (x2, Robot mode only)
Internal Flamethrower (x1, Dragon mode only)
Horns (x3, Dragon mode only)
Mecha Fangs (x2, Dragon mode only)
Claws (x10)
Tail Mounted Blades (x5)
Arm-Mounted Spikes (x3 on each arm)

Special Abilities:
Robot mode flight ability

Height: 42 feet/12,8 meters

Quote: "Brute strength is the only efficient way of getting things done."

STRENGTH: 9
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 5
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: 4
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 9
TECH SKILL: 2
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: Not yet determined

Profile:
When it comes to fighting, she's the best around, no questions asked. Her dragon alt mode is enough to scare the living daylights out of any enemy she comes across. Storm's always tough, even when off duty. Her wicked sense of humor never leaves her and she almost never hesitates to hurt someone who insults her, even if that someone is her friend. Storm's gained most of her battle experience from fighting in battle arenas. She's always been tough, but years of dueling and fighting in the arena has made her a brutal fighter. Her claws make short work of the opposition, no matter what the opposition is.

Abilities:
Storm possesses ten stainless steel claws which can slice through most metals with ease. In the air, she can fly at speeds of up to 225 mph. In a nosedive, Storm is capable of exceeding speeds of 365 mph. The five blades on her tail make ideal mele weapons and usually manage to keep enemies at a comfortable distance. She prefers hand-to-hand combat however, if she finds herself at a distance, she possesses an internal flamethrower at the base of her throat that can be utilized in her dragon mode to project a jet of white-hot flames towards her opposition. Her long, slender form allows her to perform complex aerial maneuvers and provides her with superb agility. Also, she has twin ion particle chargers embedded into the palms of her hands that, when charged, can produce a brilliant ion particle beam that has a range of several hundred feet.


Weaknesses:
Storm, although having a vast array of weapons, has limited options if caught in long-range combat. Her rage can easily consume her and she will push herself far beyond her limits, to the point of near death. Her wings, although strongly armored on the back, can be rendered useless if the delicate membrane underneath is even slightly damaged. In both forms, her tail is extremely sensitive. If removed she loses her center of balance, and if it is damaged, the pain can render her immobile. Also, Storm relies heavily on mele combat, leaving her quite unskilled in how to use firearms efficiently. Her abilities with technology are also quite limited, only to the extent of basic first aid.

Sample Post:
Hitting the ground with deadly force, the blue-gray Autobot warrior tumbled along the dry earth like a rag doll, finally coming to rest near a patch of dead foliage. The red and gold seeker sneered from above, detecting no motion from the metallic heap on the ground. He made his way towards the rust-colored earth, coming to rest just a few paces from the fallen warrior.

"So, this is the best the Autobots had to offer?" he said with a laugh.

The blue-gray Autobot began to rise to it's feet.

"Some silly little femme with the wits of a Sharkticon? Megatron should have no trouble seizing control of this wretched planet."

"Y-you're one to talk small fry." The female said, struggling to hold her form above the ground. She had to hand it to the Decepticon, he was quite brave to be insulting her, considering she towered over him by about 18 feet or so. She attempted to spread her wings, but the searing pain that ensued indicated that they were broken. "I-if I were you I'd watch who you mouth off to."

"Oooh, I'm shaking in my boots" He sneered.

A dissatisfied growl escaped from the dragoness's vocal circuits. Her clawed hand gripped at the wound in her side, steadily oozing fluids, pooling around her large, taloned feet. "Trust me, you don't want to make me angry..." She snarled in disgust, her words pronounced as sharply as her steel fangs.

The Decepticon scoffed "Please, you're pathetic you worthless trash heap!"

Without a moment's hesitation, the Autobot lunged, her claws slashing at everything in sight. With one successful swipe after another, she tore the seeker's wings to pieces. Suddenly, a brilliant bolt of energy sent her flying backwards. This time she was unable to stand. She watched as the seeker came closer, weapon drawn and aimed at her head.

"You know, I was considering letting you live and taking you as a prisoner." The all-too familiar hum of a laser charging filled the air as the seeker's finger squeezed on the trigger. "But now, I'm going to kill you."

In an instant, his optics grew bright in surprise and his weapon hit the ground.

"Think again." The femme sneered.

The seeker looked down. The dragoness's tail blade had impaled him straight through the chest. Through his spark.

"I ain't dieing pal." she panted as the red and gold jet's body went limp. She could hear more Autobots coming her to her location. The Decepticon slid off of her tail-mounted blades, collapsing in a pool of his own fluids.

"STORM!" She heard the medic exclaim in urgency.

A smile crept across her face, and the world around her began to fade into darkness "At least, not today."

With those words said, her optics dimmed and she slipped into unconsciousness.

Well your character is too large for a starting character. At most starting characters should be around 32' at the most. The dragon alternate mode is a bit problematic as well, as I'm not sure why a Transformer would choose an alternate mode based on a mythological creature from a planet they have never been to and know next to nothing about.

Name: Thundercracker
Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: Cybertronian Jet
Weapons: Incendiary Gun, Drone Rockets
Special Abilities: Controlled Sonic Booms
Height: 31 ft
Quote: “The deadliest weapon is terror.”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 9
SPEED: 9
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 5
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 7
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: 5

Profile: Soaring swiftly through the clouds, Thundercracker gazes with scorn on the creatures below. He is utterly contemptuous of anything that cannot lift itself off the ground and claim the sky. Occasionally, he expresses that contempt by diving and striking, leaving flame and destruction as he again speeds upward. Yet he is not totally convinced of the cause that he serves. Only the words of his Decepticon companions about the rightness of their cause, the destiny of conquest that is their birthright, convince him to go on. He is persuaded because he wants to be persuaded. Without a sense of purpose, Thundercracker would find his life unbearable.

Abilities: Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thundercracker can attain speeds of up to 1500 mph. He has the additional ability to produce controlled sonic booms of deafening magnitude that can be heard within a 200-mile radius. He can launch a drone rocket with a range of 500 miles that behaves similarly to a cruise missile and has the concussive force of 3000 lbs. of TNT. He has a shoulder-mounted automatic incendiary gun that shoots at 100 rounds per minute heat-resistant ceramic bullets containing a highly explosive flammable material that ignites on impact.

Weaknesses: Lingering doubts in Thundercracker's subconscious sometimes surface and impede his effectiveness, particularly when innocent human lives are endangered. Usually his fear of Decepticon Leader Megatron compels him to overlook these doubts.

Sample Post:

From above, Thundercracker saw an Autobot driving. He couldn’t resist making roadkill from the air. Activating his cruise missiles, he began shooting the other robot. Managing to hit the engine in the back, he transformed from his alt mode to better watch the Autobot swerve, crash, and transform to see what happened. During all this, Thundercracker had managed to fly right down to the injured robot.

“Show time,” he said, allowing the Autobot to hear.

Thundercracker pushed his right foot down on the Autobot’s chest below his insignia. Grinning, he aimed his arm cannon at the symbol. Suddenly, looking at the Autobot’s face, he hesitated.

Why am I even doing this?

The Autobot seemed to understand why Thundercracker had faltered. He gave the Decepticon a sympathetic yet terrified look.

“Because he said so,” the seeker said, pointing his thumb towards a non-present Megatron. The smirk on Thundercracker’s face appeared again. He opened fire.

Edited
((The base he crashes into is indeed on Cybertron. It would hold the data that maybe Starscream had taken back when Skyfire disappeared. I have it so he was not on earth and his alt mode is an accident. I will make his alt mode a Cybertronic wolf. Since a wolf would have been around at that time. I had originally chose the dog mode to make him appear more friendly and to have a thing against Ravage. *** I went into more detail on the weapon. I am trying to put strict limits on it so that it will not be used often and definitely at a low power, but may become a nice piece for a future story line. ))

Name: Sub-Zero
Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Scout and Message Relay
Alt. mode: Beast mode wolf like Cybertronic beast
Weapons: Absolute Zero Laser Ray, Basic Laser riffle, and basic kinetic energy gun
Special Abilities: The Absolute Zero Ray, Above average sensory, Extreme strength for his size in alt mode(see description below)
Height: 21ft (6.4m) Robot mode / Beast mode –(About the size of Ravage) *Mass shift like Soundwave

Quote: “War does not make heroes, The actions you take do.”

STRENGTH: 9 (not for battle, but for transporting things)
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 8
SPEED: 2 (alt mode slow)
ENDURANCE: 5
COURAGE: 8
FIREPOWER: ? (need help here because of special weapon)
ACCURACY: 6
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 6
CHARISMA: 7
RANK: UNRANKED

Profile:
Sub-Zero is a brave and loyal soldier, but will lead a team if required. When given a choice he prefers to take orders from his commander rather than give orders. He is an independent thinker,and will make decisions to protect his team even if it means going against orders, which will sometimes bother him afterwards. Many of his traits are heightened natural abilities. He has immense strength for his size, often pulling cargo, (in his alt form) that would normally require a rig. This strength has proven valuable in saving the lives of fallen comrades many times bigger than he. His Night Vision and Blue Eyes come in handy during the 24 hours of darkness found on some planets and the blinding white of the sun . He is loveable and friendly, getting along well with fellow Autobots. He is against killing when given the choice not to kill. Sub-Zero can always be counted on, and has a great sense of adventure, not hesitating to join intriguing missions.

NEW **UPDATED** History:
Zero was flying a scout mission to gather data on the Decepticons . His shuttle was over the Cybertron base where the 4 million-year-old data had been stored from a scientific mission done of north pole of earth. He was discovered, and was shot down by Decepticon fire which caused his shuttle to crash into the outer computer terminal. Part of his craft’s engines smashed through the wall and touching with the computer. He tried to escape from the wreckage only to discover that the Decepticons were looking for him. Desperate he franticly punched a few codes into the council in an attempt to fire the ship's weapon systems. While he was pinned beneath the wreck, the Decepticon computer sent a surge of energy at his ship, as it does in its own defense. But because of the damage, the surge also carried loose information from the stored scientific data the cons had been harboring. He screamed, as by some unlucky turn of fate his alt mode upgrader within his ship went haywire and shot him while he was still awake, taking from him his beloved cybertronic shuttle alt mode and forcing upon his body some alien shape.

UPDATED Abilities:
*Many of his traits are heightened natural abilities Although small in his alt mode, he can drag a fallen Autobot away from harm, or pull cargo by himself that would normally require a rig. Tracking with his internal pathfinder, Night Vision / Blue Eyes to compensate for extreme dark and extreme light. He can withstand extreme cold that would freeze fuel lines.

In Robot mode He can use both the basic weaponry and his special weapon. When transforming his robot form comes from a mass shifting much like that of Soundwave.

** His signature weapon is an Absolute Zero Laser – Absolute zero is the Kelvin temperature at which all atomic motion stops. The universe is at an average of 3* – 4* Kelvin. This weapon drains him severely, down to 25% of functioning energon levels. After use he must be secure or he will go into shutdown. Usually someone on his team will grab him before he collapses, often giving him a ride back to base.
-Dammage to subject:
How it works:
Absolute zero is the point at which particles have a minimum energy, (quantem Physics)which is called the zero-point energy. It can be shown from the laws of thermodynamics it is possible to reach temperatures arbitrarily close to absolute zero through the use of cryocoolers. At very low temperatures in the vicinity of absolute zero, matter exhibits many unusual properties including superconductivity, superfluidity, and Bose-Einstein condensation.
What it does:
** Basically when a target is hit the electrons within the molecules that make up the subject stop, thus making their state of matter unstable. Target can be shattered (as like with Liquid Nitrogen), or reformed with physical exertion (such as subject becomes a plasma). In the Transformer world if this weapon were to hit a spark at full power, the energy that creates the spark would stop and would essentially kill the robot and render the spark unstable. If just the body had been hit at full power, the metal forming the target will either fuse molecularly, become plasma, or simply freeze. Requiring great care to restore the affected robot.

--Generally when Zero uses the weapon it is set on low and will simply freeze the target, Liquid nitrogen style but even at low he looses 75% of his functions. But if he was in a situation that required him to make the choice to turn it up to full power, not only would it kill him but his personality would not allow him to cast such harm upon another sentient being. He would not use it. (unless you guys request it to be RPd)

"Zero’s weapon stops all movement at a molecular level. It would certainly kill those made of flesh and bone. As for the Autobot who wheedled it, the weapon brought his levels close to death. It caused a severe pan to trace through his circuits. At times he wished he had never been created with such a thing attached to him, nor would he ever wish such a torment on another transformer even a Deceptacon."


Weaknesses:
His loss of 75% of energon levels after use of his Absolute Zero Laser could very likely get him killed. Along with his tendency to refuse to rest after sustaining injury, especially if his team is still fighting. Thus limiting the use of this weapon. His small size in alt mode causes difficulties when performing tasks on Cybertron.

EDITED Sample Post:
Same as before
removed to save space



****
After thought
He hates ravage
Cats & Dogs

Scene from in the base:
A fellow team mate makes a snide remark about how Sub-Zero reminds him of Ravage.

“Don’t you compare me to Ravage! At least I can transform into robot mode and kick your rear axle! That lowlife has to hide inside of Soundwave.”

No sigs in RPG forums please -Devastron

Hello everyone. This is my first attempt. Hope it's okay.

Name: Rapture
Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Seekers
Function: Warrior
Alt Mode: Cybertronian fast attack fighter (form based on War Within Tetrajet)
Weapons: Seeker-styled high-energy photon pulse cannons on arms / at base of wings, “Swarm” micro-missile clusters in shoulders / in upper fuselage
Special Abilities: None
Height: 30 feet / 9.1 meters
Quote: “Boast all you want. Results speak for themselves.”

Strength: 5
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 9
Endurance: 6
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 5
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 8
Rank: 6

Profile: Rapture is a female Interceptor variant on the classic Seeker, intended as a response to the growing Autobot threat to Decepticon air superiority. She began life as one of Soundwave’s Cassetticons, nearly identical to Ravage. She spent the first few unath of her existence learning her creator’s particular philosophy while her prototype frame was constructed. Soundwave believed that form and function were not mutually exclusive. He viewed his attempt to improve on the Seeker phenotype as an opportunity to prove that point. Rapture’s lithe form packs firepower rivaling the best of the Seekers, while sacrificing very little in terms of durability and raw strength. She is easier on the optics too. While her design was seen as innovative was well recieved, it was deemed to be too costly to mass produce. So she remains one of many early designs that never saw further use.

Much of Rapture’s early career was in point and area defense duties common to Seekers. She proved herself a competent and enthusiastic soldier and one with an uncommon trait for a Decepticon- she works well with others. Deeply devoted to the Decepticon cause, she has little time for those who bicker, plot, or curry favor. Early sections of her service record are peppered with incidents were she convinced bickering squadron mates to focus on the task at hand, often to noteworthy effect.

A more recent event involved an Autobot spy who slipped past her squadron with vital security codes. When Gallows, their commander, demanded an explanation for the failure, the squadron began to blame one another. Rapture took full responsibility for it and vowed to recover the data. After four days playing hide and seek with the Autobot in the Sonic Canyons, she returned, damaged and exhausted. She presented Gallows with not only the codes but also the head of the Autobot spy before lapsing into stasis lock. The commander was so impressed that when she was repaired he had her reassigned to his personal staff. While many of her former squadron mates respected her victory (and the fact that she covered for them), a few were jealous of her new assignment, claiming she was “interfacing her way up the ranks.”

Rapture served with distinction under Gallows, often acting as his enforcer, or as close as the Decepticons come to a morale officer. Gallows often deployed her for reconnaissance in force duties, striking quickly at Autobot forces then falling back to report on their number and disposition. However, her true calling was spy hunting. While she rarely found opportunity to partake in this kind of mission, her track record in it was impeccable. Five Autobot spies pursued, five deactivated. She was Gallows’ right hand, a fact she ably demonstrated when she took a blast meant for him. This only increased the rumors of her ambitious sexuality.

Recently her unit was ambushed by Autobot forces, taking heavy losses. Gallows was destroyed by Springer while covering the squadron’s retreat. The remaining Seekers from the unit were all reassigned.

Rapture is physically a midnight blue Seeker with a sleeker, feminine build. Imagine a shape somewhat like Cyclonus mixed with the War Within Seekers. She has gray accents along her wings, forearms, and thighs. She is considered quite a beauty by Cybertronian standards, but that’s likely what Soundwave had in mind.

As described above, Rapture is a dedicated soldier and a team player. Those who know her well enough to see past her professional demeanor will tell you that there is more to her than just a loyal Seeker. Taking Soundwave’s teachings to heart, she is an expert manipulator. It could even be said that her attractive design is an exercise in psychological warfare.

She has a dry sense of humor and boasts rarely, if at all. She delights in chasing down her prey, cornering them before going in for the kill. She has an artistic streak, probably picked up from her Cassetticon siblings. She spends at least a few hours a week working on memory metal sculptures and holographic portraits.

Abilities: In tetrajet mode Rapture can reach speeds of Mach 5, making her one of the fastest Seekers. She has a flight ceiling of 52 miles. As a Seeker, she can reach Mach 1 in robot form. Her maximum range is 4000 miles, owing to her lighter frame and primary reliance on energy weapons over heavy ordinance. She has thrust vectoring capabilities, which helps prevent stalling problems some others experience at low speeds in pursuit of land-based targets. It also improves her maneuverability at high speeds.

Rapture’s weapons were designed to increase the effectiveness of standard Seeker armaments against maneuverable single targets. Her main weapons are based on standard Seeker laser cannons, but they have been modified to fire concentrated photon pulses rather than continuous beams. These rapid-fire cannons are more powerful than basic seeker lasers, and easier to aim. They are also well suited to strafing or covering fire.

In lieu of traditional wing mounted heavy ordinance, Rapture carries clusters of Swarm homing micro-missiles on an internal hard point in each shoulder. While not yielding greater damage than a standard homing missile, they are much harder to dodge.

Weaknesses: -While no pushover; Rapture lacks the brute strength of the male Seekers.
-Rapture’s micro-missiles are not very effective against hard targets like bunkers and other large structures, as they rely on cumulative effect rather than a single strike.
-Her low tolerance for infighting and self-aggrandizement sometimes puts her at odds with some Decepticons, who see her as a threat or at best a “tattletale”.
- Rapture was romantically involved with Gallows, although it did not begin until he confronted her about her motives for saving him, forcing her to admit her affection. Very few know the truth in this matter, but it would probably be embarrassing if it came out, in light of the “gold-digger” rumors.
-Most importantly, she wants revenge for Gallows death. She has privately sworn to destroy his killer, and would go to great lengths to do so, possibly even disobeying orders or compromising her position.

Sample Post: Hellfire leaned towards his partner Brimstone conspiratorially. “I’m telling you, they’ll never miss us,” the young Seeker said. Probably a little louder than he should have. “This is detail is pointless. We haven’t seen an Autobot in weeks.” He scoffed, shaking his head. “We’re in the middle of nowhere guarding munitions we never use. We just head off to the mess for a drink or three and come right back, no one the wiser.”

“I dunno, pal,” his wingman replied, finally allowing himself to be led away from their post “If Gallows finds out we’re scrap. What if Rapture stops by? Or sees us at the mess?”

Hellfire sneered at the mention of the female. “That chrome-polisher is too busy fawning over the boss to check up on us.” This seemed to allay his friend’s doubts.

“You’re right,” said Brimstone. “Okay. Just one drink.” The two Seekers started off towards the mess. Brimstone appeared to consider something for a second. “Rapture is a looker, though,” he said.

“A looker is right, wingman of mine,” Hellfire replied. “It’s too bad those legs are wasted on such a killjoy! If she was my girl I’d get her to lighten up.”

Just then, a hail of photons scored the bulkhead above the two. They hit the deck, turning in unison to see the aforementioned legs before them.

Rapture glared down at the two Decepticons before her. Why a good soldier like Brimstone is always letting an idiot like Hellfire lead him into trouble is beyond me, she thought. She let them wonder if she was done shooting for a moment before speaking. “I sometimes doubt a screw-up like you would even know how to get a girl, Hellfire” She raised an eyebrow, screwing on a wry expression. “Or what to do with one if you did,” she finished. Seeing Hellfire was about to start making excuses, she raised her weapon again, her face turning deadly serious. Hellfire shut up before he had started. “Get...back...to...your...posts,” Rapture said slowly, one word at a time, in a tone that didn’t bother to hide the threat in it. Hellfire and Brimstone almost tripped over each other they took off so fast.

Minutes later, she had arrived at Gallows’ office. She snapped a crisp salute and waited at attention, earning a slight smile from the usually grim Decepticon officer.

“What is it?” he said, his tone every bit as formal as her posture. His consort was almost always formal with him, even when they were alone. It was a little game they played.

“Little to report, Sir,” Rapture said. “I caught Hellfire and Brimstone away from their post. Off for a drink I believe.”

“I see,” Gallows said, shaking his head. Those two were good soldiers but they were trouble when it was slow. “You took care of the matter, I assume?”

A smirk colored the female’s features. “Yes Sir. They returned to duty immediately.”

Gallows chuckled softly. “Indeed. And how did you accomplish that?”

Rapture’s smirk bloomed into a predatory smile. “I asked nicely,” she replied.

The commanded laughed aloud at that. “I’m sure you did. Anything else to report?”

The female Seeker shook her head. “Nothing else abnormal, Sir.” After a moment’s pause, she continued with a sly glow in her eyes. “Hellfire did give me a good idea though Sir.”

His curiosity piqued at the mention of Hellfire having a good idea, Gallows couldn’t help but ask. “And what might that be?”

The sleek female leaned forward, resting her hands on the commander’s desk. The predatory smile was back as she spoke. “You do look like you could use a good polishing, Sir...”

LOL third attempt...i just cant seem to get it right...lol

Name: Skywarp
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet / (Earth) modified F-15 Eagle
Weapons: Machine guns, Heat-seeking missiles
Special Abilities: Able to make an instant teleport with range of 2,5 miles. Also possesses a radar.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "Strike when the enemy isn't looking."


Strength: 7
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 9
Endurance: 7
Courage: 8
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 2
Charisma: 7
Rank: 6


Profile: Skywarp is a classic Decepticon air warrior - swift and deadly, quick to follow orders, highly-trained and efficient in flight formation, and during off-duty moments having an element of the blustering bravado so common to those who consider themselves the elite air guard. His desires in life are for unlimited flight, the chance to revel in a battle victory, the camaraderie of his fellow flyers, in particular his best friend Thundercracker - though he is not much of a deep thinker, nor is he practiced in a great deal of empathy or consideration for those who cannot match his skills. He is one of the thousands upon thousands of flyers who make up the Decepticons' aerial superiority, without whose dedication and obedience the Decepticon cause would grind to a halt - someone who thoroughly enjoys his role in the world and has no real aspirations of moving beyond it.

Abilities: Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Skywarp can attain speeds of up to 2000 mph and more. But what makes him unique is his ability to instantly teleport himself a maximum distance of 2.5 miles. He also carries a heatseeking missile launcher and a variable-caliber machine gun. Skywarp can hold his own in ground-based combat better than the average flyer, and does not suffer the claustrophobia in close quarters that is common to many specialized air warriors.

Weaknesses: Skywarp's control of the accuracy of his teleportation power diminishes as the distance he teleports increases. As a result, if he's not too careful, he's likely to crash into things when he arrives at where he's teleporting. Not being too bright doesn't help him avoid these accidents either.

Sample Post:

A sudden beep came from his com-link. His superior’s voice emerged in his receptors: Take the energon. Don’t let them get away with it!

Always silent, yet always following orders, he immediately saw the Autobot car driving as fast as it could through the streets of Cybertron.

Now it’s time to do what I do best…

Skywarp transformed into his jet mode as he flew after the car as high and as quiet as he could. Then, as if by instinct, he dove with such speed that it seemed too fast to calculate an exact reading on any speedometer….BOOM! Skywarp had transformed into robot mode and landed on his feet with such impact that the Autobot car flipped backwards.

With an array of shots towards the escaping car, he managed to keep the car in a close proximity for any attack. And, in what seemed like no time at all, Skywarp teleported in front of the Autobot and plunged his fist into his enemy’s motor with great force.

With the little time that he had before the Autobot recovered from a temporary blackout, Skywarp had taken the energon cargo and fled the scene without making a sound….

“Hahaha! They never see me coming…”

HERE'S MY 2ND ATTEMPT! Name: Durge344 (Durge of the 3rd squadron in sector 44)
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Advanced Scout
Alt Mode: Cybertronian Tank (like War Within Grimlock)
Weapons: Incinerator Ray (I invented it myself)
Hight33ft i'm not sure how much in Metres!
Quote: "I've seen Life, Death and Things Autobots were not meant to see. Well, I will soon enough!"

STRENGTH: 8
INTELLIGENCE: 7
DEXTERITY: 6
SPEED: 6
ENDURANCE: 6
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 7
ACCURACY: 5
MELEE: 6
TECH SKILL: 8
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: No-one's told me yet
(I would have liked to put an 8 on everything but...)

Profile: I havn't had much practice but...
Durge344 is a young, headstrong scout. He is eager and always willing to help other Autobots in danger. He may be an Autobot but he admires many of the Decepticons. (generally Skywarp)
Durge344's Alt Mode is a Cybertronian Tank, not unlike WW Grimlock's. Durge344 would like to learn how to warp. Because of this, he admires the Decepticon Skywarp. He believes Optimus Prime to be as generous as a god. He would do anything to meet him.

Abilities: Can jump PRETTY HIGH! His Incinerator Ray is launched ona series of machanisms inside his right arm. This meens he can flip his gun out of his arm so that he's ready to blast. (kind of like the Movie Leader Class Optimus Prime)

Weakness: Can be too eager and wreckless to pay attention to his fellow Autobots. He may rush into action too much. He also has a thing for autographs. he would rather get an autograph from Optimus Prime than destroy Shockwave. (he dosen't like shockwave)

Sample Post: I suck at thes things but...
"Erm, hello!"
no reply.
Durge344 gets up looks at his surroundings. Complete and utter Blackness.
THEN a huge blinding flash of light illuminated a large computer, a circut board on a nearby metal wall and a large black transformer mumbling something into a comunicator.
"EXCUSE ME!"
The black transformer jumped in surprise and turned to face Durge344. An Autobot sighn was noticable his chest.
"Can I help you?" he asked.
"By Primus, you're..." Durge344 began to say.
Then an alarm sounded. "MALFUNCTION, MALFUNCTION! Decepticons detected in sector 7!"
"DECEPTICONS! The autobot yelled."

ATTENTION!!!!!!!
A little question! How do you become a gestault

No sigs in RPG forums please -Devastron

Changed the Alt mode and stats just like you asked! ^_^
(my second go at it as well!!)

Name: WheelBar
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Warrior (at one time he was torn between the two, but he decided he was a better strategist than an engineer.)
Alt. mode:[Updated!] smoke-black Cybertronian Vehicle with a bed in the back (much like a truck)
Weapons: His main weapon is a Claymore-style (medieval) sword that he can pull out of his leg. He has two other smaller weapons, a small pistol that comes out of his arm, and small short-range blades he can launch out of his wrists.
Special Abilities: WheelBar has the ability to convert his wheels on his legs to his feet, (like roller skates) which provides greater speed in robot form.
Height: 36 ft, 11m
Quote: “Any battle can be won with the right strategy and persistence.”
Stats (Updated)
STRENGTH: 6
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
SPEED: 7
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 9
FIREPOWER: 3
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 8
TECH SKILL: 4
CHARISMA: 6
RANK: If you would be kind enough to put WheelBar at somewhat of a low rank (not 0 please!) because he wishes to earn his ranks.

Profile: WheelBar is a knowledgeable, tactical warrior who is fresh out of Autobot Academy. (I’m new here, so I’m not sure what it’s called) He cares deeply for his fellow companions, and will go to daring feats to keep them out of harm’s way if need be. He is extremely intelligent and uses these skills in the battlefield to help win battles and missions. He is not afraid to speak his mind, and tries to do his best when talking to superiors. (he does hope someday to earn the right to lead missions.) He is extremely loyal, and always keeps his word. (as much as one robot can) Although he can be a serious warrior, WheelBar kind of has an imagination and sense of humor all his own which gives him very unique fighting strategies. Through his abilities and friendliness, he will very likely become close friends with the other Autobots fairly quickly.

Abilities: With his special ability to switch his wheels to his feet, WheelBar can become surprisingly fast in his robot form, which can often bring about strong surprise attacks.

Weaknesses: WheelBar’s weaknesses would be that he is young and sometimes a little to eager, which, added on with his inexperience, can be challenging at times. He is a very good fighter, but he can be overwhelmed by sheer brute force in some situations

Sample Post:

CLASSIFIED CITY: CYBERTRON

Missiles were streaking overhead his cover of overturned steel as WheelBar lay underneath it with his small pistol ready, ready to attack.

“Man, why couldn’t I be a big-gunner right now?!” WheelBar muttered in frustration. Another plasma grenade streamed past him, exploding not to far away.

“Nhh!!” He covered himself from the blast, debris spraying in his face. He wiped his optic sensors and poked his head out to look at the situation of the battle. Scorpinock was in full-fortress mode, assassinating the Autobot troops who were waiting for their desperately needed reinforcements to come.

“Great…” This was a lovely first mission he was having… “Go with guarding the city! I’ll be an easy mission! Decepticons don’t even know we’re here!” He mocked his captain that had assigned him guard duty of a city running on a new kind of energon-fuel.

“Sure…right…easy…” He sighed. He wanted nothing more than to run up to that over-grown bug-scrap, he surely wasn’t afraid! But he knew in his head that charging a city with one pistol and weapons that could cut was definitely not high on the ‘Good Idea List’.

He turned to his right, looking at another Autobot pinned down like him, just as another plasma grenade landed right next to the Autobot.

“LOOK OUT!!!” WheelBar’s instincts took over and he leaped to the other Autobot’s position, pushing both out from under the steel just as the explosive detonated…

Name: Blaster
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Communications
Alt. Mode: Cybertronian Light-armored Hover-tank
Weapons: Electro Scrambler Gun
Height: 33ft / 10.07m
Quote: "When the music is rockin, I'm rollin."


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 2
Endurance: 8
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 8
Charisma: 10
Rank: 7


Profile: Blaster likes to turn it up loud. That goes for the way he does everything: fighting, talking, playing- living! If Blaster is involved, he makes his presence known. He is in the forefront of any situation. But aside from the things he normally does in the course of being an Autobot, he has a special passion: music. His ability to monitor radio transmissions has exposed him to many Earthen musical styles, all of which he finds interesting. But it is rock music and hip hop- good, hard and loud- that really sparks his circuits. He'd much rather be lost in the sound of a searing guitar solo than fight Decepticons. However, when called upon he will do what he must for the Autobot cause, albeit reluctantly at times.

Abilities: Blaster can receive radio signals for all frequencies. He can detect signals with power outputs as weak as a millionth of a watt. His ability to transmit radio signals up to 4000 miles makes him the communications center for the Autobots. In robot form he carries an electro-scrambler gun, which emits powerful waves of electromagnetic energy that disrupt the operations of all but the most heavily shielded electrical devices. In theory, the gun should interfere with the minute electrical impulses of the human nervous system, but Blaster has never used the gun on a human.

Weaknesses: Blaster's most obvious weakness is for rock 'n' roll and hip hop. He will walk unwittingly into a trap for the promise of hearing some new tunes. Radio static has the effect of hampering his operation and even, if strong enough, knocking him out completely.

Sample Post:

Blaster was humming a tune that he had stuck in his head, probably some sort of Cybertronian techno, as he stood guard at the front of the Autobot base. His shift would almost be over and then he could finally leave his post to rest and regenerate his energon after a week's work. Suddenly his sensors were picking up on various energon readings from a distance. At first he wondered as to what the sources of those readings might be, when all of the sudden two Decepticon jets rose from the horizon as flew towards him at full speed.

"Oh snap! Decepticons!" He quickly started to broadcast a message to headquarters. "Yo I see two Decepticon jets high-tailin' it this way! I also pick up readings of other possible Decepticons behind them, it looks like they're 'bout to rock this joint!"

He transformed into his tank mode and started taking fire at the jets. It looks like I'm slowin' 'em down... Now, as his Autobot comrades started coming for back-up, he started moving towards the jets as fast as he could gaining confidence.

"Now that I got my swag right, these Decepti-chumps can get it as crunk as they want!!"